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"linear" poems
Focus. Linear equations. Quadratic functions. Pythagorean theorems. Sunshine sacrificed for symmetry. Daylight dropped for diameter. Windows that confine. Tease. It's the way yearning clouds hug lonely trees. It's how the sun graces all with perfect, gentle hands. The passion behind these eyes are hungry for escape. Focus.
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Feb 14, 2013
Feb 14, 2013 at 12:20 PM UTC
Pythagorean Theorems.
study, cram, call, make plans... power point, presentation, speech, rewrite... theory, materialism and idealism and the difference, Marx, Freud to psychoanalyze... on to polynomials, linear equations, I make a scientific notation... take a break. (eat) ham sweet and thick with lots of pineapple and some cherries potato bread and cheese PowerAde to rehydrate little vodca with o.j. and cigarette after lunch, breathe . and it’s back to study lab to mentally beat meat. paper due, final today, did I remember to triple check and get rid of paper clips, include a cover sheet... ready to evaluate... I think. ready to second guess, miss dates and time, "you're late" again... 95, 98, 3.5 GPA? pre-test, for final, make sure your research is done, site, source, quote, student rate and double space power nap, smoke again, is the day over yet?..
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Nov 26, 2012
Nov 26, 2012 at 3:52 PM UTC
first half of today
recovery is hard existing is really hard the fact anyone does it at all it's a miracle but existence is resistance it is resistance to nonexistence which can actually be incredibly easy backsliding into old habits is easy old habits may die hard but at least they can die (hard) recovery is hard it is not linear you do not follow a timeline it is not first you do this and then you do that and now it's all better kiss kiss! goodbye bad days! recovery is "today is a good day and i know bad days" recovery is "today is a bad day but i've seen so many of those that i know how to navigate it" recovery is "you have reached your destination" recovery is "but my destination is actually three blocks up from here sorry can you take me three more blocks?" recovery is "oh no its okay i can walk from here" recovery is "yes, i'm sure"
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Apr 1, 2018
Apr 1, 2018 at 4:28 PM UTC
yes, i'm sure.
I don't think in linear paths I think in images, not words. I think through what I see                        what I hear                        what I feel For instance, that night, I found my sisters body I saw her lifeless body hanging there I saw my mother fall to the ground, a strangled mix between a scream and a gasp escaping her lips I saw the red eyes of my father I had never seen them before and I've seen them too many times since I saw the strongest people I've ever known fall to their knees in the rubble of my family I saw my family fragment, break and stumble under the weight of our grief But I also saw my family stand up, rise, fight and pull the ripping seams together with our knuckles turning white I heard my father's panic I heard my mother's cries I heard my own disconnected voice as my body and brain worked separately I heard the voice of the 911 operator in my ear I heard the sirens       the ones that now echo in my ears I hear an unknown voice say "I'm sorry, we couldn't revive her. She's gone," as my mother crumpled into my father. I felt my blood racing through my veins I felt my heart pounding in my chest I felt my muscles moving and tearing and ripping as I ran, fueled by adrenaline I felt the loss I felt the icy numbness blanketing my family I saw a life end that night and dozens of others permanently altered Her life ended that night and ours changed and came crashing to a halt but we got back up I got back up I only hope that wherever she is, she's finally happy Happier than she was here
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Apr 4, 2017
Apr 4, 2017 at 1:21 AM UTC
That Night
I don't think in linear paths I think in images, not words. I think through what I see                        what I hear                        what I feel For instance, that night, I found my sisters body I saw her lifeless body hanging there I saw my mother fall to the ground, a strangled mix between a scream and a gasp escaping her lips I saw the red eyes of my father I had never seen them before and I've seen them too many times since I saw the strongest people I've ever known fall to their knees in the rubble of my family I saw my family fragment, break and stumble under the weight of our grief But I also saw my family stand up, rise, fight and pull the ripping seams together with our knuckles turning white I heard my father's panic I heard my mother's cries I heard my own disconnected voice as my body and brain worked separately I heard the voice of the 911 operator in my ear I heard the sirens       the ones that now echo in my ears I hear an unknown voice say "I'm sorry, we couldn't revive her. She's gone," as my mother crumpled into my father. I felt my blood racing through my veins I felt my heart pounding in my chest I felt my muscles moving and tearing and ripping as I ran, fueled by adrenaline I felt the loss I felt the icy numbness blanketing my family I saw a life end that night and dozens of others permanently altered Her life ended that night and ours changed and came crashing to a halt but we got back up I got back up I only hope that wherever she is, she's finally happy Happier than she was here
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There is an inherent discrepancy 'twixt the World in One's Mind and the World that simply Is. That is, however, no intrinsically bad thing. For, I find, that the world Within needs the world Without, though they inderdepend and thus are not mutually exclusive. There needs to be a discrepancy for the pressures, as it were, to have any room or excuse to neutralize: to move towards equilibrium; however, it is not linear, nor is it parabolic: this, I believe, is where Calculus becomes a valid allegory for Life, itself.
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Apr 9, 2014
Apr 9, 2014 at 2:54 AM UTC
The Calculus of Life itself.
Steam rises from the blocks of industry beyond the immediate trees; a thin white veil cloaking the city like a bedsheet. And you waking, displacing your head about apathetically trying to light a smoke with sunlight - this linear love on a tangent, golden, some ornament. Everything up then falling each morning, with light tethered to the ceiling while you lay still dazed from dreaming, the day breaks unassuming.
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Nov 4, 2016
Nov 4, 2016 at 10:46 AM UTC
Alva Street
the people whose job is to understand the multiverse can't figure this world out rid·dle                      ˈridl/noun: riddle; plural noun:   riddles 1.                                 | a question or statement intentionally           phrased so as to require ingenuity     in ascertaining its answer or meaning,                typically presented as a game; a person, event,   or fact that is difficult   to understand or explain. "the riddle of her death" [puz·zle ˈpəzəl/verb: puzzle; 3rd person present: puzzles; past tense: puzzled; past participle: puzzled; gerund or present participle:                                              puzzling 1.                          cause (someone) to feel confused because              they cannot understand or make sense of something: "one remark he made puzzled me" synonyms: perplex, confuse, bewilder,        bemuse, baffle, mystify, confound;         faze, stump, beat, discombobulate "her decision puzzled me" perplexed, confused, bewildered,        bemused, baffled, mystified, confounded,                              nonplussed, at a loss, at sea;              flummoxed, stumped, fazed, clueless,              discombobulated "a puzzled look on her face" baffling, perplexing, bewildering, confusing, complicated, unclear, mysterious, enigmatic, ambiguous, obscure, abstruse, unfathomable, incomprehensible, impenetrable, cryptic "his explanation was rather puzzling" antonyms: clear think hard about something difficult                    to understand or explain; "she was still puzzling over this problem                      when she reached the office"      | [      ] think hard about, mull over, muse over, ponder, contemplate,                                      meditate on, consider, deliberate on, chew over,                     wonder about "she puzzled over the problem"   solve or understand something by thinking hard; synonyms:                       work out, understand,    comprehend, sort out, reason out, solve, make sense of,    make head(s) or tail(s) of, unravel, decipher; informal:                figure out "she tried to puzzle out what he meant" noun: puzzle; plural noun: puzzles 1. [                 ], [           ] (                 ); a game, toy, or problem designed     to test ingenuity or knowledge; short for jigsaw puzzle                    (see jigsaw) a person or thing that is difficult to understand or explain; an enigma: "the meaning of this poem will always be a paradox" synonyms: enigma, mystery, paradox,        conundrum, poser, riddle, problem, quandary;                      "the poem has always been a puzzle"   late 16th century (as a verb): of unknown origin: synonyms: puzzle, conundrum, brainteaser, problem,       unsolved problem, question, poser, enigma,                        quandary; informal:       stumper "an answer to the riddle"                    verb/archaic verb: riddle; 3rd person present: riddles; past tense: riddled; past participle: riddled;          gerund or present participle: riddling 1.             speak in or pose riddles. "he who knows not how to riddle" solve or explain (a riddle) to (someone). "riddle me this then" Origin Old English rǣdels, rǣdelse ‘opinion, conjecture, riddle’;   related to Dutch raadsel,    German Rätsel,      to read
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Jul 23, 2018
Jul 23, 2018 at 12:19 AM UTC
1. [Linear Z]
the people whose job is to understand the multiverse can't figure this world out rid·dle                      ˈridl/noun: riddle; plural noun:   riddles 1.                                 | a question or statement intentionally           phrased so as to require ingenuity     in ascertaining its answer or meaning,                typically presented as a game; a person, event,   or fact that is difficult   to understand or explain. "the riddle of her death" [puz·zle ˈpəzəl/verb: puzzle; 3rd person present: puzzles; past tense: puzzled; past participle: puzzled; gerund or present participle:                                              puzzling 1.                          cause (someone) to feel confused because              they cannot understand or make sense of something: "one remark he made puzzled me" synonyms: perplex, confuse, bewilder,        bemuse, baffle, mystify, confound;         faze, stump, beat, discombobulate "her decision puzzled me" perplexed, confused, bewildered,        bemused, baffled, mystified, confounded,                              nonplussed, at a loss, at sea;              flummoxed, stumped, fazed, clueless,              discombobulated "a puzzled look on her face" baffling, perplexing, bewildering, confusing, complicated, unclear, mysterious, enigmatic, ambiguous, obscure, abstruse, unfathomable, incomprehensible, impenetrable, cryptic "his explanation was rather puzzling" antonyms: clear think hard about something difficult                    to understand or explain; "she was still puzzling over this problem                      when she reached the office"      | [      ] think hard about, mull over, muse over, ponder, contemplate,                                      meditate on, consider, deliberate on, chew over,                     wonder about "she puzzled over the problem"   solve or understand something by thinking hard; synonyms:                       work out, understand,    comprehend, sort out, reason out, solve, make sense of,    make head(s) or tail(s) of, unravel, decipher; informal:                figure out "she tried to puzzle out what he meant" noun: puzzle; plural noun: puzzles 1. [                 ], [           ] (                 ); a game, toy, or problem designed     to test ingenuity or knowledge; short for jigsaw puzzle                    (see jigsaw) a person or thing that is difficult to understand or explain; an enigma: "the meaning of this poem will always be a paradox" synonyms: enigma, mystery, paradox,        conundrum, poser, riddle, problem, quandary;                      "the poem has always been a puzzle"   late 16th century (as a verb): of unknown origin: synonyms: puzzle, conundrum, brainteaser, problem,       unsolved problem, question, poser, enigma,                        quandary; informal:       stumper "an answer to the riddle"                    verb/archaic verb: riddle; 3rd person present: riddles; past tense: riddled; past participle: riddled;          gerund or present participle: riddling 1.             speak in or pose riddles. "he who knows not how to riddle" solve or explain (a riddle) to (someone). "riddle me this then" Origin Old English rǣdels, rǣdelse ‘opinion, conjecture, riddle’;   related to Dutch raadsel,    German Rätsel,      to read
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An abstract of an academic paper written by a doctoral student: "In this semimanifesto, I approach how understandings of quantum physics and cyborgian bodies can (or always already do) ally with feminist anti-oppression practices long in use. The idea of the body (whether biological, social, or of work) is not stagnant, and new materialist feminisms help to recognize how multiple phenomena work together to behave in what can become legible at any given moment as a body. By utilizing the materiality of conceptions about connectivity often thought to be merely theoretical, by taking a critical look at the noncentralized and multiple movements of quantum physics, and by dehierarchizing the necessity of linear bodies through time, it becomes possible to reconfigure structures of value, longevity, and subjectivity in ways explicitly aligned with anti-oppression practices and identity politics. Combining intersectionality and quantum physics can provide for differing perspectives on organizing practices long used by marginalized people, for enabling apparatuses that allow for new possibilities of safer spaces, and for practices of accountability."--an abstract of a paper by doctoral student Whitney Stark Atomic particles, how can it be so that your purpose is not just to flow in and out of existence, building reality-- the stars, cosmic gas and galaxies-- but to “ally” with groups of humans fighting “hierarchies” and demanding “safe spaces” (even though their entire race is at the top of their planet’s food chain). In this mysterious universe there is no safety, accountability or identity, only elements, and energy. Brief combinations make life legible for a nanosecond in cosmic time, and doomed to strife. Biology does not know oppression, only generation, reproduction, until our growth chokes us and we fall like so many of our ancestors, who lived and died on this blue-green ball. And one day the sun will explode and blow even our atoms, which have endured (despite oppression), and the particles will go far until maybe they sow new life, in bodies unfamiliar, on planets unknown.
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Jun 11, 2017
Jun 11, 2017 at 9:31 AM UTC
The Universe v. Ideology
An abstract of an academic paper written by a doctoral student: "In this semimanifesto, I approach how understandings of quantum physics and cyborgian bodies can (or always already do) ally with feminist anti-oppression practices long in use. The idea of the body (whether biological, social, or of work) is not stagnant, and new materialist feminisms help to recognize how multiple phenomena work together to behave in what can become legible at any given moment as a body. By utilizing the materiality of conceptions about connectivity often thought to be merely theoretical, by taking a critical look at the noncentralized and multiple movements of quantum physics, and by dehierarchizing the necessity of linear bodies through time, it becomes possible to reconfigure structures of value, longevity, and subjectivity in ways explicitly aligned with anti-oppression practices and identity politics. Combining intersectionality and quantum physics can provide for differing perspectives on organizing practices long used by marginalized people, for enabling apparatuses that allow for new possibilities of safer spaces, and for practices of accountability."--an abstract of a paper by doctoral student Whitney Stark Atomic particles, how can it be so that your purpose is not just to flow in and out of existence, building reality-- the stars, cosmic gas and galaxies-- but to “ally” with groups of humans fighting “hierarchies” and demanding “safe spaces” (even though their entire race is at the top of their planet’s food chain). In this mysterious universe there is no safety, accountability or identity, only elements, and energy. Brief combinations make life legible for a nanosecond in cosmic time, and doomed to strife. Biology does not know oppression, only generation, reproduction, until our growth chokes us and we fall like so many of our ancestors, who lived and died on this blue-green ball. And one day the sun will explode and blow even our atoms, which have endured (despite oppression), and the particles will go far until maybe they sow new life, in bodies unfamiliar, on planets unknown.
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Wish I had a special pair of lenses A tool for me; just for my senses That grant me binocular vision Allow me to see with heightened perception. Peer through mountain crags, over dunes of sand Pierce skyscrapers in familiar foreign lands A sight beyond nimbus clouds Amazingly through temporal shrouds. Past breathtaking ridges and quiet plateaus Alongside a ****** of black-feathered crows Tripping over singing brooks and moss-covered pebbles Herds of quadrupeds as they frolic and gambol Extraordinary views and candy for the eyes Travelling linear between earth and skies. But... You're too far away for me to see Even if bestowed upon me... Still, I wish my eyes binocular... Because I need you so much closer...
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Aug 14, 2014
Aug 14, 2014 at 2:23 PM UTC
Binocular
while there at 26 other people present in this room, i feel alone; or at least my mind has convinced me that i am. either way, it's nice i suppose. and i can't really focus on anything but do i really want to? i could honestly not care less whether Graph B is steeper than Graph A and how it has an equation of -2x-2. i don't care if it's a linear quadratic exponential or cubic root equation all i can seem to care about at this moment in time is you you keep trying to bust your way into my head and make a reservation like i have extra room. NEWSFLASH: i don't. but somehow, someway, you have made your way in. and i don't think you don't plan on leaving.
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Apr 3, 2014
Apr 3, 2014 at 9:54 AM UTC
please leave.
After I graduated, I thought about two things, I’m certified, I am now apart of “the people”, (And) All I have to do is make a choice and I’ll find success, Gave it my best, “no test?”; I had to teach, No stress, I had to be, The O next to the V, The ego; “which is me” (Wait) V+V=4, it’s a six thing; you know love without the zeas, But with the zeal; well; Overcoming Variables was never a test, -Or a problem; I speak geometry, I took 2D, made it 3D, and that was simultaneously; how could I not be the best… (What is a, reiteration?) Two lovers, Zodiac signs, Balanced is equivalent to love, Be here, focus on now, Now look up the meaning of dove… If you think linear, you saw the O next to the V, If you think like me, you saw the six steps in between, I had to put my ego beside me or else I couldn’t teach, That only happened because I met a woman who was a reflection of me, It literally was a zodiac thing, that type of thing sparked protection with/in me; There’s no uncertainty in my reality; I’m certainly certain, I don’t see nature Changing, I see people Loopin, “Why” the (people) Shooting; Their mind: This isn’t Workin; Knowing for a fact; the solution occurs during the attempt; in working, (Cliff Swallow); People Symbolism; Outcome, United is; if chirping… Well… I’m just saying (it) worked, Because I no longer have belief; I’m a knower, I mastered Mind, no need to grow up, Please don’t say –“show us the-”-because the waves not for us, If for is four, I’m removing it; not us; Notice; Not Only That, Us… It’s time to meditate, Breathe and wait; Losing all my words; like I had no say, I’ve been a wave cause I flow with waaaves, Change is who I am… I’ll reiterate; By 7th grade, I was late, Happiness was mad; I had to elevate, When I graduate (-ed), Thought: “I couldn’t make “it”” Happiness was sad; that’s why I elevated, Didn’t have a voice; that’s why I hesitated, Now I have no voice because I -
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Jul 19, 2018
Jul 19, 2018 at 9:07 PM UTC
But if I never Made it;
After I graduated, I thought about two things, I’m certified, I am now apart of “the people”, (And) All I have to do is make a choice and I’ll find success, Gave it my best, “no test?”; I had to teach, No stress, I had to be, The O next to the V, The ego; “which is me” (Wait) V+V=4, it’s a six thing; you know love without the zeas, But with the zeal; well; Overcoming Variables was never a test, -Or a problem; I speak geometry, I took 2D, made it 3D, and that was simultaneously; how could I not be the best… (What is a, reiteration?) Two lovers, Zodiac signs, Balanced is equivalent to love, Be here, focus on now, Now look up the meaning of dove… If you think linear, you saw the O next to the V, If you think like me, you saw the six steps in between, I had to put my ego beside me or else I couldn’t teach, That only happened because I met a woman who was a reflection of me, It literally was a zodiac thing, that type of thing sparked protection with/in me; There’s no uncertainty in my reality; I’m certainly certain, I don’t see nature Changing, I see people Loopin, “Why” the (people) Shooting; Their mind: This isn’t Workin; Knowing for a fact; the solution occurs during the attempt; in working, (Cliff Swallow); People Symbolism; Outcome, United is; if chirping… Well… I’m just saying (it) worked, Because I no longer have belief; I’m a knower, I mastered Mind, no need to grow up, Please don’t say –“show us the-”-because the waves not for us, If for is four, I’m removing it; not us; Notice; Not Only That, Us… It’s time to meditate, Breathe and wait; Losing all my words; like I had no say, I’ve been a wave cause I flow with waaaves, Change is who I am… I’ll reiterate; By 7th grade, I was late, Happiness was mad; I had to elevate, When I graduate (-ed), Thought: “I couldn’t make “it”” Happiness was sad; that’s why I elevated, Didn’t have a voice; that’s why I hesitated, Now I have no voice because I -
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*New damage new separation and stitching awaits sealing and new union.. Knife and fork breaking bread for inner rising in new strength.. Surgery on high removed a rib Eve's attraction urges re-joining.. A line reading linear distortion yearns for whole in-sight.. Surgery creates and stimulates a New Day...*
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Feb 22, 2014
Feb 22, 2014 at 5:47 PM UTC
Surgery
The wood is stacked for winter. One way out of the mind's limitations is through other minds' contemplations. The books are stacked for winter. Yet even that cannot satisfy. Failing to hold still for meditation my teacher smiles, makes this observation: The purpose of sitting's not to be satisfied or satiated. Remain hungry, cold, uncomfortable and counting enemies. These, and fear, are our commonalities, and the discipline of not hitting whenever angry. You'll appreciate dying quietly at home. Whichever season has been randomly assigned will be       beautiful as ever as a molecule of water is to all matter. "In my life there were always too many things." If there is no time, only change the linear becomes circular. Do not say north or south. You're within the winter range of chickadees, hawks, owls and herons. River grapes, rose hips, the cedar waxwings' repast. Their talk is my reminding change outlasts endurance.
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Aug 11, 2015
Aug 11, 2015 at 11:52 AM UTC
Nature's Intelligent Partner
A rotating wheel. Turning an axle. Grinding. Bolthead. Linear gearbox. Falling sky. Seven holy stakes. A docked ship. A portal to another world. A thin rope tied to a thick rope. A torn harness. Parabolic gearbox. Expanding universe. Time controlled by slipping cogwheels. Existence of God. Swimming with open water in all directions. Drowning. A prayer written in blood. A prayer written in time-devouring snakes with human eyes. A thread connecting all living human eyes. A kaleidoscope of holy stakes. Exponential gearbox. A sky of exploding stars. God disproving the existence of God. A wheel rotating in six dimensions. Forty gears and a ticking clock. A clock that ticks one second for every rotation of the planet. A clock that ticks forty times every time it ticks every second time. A bolthead of holy stakes tied to the existence of a docked ship to another world. A kaleidoscope of blood written in clocks. A time-devouring prayer connecting a sky of forty gears and open human eyes in all directions. Breathing gearbox. Breathing bolthead. Breathing ship. Breathing portal. Breathing snakes. Breathing God. Breathing blood. Breathing holy stakes. Breathing human eyes. Breathing time. Breathing prayer. Breathing sky. Breathing wheel.
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Feb 9, 2019
Feb 9, 2019 at 8:43 PM UTC
Wheel (DDLC)
Does time actually exist? do we move forward in a linear fashion, or do we exist in a evolutionary rotation. does this reality have a beginning and an end, or is it in a constant state of flux. it seems time is only relevant to those that can perceive its regular alterations. yet perceptions can be deceiving. how can we truly know anything if our senses cannot be trusted. regardless our limitations we are moving forward, mutations of energy intimately woven into the fabric of spacetime. We exist in a great unknown, a sea of mysteries of few obvious truths. do not fear the unknown, learn to love the questions and the answers may come in time. whether we are moving forward, or, completing a cycle, love the time you're given; because all we have is now, for tomorrow and yesterday exist solely in the confines of our minds.
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Jan 24, 2014
Jan 24, 2014 at 4:30 AM UTC
Onward
‘Apocalypto’ is a film set in a Maya civilisation and consists of a story that takes place in one tribe and how a passing tribe affects them to a degree of destruction. The story unfolds in a linear way of storytelling which is basic but still effective. From director Mel Gibson, the director of ‘Braveheart’ and ‘Passion of the Christ’. An underrated director of sorts but a great one nonetheless. Overlooked due to his acting career, he has been holding back on us as a director. The characters are set to be living a Mayan life and go about their days behaving as such but are rather generous and civilized for such an old race of people. They live peacefully and secluded until they interact with another tribe which brings about their downfall. And the way in which a Mayan civilization might go about solving problem as common as a natural disaster. Through sacrifices to the God's as a way to solve problems and mass results. Very accurate to the Mayan culture as well as the entire movie taking place without one word of English, all dialogue being said in the Mayan language. Another credit to the film. The directing style for this film is beautiful and flawless to say the least. No shaky cam used or hand held cam either. All fluent movement of the camera to create a great story, one that flows naturally. The use of camera angles is creative and different, using tilted angles to convey a certain mood and straight framed shots to convey another mood. The performances stand out as a huge positive, the actors who I have honestly never heard of give Oscar worthy performances. Mel Gibson uses unknown actors as not to compromise the film by the status of the actors. These actors and actresses give a hard performance based on body language and quiet moments, the enduring task of learning to be emotional through a foreign language. Which is why I would guess Mel Gibson used local actors who are more aware of the Mayan language than American actors. The set design is truly Oscar worthy in this film. The Mayan temples and tribe lands are captured perfectly in the sets for this film. Well build and suited towards the amazon environment. As well as good filming locations, using the wonders of the amazon rainforest as an advantage. In final thoughts, I believe that Mel Gibson is a stunning director with an eye for detail and a beautiful visual director. A director that can produce great work. ‘Apocalypto’ to me in the near future will become a period piece masterpiece. A tale of survival and dedication that will live on through the ages. Rating: Film - 8.4 Personal - 8.9
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Sep 29, 2016
Sep 29, 2016 at 12:02 PM UTC
'Apocalypto' Review
‘Apocalypto’ is a film set in a Maya civilisation and consists of a story that takes place in one tribe and how a passing tribe affects them to a degree of destruction. The story unfolds in a linear way of storytelling which is basic but still effective. From director Mel Gibson, the director of ‘Braveheart’ and ‘Passion of the Christ’. An underrated director of sorts but a great one nonetheless. Overlooked due to his acting career, he has been holding back on us as a director. The characters are set to be living a Mayan life and go about their days behaving as such but are rather generous and civilized for such an old race of people. They live peacefully and secluded until they interact with another tribe which brings about their downfall. And the way in which a Mayan civilization might go about solving problem as common as a natural disaster. Through sacrifices to the God's as a way to solve problems and mass results. Very accurate to the Mayan culture as well as the entire movie taking place without one word of English, all dialogue being said in the Mayan language. Another credit to the film. The directing style for this film is beautiful and flawless to say the least. No shaky cam used or hand held cam either. All fluent movement of the camera to create a great story, one that flows naturally. The use of camera angles is creative and different, using tilted angles to convey a certain mood and straight framed shots to convey another mood. The performances stand out as a huge positive, the actors who I have honestly never heard of give Oscar worthy performances. Mel Gibson uses unknown actors as not to compromise the film by the status of the actors. These actors and actresses give a hard performance based on body language and quiet moments, the enduring task of learning to be emotional through a foreign language. Which is why I would guess Mel Gibson used local actors who are more aware of the Mayan language than American actors. The set design is truly Oscar worthy in this film. The Mayan temples and tribe lands are captured perfectly in the sets for this film. Well build and suited towards the amazon environment. As well as good filming locations, using the wonders of the amazon rainforest as an advantage. In final thoughts, I believe that Mel Gibson is a stunning director with an eye for detail and a beautiful visual director. A director that can produce great work. ‘Apocalypto’ to me in the near future will become a period piece masterpiece. A tale of survival and dedication that will live on through the ages. Rating: Film - 8.4 Personal - 8.9
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I love you baby, From x approaching a limit of positive to negative infinity. A range so large and domain so vast, My love for you will always last. The way my curve touches your tangent, And how your secant meets me end to end. When your line intersects my parabola, We connect at one point of linear algebra. You transform my altitude, When my sinusoidal function allows you too. You make my average rate of change, Quicken and heighten in an instantaneous range. For those days when my angle is in depression, You tilt me up to an angle of elevation. In an isosceles triangle, You will always be my special angle. The identities we cross, Changing from tan to sin over cos. Like sin²x with cos²x we are one, It’s quite simple *** Your imaginary roots maybe out of this world, But my zeros and intercepts will keep it real. It’s a complicated equation, To solve for my fascination. It’s the beginning of our journey, I hope we never come across an inequality. I love you endlessly like x approaching positive and negative infinity.
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Feb 18, 2013
Feb 18, 2013 at 11:38 PM UTC
My Love For You
Maybe my writing Will improve When strewn over Blue lined graph paper, Tiny boxes, Coaxing out order, Perhaps even Clarifying boundaries Between crazed truth, And detrimental lies. The grid putting Poem in context, Poem like graph, Displaying Levels of THC Depression Number of Kisses Tears Cried Outliers of secrets uttered. Box and whisker plot Displaying anxiety, Skewed data toward extremes. No. Linear writing would Reveal the chaos inside. I can't fit the poems To the squares. A graph can't really cry The way a person can. There's a losing feeling Etched in pen On a harshly graded Parcel of mathematical quizzing That a poem has no place to Instill in me. And no one would Be able to read my work The way they tell you to show it. My poems have no color coding. Definition between data Becomes hazy as Layers of black are added In empty, All encompassing anger. And I smoke while I write tonight, Haze growing, Lines wobbled, And I may have put a poem On a piece of graph paper But it's nothing like the math homework That stays in my backpack.
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Sep 18, 2014
Sep 18, 2014 at 12:10 PM UTC
On Graph Paper
Our trajectory was so like no other.   so linear within it's silhouette, gazing upon the others                                         gravity. We had a cycle of moments that were like                 s                     t                        a                            r                               s Weaving between our paths, serenading our motions entwined within the others graces. There was nothing between us but space, a gravity of affections. But some times a distance can expand                                                  in time, Even though we once eclipsing each other. Gazing at each other as our horizons descended you were the gravity of my yearning for so long. I could count the stars that shot upon our forms, still I feel the effects, but our stars descend less often. Maybe ours were answered previously but dreams                                                                  only come true once. You'll always be within my orbit, but never as close as what gravity lingered before. I see you, but we are just motions no longer adjacent in the stars of our hearts.
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Apr 19, 2017
Apr 19, 2017 at 11:41 AM UTC
Always Within My Gravity
Karim disintegrates To the madness of the Brightest Star In the fog-thickened day. That star, Empowered with the strength of a Thousand soldiers And their passion, And the cunning wit Of the Great Apollo, Stretched the fabric of linear veil to pause The illusion of society For a moment Outside of dementia
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Jun 15, 2022
Jun 15, 2022 at 7:36 PM UTC
Karim, 6/15/22
for her no special expertise claimed, if anything, les contraries, my non-expertise, but nothing forbids my heart from trying red crossing, rebuilding just this young one build from the corners in, like one starts a jigsaw puzzle, the human, moving parts, thus harder, but eminently doable the corners are straight edged, linear, easier to spot, easier to start, but for you to find them within, go outside, and window winnow in you will know them as your truest words pick the picture of you, you know you must pick, the puzzle picture of you that favorite one when completed, will, though cracked, as jigsaw puzzles by nature wont, as all humans are wont, will be the one that brings smiles first, foremost she asks: *"Where are these edges that define me, help me to construct and the where to begin?"* after sixty years more on this planet, have been torn apart, reconstructed, deconstructed, more then ten finger and ten toe times this I know, there is but one beauty in this crueled worn every day weary-world, it is you, you words that betray Beautiful You oh so well you see I have your picture, you see I have your words, deconstructed, reconstructed, I love your picture, I love your words, start with me, start at the corners, show me the pieces, tho the world see the ex terior, I see the in terior, the shiny new true sides, so beautiful, wake knowing that not just me dearest Chalsey, I have found your chalice, and your grail, and I say, this is just one man, this can be where you start, this then be your mirror, let us from the corners in, from the eyes that penetrate, accept that this is not debatable, this is my poem where I do not lie, this is my piece of you, from inside of me my straight edge piece was born in your beautiful words, and I say, can you, see a voice, can you, touch a voice, no one can but I can your voice is transcendent, it is the cover photo of a glossy mag, this is the photo, the puzzle I see, and heart each and every word
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Mar 14, 2014
Mar 14, 2014 at 6:55 AM UTC
Chalsey Wilder's Jigsaw Puzzle (Rebuilding)
for her no special expertise claimed, if anything, les contraries, my non-expertise, but nothing forbids my heart from trying red crossing, rebuilding just this young one build from the corners in, like one starts a jigsaw puzzle, the human, moving parts, thus harder, but eminently doable the corners are straight edged, linear, easier to spot, easier to start, but for you to find them within, go outside, and window winnow in you will know them as your truest words pick the picture of you, you know you must pick, the puzzle picture of you that favorite one when completed, will, though cracked, as jigsaw puzzles by nature wont, as all humans are wont, will be the one that brings smiles first, foremost she asks: *"Where are these edges that define me, help me to construct and the where to begin?"* after sixty years more on this planet, have been torn apart, reconstructed, deconstructed, more then ten finger and ten toe times this I know, there is but one beauty in this crueled worn every day weary-world, it is you, you words that betray Beautiful You oh so well you see I have your picture, you see I have your words, deconstructed, reconstructed, I love your picture, I love your words, start with me, start at the corners, show me the pieces, tho the world see the ex terior, I see the in terior, the shiny new true sides, so beautiful, wake knowing that not just me dearest Chalsey, I have found your chalice, and your grail, and I say, this is just one man, this can be where you start, this then be your mirror, let us from the corners in, from the eyes that penetrate, accept that this is not debatable, this is my poem where I do not lie, this is my piece of you, from inside of me my straight edge piece was born in your beautiful words, and I say, can you, see a voice, can you, touch a voice, no one can but I can your voice is transcendent, it is the cover photo of a glossy mag, this is the photo, the puzzle I see, and heart each and every word
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The mathematician never finished his work today Which is weird because it was the most important project of his career. Working on the equation for the perfect person, left it halfway done. The other half lost in this numerical mind. But that's what we are, two halves of an unfinished project. A slip atom A half of a binomial theorem A parabola at the apex of its' focus, ready to fall right back on its' feet. Because apart we are imperfect, we trip, we fall But when multiplied we are a product of perfection, able to point out that mistaken branch before you have time to brace yourself. I'll take those expanded arms and wrap them around me, feel your acute angles against my obtuse curves. Put my hand on your neck, not to feel your skin, well: to do that too, but also to feel your pulse. Knowing it beats at the same intervals as mine. And no one know why the mathematician never completed the equation. …maybe fell asleep… …maybe distracted… …maybe he just forgot… But I thank him. Because perfect is lonely and you...you are everything. Without him the Y= to my MX+being would never be linear. And I'm not good at math, neither are you, but I'm pretty sure we don't need to look in the back of the book for any answers.
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Sep 4, 2012
Sep 4, 2012 at 3:33 PM UTC
Math
Victuals for intellectuals: be quasi and prototypical, not pseudo or ritual. Feel shame and wonder. Don’t blunder in the shallow muck, shovel to your knees and look under. Do not track linear paths: Think sideways, backwards, upside down, exist laterally. Accept contradictory truths: they are not just possible they are inevitable. If you haven’t found one in your search, keep your head down and eyes open. Be new to avoid ennui, and let no truth chip your tooth. Be quiet, not stupid, be rarely edible and hoarse from spirit. Be invisible, not loud, be a hoax until you are undeniable.
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Jan 15, 2014
Jan 15, 2014 at 7:25 AM UTC
Pseudo-intellectual