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Letters come & go. Messages from home: love lost. Jefferson Davis & “Honest” Abe Lincoln’s war… …nothing more than flexing strength. The sun rises up above the barren Culp’s Hill as Ewell kept them back, & Jackson’s wishes were lost on Cemetery Hill. Gettysburg was filled with mudpits, puddlepits, shitpits & every kind of pit. Not any kind that they wished to see as guns moved up. The barrage of shells from the artillery was never ending, not unlike this cursed war, all while brothers & sons were lost. The second day came with no signs of stopping, he packed his gear, grabbed his rifle, & marched out to the sound of Charon’s ferrying. The medic rushes out onto the battlefield hesitating not. His crude instruments flailing about in his pack, he works. Medicine, horror, they were synonyms to him as he braced the man; scraping against flesh, he screamed. This Civil War--hell on Earth. Sawing off a leg was much harder than once thought, the medic then knew. In the thick of battle, screams drowned out screams, & drowned out screams. Bullets whizzed by him as he cleaned up his patient. Or was it victim? These days it all seemed the same: North, South, free, slave, dead, living. What once was blue ‘n gray was now brown & black & red. Explosions tore up the land around him as he cleared his vision & finished. Out of the brush, fear overtook the medic as a man in blue clashed with a man in gray; blood ‘n sweat drenched both as life was on balance. The medic was stunned & failed to bring himself to act at first. He shook himself awake, & grabbed his knife, & leapt into the fray. His knife plunged precise into the blue man’s heart. No soldier, but knew his stuff. The gray man thanked him, & the South fought another day. All for naught, for on that third day, Lee ran with his tail betwixt his legs all the way to Virginia. Two years later, all for naught. July fourth, eighteen sixty-three, no cheers, no love, no wins for us folk. Only them **** Yanks get their love from home: letters come & go. Sherman’s March left him quaking in his boots; gone was his love. Gone was his home. Gone were his letters. All of it gone. Gone with the wind.
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Jan 14, 2014
Jan 14, 2014 at 2:10 PM UTC
Letters Come & Go (Infinite Haiku Tanka on the American Civil War)
Letters come & go. Messages from home: love lost. Jefferson Davis & “Honest” Abe Lincoln’s war… …nothing more than flexing strength. The sun rises up above the barren Culp’s Hill as Ewell kept them back, & Jackson’s wishes were lost on Cemetery Hill. Gettysburg was filled with mudpits, puddlepits, shitpits & every kind of pit. Not any kind that they wished to see as guns moved up. The barrage of shells from the artillery was never ending, not unlike this cursed war, all while brothers & sons were lost. The second day came with no signs of stopping, he packed his gear, grabbed his rifle, & marched out to the sound of Charon’s ferrying. The medic rushes out onto the battlefield hesitating not. His crude instruments flailing about in his pack, he works. Medicine, horror, they were synonyms to him as he braced the man; scraping against flesh, he screamed. This Civil War--hell on Earth. Sawing off a leg was much harder than once thought, the medic then knew. In the thick of battle, screams drowned out screams, & drowned out screams. Bullets whizzed by him as he cleaned up his patient. Or was it victim? These days it all seemed the same: North, South, free, slave, dead, living. What once was blue ‘n gray was now brown & black & red. Explosions tore up the land around him as he cleared his vision & finished. Out of the brush, fear overtook the medic as a man in blue clashed with a man in gray; blood ‘n sweat drenched both as life was on balance. The medic was stunned & failed to bring himself to act at first. He shook himself awake, & grabbed his knife, & leapt into the fray. His knife plunged precise into the blue man’s heart. No soldier, but knew his stuff. The gray man thanked him, & the South fought another day. All for naught, for on that third day, Lee ran with his tail betwixt his legs all the way to Virginia. Two years later, all for naught. July fourth, eighteen sixty-three, no cheers, no love, no wins for us folk. Only them **** Yanks get their love from home: letters come & go. Sherman’s March left him quaking in his boots; gone was his love. Gone was his home. Gone were his letters. All of it gone. Gone with the wind.
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Jan 14, 2014
Jan 14, 2014 at 2:10 PM UTC
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