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"excoriation" poems
it won't stop. nothing will slow down i ask for everything to just hang on, hold on a moment please can you wait just for a second nothing ever does so i pick pick pick pick pick pick pick pick pick pick constantly over and over and over over and over and over and over when that no longer satisfies the compulsion i bite down longer, harder until i taste blood until it's over at least, for now. the blood pools at my fingertips little red wells of humiliation the pieces of skin collect at my feet like a scattering of shame a signpost of the turmoil i cannot contain the girls around me look me up and down whisper words of contempt and disgust "freak" torn and bitten, i curl into fists the teachers stare quietly unable to pass judgement, but the pity smothers me "disturbed" the urges are quiet sated, satisfied it's done at least, for now
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May 13, 2016
May 13, 2016 at 4:39 PM UTC
Excoriation // 13.5.16
“You should write about it.” or I Learned to Smile at Mirrors: A Demonstration The city was oddly near barren. Strides hit the dimming sidewalk in two-to-one ratio. Money looming tall above our covered heads. When cornered into the shade humans are unable to cast shadows. Our path was laid clear by store closings, locked doors ushering us down toward neon outlined water to stare across gleaming black while the shadowed lions bray. Cloth turns to quarters turns to pink fortune turns to bright reflections across irises while years of the same story vibrate across our fingers. Gears paid in hope spin warm with the smiles of those  come before. Lamps once bright now flicker and crack, and the ballroom dancers don’t quite turn with the fervor of before. Sometimes what seems a flaw is what makes the object most itself; inconsistencies or strange logics from somewhere different than where you wanted. Certain hands grasped against throats are comfort blankets to soothe the burning, forcing skin and bones to remember that with selflessness and love the past will no longer obfuscate paths where feet need to fall most. No sparing rejoinders for improvements, or constant encouragement in what is already done well. Every mile and hour leading to those sea salted boards totally rearranged me. Fought 11 hours and 771 miles of asphalt to press my face in where I was worst. The greatest gift one can receive: not encouragement, but total excoriation of the places where I was once only limping. Let the train cars tilt with our backs due West, shoulders sagging with knowledge half-learned, thrice remembered. Two deer stand in the rearview as my tires turn heatward. Smiling as I realize your Country grew to reflect your worth. Not the other way around.
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Feb 18, 2016
Feb 18, 2016 at 3:05 PM UTC
You should write about it.
“You should write about it.” or I Learned to Smile at Mirrors: A Demonstration The city was oddly near barren. Strides hit the dimming sidewalk in two-to-one ratio. Money looming tall above our covered heads. When cornered into the shade humans are unable to cast shadows. Our path was laid clear by store closings, locked doors ushering us down toward neon outlined water to stare across gleaming black while the shadowed lions bray. Cloth turns to quarters turns to pink fortune turns to bright reflections across irises while years of the same story vibrate across our fingers. Gears paid in hope spin warm with the smiles of those  come before. Lamps once bright now flicker and crack, and the ballroom dancers don’t quite turn with the fervor of before. Sometimes what seems a flaw is what makes the object most itself; inconsistencies or strange logics from somewhere different than where you wanted. Certain hands grasped against throats are comfort blankets to soothe the burning, forcing skin and bones to remember that with selflessness and love the past will no longer obfuscate paths where feet need to fall most. No sparing rejoinders for improvements, or constant encouragement in what is already done well. Every mile and hour leading to those sea salted boards totally rearranged me. Fought 11 hours and 771 miles of asphalt to press my face in where I was worst. The greatest gift one can receive: not encouragement, but total excoriation of the places where I was once only limping. Let the train cars tilt with our backs due West, shoulders sagging with knowledge half-learned, thrice remembered. Two deer stand in the rearview as my tires turn heatward. Smiling as I realize your Country grew to reflect your worth. Not the other way around.
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Skin tingling. Scratch. Pick. Claw marks a bright burgundy against fair skin. It’s happening again. It’s a violent urge. An uncontrollable compulsion. It’s bleeding skin and it’s I want to stop but it’s I can’t and I won’t. My hands are the enemy but it’s hard to win a battle against something attached to your own body. Taped fingers do nothing but irritate. A temporary fix for a permanent problem. Nowhere is safe. Every piece of skin is equal opportunity. Distractions don’t exist in this world. Nothing can stop these hands and it hurts to try. A compulsion ignored is like pins and needles across your whole body. It’s sitting still shaking unable to think of anything else. And so I–pick. Scratch. Run sharp claws across soft skin.
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Oct 24, 2019
Oct 24, 2019 at 12:29 PM UTC
Excoriation
“***I read to find inspiration. I write to restore candor to the mind.***” N. Scott Momaday                         <<<<<>>>>>>>>> Find Inspiration: a phrase that diodes light, a one-way current within, making me a selectman, “of thee I sing, of thee I write, of thee am I composed and fodder for thy dissection & ”my decomposition.” a phrase that reads me more than I read it, jumps onto my ontological eyeballs, a great leap forward, and I suppose humdrum you could call it, inserted inspiration Restoring Candor: thus begins expiation+ excoriation+ exhumation; a longish road to candor restoration, where plausible deniability is denied, Jedi verbal mind tricks are just in movies, and candor is really “can-do(r)!” but no one dare say that for fear of being laughed at, a cancelled jingo-lingo-patriot.
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Oct 24, 2021
Oct 24, 2021 at 10:47 AM UTC
restoring candor, jingo linguistically
Former CIA Director John Brennan scathing headlines Washington Post op-ed sharply published critical accusations muted excoriation slams Commander in Chief volcanic blatant pathological lying spews like lava his American foreign policy boilerplate brazenly bastardizes by banditry blueprint, balefully balkanizing beautiful bracketed booming brady bunch brand, bests best-buy buffer braking balanced bastion, bolstered beloved benighted bequeathed bicameral bipartisan bliss, Baptizing bacchanalian buffoonish bombast, betokening bobble-headed Bumstead, barmy bartered bride bravado, bizarrely brash brassiness, blindsiding behavior, beetlebrowed bonehead, bafflingly baldfaced, bankrupting, blithely bollixing, bombastically belittling, badmouthing, banally blasting, banana-boat baseless, bearish blandishments, beastly boastful boosterism, bellicosely boorish, bug-eyed, bighearted, bigoted blathering breeding blunderbuss bloopers, bewildering bloodletting bellyache blight, brazenly being bandying bellwether, blitzing bourgeoisie balderdash, balking but beaming barbaric berserk ballyhoo backbiting, backslapping backstabbing blacklisting bromides, besetting basic bestowed blooming, Bobbitizing bedeviling beneficial bulwark bereft badinage, ballistically ballooning betrayal birthing bedlam.
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Jun 2, 2018
Jun 2, 2018 at 6:06 PM UTC
Mean Mien Donald Trump
After about fifty years as married wife the last three fraught with strife obvious telltale signs of terminal illness rife hysterectomy irrevocably didst jackknife at the least severely incapacitated think pitted, riddled, and rounced her tortured life. Ovarian cancer affliction on par with megadeath bald pate (color of bleached skull), and crossbones characterized mortal death oxygen tank to sustain each measured breath. Nonetheless her angry spirited accursed ferocity, ejaculatory, denunciatory burst expletive and epithet peppered preponderant rant, (no kidney you) laced and dull livered worst fulmination, exasperation, (albeit feebly faint) damnation well versed lips mouthing implacable thirst to defy grim reaper uber lyft driver analogous hearst jubilation immune to interrogation and/or humiliation diatribes interpreted glorification, remained scythe lent bore scathing rebukes hurled regarding her sole son (courtesy miraculous biological reproduction) dogged with financial perdition eased series of unfortunate events narration blessed nonagenarian widower husband generous father gave male progeny eased (his/mine) absolution availed immense monetary boost, she (envision banshee) voiced abhorrent objection regarding liberal outpouring triggered her vitriolic remenstration. Similar with pointed gesticulation, excoriation, cannibalization, abomination... against reducing his albatross yoking penurious defeat her livid hostility displayed, decried, ****** how Matthew Scott, (I shoal mussel metaphor without clamming up, how said offspring coasts) along easy street, while she sorely protested (thankfully in vain) even after succumbing to painful demise, she vehemently, obstreperously and helplessly loathes handsome handout to yours truly forsakes Pete.
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Jan 16, 2020
Jan 16, 2020 at 5:55 PM UTC
Ghost of Harriet Harris doth not countenance monetary largesse
After about fifty years as married wife the last three fraught with strife obvious telltale signs of terminal illness rife hysterectomy irrevocably didst jackknife at the least severely incapacitated think pitted, riddled, and rounced her tortured life. Ovarian cancer affliction on par with megadeath bald pate (color of bleached skull), and crossbones characterized mortal death oxygen tank to sustain each measured breath. Nonetheless her angry spirited accursed ferocity, ejaculatory, denunciatory burst expletive and epithet peppered preponderant rant, (no kidney you) laced and dull livered worst fulmination, exasperation, (albeit feebly faint) damnation well versed lips mouthing implacable thirst to defy grim reaper uber lyft driver analogous hearst jubilation immune to interrogation and/or humiliation diatribes interpreted glorification, remained scythe lent bore scathing rebukes hurled regarding her sole son (courtesy miraculous biological reproduction) dogged with financial perdition eased series of unfortunate events narration blessed nonagenarian widower husband generous father gave male progeny eased (his/mine) absolution availed immense monetary boost, she (envision banshee) voiced abhorrent objection regarding liberal outpouring triggered her vitriolic remenstration. Similar with pointed gesticulation, excoriation, cannibalization, abomination... against reducing his albatross yoking penurious defeat her livid hostility displayed, decried, ****** how Matthew Scott, (I shoal mussel metaphor without clamming up, how said offspring coasts) along easy street, while she sorely protested (thankfully in vain) even after succumbing to painful demise, she vehemently, obstreperously and helplessly loathes handsome handout to yours truly forsakes Pete.
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When I think of you, I taste my own blood
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Mar 19, 2015
Mar 19, 2015 at 8:15 AM UTC
Excoriation (10w)