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"insightfully" poems
The immediate introversion, A safe solitude. Alone and alive. Lacking loneliness, At this disturbing depth, Unlike the saliently superficial. The calming confusion Relaxes and reassures. Defiantly deliberate, And thoroughly thoughtful. Marvelously mesmerized By my continuous contemplation. Overtly observant, And insightfully introspective. Fiercely focused On building and bettering. I meticulously memorialize, And succinctly summarize, My lavish love, For being Alone and alive.
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Aug 24, 2016
Aug 24, 2016 at 4:45 PM UTC
Alone & Alive
*A feeling Is not about who is best Art Is not a contest To insist on a victor Is an ego that has broken Showering hate upon the lives Of hearts that are open* What may or may not be poetry Is instead the heart of our family You commented rather pointedly About your superior ability And eloquent verbosity Most likely derived from history Of the friends of Neal Cassidy And other written eccentricity Yet you forgot your humanity And instead introduced a monstrosity An ego steeped in personal vanity Insisting on being treated royally Demanding your subjects bow immediately As you crashed into the sea of tranquility Planting your flag of superiority And crushing our words spoken so plainly But heartfully Because the letters are unworthy To one who is challenged emotionally Unable to live peacefully Amongst those who wish to learn gratefully About a craft you have reserved selfishly For yourself and those you deem to be equally As adept as yourself in the vagary Of references you declare to be wholly Fresh and newly Minted by your ability To walk around the cliché so gracefully While we repeatedly Use words such as lovely Or heavenly Or tearfully Or holy So we beg you openly To understand what is primary In a place for the novice to publically Air their emotions unapologetically And speak candidly And unconditionally About how painfully It is to live freely In a place so worldly Where men think judgmentally ******* the life from those who live meekly And wish to exist thankfully Amongst those who understand brotherly Love and who affectionately Praise those who tenderly Open their hearts to humanity Giving mercy To those without the gifts you egotistically Bludgeoned us with so artfully But failing miserably To impart insightfully Your wisdom for those who willingly Would receive daily Your transcendently And insightfully Spoken songs of serenity But instead you callously Reminded us unfortunately That mere man is weakly Empowered to exist commonly And instead arrogantly Cuts the rose greedily Leaving the thorns sadistically
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Mar 6, 2012
Mar 6, 2012 at 9:11 AM UTC
Criticism
*A feeling Is not about who is best Art Is not a contest To insist on a victor Is an ego that has broken Showering hate upon the lives Of hearts that are open* What may or may not be poetry Is instead the heart of our family You commented rather pointedly About your superior ability And eloquent verbosity Most likely derived from history Of the friends of Neal Cassidy And other written eccentricity Yet you forgot your humanity And instead introduced a monstrosity An ego steeped in personal vanity Insisting on being treated royally Demanding your subjects bow immediately As you crashed into the sea of tranquility Planting your flag of superiority And crushing our words spoken so plainly But heartfully Because the letters are unworthy To one who is challenged emotionally Unable to live peacefully Amongst those who wish to learn gratefully About a craft you have reserved selfishly For yourself and those you deem to be equally As adept as yourself in the vagary Of references you declare to be wholly Fresh and newly Minted by your ability To walk around the cliché so gracefully While we repeatedly Use words such as lovely Or heavenly Or tearfully Or holy So we beg you openly To understand what is primary In a place for the novice to publically Air their emotions unapologetically And speak candidly And unconditionally About how painfully It is to live freely In a place so worldly Where men think judgmentally ******* the life from those who live meekly And wish to exist thankfully Amongst those who understand brotherly Love and who affectionately Praise those who tenderly Open their hearts to humanity Giving mercy To those without the gifts you egotistically Bludgeoned us with so artfully But failing miserably To impart insightfully Your wisdom for those who willingly Would receive daily Your transcendently And insightfully Spoken songs of serenity But instead you callously Reminded us unfortunately That mere man is weakly Empowered to exist commonly And instead arrogantly Cuts the rose greedily Leaving the thorns sadistically
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A reflection of spirit warm benevolent embraces flood my being until at once I am sprung full of holes sprouting translucent pools of love. Never ashamed timid or bothered by this outpouring. It is the purest and finest who care in all these pursuits and endeavors reaping the cascading benefits of putting someone else graciously above yourself. Coming out of the circle reaching the clouds feeling full amidst the crowds peaceful, gaiety, light insightfully humble and happy. I have been in flight and heard the capacious call of the mourning dove.
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Apr 12, 2014
Apr 12, 2014 at 3:21 PM UTC
Reflection of Spirit
A hair full of honey, Unruly and untamed; A tangle of perfect beauty That remains unnamed. Brown doe-full eyes With emerald specks aglow- Eyelashes of satin Frame them with the blackness of a crow. Lips wryly perched Like a bird upon a tree; A hue of pearly rose Insightfully buzzing like a bee. A heart so untainted, An opinion built on passion, Her fierceness, others crave- Emotions on her sleeve, she wears them like a fashion.
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Nov 24, 2013
Nov 24, 2013 at 11:00 PM UTC
The Beauty Within
I think my heart is on the end of one string guided much like a yo-yo toy, dangling. Up and down that prevalent emotions bring, Upward for passion, love, joy and affection Downward in sadness, pity and compassion insightfully, holds place if sensed doubt or fear. True strings, the hearts tendons, ensure its function where  muscle and valve labour through connection keeping life's system robust, hearty and hale   But the perceptive unseen strings, felt each day   so often to be tugged, softened, snapped and played best of all is when one, or several of mine resonate in tune, when in concert with thine. Heartstrings      Michael C Crowder @scorsby 10th February 2021
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May 1, 2021
May 1, 2021 at 1:03 PM UTC
Heartstrings
There is ice behind you’re eyes I crave to entangle my coldness with yours I want you deeply, I do not trust you. You’re words are insightfully premeditated, ever changing and empty I meet you’re gaze with anticipation of the sudden urgency too look away immediately, automatically and habitually I must not love you, I must not love.
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Apr 20, 2021
Apr 20, 2021 at 4:43 AM UTC
Absent