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"slimmer" poems
people romanticize self-harm as if it's nothing special and really, no one is alarmed everyone's stopped being careful it's not just about the blood it really eats your heart out the suffering makes your head flood and everything seems so loud you can't just seek pitiful attention saying "oh, look, i'm depressed" you really do deserve a lecture because the real deal would say so much less cutting ruins your body it also pierces your soul you seek a friend or just anybody but you always end up alone the cup of coffee in the morning is the only thing keeping you alive the rest of the time you're crying trying to get thoughts out of your mind you've got a stash of blades hiding under your bed today your sister got engaged and you might end up dead you try to down twenty pills with a chug of burning ***** maybe then you'd see flowery hills but it's just likely to cause you trauma you stare at your own blank wall trying to find a slimmer of hope and nobody's there to watch you fall as you exit this life with some dope
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Aug 23, 2015
Aug 23, 2015 at 4:27 PM UTC
stop romanticizing self-harm
I was told I was fat. Shamed for my body, called names and all that. I learnt to hate myself by them at that time. They made me feel like being a little curvy was a crime. So I started working on getting thinner, not for health or fitness though. But because I thought that way I would be loved and accepted more. I finally did become slimmer and i was happy. I slowly started to regain the confidence that they had mercilessly stolen from me. And just as it started getting a tad bit better, I was shamed for being short. Couldn't they just let me live my life in peace or what?! They crushed the little confidence i had gotten back. Again in their stupid circle of high expectations and "physical beauty is true beauty" I was trapped. I worked on getting taller everyday. Crying myself to sleep when nothing worked at the end of the day. And so they taught me time and time again to hate my body. And I know I did, I am so sorry. They said my acne was ugly and it needed to be hidden. Going anywhere without makeup or not dressing girly enough was forbidden. "No do not sit like that, talk like this, wear this not that, always smile." They said these horrible things and silly me, I actually listened for a while. But one day I decided I did not care. So what if I didn't have what they called the "perfect figure" or the nicest hair? I loved myself and that was it. I was beautiful whether or not they believed it. It was not an easy fight. But I think I did alright. They still say things all the time. But I've grown to listen to just one voice, mine.
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Jul 27, 2019
Jul 27, 2019 at 3:30 PM UTC
i fought.
I was told I was fat. Shamed for my body, called names and all that. I learnt to hate myself by them at that time. They made me feel like being a little curvy was a crime. So I started working on getting thinner, not for health or fitness though. But because I thought that way I would be loved and accepted more. I finally did become slimmer and i was happy. I slowly started to regain the confidence that they had mercilessly stolen from me. And just as it started getting a tad bit better, I was shamed for being short. Couldn't they just let me live my life in peace or what?! They crushed the little confidence i had gotten back. Again in their stupid circle of high expectations and "physical beauty is true beauty" I was trapped. I worked on getting taller everyday. Crying myself to sleep when nothing worked at the end of the day. And so they taught me time and time again to hate my body. And I know I did, I am so sorry. They said my acne was ugly and it needed to be hidden. Going anywhere without makeup or not dressing girly enough was forbidden. "No do not sit like that, talk like this, wear this not that, always smile." They said these horrible things and silly me, I actually listened for a while. But one day I decided I did not care. So what if I didn't have what they called the "perfect figure" or the nicest hair? I loved myself and that was it. I was beautiful whether or not they believed it. It was not an easy fight. But I think I did alright. They still say things all the time. But I've grown to listen to just one voice, mine.
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With each CLICK Our breath is held Will he,won't he Will he, won't he The suspense is killing me And....SHIT Door left open still Pestered by the plebeian chill In this gay little coffee shop Surrounded by the unrecognised talent of Brighton:sketch artist staring at me, writer on his laptop, songwriter etching vigorously with his pencil. All of which aren't closing the door. The eyes roll. Labouring my body up, hammering my legs across the floor, turning the factory handle. All is ask is for some carrot cake,filtrate water,polo jumpers, avocado salads,tiger bread, slimmer trousers, slipper sock , a toyger. Click And then images of Kim Jong un pass through my head. If I ruled you'd all be dead Firing squad for an open door, Loud music on the train'll be no more. Stop the screaming misbehaving brats The rabble of Spanish students All this PC stuff on the news, train seats filled with cans of ***** Suddenly The artist strolls up Let's down his cup. Closes the door swiftly And slips back in his chair Oh, so there is a god. I guess Jesus didn't lie.
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Oct 21, 2017
Oct 21, 2017 at 12:15 PM UTC
Cake and Class
Maybe it's the way her monarch hair reflected sunlight Fluttering as if it were really a butterfly Or maybe the constellation of freckles that painted her ivory skin Perhaps the larger figure Or that one tooth that didn't quite sit right But no amount of hair dye can make my hair fly My body they call a canvas will never quite catch the sun's attention The slimmer body I hold will never be as curvy And the train tracks They aligned my crooked smile that he always loved on her Now we never speak of the girl that was best friends with the sun We pretend she never existed to keep from fighting or crying He says he loves me now more than he ever did before And I believe him But only because the sunkissed girl ran away And I was all that was left
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Mar 31, 2014
Mar 31, 2014 at 3:34 PM UTC
The Sunkissed Girl
A thought sometimes forms I live too much yet I do too little.     Woken at strange hours, never asleep.        Rapt in raps        or wrapped in riddles Chained to links or hammered to handle     stubbed to bone Mens et                Manus There is time yet, I swear         To flourish To dream         To make To be         To do         To create Will I? We'll see There's time yet to tell Be yourself, they say     The best you you can be But once more— Will I have time         To edit I live less         I do less     Portfolio: empty     or at least, locked away.         Excitement too.             Blank slate Blank palette Is there any paint? Can I truly make         excitement saturate? Will I be able to place         value as I see fit?     Can the world be hewn slimmer, slicker Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger Tis daft I think, to amuse such a notion But not necessarily so daft to be wrong Emerson called it misunderstood, Shaw found it unreasonable But ay, theres the rub That bed once made, must be lain in and all dreams which might be had are alone not enough Bloom effects don't work outside the movies. Ideas are trash, these are recession times Deflations made them a farthing a dozen                                                                   Started 10.03.11                                Unfinished                                D.B. Guy
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Nov 3, 2012
Nov 3, 2012 at 2:57 AM UTC
A poem for Photoshop
A thought sometimes forms I live too much yet I do too little.     Woken at strange hours, never asleep.        Rapt in raps        or wrapped in riddles Chained to links or hammered to handle     stubbed to bone Mens et                Manus There is time yet, I swear         To flourish To dream         To make To be         To do         To create Will I? We'll see There's time yet to tell Be yourself, they say     The best you you can be But once more— Will I have time         To edit I live less         I do less     Portfolio: empty     or at least, locked away.         Excitement too.             Blank slate Blank palette Is there any paint? Can I truly make         excitement saturate? Will I be able to place         value as I see fit?     Can the world be hewn slimmer, slicker Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger Tis daft I think, to amuse such a notion But not necessarily so daft to be wrong Emerson called it misunderstood, Shaw found it unreasonable But ay, theres the rub That bed once made, must be lain in and all dreams which might be had are alone not enough Bloom effects don't work outside the movies. Ideas are trash, these are recession times Deflations made them a farthing a dozen                                                                   Started 10.03.11                                Unfinished                                D.B. Guy
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Given up smoking now doing one of them there vaping things e-cigarettes keeping smoke clean for all the rest of you that complained yes cherries in my head are you all getting your vitamins did not want to bring that up but is your waste slimmer than mine smiling here sorry but just words.
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Oct 10, 2015
Oct 10, 2015 at 4:31 PM UTC
Vaping my Vape.
And the fish swim in the lake and do not even own clothing. – Ezra Pound How would they style themselves for the net, the little fishes of the lake? Not robes of purity, Ezra, but sequins cut from trash, brands bright as lures, fashioned to catch the eye, a glint of sun. Would the big ones strap on knockoff fins to flex in shark cosplay near the shore, snapping reels in the reeds, captioned #greatwhitevibes #apexpredator? Would carp veil themselves in algae, funeral couture, posting stories of their grief in green? Would they admire the fishery tags: industrial piercings they can’t remove, or the hook-slit scars from catch-and-release, each one a verified badge, proof they were trending once, briefly, before sinking out of frame? Would they tilt to the water’s glass, checking which gill looks slimmer, tails arched like influencers at golden hour, the shimmer hiding shame, the shame we taught them to wear?
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Sep 14, 2025
Sep 14, 2025 at 2:34 PM UTC
Ezra Pound Blocks Me
What once is now was My feet tread delicately over egg shells Balance on unsturdy tightropes My body's equilibrium thrown off My legs shake like an earthquake of emotion From outer to inner core, I see A slimmer of green light, my american dream I am the Great Gatsby Holding onto a bit of the past Desiring it to become the present To the future of mine Yet with soft words I am met with inevitable flames of anger A rage so powerful, so dangerous So provoking, prodding me like a cow The man I was born from Whom is supposed to defend me Is one that destroys me His words conform, turning into a wrecking ball Slam into my heart, destroying it Pieces fall down like pebbles tip, tipping against a lover's window Except it taps the windows of Satan Awakening unknown, terrifying horrors As bottles clink, can crash, alcohol splatters So does the confidence I once had mbm
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Sep 27, 2018
Sep 27, 2018 at 6:47 PM UTC
Tightropes and Egg Shells
On my way, One day, I met a handsome guy, Who was on the seventh sky, He told me I looked like a ****** *** & with his sayings I was embraced I cried & went to the mirror, I asked,"Do I look good???   Am I too fatty or too slimmer??? " Laughing at me it didn't answer, I understood & was filled with tear, Oh I didn't eat during day & couldn't sleep in night, It was like I wasn't made for this beautiful beauty filled site, & hiding my face I went out, & stood aside... I looked at the moon, Jealous of his beauty I closed myself in my room... I forgot the incident & was lost in the world of books, No I wasn't at all focussing on my looks, Oh after bending over backward for several months, I got the fruitful results, Now that handsome proud guy saluted me, & the mirror couldn't match his eyes from me, & now I stood in front of moon's fake light, Asking it to ignite itself, & be bright, Else at his place, he will see myself!!!
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Sep 4, 2018
Sep 4, 2018 at 1:47 AM UTC
The definition of beauty...
I had never imagined the impossible Never thought this would happen But how could I deny What was right in front of me It was like looking in a mirror But it wasn't exactly the same She looked so much like me, only prettier Slimmer, fitter, better in every way She smiled at me The same smile I knew too well But something wasn't right Something was missing Chaos came next My body petrified, my mind dazed I couldn't move, I couldn't see A second seemed like an hour, A minute was eternity When the fog cleared, She wasn't there anymore But yet she was, I could sense it And soon I found out She spoke to me, but The sound came from my mouth Then I realized, I wasn't me Anymore, I was her The missing was a soul Now she had one, mine And I was trapped for life.
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Nov 21, 2014
Nov 21, 2014 at 2:07 AM UTC
Trapped
My voice Was the highest soprano in the choir And I was well past puberty. My chest may never be As flat as yours, My shoulders will always be Slimmer and daintier, My waist tucks in and allows for Hips, Hips that make me cringe with every ******* breath Some days. I will never have That bulge between my legs That you so wrongly call manhood. I lack the things you tell me Make someone a boy, And sometimes I even lack the guts To disagree with you; But **** if that makes it alright to throw me in gutters, Beat me up behind smokey dive bars, Yell at me on the city bus, Take away my ******* humanity. Because I am a boy. I am a ******* human.
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Jun 1, 2015
Jun 1, 2015 at 9:40 PM UTC
I Am Angry
They say Ruffle Top! the in thing nowadays.. Hurriedly you went for shopping A pink Ruffle top.. gorgeous indeed.. splendid effect as you put it on... but oppss... do you look slimmer or larger? as it hangs off of the widest parts of you and all the slimmer parts are hidden a fashion prey once again fall to be victim of girly cuteness!
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Jun 11, 2013
Jun 11, 2013 at 10:39 PM UTC
Fashion Victim
touch my face and feel my gut it's knotted up, punctured and twisted with knives of lovers lost look at me with shame and forget me no longer call me by my name, brother i'm barren from the child i chose not to let be yet still swollen from the emptiness stepping on nails, sharp as i pace back and forth tattered soles and tattered souls can't overcome the obstacle without proper shoes end my suffering with a needle or two let ooze the regretful sorrow that feeds on my sanity drain the abscess that is my conscience my conscious mind it throbs beneath my skin and whispers secrets from hell, ear to ear on sunny days tiny voices and threatening reminders of crimes not yet repented committed in fear of solitude ways to escape unknown, unwanted negligent to what could be because the what is distracts me traps me i must first love myself to be loved by you everyday is a chance to recreate we know that our limbs grow longer ingesting opportunity but hear me when i shout to you from the asphalt the world unwillingly grows smaller and smaller and chances are slimmer, slander ensures luck be eradicated because pieces of us have been amputated
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Oct 10, 2018
Oct 10, 2018 at 12:22 AM UTC
Camping
If my blood could illustrate, A picture to the world, It will tell you the exact state, How my heart pumps its hurt. Each ventricle pumps emotions, Pain, anger, hope, Up to my brain, And down to my toes. Slithering through each artery and vein, Blood carves my hearts pain, In my head, In my head. Working through each capillary, It forges anger and rage, In my bones, My aching bones. After its done its work, It fights back through each valve, And pours back into the atriums, Devoid of fury and pain. It was used up, Just like my tears, My wasted energy for nothing, It brought me no good. Just more hurt. And just slowly, As the pain and anger dissipates from my system, And fresh blood is packaged and sent, From my bone marrows, It brings along a slimmer of hope, That this new cycle of blood would carry no more pain.
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Jun 11, 2014
Jun 11, 2014 at 4:36 AM UTC
Blood
I don’t remember the first mushroom I had. I can’t remember the last time rainbow stars weren’t falling from the sky, why I’m addicted to jumping on flagpoles, or why I shoot fireballs after eating flowers. I’m addicted, but it’s not a problem. I think. I can see flying turtles with wings. They keep throwing hammers at me. I punch bricks hoping coins come out of them, because I somehow got the idea that if I got a hundred gold coins I could buy myself a new life. I want a life with a steamy red hot princess in a flowing pink dress living in a bourgeois castle where the smell of peaches breathes life into every fiber of my mustachioed being. Sometimes I think my brother is green with envy, when all he really does is pick daisies. Why should he be jealous? He’s taller, slimmer, and he doesn’t have to work as tirelessly as I do. But, I’ve always jumped higher, reached further, and punched harder. It’s not my fault he chooses to stay in my shadow. That little ***** I sometimes ride on a green dinosaur's back. I’m a baby floating away in a bubble, and that dinosaur saved my life far too many times to count. He’s my best friend. Sometimes I like to put on my blue hat and pretend that I’m invisible. Sometimes I put on my green hat and pretend I’m as hardened as a mafia gangster. I am Italian after all. It’s in my blood. I want to quit, but I can’t. I don’t need to. I’m doing fine with these mushrooms. I feel larger than life with the red ones, and the green ones resurrect me.
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Aug 16, 2014
Aug 16, 2014 at 9:51 PM UTC
Super Mario and the Long Term Effects of Hallucinogenic Mushroom Consumption
I don’t remember the first mushroom I had. I can’t remember the last time rainbow stars weren’t falling from the sky, why I’m addicted to jumping on flagpoles, or why I shoot fireballs after eating flowers. I’m addicted, but it’s not a problem. I think. I can see flying turtles with wings. They keep throwing hammers at me. I punch bricks hoping coins come out of them, because I somehow got the idea that if I got a hundred gold coins I could buy myself a new life. I want a life with a steamy red hot princess in a flowing pink dress living in a bourgeois castle where the smell of peaches breathes life into every fiber of my mustachioed being. Sometimes I think my brother is green with envy, when all he really does is pick daisies. Why should he be jealous? He’s taller, slimmer, and he doesn’t have to work as tirelessly as I do. But, I’ve always jumped higher, reached further, and punched harder. It’s not my fault he chooses to stay in my shadow. That little ***** I sometimes ride on a green dinosaur's back. I’m a baby floating away in a bubble, and that dinosaur saved my life far too many times to count. He’s my best friend. Sometimes I like to put on my blue hat and pretend that I’m invisible. Sometimes I put on my green hat and pretend I’m as hardened as a mafia gangster. I am Italian after all. It’s in my blood. I want to quit, but I can’t. I don’t need to. I’m doing fine with these mushrooms. I feel larger than life with the red ones, and the green ones resurrect me.
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*I feel like river water. And I don’t belong to stagnancy, yet I’m caught in a lake. ••• *I’m destined to move silt and sediment. And overturn submerged pebbles so they won’t see the green of moss. I’m meant to surge and eat into banks so I could be split - to make more of me... My reach would extend far and wide - like scraggly fingers grabbing at the face of the earth. My energy channelling through careless forks and into slimmer branches.* ••• My soul is river water.... And my heart renounces the throne to idleness. Yet I am, but a lake.*
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Jan 17, 2018
Jan 17, 2018 at 9:47 AM UTC
River Water
Should I grow my hair Stop biting my nails Lose a few pounds Shave everywhere Have a dainty nose Clear skin Lightly shaded eyes Slimmer thighs Should I change my speech Never use profanity Only speak when spoken to Talk softly Laugh lightly Tone it down Have a higher voice Solemnly ever ramble Must I change my entire self? Goodness, no. I know my worth and believe I am stunning in every single way. Every. Single. Way.
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May 4, 2022
May 4, 2022 at 1:29 AM UTC
How Do I Become Pretty
Rolling down the hill laughing, tumbling not caring; free as I get coated in grass stains and mud Careful not to smudge the mascara, applying eye liner and sigh in relief to have not  sullied my face saving embarrassment Giddy selecting sweets from the colourful array to buy with MY money; as much as I can! Glancing at my seemingly large stomach in this dress I opt for a salad; as always (bland) but at least  I'll be slimmer Card trades, the politics of the playground, using trickery and bribery to get the best, feeling like a boss Eyeing him with a secure hand in his, falling hard, to notice her gaze at him and subtly securing dominance of his heart. The door bell rings and there stands the gang ready with bikes and water guns to surrender ourselves to the sunny day The Suns out and the lighting is absolutely perfect for a selfie so with a stretched grin I snap, Photoshop and Instagram Toys R Us our haven and envious glances at those who could afford the best and most exquisite Bratz sets or card sets The rare visits to the Apple Store are exciting even to just gaze at the new iPhone 5 and hold it awhile.... The joy oh the joy of reading time, together we sat and took turns, enjoying the sharing of a tale With my phone in hand not a minute goes by that I don't check my Facebook page for notifications
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Aug 12, 2015
Aug 12, 2015 at 4:19 PM UTC
Childhood fancies
Lavender parted by blunt wind: the unkempt morning hair of a park's running path. Pale-green grass crawls up everywhere in tufts like a thousand lost toupées. In spring cars, northbound from San Diego, packed with kids and camping tools or slimmer businessmen, get full view of it:                              a transient glance between La Jolla and Los Angeles, a moment of flashing color amid asphalt miles.
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Sep 18, 2013
Sep 18, 2013 at 5:11 PM UTC
Near the I-5/133 Crossover
‘I was too young when I fell for God’, she said ‘I heard you’, I said, ‘I said I could hear you’. The train was busy, far louder than usual, and we sat together, fingers wound together. Rough cuticles. What were we doing so young, getting married before the eyes of our Son? Twenty-two and not a thought for the future, though maybe you’ll be slimmer and I’ll be cuter. ‘I know about you two and your motorbike miles’ I said, her face turned around, tired. It was Dulux paint-chart red. ‘How did you? Did he? I am sorry’ she said, ‘Oh that’s okay, really it’s fine, not to worry'. Tube train doors opened and I filed out in no line, she followed behind, slow. Karma had taken her spine. ‘You could wait to hear my explanation’ she said, tired. Across the tiled platform floor, I carried on uninspired. ‘It was a stupid weekend away, we took the scenic route. Are we okay?’ Full stop pupils and an open mouth comma, what else could she possibly say? ‘It’s only recent, not all that frequent’ she said, ‘Well who knew that Winter was the season of unfair treatment?’ I yelled. Reached the escalators and walked out single into the fresh air, turned left onto the street and went looking for the nearest bar.
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May 16, 2013
May 16, 2013 at 12:48 PM UTC
‘IT’S ONLY RECENT, NOT ALL THAT FREQUENT’
I saw a myth destroyed Actually, I saw it demolished Stomped on, crushed and totally abolished We've all heard that you look slimmer in black Nope...big, fat lie One myth is taken back I went to a funeral And the myth died and joined the corpse where it lied Short, dumpy women looking like dried out asphalt, with matching wedge heels crying and wandering about hair colour from bottles dressed as lumps of coal the black dress, it hid nothing like that 13th stomach roll little round faced women crying little round faced tears in hockey puck like dresses they all went and bought at Sears there were blondes and there were red heads flaming briquettes...all there to bury a myth with the dead some, and by some...I mean few dressed in black...looked nice but the myth that black is slimming you can put that one on ice
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Feb 17, 2013
Feb 17, 2013 at 7:12 PM UTC
Another Myth Laid To Rest
I always feel different after a break up Not in the ways you expect But stronger in a sad way In Survival Mode I feel prettier I feel more capable and older and wiser My hair falls nicer I'm slimmer and taller Survival Mode reminds me of flings past Suppressed crushes Surfacing above new earth But the earth is made of bricks And they keep getting stepped on Until eventually Love lost becomes the past And the bricks break into pieces And when I clean them up The soil shows itself And Survival Mode is on standby And the heart will go back up 6 inches higher in my chest Where it was before And maybe I won't be as tall as I was in Survival Mode But at least I knew myself in that time To show perseverance and grace
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Dec 7, 2015
Dec 7, 2015 at 7:05 PM UTC
Survival
It's another night alone in my bed. Thoughts of you trapped in my head. And despite knowing the truth, evident with blinding proof, My pride won't let me not be the fool. And I know that you're better off with another, And I know my presence can hauntingly hover, But this is all I know, as my act will surely show, Just how I revel in the acting a fool. If this is the role I'm cast to be, I'll wear my crown with unbridled glee. Never relenting, always presenting, Playing your games like a fool. Your name would echo in the hallway My friends experts in the game you play. But I refused to listen, as your smile would glisten, A boy predestined to be the fool. Fast forward the clock and look at us now, Your rise to the top left them all asking how, But here I remain, fighting for a level plain. Permanently cast as your silly little fool. And as we grow old and grey, I'll finally have the proper words to say, I'll tell you it all, my reckoning will call, My dying breath as the fool. I continue to hold to this slimmer of hope, For it's the only way that I can truly cope, With how you really don't care, a hollow heart with pretty hair. But in the end I'm always the fool.
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May 2, 2016
May 2, 2016 at 4:01 AM UTC
Forever The Fool
Lemon tree very pretty it was a summer night many years ago woke, thought I heard the whimpering of a baby, thought it was a dream, Woke up again my wife was not there by my side but in the garden where she had made a hole under a lemon tree She put what looked like a shoebox in the hole filled it in and placed stones on top of her buried secret. Next day she didn't get up stayed in bed for days and I looked after her but said nothing. When she got up she looked slimmer and took up jogging to stay slim. The lemon tree grew too I got a man to chop it down but left its root, she got upset loved this tree and when unseen wept. I used to long for her to tell me her secret, but not now with the tree gone I do not care to know.
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Aug 16, 2015
Aug 16, 2015 at 3:42 AM UTC
Lemon tree very pretty...
INT. WILL'S HOUSE - NIGHT Andrew walked inside of his best friend Will's house, carrying a six pack of Stella, and moved to the beer-pong table, where Lauren and Erica were playing with Daniel and Marcus. The girls turned to face Andrew and Erica mumbled something to Lauren. Lauren laughed and nodded. Andrew hoped she wasn't laughing at him, but when he saw her smiling at him, that was when he knew he would end up falling in love with her. Well maybe not in love with her, but he hoped he would at least get to know her. He took off his jacket and set it aside on the couch next to Will and Carrie. Will looked slimmer than usual, his arms skinny, and his clothes baggy on him. He didn't like seeing his friend look like a stick-figure, but he didn't really know how to approach the subject. Instead, he hugged him and felt Will's skin and bones, wondering how long could his friend go on like this. ANDREW Will, wanna get next game? Will considered it for a moment and shook his head. WILL I would man, but I'm feeling pretty tired. Going to take a dab in a minute, you want one? ANDREW Ha, not tonight man, I got to drive back home after this. Andrew turned around and caught Lauren staring at him. She looked away and shot the ping-pong ball into one of the red solo cups. All Andrew knew about Lauren was that she moved here from Florida. She was here for the summer, perhaps longer. She was good friends with Will's girlfriend Carrie, but Carrie had told him the other day over Facebook chat, that Lauren was talking to some guy named Peter back in Florida. Good for me, he thought. He wanted to be single for a while, but there was something uncanny about Lauren that drew him in closer to the pong table. She was wearing a black cardigan and a white blouse underneath with jean shorts and flats--typical NOVA **** but he sensed she was deeper than her appearance. She had blue eyes, blue as the sky in the current summer month of July. ANDREW Hey do you guys mind if I get next game? Erica looked at Lauren. And she looked back at Erica and shrugged. LAUREN Are you good? ANDREW I can be. Lauren considered him for a moment. LAUREN Great to hear. You and Erica are going to go against me and Daniel. Cool? ANDREW Yeah that's cool. Andrew found a spot next to Erica and stood beside her, high-fiving her. ERICA Don't worry about Lauren, she's just super competitive. ANDREW Let's show them some competition then.
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Jun 24, 2016
Jun 24, 2016 at 7:44 PM UTC
Screenplay No. 1
INT. WILL'S HOUSE - NIGHT Andrew walked inside of his best friend Will's house, carrying a six pack of Stella, and moved to the beer-pong table, where Lauren and Erica were playing with Daniel and Marcus. The girls turned to face Andrew and Erica mumbled something to Lauren. Lauren laughed and nodded. Andrew hoped she wasn't laughing at him, but when he saw her smiling at him, that was when he knew he would end up falling in love with her. Well maybe not in love with her, but he hoped he would at least get to know her. He took off his jacket and set it aside on the couch next to Will and Carrie. Will looked slimmer than usual, his arms skinny, and his clothes baggy on him. He didn't like seeing his friend look like a stick-figure, but he didn't really know how to approach the subject. Instead, he hugged him and felt Will's skin and bones, wondering how long could his friend go on like this. ANDREW Will, wanna get next game? Will considered it for a moment and shook his head. WILL I would man, but I'm feeling pretty tired. Going to take a dab in a minute, you want one? ANDREW Ha, not tonight man, I got to drive back home after this. Andrew turned around and caught Lauren staring at him. She looked away and shot the ping-pong ball into one of the red solo cups. All Andrew knew about Lauren was that she moved here from Florida. She was here for the summer, perhaps longer. She was good friends with Will's girlfriend Carrie, but Carrie had told him the other day over Facebook chat, that Lauren was talking to some guy named Peter back in Florida. Good for me, he thought. He wanted to be single for a while, but there was something uncanny about Lauren that drew him in closer to the pong table. She was wearing a black cardigan and a white blouse underneath with jean shorts and flats--typical NOVA **** but he sensed she was deeper than her appearance. She had blue eyes, blue as the sky in the current summer month of July. ANDREW Hey do you guys mind if I get next game? Erica looked at Lauren. And she looked back at Erica and shrugged. LAUREN Are you good? ANDREW I can be. Lauren considered him for a moment. LAUREN Great to hear. You and Erica are going to go against me and Daniel. Cool? ANDREW Yeah that's cool. Andrew found a spot next to Erica and stood beside her, high-fiving her. ERICA Don't worry about Lauren, she's just super competitive. ANDREW Let's show them some competition then.
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