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"distinctions" poems
My father always had a picture hanging up over the mantle. It was an oil, possibly acrylic, painting. I've always been terrible with art, and the definitions and distinctions therein. It had a gold-leaf frame, and I recall, as a child, staring at the shine that the sun reflected off of the beautiful gold that surrounded the picture. The picture itself, however, was far more extraneous: a deer head and the body of a businessman. The suited businessman's body sat in a chair, within the painting, but instead of a man's head poking out of the collar, there was a deer's head. It was adorned with antlers, two to be exact, and it sat above that mantle, staring emotionless into you or the distance. I was never sure which it was. And after my father passed, I inherited the deer head and the body of a businessman.
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Aug 2, 2013
Aug 2, 2013 at 12:43 AM UTC
A deer head and the body of a businessman: I
i have countless scars on my skin from a battle with depression i almost lost. twice. i have twelve scars on my leg from a car accident that saved my life. i have tracks of stretch marks on my ******* and thighs from growing up too fast i have a million freckles on my face spattered from too much time in the sun i have curves that show my womanhood gifted to me by the devil: puberty i have so many distinctions that make me who I am. These are my marks.
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Oct 10, 2011
Oct 10, 2011 at 5:47 PM UTC
My Marks
What is the point in Poignancy? *Fragment, you tell me. Another one in paragraph three.* What do words matter? I have spelled love with Lilacs instead of an “L” I have drawn the curve of my “O” with the chill of a Sweeping breeze. A “V” can only appear as the violet of a sparkling sky, or I will be unable to read it, and every “E” will amount to nothing more than emptiness if the voice it has been given does not epitomize song. *Comma-splice, Replace it with a semicolon.* I am trying live freely. I want to breathe in color, to inhale an orange Savannah sky And exhale green which shows through the translucent dew of grass. *Unnecessary use of description. Limit it, Lidiah. Limit it.* My fingers itch with the ferocity of A vengeful army. They are waiting to trample pages with The lead of my pencil, the bayonet of a Revolutionary-War-era rifle. The word limit sounds like tragedy. A single word that can somehow act as a precursor, To the death of passion. Your words have put you in a box. People always say “Actions speak louder than words.” In a way that is true. But I also know it to be a tremendous piece of fiction. *Lidiah, Please watch your run-ons.* Why can our words and our actions not be the same thing? Isn’t the act of speaking, the act of raising your voice, the act of being heard, isn’t that an action? *Lidiah, how many times do I have to remind you? Clarification throughout.* Why have we decided that our words Mean nothing more than stepping stones on the road to action? When did we decide that our voices which rise like clarion calls, forever instilling our promises, are to be left on silent? Precious jewels set into rings. Poison in a water tank. *Lidiah, what you say is irrelevant if your MLA bibliography isn’t in alphabetical order.* Our words are our actions. They mean the same. Words are the distinctions of our beliefs Illustrations of our personas They are not mosquitos to be slapped away and forgotten. *Lidiah, paragraph five is too long. Stop rambling. Be concise.* Please tell me, what is the point of being concise? *Lidiah, stop rambling.* Why do we let justification equate to useless rambling? *Lidiah, you have to detach yourself from the narrative.* Feelings mean more than a couple of sentences. More than a good or a bad. A mad or a sad. Comma-splice What about ferocity? Never end with a preposition. What about passion? Replace this with a conjunctive adverb. What about the discernable strife that follows even indifference? What about that? *Lidiah, what is the point of Poignancy?* What are we without it? What does the human soul matter if we have forsaken the parts of ourselves that remind us of what a soul is for? *Lidiah, you will never be heard if you do not learn to follow the rules*.
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Mar 4, 2018
Mar 4, 2018 at 1:04 AM UTC
The Point of Poignancy
What is the point in Poignancy? *Fragment, you tell me. Another one in paragraph three.* What do words matter? I have spelled love with Lilacs instead of an “L” I have drawn the curve of my “O” with the chill of a Sweeping breeze. A “V” can only appear as the violet of a sparkling sky, or I will be unable to read it, and every “E” will amount to nothing more than emptiness if the voice it has been given does not epitomize song. *Comma-splice, Replace it with a semicolon.* I am trying live freely. I want to breathe in color, to inhale an orange Savannah sky And exhale green which shows through the translucent dew of grass. *Unnecessary use of description. Limit it, Lidiah. Limit it.* My fingers itch with the ferocity of A vengeful army. They are waiting to trample pages with The lead of my pencil, the bayonet of a Revolutionary-War-era rifle. The word limit sounds like tragedy. A single word that can somehow act as a precursor, To the death of passion. Your words have put you in a box. People always say “Actions speak louder than words.” In a way that is true. But I also know it to be a tremendous piece of fiction. *Lidiah, Please watch your run-ons.* Why can our words and our actions not be the same thing? Isn’t the act of speaking, the act of raising your voice, the act of being heard, isn’t that an action? *Lidiah, how many times do I have to remind you? Clarification throughout.* Why have we decided that our words Mean nothing more than stepping stones on the road to action? When did we decide that our voices which rise like clarion calls, forever instilling our promises, are to be left on silent? Precious jewels set into rings. Poison in a water tank. *Lidiah, what you say is irrelevant if your MLA bibliography isn’t in alphabetical order.* Our words are our actions. They mean the same. Words are the distinctions of our beliefs Illustrations of our personas They are not mosquitos to be slapped away and forgotten. *Lidiah, paragraph five is too long. Stop rambling. Be concise.* Please tell me, what is the point of being concise? *Lidiah, stop rambling.* Why do we let justification equate to useless rambling? *Lidiah, you have to detach yourself from the narrative.* Feelings mean more than a couple of sentences. More than a good or a bad. A mad or a sad. Comma-splice What about ferocity? Never end with a preposition. What about passion? Replace this with a conjunctive adverb. What about the discernable strife that follows even indifference? What about that? *Lidiah, what is the point of Poignancy?* What are we without it? What does the human soul matter if we have forsaken the parts of ourselves that remind us of what a soul is for? *Lidiah, you will never be heard if you do not learn to follow the rules*.
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Two days old, as hours foretold, Wisdom is a gift, heartily gifted so. Life’s greatest mysteries left to unfold, Hourglass sand drowns the catacomb. Time perceived through linear scopes Shows present truths and fallacies as heard. Elope distinctions, divorce similarities, For the world is backward and time, reverse. Lessons learned, reiterate the word, Responsibility, the key to community. Prosper, live long, Disease is only deadly when extinct is the immunity. Freely versed, lyrically rehearsed, Speaking from the heart blends emotion at the worst With flint and tinder Striking up fire, but always a spark first.
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Apr 11, 2011
Apr 11, 2011 at 2:56 PM UTC
Wiseman
Whether you are going or staying or sitting or lying down, The whole world is your own self. You must find out Whether the mountains, rivers, grass, and forests Exist in your own mind or exist outside it. Analyze the ten thousand things, Dissect them minutely, And when you take this to the limit You will come to the limitless, When you search into it you come to the end of search, Where thinking goes no further and distinctions vanish. When you smash the citadel of doubt, Then the Buddha is simply yourself.
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Jan 21, 2015
Jan 21, 2015 at 11:37 PM UTC
Wise Words From Daikaku
what is this love for I have beheld it cast in metamorphosis a love that makes transformations on the mind permissible transformations improvisations of the self in ****** intensity which emphasises the drama of sometimes, dark, violent and repressive potentials vicious energies of hate and ambition that propel the enactment of intense and exhausting experience of vigorous vertiginous chaos indomitable in its desires what is this love is it a registered predicament made memorable by vivid language that would butcher in ritual gratuitous memories and testify to an urgency of unwisely relinquished emotion what is this love does it flourish in flawed and unreasonable understandings accumulated upon the mind in vicarious thrill of sympathy where traits are highly exaggerated and eagerly anticipates the oppressive weight of the past that functions upon a common collapse of distinctions or does it manufacture artificial precepts pretending in attractive collaboration to associate fiction rather than fact what is this love is it that by treaty or inheritance with loving ferocity would embalm all tears and hide all those collaborations in flared conflagrations of the heart and yes create a turmoil in the mind hotter than a thousand summers and vividly stamp upon a twisted body a moral viciousness of fathomless malice that wouldst close its ears to the admonitions of conscious and thus through an improbable incantatory verbal rite touch the hidden order of all things in disassembling nature what is this love if only it was known
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Aug 17, 2013
Aug 17, 2013 at 5:26 PM UTC
What is this love?
what is this love for I have beheld it cast in metamorphosis a love that makes transformations on the mind permissible transformations improvisations of the self in ****** intensity which emphasises the drama of sometimes, dark, violent and repressive potentials vicious energies of hate and ambition that propel the enactment of intense and exhausting experience of vigorous vertiginous chaos indomitable in its desires what is this love is it a registered predicament made memorable by vivid language that would butcher in ritual gratuitous memories and testify to an urgency of unwisely relinquished emotion what is this love does it flourish in flawed and unreasonable understandings accumulated upon the mind in vicarious thrill of sympathy where traits are highly exaggerated and eagerly anticipates the oppressive weight of the past that functions upon a common collapse of distinctions or does it manufacture artificial precepts pretending in attractive collaboration to associate fiction rather than fact what is this love is it that by treaty or inheritance with loving ferocity would embalm all tears and hide all those collaborations in flared conflagrations of the heart and yes create a turmoil in the mind hotter than a thousand summers and vividly stamp upon a twisted body a moral viciousness of fathomless malice that wouldst close its ears to the admonitions of conscious and thus through an improbable incantatory verbal rite touch the hidden order of all things in disassembling nature what is this love if only it was known
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the beauty of english nakedness, look at it for long enough and you get to retract or at least crab-walk east into the pincer plateaus of the frozen tundras and see again, proustain afresh in the cork-lined room: what bothered me was the acute stress on the faroese a - english really is a blank canvas: or a complex canvas with many unique distinctions of individual words - perhaps the dementia crisis in english-speaking societies - also why the accent diversity between all those who come to learn it, and those who live in the zeitreich of the absteigen sonne - but theories are theories. so back to the blank canvas,  which allows so see the dynamics, although as i said, the acute faroese a (acute, because derived from the latin verb of needlework / puncture) - ~etymology (approx. because not related to words but phonetic units, i.e. letters) thus reveals that the latin accents died, truth tooth of the phrase latin is a dead tongue - but not as dead as when you see remnants of the transformation, in that certain latin activities (verbs) spawned the stressing revisions on letters to appropriate the nordic and germanic slavic, *** and celt into its ***** acute to puncture - like the polish acute o (ó), meaning to puncture the o and make a U sound, although when otherwise acute is needed, but the geometry is less obvious it means not to stress, but sharpen, cut-short, exfoliate into a range of onomatopoeic comparisons: sneeze - wheezing - high pitch flute - play the clarinet - pincer the tongue - pliers - god knows what instrument i'm really playing: ć, ń, ś, ź - cut the letters from cen nan sap zed into the uniqueness of the actual first letter, go into roman do re mi fa so la ****** musicology) rather than greek omega omicron alpha beta. so this acute faroese a, what bothered me was the suffix -áp... the p you see, if the accent dynamic was to end with a german umlaut -äp or with a māori macron -āp... i would have said the p... rather than ending with a b. *"heimlich" tongue-numbing d.
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Jan 3, 2016
Jan 3, 2016 at 9:06 AM UTC
ð (soft* d) / þ - thorn og eth
the beauty of english nakedness, look at it for long enough and you get to retract or at least crab-walk east into the pincer plateaus of the frozen tundras and see again, proustain afresh in the cork-lined room: what bothered me was the acute stress on the faroese a - english really is a blank canvas: or a complex canvas with many unique distinctions of individual words - perhaps the dementia crisis in english-speaking societies - also why the accent diversity between all those who come to learn it, and those who live in the zeitreich of the absteigen sonne - but theories are theories. so back to the blank canvas,  which allows so see the dynamics, although as i said, the acute faroese a (acute, because derived from the latin verb of needlework / puncture) - ~etymology (approx. because not related to words but phonetic units, i.e. letters) thus reveals that the latin accents died, truth tooth of the phrase latin is a dead tongue - but not as dead as when you see remnants of the transformation, in that certain latin activities (verbs) spawned the stressing revisions on letters to appropriate the nordic and germanic slavic, *** and celt into its ***** acute to puncture - like the polish acute o (ó), meaning to puncture the o and make a U sound, although when otherwise acute is needed, but the geometry is less obvious it means not to stress, but sharpen, cut-short, exfoliate into a range of onomatopoeic comparisons: sneeze - wheezing - high pitch flute - play the clarinet - pincer the tongue - pliers - god knows what instrument i'm really playing: ć, ń, ś, ź - cut the letters from cen nan sap zed into the uniqueness of the actual first letter, go into roman do re mi fa so la ****** musicology) rather than greek omega omicron alpha beta. so this acute faroese a, what bothered me was the suffix -áp... the p you see, if the accent dynamic was to end with a german umlaut -äp or with a māori macron -āp... i would have said the p... rather than ending with a b. *"heimlich" tongue-numbing d.
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You are a monsoon A reversal of the seasonal winds Familiar     and unpredictable          and hot I'm not prepared for you, not ready You move too fast Slow it down Maybe I could teach you how? But I reside in a very shallow sea I’m not alone here though And then I don't feel so bad We want each other in two different ways The distinctions are clear to me Not as much to you Assumptions can’t be made this early on And we won’t exist long enough to possess any unit of measure You and I are just a fleeting moment in time A blip But within that second we were great And you showed me a glimmer of life
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Jan 3, 2013
Jan 3, 2013 at 4:37 PM UTC
Skeleton
Not "you", the ego, but your "you-ness". Not a family member, or a twig on a family tree, but the life of the tree itself, and the soil in which it grows. Not a person, but an essence - a flavor, a perfume. A seed unfolds idea into matter, and imbues it with Itself. Soul wears Body like a suit. Mind liaises. *(And these are only convenient distinctions for the sake of storytelling.)*
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Feb 14, 2015
Feb 14, 2015 at 10:24 PM UTC
What is the Soul?
at this time in the past right here it used to be real oh!...oh! for another reality to leave this false perception and go...go...go to feel the wind on another's face to see with another's eyes how the colours appear to them to hear what another hears with an innocent ear to feel the euphoria that slows the world down to have another's departure from all perceived notions of reality to a new understanding another reality where brief encounters with time start with the embarkation of a sentence that causes a curious disquiet to race through the nerves ricocheting in a vibrancy of vatic vitality, a creative tension transforming the cortex creating new unforeseen images a new reality where thoughts are visible and circulate, orbiting moons around the mind dazzling with a universal symbolism that with a kaleidoscopic vengeance of words scatters and amplifies the distinctions of the senses, into a new reality one of convulsive voices oh! this new reality it causes me to walk to a stranger who is myself and forms a true disintegration of a controlled focus on a beautiful disorder of chaotic discourse of a volatilized impulse of the emotions, where blood stains smile lavishly with a different vocabulary destroying a predictable reality and forges a new one that entertains discovery of other dimensions.. which are the figments of another's imagination it is solitary encapsulation of ideas that glitter on my tongue where conflagrations of burning water swirl dramatically in difficult articulation of the smells and rancid ***** stains of the ordinary that tries but is precluded from the stream of consciousness rushing in a discord of sympathies through the inner geography of my mind and forges a symbolic relationship with these inplosively brief encounters with time causing psychic post apocalyptic predispositions to a false mimesis
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Jan 23, 2014
Jan 23, 2014 at 9:46 PM UTC
A new reality in my mind...
at this time in the past right here it used to be real oh!...oh! for another reality to leave this false perception and go...go...go to feel the wind on another's face to see with another's eyes how the colours appear to them to hear what another hears with an innocent ear to feel the euphoria that slows the world down to have another's departure from all perceived notions of reality to a new understanding another reality where brief encounters with time start with the embarkation of a sentence that causes a curious disquiet to race through the nerves ricocheting in a vibrancy of vatic vitality, a creative tension transforming the cortex creating new unforeseen images a new reality where thoughts are visible and circulate, orbiting moons around the mind dazzling with a universal symbolism that with a kaleidoscopic vengeance of words scatters and amplifies the distinctions of the senses, into a new reality one of convulsive voices oh! this new reality it causes me to walk to a stranger who is myself and forms a true disintegration of a controlled focus on a beautiful disorder of chaotic discourse of a volatilized impulse of the emotions, where blood stains smile lavishly with a different vocabulary destroying a predictable reality and forges a new one that entertains discovery of other dimensions.. which are the figments of another's imagination it is solitary encapsulation of ideas that glitter on my tongue where conflagrations of burning water swirl dramatically in difficult articulation of the smells and rancid ***** stains of the ordinary that tries but is precluded from the stream of consciousness rushing in a discord of sympathies through the inner geography of my mind and forges a symbolic relationship with these inplosively brief encounters with time causing psychic post apocalyptic predispositions to a false mimesis
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Liberté Egalité Fraternité, le vrai Triptyque Républicain En hommage à nos ancêtres qui surent être ambitieux et fonder un triptyque toujours primordial, jamais accompli ni vraiment réalisé. LIBERTE ! Frêle comme doigts d’enfants, Plus précieuse qu’un diamant, Ton seul parfum nous enivre Et comme, un bon vin, nous grise. Tu es hymne à la vie Qui fait lever des envies. Tu suscite des passions, Libère des émotions. Tu fus conquise de haute lutte Par nos ancêtres en tumulte. Ils nous donnèrent pour mission D’en multiplier les brandons. A trop de Peuples, elle fait défaut. Elle ne supporte aucun bâillon Car si l’être vit bien de pain, Il veut aussi choisir son chemin. Si tous les pouvoirs la craignent, Ma, si belle, tu charmes et envoute, Mets les tyrans en déroute, Sœur de Marianne la belle. *** EGALITE ! Elle fut la devise d’Athènes, Et révérée par les Romains. Elle naquit en 89, avec la liberté du Peuple, Est fille de Révolution. Elle abolit les distinctions Séparant les êtres sans raison. Ouvre la voie à tous talents Sans s’encombrer de parchemins. C’est un alcool enivrant Que l’égalité des droits. C’est aussi une promesse De secourir celui qui choit. Si l’égalité fait tant peur, C’est que son regard de lynx Perce les supercheries Et voit les hommes tels qu’ils sont. FRATERNITE ! Elle coule, coule comme le miel, Nectar de la ruche humaine. Elle sait embellir nos vies, Et faire reculer la grisaille, Du calcul, froid et égoïste. Dans la devise Républicaine Elle tient la baguette de l’orchestre. Comme un peintre inspiré, elle met, Sur la toile, vive et vermillon. Elle nous incite à l’humanisme. Elle est petite fille de 89, fille de quarante –huit Mais sut renaître en 68. Elle est crainte par les puissants, Qui n’ont jamais connu qu’argent, C’est pourtant une essence rare. Dans les temps durs, elle se cache, Mais vient ouvrir la porte Au Résistant pourchassé. Elle n’hésite pas aujourd’hui À secourir un «sans papier» Sa sœur est générosité. Elle est la valeur suprême, Qui rend possible le «vivre ensemble» Et permet même au solitaire De faire battre un cœur solidaire. La fraternité reste la vraie conquête de l’humain. Paul d’Aubin (Paul Arrighi) à Toulouse; France.
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May 6, 2014
May 6, 2014 at 8:07 AM UTC
Liberté Egalité Fraternité, le vrai Triptyque Républicain
Liberté Egalité Fraternité, le vrai Triptyque Républicain En hommage à nos ancêtres qui surent être ambitieux et fonder un triptyque toujours primordial, jamais accompli ni vraiment réalisé. LIBERTE ! Frêle comme doigts d’enfants, Plus précieuse qu’un diamant, Ton seul parfum nous enivre Et comme, un bon vin, nous grise. Tu es hymne à la vie Qui fait lever des envies. Tu suscite des passions, Libère des émotions. Tu fus conquise de haute lutte Par nos ancêtres en tumulte. Ils nous donnèrent pour mission D’en multiplier les brandons. A trop de Peuples, elle fait défaut. Elle ne supporte aucun bâillon Car si l’être vit bien de pain, Il veut aussi choisir son chemin. Si tous les pouvoirs la craignent, Ma, si belle, tu charmes et envoute, Mets les tyrans en déroute, Sœur de Marianne la belle. *** EGALITE ! Elle fut la devise d’Athènes, Et révérée par les Romains. Elle naquit en 89, avec la liberté du Peuple, Est fille de Révolution. Elle abolit les distinctions Séparant les êtres sans raison. Ouvre la voie à tous talents Sans s’encombrer de parchemins. C’est un alcool enivrant Que l’égalité des droits. C’est aussi une promesse De secourir celui qui choit. Si l’égalité fait tant peur, C’est que son regard de lynx Perce les supercheries Et voit les hommes tels qu’ils sont. FRATERNITE ! Elle coule, coule comme le miel, Nectar de la ruche humaine. Elle sait embellir nos vies, Et faire reculer la grisaille, Du calcul, froid et égoïste. Dans la devise Républicaine Elle tient la baguette de l’orchestre. Comme un peintre inspiré, elle met, Sur la toile, vive et vermillon. Elle nous incite à l’humanisme. Elle est petite fille de 89, fille de quarante –huit Mais sut renaître en 68. Elle est crainte par les puissants, Qui n’ont jamais connu qu’argent, C’est pourtant une essence rare. Dans les temps durs, elle se cache, Mais vient ouvrir la porte Au Résistant pourchassé. Elle n’hésite pas aujourd’hui À secourir un «sans papier» Sa sœur est générosité. Elle est la valeur suprême, Qui rend possible le «vivre ensemble» Et permet même au solitaire De faire battre un cœur solidaire. La fraternité reste la vraie conquête de l’humain. Paul d’Aubin (Paul Arrighi) à Toulouse; France.
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On The Sixth Moon's Night I came to contemplate the cosmos. I awoke on a mountainous range: Projected were ten thousand isles, scattered in remain. All dancing differently, But constructing one eternal game. To what extent might my eye expand? To what end will death cast its sand? Upon what shore may the waves crash again In peace and calm harmony? No matter how many curtains the Devas will draw Or how many distinctions Māyā will make~ Always, the un-curved perfection subdues and surrenders to them all. Like the water-way, cultivating life and harvesting it on the other side. Formless, it surpasses all stiff form and creates a path of least resistance To the goal of the heart. --- You cannot carve a stone buddha out of human flesh. A stone buddha cannot experience samadhi nor still a pond. Mind is a mirror that must be seen clearer! But behind the glass and that transient social class, What is that divine perception? "The Ultimate Peerer"
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Aug 27, 2015
Aug 27, 2015 at 1:02 PM UTC
A Bird's Distant Call
I reassemble, The wind flows backwards to your hands, I am returning from whatever version of “beyond” you choose to believe, Each particle caring a manifest blessing back with it. Perhaps tears flow up your face, retracing the progression of grief down your cheek. Or maybe I was an awful at the end and in rewind you whisper “dead is ***** old that god thank.” But either way that is the past… or the future, It isn’t prudent to examine such distinctions now It’s movement not direction that matters. My form is re-forged by fire, My bones smoothing in the heat My flesh hardens from liquid to coalesce around my uncooking muscles, And still I rewind, Personality and character drifting through the cobweb wrinkles of my skin, Till somewhere in the dynamo of my body my heart finally beats its last *** ba”… and then it’s second to last. How strange is a life lived backwards? Would words taste different in my mouth, have new meaning in rewind, Would I find satanic messages in my everyday phrases or just speak in nonsense, a string of “a-blah-blah” that takes too long to be made sense of. How different would my actions be? My hands could peel away bruises, unbreak eggs, and **** insults out of the air Yet who would be responsible for these miracles, Some dreadful foreword version of myself.
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Mar 16, 2013
Mar 16, 2013 at 10:30 PM UTC
Backwards
Never ordinary Never easy Nothing parts the sea Nothing moves the earth This is a hard world And there is no give at all Don't press your face to the ground It does not help Don't shout at the sky It does not hear Nothing helps And no-one hears This is desolation In the wavering distance Less than light Reality  drifts eerily by There is no need to go No reason to stay Grey coiling wraiths Rise and slowly sway They could be anything Anyone Distinctions have no place Nowhere to hide Here is where souls shudder And shatter                                     By Phil Roberts
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Apr 6, 2017
Apr 6, 2017 at 4:24 AM UTC
NADIR
Leong's watching TikTok on her laptop (as always) and she asks Lisa (a NYC girl) “Are you familiar with the the “downtown girl” aesthetic?” Lisa’s dismissive, “Yeah, it just looks like Urban Outfitters grunge to me.” Leong explains, “It includes headphones and it’s supposed to be a Lower Manhattan style.” “Yeah,” Lisa snorts, “Because Greenwich Village and the Lower East Side are SO cohesive.” Lisa considers herself an Uptown girl (like the song) even though 59th Street, where she lives, is the border between Uptown and Midtown Manhattan. I’m learning that these distinctions are culturally key to New Yorkers. “And,” Lisa adds, “why would someone wear, and lug around, giant, clunky headphones when you can use AirPods??” “Amen sister.” I proclaim and even Leong nods in agreement. “Later, Sunny, Leong and I are on a study break, eating salads and talking about who we hope Yale invites to the next “Spring Fling” concert. We aren’t being realistic; we’re covering who we wish would come. I’d named Charlie Puth, “Kat-Tun!” Leong squealed (A Japanese boy band - apparently Chinese girls LOVE their boybands) and Sunny countered with Ed Sheeran. “I don’t like Ed Sheeran,” I mumbled, making a yuck-face. “Why no Ed?” Sunny gasps with shock (She’s a big Ed fangirl). “I don’t know,” I shrugged, “he’s a star by all measurable metrics,” I admit, “but,” I fade out. “You want my theory on Ed hate?” Sunny offered, “He’s beyond talented vocally - whoever your favorite artist is, Ed’s probably not that far behind. He’s a stellar song writer and he’s making hit after hit; do you want my theory?” “Too basic, too popular?” I guess. “No, he’s not appealing to the gaze,” Sunny states. “The gays?” Leong questions, stepping back into the conversation. “No,” Sunny corrects, “the gaze - G-A-Z-E, he doesn’t try to look pretty all the time.” “Ha!” I snort, “Gaze, I thought you meant gays too,” as Leong and I chuckle together. “No,” Sunny laughs, “nothing like THAT. Ed’s just not trying to be a heartthrob, he knows that’s not his core strong point - and that’s why he’s discounted.” “Like lesbians don’t comb their hair or wear makeup and wear pajamas to class” Leong observes, “they don’t want to attract the male gaze?” “No, we’re not imbued by the male gaze.” Sunny states, “Ed just wants to lowkey.”
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Dec 14, 2022
Dec 14, 2022 at 10:51 AM UTC
gazes
Leong's watching TikTok on her laptop (as always) and she asks Lisa (a NYC girl) “Are you familiar with the the “downtown girl” aesthetic?” Lisa’s dismissive, “Yeah, it just looks like Urban Outfitters grunge to me.” Leong explains, “It includes headphones and it’s supposed to be a Lower Manhattan style.” “Yeah,” Lisa snorts, “Because Greenwich Village and the Lower East Side are SO cohesive.” Lisa considers herself an Uptown girl (like the song) even though 59th Street, where she lives, is the border between Uptown and Midtown Manhattan. I’m learning that these distinctions are culturally key to New Yorkers. “And,” Lisa adds, “why would someone wear, and lug around, giant, clunky headphones when you can use AirPods??” “Amen sister.” I proclaim and even Leong nods in agreement. “Later, Sunny, Leong and I are on a study break, eating salads and talking about who we hope Yale invites to the next “Spring Fling” concert. We aren’t being realistic; we’re covering who we wish would come. I’d named Charlie Puth, “Kat-Tun!” Leong squealed (A Japanese boy band - apparently Chinese girls LOVE their boybands) and Sunny countered with Ed Sheeran. “I don’t like Ed Sheeran,” I mumbled, making a yuck-face. “Why no Ed?” Sunny gasps with shock (She’s a big Ed fangirl). “I don’t know,” I shrugged, “he’s a star by all measurable metrics,” I admit, “but,” I fade out. “You want my theory on Ed hate?” Sunny offered, “He’s beyond talented vocally - whoever your favorite artist is, Ed’s probably not that far behind. He’s a stellar song writer and he’s making hit after hit; do you want my theory?” “Too basic, too popular?” I guess. “No, he’s not appealing to the gaze,” Sunny states. “The gays?” Leong questions, stepping back into the conversation. “No,” Sunny corrects, “the gaze - G-A-Z-E, he doesn’t try to look pretty all the time.” “Ha!” I snort, “Gaze, I thought you meant gays too,” as Leong and I chuckle together. “No,” Sunny laughs, “nothing like THAT. Ed’s just not trying to be a heartthrob, he knows that’s not his core strong point - and that’s why he’s discounted.” “Like lesbians don’t comb their hair or wear makeup and wear pajamas to class” Leong observes, “they don’t want to attract the male gaze?” “No, we’re not imbued by the male gaze.” Sunny states, “Ed just wants to lowkey.”
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i have given hearing to deaf ferocious monsters with well meaning incompetence i have disturbed the reality and illusion of human identity where i am enmeshed in insoluble confusions of difficulties where i find strange images touching on the grotesque and ask what is myself what are the guarantees of my identity by what right is a name possessed by what means is my individuality secured these questions in my mind have a curiously derivative quality that pretend to govern themselves where they collaborate in their own oppression and make assumptions upon ethical behaviour and social institutions which represent fictions rather than fact function in a world of collapsing distinctions of artificial precepts where these now hearing monsters with vicious energies of hate and ambition that propel the enactment of intense exhausting experience of a mind spiraling vertiginously toward an inner chaos that proclaims I am myself alone without moral constraints yet register vast predicaments with the memorability of vivid language but with an individual rapaciousness that creates an amalgam of narratives with the oppressive weight of the past designed to induce this evaluative vertigo with such ferocity to produce a turmoil of demons monsters of evil, whose viciousness is vividly stamped upon their bodies that declares their fathomless malice sending my mind into a cruelly disassembling nature where i have given hearing to deaf ferocious monsters
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Jul 13, 2014
Jul 13, 2014 at 9:43 AM UTC
deaf ferocious monsters
To describe the magnitude of this awe uncomfortable with what i saw the density of time inside my chest compressed and heavy looking for rest.... I don't like the winter, because there are no flowers. I became far too accustomed to the strange equations of words and images that form within the ways i think and breath and am because in doing so i forget about the ways you think and breath and are. im sorry. the mood is not one for generalization i stress not to classify, or make distinctions and as such my thoughts drip and fluctuate ripe with frustration they are ready to fall golden and fat from the tree Leigh is a brief glimpse into the fantastic she lives among clouds and unicorns. Can't we all do good from thinking deeply for a little while?
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Feb 7, 2010
Feb 7, 2010 at 11:13 AM UTC
when i needed words
A maul is not an axe; an axe is not a maul. One is for splitting, the other for felling. Of course to trees such distinctions are immaterial. Walnut rounds scattered on grass stare into juniper scratching the sky— tall pallbearers shiver in wind, whisper above dead medallions, unblinking eyes. The handle I hold like a divining rod; metal blade forged by inchoate words, honed on grinding letters of precision.
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Nov 2, 2016
Nov 2, 2016 at 3:05 PM UTC
Distinctions
I think I'm full of contra-dictions And contra-distinctions You disagree But you're a Sandinista! We're bound to clash
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Jul 25, 2021
Jul 25, 2021 at 12:54 PM UTC
Contra
I don’t encourage the courage it takes to blow up a building Or respect those who expect blind obedience The factories that distill human suffering for profit The gasses and poisons that are toxic The philosophies and doctrines that make humans compliant To higher authorities without reason and logic People becoming socially caustic When compassion is traded for competition And the fit don’t survive cause the trick is This sickness is a symptom of human corruption Greed infecting and spreading hatred and resentment Neighbors aren't neighbors but gladiators in the pursuit of success Better cars, better houses, better jobs, better spouses Denied contentment’s peaceful breath Tricked into thinking we get more than this width and breadth So it’s okay to play at barbarity to dress up the bombs with flags and prosperity And our masters have the right to decide who we should and should not fight After all even though we were deluded we colluded with our own oppressors While they trade secrets with our supposed enemies Sell weapons to allies turn allies to adversaries And even though we think we chose this We the people did not accept this sort of justices We did not vote on this democracy, we the ill-informed masses Illiterate in the true art of classes and rich distinctions Of those who seek their own advancement not our improvement Corporate sociopath with little empathy for the welfare of others Smother our sister and brothers under the cover of complacency And what really bothers me is that I am just as much to blame I coat our pain in pretty words thinking pettily that I am helping But in the end I am only helping myself feel better for doing **** near nothing
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Nov 19, 2014
Nov 19, 2014 at 1:39 PM UTC
The Enslaved
I don’t encourage the courage it takes to blow up a building Or respect those who expect blind obedience The factories that distill human suffering for profit The gasses and poisons that are toxic The philosophies and doctrines that make humans compliant To higher authorities without reason and logic People becoming socially caustic When compassion is traded for competition And the fit don’t survive cause the trick is This sickness is a symptom of human corruption Greed infecting and spreading hatred and resentment Neighbors aren't neighbors but gladiators in the pursuit of success Better cars, better houses, better jobs, better spouses Denied contentment’s peaceful breath Tricked into thinking we get more than this width and breadth So it’s okay to play at barbarity to dress up the bombs with flags and prosperity And our masters have the right to decide who we should and should not fight After all even though we were deluded we colluded with our own oppressors While they trade secrets with our supposed enemies Sell weapons to allies turn allies to adversaries And even though we think we chose this We the people did not accept this sort of justices We did not vote on this democracy, we the ill-informed masses Illiterate in the true art of classes and rich distinctions Of those who seek their own advancement not our improvement Corporate sociopath with little empathy for the welfare of others Smother our sister and brothers under the cover of complacency And what really bothers me is that I am just as much to blame I coat our pain in pretty words thinking pettily that I am helping But in the end I am only helping myself feel better for doing **** near nothing
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Sometimes my heart feels the kiss of ecstasy. Sometimes my toes brush the abyss of madness. Sometimes I can't tell the difference. Mostly, I don't think there is one. - mce
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Dec 11, 2015
Dec 11, 2015 at 4:35 PM UTC
The Futility Of Distinctions
Through the mist, guiding the passions, fading and breathing in, staining the walls with the smell, the dank fragrance, memories stick like fly paper, album covers, or ways of speaking, scents can be everything, shaping the way we remember, wafting in and chugging towards the center of something, perhaps for attention, for roominess, for attraction, on one hand the raunchy and the rancid, or on the other hand, romantic, only a very fine line between rustic and grutesque, create all these memories, a hybrid of sensualities work to create the memory, like a necklace worn all night, then left at the bedside, the lover inhales and again he is in heaven

onward onward, the sensualities creating our memories, good or bad, but what about the expressionless? who have high ceilings, who don’t create memory? who do not have sense? these have masks, masks meant for neautrality, masks made for actors moving through space, neutrality has its own unique sensitivity, diluted in sink water, smells like minerals, which makes us think of water, neutrality, the cleansing

onward onward, potent as **** in parks, sometimes you can’t distinguish between the potent plant and skat, and sometimes that can be difficult, dare to know the different strands, dare to be a master of wine, dabbling in notes that are sung with different feasts, wine, and bread, and cheese

taste, driving us onward onward onward, relativity, driven to the ends of the earth by distinctions, with fine lines, onward onward, sifting through the mist, attempting to get a waft of the best of it
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Feb 26, 2015
Feb 26, 2015 at 8:08 PM UTC
Onward, Onward (revisited)
Through the mist, guiding the passions, fading and breathing in, staining the walls with the smell, the dank fragrance, memories stick like fly paper, album covers, or ways of speaking, scents can be everything, shaping the way we remember, wafting in and chugging towards the center of something, perhaps for attention, for roominess, for attraction, on one hand the raunchy and the rancid, or on the other hand, romantic, only a very fine line between rustic and grutesque, create all these memories, a hybrid of sensualities work to create the memory, like a necklace worn all night, then left at the bedside, the lover inhales and again he is in heaven

onward onward, the sensualities creating our memories, good or bad, but what about the expressionless? who have high ceilings, who don’t create memory? who do not have sense? these have masks, masks meant for neautrality, masks made for actors moving through space, neutrality has its own unique sensitivity, diluted in sink water, smells like minerals, which makes us think of water, neutrality, the cleansing

onward onward, potent as **** in parks, sometimes you can’t distinguish between the potent plant and skat, and sometimes that can be difficult, dare to know the different strands, dare to be a master of wine, dabbling in notes that are sung with different feasts, wine, and bread, and cheese

taste, driving us onward onward onward, relativity, driven to the ends of the earth by distinctions, with fine lines, onward onward, sifting through the mist, attempting to get a waft of the best of it
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I lived poor and died poor. no obituary written nowhere a black flag fluttered no one grieved no bells tolled no prayers recited, to still my departed soul! My body was wheeled in a hearse with a few following with hesitant steps more as a custom than a gesture true the open gates of the walled cemetery allowed a glimpse of the newly dug grave in a remote corner it stood close to an overgrown hedge among many a mound that bore no name on it Oh, the indigent and the lonely are destined to huddle together in death under the sod with their identities merged into a single clan! My body when swiftly lowered to the pit and as everyone left to join the rage of life, I pondered, how on this Earth the distinctions of rank extend down unto dust and follow one like a faithful mongrel
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Apr 25, 2016
Apr 25, 2016 at 11:57 PM UTC
When I Died
In the bejeweled chronometer dial of the lighted night sky's grandeur, light years unfathomable, embedded vie with one another, every single minute in a scramble to all 360 degrees creating a  perfect hallucination! Time impishly breaks all concepts, of linearity, circularity and the rest, takes to directions, that pleases in the process makes one wonder what the distinctions we make as  past present and future mean! "Let's mix past with future, put past in present and create an ethereal symphony of time,so that nothing gets lost, gained either"
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Oct 30, 2017
Oct 30, 2017 at 11:05 PM UTC
In the night sky's chronometer
The difference between a cosmopolitan, Of which I am, And a "globalist," Of which I am not, Is in one's compassion & patience - In one's respect & understanding. A cosmo is a citizen of the world, A denizen of the planet. This is not, As some may mistakenly think, Some sovereign citizen nonsense. This is respect for the law - universal, Those enshrined & even those not. This is recognition of another's country & governance - Of their sovereignty & rights, in like identity. A "globalist" believes, wrongly, that there should be Only one "kind" of a world. A planet under one "supreme doctrine, Usually "manifesting" in supremacy & inferiority And the "erasure" of distinction. That one's "life" is superior Because of another's "inferior" "lifestyle." In "globalism," there is no compassion And neither is there patience. There is no respect for distinctions in/of life And no understanding for different lifestyles. Observe, and share your perspective - But be respectful. Judge, and share your verdict - But be understanding. In both the formations of them And in their subsequent deliveries. Otherwise, expect not to be seen or heard from.
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Jul 30, 2025
Jul 30, 2025 at 12:57 PM UTC
Moles, In Near Blindless, Make Hills