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"hesitating" poems
butterflies and jitters stutters and whispers shaking and sweating hesitating and forgetting
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May 2, 2014
May 2, 2014 at 11:19 PM UTC
Symptoms of a Crush
In order to expose my heart and truly write, I must release my status or my pride, this is not about me, it was never meant to be a way to gain recognition, another way for me to perform on a stage, some sort of exhibition. Yet I find myself hesitating to write my thoughts, trying to impress people I don't even know, It was only meant to be an outlet a therapy for me, never some sort of show, but like everything I have ever done somehow Id rather waste my time trying to impress. My guilty conscience driving me to be truly under duress. Forced to hold back the leanings of my heart I merely release a fluffy worthless shallow piece. I will not be stifled, held down by my need to please, my ribs will not rupture under this pressure as I try to breathe. I must write with heart and soul or not at all. So this is my open message to you pride, no matter how many times I fool myself into putting on your mask, I promise, your control over me will not last. I will take you off just as quickly as I put you on because I want someone who reads these to truly see me. To see me with all of my scars misfortunes and faith, I will put my heart out, I will never aspire to be fake.
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Aug 3, 2018
Aug 3, 2018 at 10:18 PM UTC
Pride
(Villanelle) It takes patience to wait for the perfect light. Glance away and the image can disappear. And sometimes the background isn’t quite right. The moment missed is like a face out of sight That against all logic we hope will appear From around a corner, bathed in perfect light. Or a pause in the music on a moonlit night When hesitating lips touch, and love leans near, But voices whisper that something’s not right. Technology offers consolation in its sleight Of hand:  Digitally correct the analog *here And now*, counterfeit the perfect light. Yet we want more than the mastered byte. We want the flash between the waiting and the souvenir, The instant when self and spectacle fuse, reality felt right. And so we hold on to what’s passing out of sight, The collision between soon and too late, the sheer Thread connecting to the perfect light In which the background is precisely right.
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Jul 21, 2015
Jul 21, 2015 at 7:51 PM UTC
Photo Op
I used to seek answers, to unsaid questions, to incessant ponderings, of the world in which we live in. I used to fill the world with my voice, never stopping, hesitating, for my greatest fear was something far bigger than heights; it was the silence. The illusion was unmasked, and at once, I understood why those questions were left unanswered. And now, I find myself basking in the silence, breathing it in, trapping the words inside; leaving them to roam within the confines of my intricate road map. The silence assures me, that underneath the tangle of human complication, of man-made solidarity, the world is still a simple silent place.
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Apr 12, 2013
Apr 12, 2013 at 6:27 PM UTC
Solidarity.
I've had **** Not *** Not ********** Not consensually. I've been ****** ***** abused. taken advantage of. whatever it is you want to call it I've had it done. I've been kissed Fingered choked hit spit on spit in I've been held, hostage with knives against my throat guns to my head, in my mouth drugs down my throat barely conscious I've been ****** I've been in love I've been heartbroken I've been touched consensually, let me tell you about the consensually. I've been kissed in the bathroom, lifting her up against the wall laughing when our teeth brushed against one another's hands fumbling up a skirt around a throat fingers tangled in wavy hair. I've been touched sitting in her lap outside on a hot day wearing her hoodie around children freshmen year. I've been touched multiple times by him in band rooms, away from prying eyes secrets to be kept and wooed over laying in a dress during a concert event head in the lap of my best friend underwear brushed to the side fingers thrusting in and yes, this was consentually. I've been touched in the school hallways every day after school or in between classes tasted and tasted he tasted me I tasted myself. And in the living room of our best friend's house even though I told him no I told him the safe word he continued. I say it was consensual because in the end, I said I loved it. Don't argue about it. I wanted it. and I've been touched in her pool heated ever so lovingly LED lights danced us into the temptation as did the alcohol on my part with her lips against my chest desperate to mark, yet not to show i mean, hey, my step-dad's homophobic though I'd love nothing more than to show who I belong to. We switched a lot, but ultimately I landed in her lap water licking up my sides, sending chills to ******* goosebumps and her fingers hesitating not daring to touch. "i'm going to need a yes." finally. Finally asked. I nodded eagerly and she treated me like a piano perfect notes though brief I know that I was drenched in all ways the chlorine water yes and of course the obvious. you see, we were going to do something that night we had the chance to I wanted to she wanted to In the end, she took something for her headache though it was a sort of similar thing to Nyquil We were going to. But we laid in bed and we molded against each other and sailed asleep. I've slept with one person. Her Sydney My Muse. But Still, A ****** am I
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Mar 26, 2021
Mar 26, 2021 at 5:31 AM UTC
But Still, A ******
I've had **** Not *** Not ********** Not consensually. I've been ****** ***** abused. taken advantage of. whatever it is you want to call it I've had it done. I've been kissed Fingered choked hit spit on spit in I've been held, hostage with knives against my throat guns to my head, in my mouth drugs down my throat barely conscious I've been ****** I've been in love I've been heartbroken I've been touched consensually, let me tell you about the consensually. I've been kissed in the bathroom, lifting her up against the wall laughing when our teeth brushed against one another's hands fumbling up a skirt around a throat fingers tangled in wavy hair. I've been touched sitting in her lap outside on a hot day wearing her hoodie around children freshmen year. I've been touched multiple times by him in band rooms, away from prying eyes secrets to be kept and wooed over laying in a dress during a concert event head in the lap of my best friend underwear brushed to the side fingers thrusting in and yes, this was consentually. I've been touched in the school hallways every day after school or in between classes tasted and tasted he tasted me I tasted myself. And in the living room of our best friend's house even though I told him no I told him the safe word he continued. I say it was consensual because in the end, I said I loved it. Don't argue about it. I wanted it. and I've been touched in her pool heated ever so lovingly LED lights danced us into the temptation as did the alcohol on my part with her lips against my chest desperate to mark, yet not to show i mean, hey, my step-dad's homophobic though I'd love nothing more than to show who I belong to. We switched a lot, but ultimately I landed in her lap water licking up my sides, sending chills to ******* goosebumps and her fingers hesitating not daring to touch. "i'm going to need a yes." finally. Finally asked. I nodded eagerly and she treated me like a piano perfect notes though brief I know that I was drenched in all ways the chlorine water yes and of course the obvious. you see, we were going to do something that night we had the chance to I wanted to she wanted to In the end, she took something for her headache though it was a sort of similar thing to Nyquil We were going to. But we laid in bed and we molded against each other and sailed asleep. I've slept with one person. Her Sydney My Muse. But Still, A ****** am I
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I didn’t think I’d lose myself in you Hesitating to fall, It was a brave conquest At the edge of it all Looking down into a pit And so I went without looking Convinced that you’d be at the bottom To crush my fall Who knew you were the one to push me.
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Sep 12, 2015
Sep 12, 2015 at 1:35 AM UTC
Cliffhanger
9 January 2014   02.21am "We all have feelings for our girlfriends Bea, it doesn't mean we have to act on them.." Silence filled the room Two opposing forces Love lust passion Hate anger fear What was once owned Has now been taken Walking towards her Reaching out, hand movements So slow and graceful An aura so compelling, senses heightened Bodies shifting as though Magnetic forces were playing A sultry dance acting out Underneath the candelabra Eyes locked mirroring feelings Left unspoken, razor sharp tongue Hips graze, music intensifies An atmosphere fraught with Tension, favoured to be cut by a knife Hesitating lips part with a subtle urgency Circulatory movements dancing feet A lowly finger fondles an inner thigh Ever so slightly withering, exuberant pleasure Eyes connect, glistening from the light A smile pacifying both women Others gazes capture their movements For now, they are the only ones Whose love and light fills this room Alone, unhinged, they kiss At first tentatively, then feverishly Drowning, they are both saved The lovers bodies blend into one Possessing one another Nothing is lost in that moment Desperately clinging to affection Souls freed, emotions making miracles Two lovers effortlessly become One soul being. © Sia Jane
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Jan 9, 2014
Jan 9, 2014 at 12:17 PM UTC
Eleven Minutes
i know a boy who sits behind me always tapping his pen tapping and tapping fingertips spelling i am anxious i know a boy who walks me to class looks at me before I leave his foot keeps tapping and tapping and I keep waiting for him to tell me goodbye so I can go to class i know a boy who cannot stop like a car alarm on christmas morning like police sirens underwater a boy afraid of the pause the rest, the wait, the halt the slow motion of eyes meeting, elbows accidentally touching words becoming deep breaths, hesitating instead I know a boy who is still a child and over and over, i loved him "still"
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Oct 5, 2013
Oct 5, 2013 at 11:01 PM UTC
love letter to the boy with ADHD
I shatter on the floor in many pieces; My jagged edges sharp and menacing. Putting me back together takes sweat, blood and patience, but I am forever altered. From afar I look complete, Come closer and you can see that I'm held together only by sheer determination. Time will allow the painful betrayals to fade until I'm brave enough to try again. However, I tip-toe carefully, always hesitating.
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Jan 21, 2015
Jan 21, 2015 at 10:03 PM UTC
Trust
A collaboration between SG Holter and Elisa Maria Argiro Hesitating here, silent edge of this dark forest, I look beyond me, warm in the white fog. Seeing your heart, now residing deep within the ancient wood, is to know it is blessed, loved. *Silver tongue resting now in golden silence. Palms of soul upon moss and brittle bark. Animal song; scent of beasts approaching unafraid. Fierce peace. The opposite of a machine.* In the rising sap of silent trees around us, our deeply beating pulses listen, dance, smiling kisses at the shining stars, new planets. Eyes open, anima and animus press tightly And distance is no more. *"What language is Yours," I ask the still growing giants of Green. "Silence and its sister tongues Such as leaves dancing with the Breeze," they reply within the Gap between soft sounds and Softer ones. So we speak through breaths Exchanged, of nothing. Two souls afloat upon the stream Of Union with All. What is Cosmos, But "home"? Never a visitor. Never a stranger. Nowhere has anyone ever been Lost, or Away.* Humming your essence into my veins, in tune with the wordless languages of green lives and wind, listening among delicate flowers, sleeping here on the forest floor, wakeful and awaiting the next sound of your voiceless voice, wind words blowing through my long, curling hair, feeling the intention of your untouched touch, at home, just being.
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May 20, 2016
May 20, 2016 at 2:48 PM UTC
In the Language of Leaves
It was 1 a.m. I was at a bar, you were probably at your house, drunk, having people come over. I texted you and the first thing you said to me was "come over" but you and I both know that wasn't going to happen anymore. I had to tell you I didn't hate you. Because the last time I talked to you the words poured out of my mouth like lava and I was sure you would never talk to me again. But sure enough, without even hesitating the second my name popped up on your screen you told me to come see you. And that's what drove me crazy. Despite everything you still always wanted to see me. And that's what made me wonder, despite us being so against being together, we can never leave each other alone. I could only think you wanted me as much as i want you, but we both know we will never admit it. Maybe two people are meant to meet, but can never be together.
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Sep 24, 2017
Sep 24, 2017 at 9:29 PM UTC
We should go our separate ways.
One, two, three, two, five, seven Rhythmless feet clad in branded shoes Adventurous, brazen fingers strolling on wide, voluptuous stalks Towering sunflowers with wide, voluptuous stalks Pristine dandelions enticing pairs of hands Pristine dandelions enticing my pair of hands And I give in, and I willingly give in Summer petals weaken the gullible heart The summer petals abandon the gullible heart One, two, three, two, five, seven Rhythmless feet now bare Adventurous, brazen fingers now dormant One, two, four, six, eight, ten Rhythmless feet clad in cheap shoes Curious fingers strolling on wide, voluptuous stalks Towering white daisies with wide, voluptuous stalks Pristine dandelions spring once more Pristine dandelions enticing my pair of hands And I give in, yet again I give in Winter petals capture the derelict heart The winter petals emulate mirrors after caressing the ramshackle heart One, two, four, six, eight, ten Rhythmless feet once again bare, now calloused Curious fingers now cautious One, two, two, two, two, two Rhythmless feet hesitating to be covered Vacillating fingers mapping the wide, voluptuous stalks Pristine dandelions surface once more Pristine dandelions displaying subtle coquetry And I stall, for heaven's sake, I stall Fall petals demonstrate its desire to the heart The fall petals fall but the bitter heart hangs on a silk thread One, two, two, two, two, two Rhythmless feet discovers a rhythm A rhythm so unpleasant, so abhorrent Vacillating fingers now curl Curl into the palm in resistance
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May 24, 2016
May 24, 2016 at 11:39 AM UTC
Repetitions
One, two, three, two, five, seven Rhythmless feet clad in branded shoes Adventurous, brazen fingers strolling on wide, voluptuous stalks Towering sunflowers with wide, voluptuous stalks Pristine dandelions enticing pairs of hands Pristine dandelions enticing my pair of hands And I give in, and I willingly give in Summer petals weaken the gullible heart The summer petals abandon the gullible heart One, two, three, two, five, seven Rhythmless feet now bare Adventurous, brazen fingers now dormant One, two, four, six, eight, ten Rhythmless feet clad in cheap shoes Curious fingers strolling on wide, voluptuous stalks Towering white daisies with wide, voluptuous stalks Pristine dandelions spring once more Pristine dandelions enticing my pair of hands And I give in, yet again I give in Winter petals capture the derelict heart The winter petals emulate mirrors after caressing the ramshackle heart One, two, four, six, eight, ten Rhythmless feet once again bare, now calloused Curious fingers now cautious One, two, two, two, two, two Rhythmless feet hesitating to be covered Vacillating fingers mapping the wide, voluptuous stalks Pristine dandelions surface once more Pristine dandelions displaying subtle coquetry And I stall, for heaven's sake, I stall Fall petals demonstrate its desire to the heart The fall petals fall but the bitter heart hangs on a silk thread One, two, two, two, two, two Rhythmless feet discovers a rhythm A rhythm so unpleasant, so abhorrent Vacillating fingers now curl Curl into the palm in resistance
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an assembly or better named a clump of multifarious flotsam presenting its untidy self on a recent passing streetcorner.. a hesitating photo records a drifting pinecone centering a stained and shredding newspaper a broken sharp stick red rocks of scales and shadings flecking dried green leaves.. order imposed by framing and shaping of the sidewalk corner.. might other forms emerge with a focused patience? a partial headline reads ...sound without the wires.. news of expanding connections outside a material realm? headline seemed embedded in thick advertising bulk announcing a continuing culture of material weight.. much else of red and green.. the centering pinecone occasional pineal symbol of higher dimension entry.. somehow rightly here in the dark center of this mess this a brief experiment not yet for most an answer a question now of mining finding patterned varieties in large nature's trove.. patient visions residing in gathered fragments if gathered they be.. expectations of more in what persists of this and that in time...  :)
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Jun 13, 2012
Jun 13, 2012 at 11:03 PM UTC
chaos
anxiety is building up all your courage to simply tell a waiter or waitress your order anxiety is dreading to receive gifts because you don't think your reaction will be good enough anxiety is remaining silent at a family dinner because you're afraid of them judging your every sentence anxiety is texting someone then wishing you hadn't for fear of them forgetting you ever existed anxiety is hesitating to ring someone's doorbell for the fear of forgetting what you were going to say anxiety is spending hours at night practicing conversation for tomorrow to please your friends anxiety is going over what you're going to say when you raise your hand so you won't mess up for once anxiety is me a.c.
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Sep 15, 2013
Sep 15, 2013 at 4:54 PM UTC
anxiety is
Hesitations grips me Sometimes with a soft gentle squeeze and sometimes with an iron fist That split second where you see that girl with whimsical hair and a playful smile and your body is screaming at the top of its lungs “GO AFTER HER YOU FOOL!!!” while your brain mulls over the endless stream of stressful situations I can hear Robin Williams calling out to me “Let me hear your YAWP!” and I’m shaking, quivering, rattling, generating the vocal ferocity of a lion! And all that comes out is a whimpering “yawp…” Hesitation grips me A harmless compliment to brighten someone’s day, no harm done, just a quick simple “I like your pants” a smile and I’m on my way Simple! Wrong! That flickering candle of pleasantries is cut short by a swiftly shutting window of opportunity The breeze not hesitating to extinguish its light Hesitation grips me How many moments must I suffer paralyzed lips before my can of complimentary worms is opened? How many lovely strangers will continue to mill about their days in unblissful ignorance of my enjoyment of their simple, subtle or overt characteristics? This hesitation grips me! It shackles me and holds the key in front of my face and all it requires is one real Yawp! The mustering has begun! That key is my freedom of hesitant chains! Just! One! Yawp! I think I can I think I can I think I can! Just! One! Yawp! “yawp…” Hesitation grips me
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May 29, 2014
May 29, 2014 at 11:35 AM UTC
Hesitation (Slam Poem)
why is love blind why when inlove we always bind to the play this game of heart and mind on which there are no ways to you find we dont see but we follow our feelings we trust without hesitating if what we do is contradicting or just being inlove is addicting so why are we loving if we could get blinded on things we do for love were not guided we suffer of being a slave of love But still we smile even when we are treated like a grub i guess that love is blind if following the heart better you think of it before you start because it will be too late once you begin you'll get blinded within by the love that opens your heart blinds your sight apart
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Jan 10, 2015
Jan 10, 2015 at 12:12 AM UTC
Love is Blind
Have you ever seen a night sky so clear; So clear that there’s not even a sign of the moon’s existence? Well, I’m under one right now The street is empty and the darkness is silent No rustling of leaves or bushes, No hums of crickets singing in chorus Window drapes are down And they’re all black instead of yellow Streetlights are the only source of light And that telephone booth standing steadily alone on the corner Hands inside my hoodie’s pocket, I go in it I pick the phone up and started dialing a number When suddenly all the lights go out In a blink of an eye, and the world is in total darkness Everything is quieter than ever Then the wind comes whooshing The thunder begins applauding The lighting started like camera flashes Raindrops as big as golf ***** fall from the sky And the way they hit the roof of the booth, I almost believe they’re as heavy Inside the booth I still get wet from all the sweat Then, as if on cue, the storm dies Quietness floods again The booth light flickers but that’s all Streetlights never come back Hesitating for a moment, I slowly go out I look up and the sky isn’t just a black canvas anymore; It’s now filled with blots of white ink Glittered to life I kick the waters not yet ****** up by the drains I look at how calm they are Mirroring the beautiful night sky painted I can definitely say I’m top and under the cosmos
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May 13, 2015
May 13, 2015 at 8:57 AM UTC
Reflected Artwork
Stuck in the thick that drags me under I struggle for breathes, grasping for the surface The runner appears beyond the drowned Do you see me? A sense of familiarity blankets my surroundings Yet it is shrouded with insecurity The runner stops to peer into the abyss Can you help me? I reach to where the moon and stars used to be Your conflicted face reduces to fear Only hesitating before fleeing Where are you going? I sink deeper than before As the runner abandons the gloom A stream of tears left next to your footsteps Why are you crying? Now I am consumed Now I am alone And now I am tired Why did you leave?
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Feb 17, 2021
Feb 17, 2021 at 9:45 PM UTC
The Runner
As a child, I liked to imagine animals as characteristics. Foxes were intelligence, lions were courage, dogs were loyalty, and beauty? Beauty was always a butterfly. I imagined her floating softly between humans, hesitating ever so slightly at each ones shoulder, making sure to only distribute the smallest amount of herself to each of them. After all, too much beauty is surely a dangerous thing. But from the first moment I saw you, I knew that beauty had rested her dainty legs on your shoulder for just a second, and she knew she'd never leave again. Beauty belonged to you like she had never belonged to anyone else. And they say that all is fair in love and war; but eyes like your's, my dear, were never in the cards.
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Oct 14, 2016
Oct 14, 2016 at 2:36 AM UTC
Beauty
Departing summer hath assumed An aspect tenderly illumed, The gentlest look of spring; That calls from yonder leafy shade Unfaded, yet prepared to fade, A timely carolling. No faint and hesitating trill, Such tribute as to winter chill The lonely redbreast pays! Clear, loud, and lively is the din, From social warblers gathering in Their harvest of sweet lays. Nor doth the example fail to cheer Me, conscious that my leaf is sere, And yellow on the bough:— Fall, rosy garlands, from my head! Ye myrtle wreaths, your fragrance shed Around a younger brow! Yet will I temperately rejoice; Wide is the range, and free the choice Of undiscordant themes; Which, haply, kindred souls may prize Not less than vernal ecstasies, And passion’s feverish dreams. For deathless powers to verse belong, And they like Demi-gods are strong On whom the Muses smile; But some their function have disclaimed, Best pleased with what is aptliest framed To enervate and defile. Not such the initiatory strains Committed to the silent plains In Britain’s earliest dawn: Trembled the groves, the stars grew pale, While all-too-daringly the veil Of nature was withdrawn! Nor such the spirit-stirring note When the live chords Alcæus smote, Inflamed by sense of wrong; Woe! woe to Tyrants! from the lyre Broke threateningly, in sparkles dire Of fierce vindictive song. And not unhallowed was the page By wingèd Love inscribed, to assuage The pangs of vain pursuit; Love listening while the Lesbian Maid With finest touch of passion swayed Her own æolian lute. O ye, who patiently explore The wreck of Herculanean lore, What rapture! could ye seize Some Theban fragment, or unroll One precious, tender-hearted scroll Of pure Simonides. That were, indeed, a genuine birth Of poesy; a bursting forth Of genius from the dust: What Horace gloried to behold, What Maro loved, shall we enfold? Can haughty Time be just!
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September, 1819
Departing summer hath assumed An aspect tenderly illumed, The gentlest look of spring; That calls from yonder leafy shade Unfaded, yet prepared to fade, A timely carolling. No faint and hesitating trill, Such tribute as to winter chill The lonely redbreast pays! Clear, loud, and lively is the din, From social warblers gathering in Their harvest of sweet lays. Nor doth the example fail to cheer Me, conscious that my leaf is sere, And yellow on the bough:— Fall, rosy garlands, from my head! Ye myrtle wreaths, your fragrance shed Around a younger brow! Yet will I temperately rejoice; Wide is the range, and free the choice Of undiscordant themes; Which, haply, kindred souls may prize Not less than vernal ecstasies, And passion’s feverish dreams. For deathless powers to verse belong, And they like Demi-gods are strong On whom the Muses smile; But some their function have disclaimed, Best pleased with what is aptliest framed To enervate and defile. Not such the initiatory strains Committed to the silent plains In Britain’s earliest dawn: Trembled the groves, the stars grew pale, While all-too-daringly the veil Of nature was withdrawn! Nor such the spirit-stirring note When the live chords Alcæus smote, Inflamed by sense of wrong; Woe! woe to Tyrants! from the lyre Broke threateningly, in sparkles dire Of fierce vindictive song. And not unhallowed was the page By wingèd Love inscribed, to assuage The pangs of vain pursuit; Love listening while the Lesbian Maid With finest touch of passion swayed Her own æolian lute. O ye, who patiently explore The wreck of Herculanean lore, What rapture! could ye seize Some Theban fragment, or unroll One precious, tender-hearted scroll Of pure Simonides. That were, indeed, a genuine birth Of poesy; a bursting forth Of genius from the dust: What Horace gloried to behold, What Maro loved, shall we enfold? Can haughty Time be just!
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Second year at a new school I should be accustomed to it But the fact is, most of them are strangers. Second year should mean a second chance But her friendship ring is leaving its mark on my hand And my young years are drifting away at the sand It's high tide... To resurrect my mind into this new time But new is different and different is unknown And the unknown is scary. I don't know how to think beyond Those who are now distant characters in my storyline. I'm hesitating.. Because new is different and thus unknown.. And I'm not sure if I can trust what I don't know.
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Jul 21, 2016
Jul 21, 2016 at 11:48 PM UTC
Junior Year
her hesitating beauty over a hundred days each a silk thread each a dark pearl kissing specifics in the empty space of a matinée hologram of the new sun burning like prime meridian, the hunter's star ripples of inhibition, making waves and confessions in the deep end of a pool always submissive with a smile like holding her breath underwater
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Apr 11, 2023
Apr 11, 2023 at 12:26 PM UTC
Studies In Paralysis, Pt. 1
A cool morning After a night's Rain Sun still hesitating to wake up from the blanket of the clouds...
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Jul 13, 2015
Jul 13, 2015 at 8:31 PM UTC
The morning after the Night's Rain
Letters come & go. Messages from home: love lost. Jefferson Davis & “Honest” Abe Lincoln’s war… …nothing more than flexing strength. The sun rises up above the barren Culp’s Hill as Ewell kept them back, & Jackson’s wishes were lost on Cemetery Hill. Gettysburg was filled with mudpits, puddlepits, shitpits & every kind of pit. Not any kind that they wished to see as guns moved up. The barrage of shells from the artillery was never ending, not unlike this cursed war, all while brothers & sons were lost. The second day came with no signs of stopping, he packed his gear, grabbed his rifle, & marched out to the sound of Charon’s ferrying. The medic rushes out onto the battlefield hesitating not. His crude instruments flailing about in his pack, he works. Medicine, horror, they were synonyms to him as he braced the man; scraping against flesh, he screamed. This Civil War--hell on Earth. Sawing off a leg was much harder than once thought, the medic then knew. In the thick of battle, screams drowned out screams, & drowned out screams. Bullets whizzed by him as he cleaned up his patient. Or was it victim? These days it all seemed the same: North, South, free, slave, dead, living. What once was blue ‘n gray was now brown & black & red. Explosions tore up the land around him as he cleared his vision & finished. Out of the brush, fear overtook the medic as a man in blue clashed with a man in gray; blood ‘n sweat drenched both as life was on balance. The medic was stunned & failed to bring himself to act at first. He shook himself awake, & grabbed his knife, & leapt into the fray. His knife plunged precise into the blue man’s heart. No soldier, but knew his stuff. The gray man thanked him, & the South fought another day. All for naught, for on that third day, Lee ran with his tail betwixt his legs all the way to Virginia. Two years later, all for naught. July fourth, eighteen sixty-three, no cheers, no love, no wins for us folk. Only them **** Yanks get their love from home: letters come & go. Sherman’s March left him quaking in his boots; gone was his love. Gone was his home. Gone were his letters. All of it gone. Gone with the wind.
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Jan 14, 2014
Jan 14, 2014 at 2:10 PM UTC
Letters Come & Go (Infinite Haiku Tanka on the American Civil War)
Letters come & go. Messages from home: love lost. Jefferson Davis & “Honest” Abe Lincoln’s war… …nothing more than flexing strength. The sun rises up above the barren Culp’s Hill as Ewell kept them back, & Jackson’s wishes were lost on Cemetery Hill. Gettysburg was filled with mudpits, puddlepits, shitpits & every kind of pit. Not any kind that they wished to see as guns moved up. The barrage of shells from the artillery was never ending, not unlike this cursed war, all while brothers & sons were lost. The second day came with no signs of stopping, he packed his gear, grabbed his rifle, & marched out to the sound of Charon’s ferrying. The medic rushes out onto the battlefield hesitating not. His crude instruments flailing about in his pack, he works. Medicine, horror, they were synonyms to him as he braced the man; scraping against flesh, he screamed. This Civil War--hell on Earth. Sawing off a leg was much harder than once thought, the medic then knew. In the thick of battle, screams drowned out screams, & drowned out screams. Bullets whizzed by him as he cleaned up his patient. Or was it victim? These days it all seemed the same: North, South, free, slave, dead, living. What once was blue ‘n gray was now brown & black & red. Explosions tore up the land around him as he cleared his vision & finished. Out of the brush, fear overtook the medic as a man in blue clashed with a man in gray; blood ‘n sweat drenched both as life was on balance. The medic was stunned & failed to bring himself to act at first. He shook himself awake, & grabbed his knife, & leapt into the fray. His knife plunged precise into the blue man’s heart. No soldier, but knew his stuff. The gray man thanked him, & the South fought another day. All for naught, for on that third day, Lee ran with his tail betwixt his legs all the way to Virginia. Two years later, all for naught. July fourth, eighteen sixty-three, no cheers, no love, no wins for us folk. Only them **** Yanks get their love from home: letters come & go. Sherman’s March left him quaking in his boots; gone was his love. Gone was his home. Gone were his letters. All of it gone. Gone with the wind.
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A stubborn heart is deadly. It has the ability to short circuit the brain, exhaust all the sanity in you, crush your spirits, exhume every bit of sanity from the deepest recesses of your body. It can wipe out dreams of fairy tale endings, change your views on life and love --- turning you into this most cynical person alive. You tend to expect more...to your utmost disappointment in the end.Nevertheless, it brings about an exhilarating kind of joy that makes your being come alive. It brings that ultimate enjoyment of loving without hesitating to give your all. Bottomline, it feels good. It feels **** good.Oh if only the latter would happen more often --- forever if possible. Wishful thinking, yes. In the meantime, I'll just nurse this stubborn heart. Might be all it takes to disarm that stubborn man in his own makeshift loveless world. - Feb 25, 2010...for a dear friend
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Feb 26, 2010
Feb 26, 2010 at 5:24 PM UTC
Stubborn Heart