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I shake my head at you Your eagerness is charming Your willingness overpowering You're much to eager to jump in this world Like a child cannon balling into the Pool creating ripples whereever he goes Your much to willinging to participate but you must walk before you can run so you don't trip and fall   Don't stumble on these words that float easily to your head Take a breath Stand back for a few and reevaluate simplicity is a good thing to much can ruin don't think me scolding don't think me cruel I'm just tryng to help you one writer too another.
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Jun 3, 2014
Jun 3, 2014 at 9:20 AM UTC
Young Grasshopper
She stands before the bathroom mirror Creating several different faces Tryng to find the one that doesn’t Make her look so tired and old. Some of them make her look ill A couple more look silly. The one she finally settles on: A wan and disappointed smile - Accepted as least ugly of the bunch It’s not the face she’d hoped to wear In this the Autumn of her life. She expected some small trace Of former beauty to remain. She tried to make a little sparkle To liven up her somber eyes And find the muscle in her cheek That lifts her lips into a grin. A sorry rictus of despair Was all that effort brought her So she gave up and threw the switch And slipped away in darkness ljm
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Sep 26, 2022
Sep 26, 2022 at 10:45 AM UTC
FACES
I only wrote your ending Because. It. TEARS. Me. To. SHREDS. To think about your beginning. I BECAME ACCUSTOMED TO YOU RIDING YOUR OLD, BANGED UP BIKE ALONG THE STREET TO SEE ME EVERY MORNING AT 7:15 BECAUSE YOU WERE ALWAYS APPROXIMATELY 10 MINUTES LATE. I WAS SO ********* HAPPY ALL THOSE DAYS WHEN WE SAT IN THE SLIVER OF SHADE TRYNG SO HARD TO STEAL JUST A TINY BIT OF PEACE! I WAS HAPPIER THAT DAY YOU GAVE ME A BANDAID AND TOLD ME IT WOULD ******* BE OKAY WHEN WE BOTH KNEW MY WORLD WAS CRUMBLING AROUND ME. and I never even told you a thing. BUT YOU KNEW YOU ALWAYS KNEW! YOU WERE ALWAYS A STEP AHEAD OF ME! always knew me a little bit better than everyone else that I loved. But thats the secret. I took you for granted then. I NEVER DID THAT AGAIN. I HAVE NEVER IN MY LIFE BEEN MORE CONTENT THAN THE DAY MY HAIR WAS YELLOW AND I WAS A BOTTLE OF SUNSHINE AND Y O U WERE THE FROWN THAT POISONED MY PICTURE OF PERFECTION and yet you smiled you smiled for ME you knew I was ******* happy and you smiled for me. EVEN THOUGH YOU FELT LIKE **** YOU SMILED FOR ME Y O U SMILED FOR M E Just to keep me happy. and I loved you for that. I love you for that. I. LOVED. The way YOU. ALWAYS! SMILED TO ME I NEVER! EVEN! LEARNED that you, YOU OF ALL PEOPLE had a dark side until it kissed me goodbye on that late july day. YOU WAVED ME GOODBYE and I ******* COLLAPSED IN UTTER SHOCK. because I never thought you would let her go I NEVER THOUGHT YOU YOU! you would let ME go... thinking about you makes me cry sometimes AND. I. HATE. IT. because for you, and for you alone I was ALWAYS strong. YOU. ONLY YOU. taught ME to smile and YOU made ME feel like a bottle of sunshine instead of a rainy day in a glass a thought of you is like an arrow, it flies high but it hurts when it sinks in.
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Oct 20, 2014
Oct 20, 2014 at 7:45 PM UTC
Well.
I only wrote your ending Because. It. TEARS. Me. To. SHREDS. To think about your beginning. I BECAME ACCUSTOMED TO YOU RIDING YOUR OLD, BANGED UP BIKE ALONG THE STREET TO SEE ME EVERY MORNING AT 7:15 BECAUSE YOU WERE ALWAYS APPROXIMATELY 10 MINUTES LATE. I WAS SO ********* HAPPY ALL THOSE DAYS WHEN WE SAT IN THE SLIVER OF SHADE TRYNG SO HARD TO STEAL JUST A TINY BIT OF PEACE! I WAS HAPPIER THAT DAY YOU GAVE ME A BANDAID AND TOLD ME IT WOULD ******* BE OKAY WHEN WE BOTH KNEW MY WORLD WAS CRUMBLING AROUND ME. and I never even told you a thing. BUT YOU KNEW YOU ALWAYS KNEW! YOU WERE ALWAYS A STEP AHEAD OF ME! always knew me a little bit better than everyone else that I loved. But thats the secret. I took you for granted then. I NEVER DID THAT AGAIN. I HAVE NEVER IN MY LIFE BEEN MORE CONTENT THAN THE DAY MY HAIR WAS YELLOW AND I WAS A BOTTLE OF SUNSHINE AND Y O U WERE THE FROWN THAT POISONED MY PICTURE OF PERFECTION and yet you smiled you smiled for ME you knew I was ******* happy and you smiled for me. EVEN THOUGH YOU FELT LIKE **** YOU SMILED FOR ME Y O U SMILED FOR M E Just to keep me happy. and I loved you for that. I love you for that. I. LOVED. The way YOU. ALWAYS! SMILED TO ME I NEVER! EVEN! LEARNED that you, YOU OF ALL PEOPLE had a dark side until it kissed me goodbye on that late july day. YOU WAVED ME GOODBYE and I ******* COLLAPSED IN UTTER SHOCK. because I never thought you would let her go I NEVER THOUGHT YOU YOU! you would let ME go... thinking about you makes me cry sometimes AND. I. HATE. IT. because for you, and for you alone I was ALWAYS strong. YOU. ONLY YOU. taught ME to smile and YOU made ME feel like a bottle of sunshine instead of a rainy day in a glass a thought of you is like an arrow, it flies high but it hurts when it sinks in.
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(         o       ) ( (   ////  • |  ) ) ( ( (          <>        ) ) ) ( ( ( (                            ) ) ) ) /\ /\ ####### the trail leads thru the woods high ahead are the sacred mountains will we live ? I guess so •• we've heard of a healing Fountain there /// we are young   we are tryng to be good ( we know we must be free ) • The trail is one of memories Of ancient myths and subtle dreams /::/ I am glad you're by my side I might of not come otherwise /// the trail thru the woods Dressed in green leaves woven fine We Shall live free unless we die But we are together So we are not afraid
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Nov 9, 2014
Nov 9, 2014 at 2:58 PM UTC
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