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"countered" poems
My Heart and Mind had a discussion one day, About a man that they both knew quite well. The heated discussion continued for hours, Both with arguments meant to compel. A debate ensued between the two, With each taking a different perspective. The Heart believed the man to be true, And the Mind thought he was deceptive. Heart started the discussion with an obvious point, "He is sweet and gentle like no man before." Mind responded smugly, "That's great in the moment but how does he act after she's walked out the door?" Heart countered, already knowing the point being made. "Sure, he may not be able to write or call; He is busy with constant demands of his time. What he feels in his heart matters most of all." "I disagree," and Mind continued to say, "Actions mean far more than words alone. It is when words and actions are considered together that a man's true feelings are shown." "He has to compartmentalize to get through the day." Heart continued to defend his intentions, When they are together his feelings are real, but her insecurities span many dimensions." "It's funny you would mention compartmentalizing. Apparently your memory isn't as sharp as mine, He was once quoted as saying this was not his strength, proof that his statements don't always align." "You are cynical, suspicious and guarded." Heart was clearly tired of this dispute, "Those traits are clouding your judgement. He is genuine and telling the truth." "I think you are overlooking the obvious but I'll relax and stop doubting his intentions if he makes an effort to send a simple sign." Heart and Mind both wanting to prove their point and have the bragging rights of superiority. Mind sure that the man would disappoint her; Heart confident in his genuine sincerity. Both waited patiently for some type of gesture, Something to demonstrate that he really does care. Heart began to worry and whispered to herself, "Stay calm and trust that it's not just another affair." Patience prevailed and an email arrived, just as Heart had hoped and prayed. Mind, although disappointed by being proved wrong, was relieved and no longer afraid. Trust and calm filled her spirit when thinking of him, but it was both that won in the end. Maybe they were more than temporary lovers and could also be permanent friends.
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Dec 30, 2012
Dec 30, 2012 at 10:45 AM UTC
Heart vs. Mind
My Heart and Mind had a discussion one day, About a man that they both knew quite well. The heated discussion continued for hours, Both with arguments meant to compel. A debate ensued between the two, With each taking a different perspective. The Heart believed the man to be true, And the Mind thought he was deceptive. Heart started the discussion with an obvious point, "He is sweet and gentle like no man before." Mind responded smugly, "That's great in the moment but how does he act after she's walked out the door?" Heart countered, already knowing the point being made. "Sure, he may not be able to write or call; He is busy with constant demands of his time. What he feels in his heart matters most of all." "I disagree," and Mind continued to say, "Actions mean far more than words alone. It is when words and actions are considered together that a man's true feelings are shown." "He has to compartmentalize to get through the day." Heart continued to defend his intentions, When they are together his feelings are real, but her insecurities span many dimensions." "It's funny you would mention compartmentalizing. Apparently your memory isn't as sharp as mine, He was once quoted as saying this was not his strength, proof that his statements don't always align." "You are cynical, suspicious and guarded." Heart was clearly tired of this dispute, "Those traits are clouding your judgement. He is genuine and telling the truth." "I think you are overlooking the obvious but I'll relax and stop doubting his intentions if he makes an effort to send a simple sign." Heart and Mind both wanting to prove their point and have the bragging rights of superiority. Mind sure that the man would disappoint her; Heart confident in his genuine sincerity. Both waited patiently for some type of gesture, Something to demonstrate that he really does care. Heart began to worry and whispered to herself, "Stay calm and trust that it's not just another affair." Patience prevailed and an email arrived, just as Heart had hoped and prayed. Mind, although disappointed by being proved wrong, was relieved and no longer afraid. Trust and calm filled her spirit when thinking of him, but it was both that won in the end. Maybe they were more than temporary lovers and could also be permanent friends.
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Grieving the death of yesterday, and the fearful beginning of a new today, Sits the mourning dove, perched upon its pine tree palace. The call of the sorrowful dove; a soft, songful lament against the dawn's awakening. Beneath the blue jay's ballad, countered by the crow's cackle. The mourning of the fallen, unknown to the world. The mourning of the lost and forgotten. Not singing, not chirping; Just grieving.
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May 19, 2015
May 19, 2015 at 10:02 PM UTC
Mourning Dove
Poetry is a mask in reverse created from just a mere spark bringing to light who we really are out of the depths of the dark        Despite ourselves       we try to hide in the realms of our daily lives and then poetry's visceral therapy weaves magic spells from our fingers      right out                  of our minds Suddenly, there is no choice but to allow those masks to be dropped like a sudden change of fancy at a medieval ball: Naked eyes for coverings are swapped Yes…the command is given ornate masks slip with a splat upon the floor Suddenly, all dancers look upon each other's faces discovering treasures they knew not before Pregnant silence reigns and only then does the true dance begin in bransles' or corantos' countered moves, a new quiet drowns out the din Let it commence! in festive air, all attempts to hide are in vain Subtextual glances and heady music create sensual tension profane       The wine is flowing smiles glowing and soon release will bear fruit as the dance is danced without inhibition and all pretenses start to uproot And so it is in poetry… All those masks are thrown down the words just                         trip                               from beyond our lips making magic from adjectives and nouns Now, our words drip upon the paper revealing the secrets divine our souls are coaxed out from the layers melting your sparkling poets' hearts into mine
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Apr 1, 2016
Apr 1, 2016 at 4:52 PM UTC
The Opposite of Masks
Poetry is a mask in reverse created from just a mere spark bringing to light who we really are out of the depths of the dark        Despite ourselves       we try to hide in the realms of our daily lives and then poetry's visceral therapy weaves magic spells from our fingers      right out                  of our minds Suddenly, there is no choice but to allow those masks to be dropped like a sudden change of fancy at a medieval ball: Naked eyes for coverings are swapped Yes…the command is given ornate masks slip with a splat upon the floor Suddenly, all dancers look upon each other's faces discovering treasures they knew not before Pregnant silence reigns and only then does the true dance begin in bransles' or corantos' countered moves, a new quiet drowns out the din Let it commence! in festive air, all attempts to hide are in vain Subtextual glances and heady music create sensual tension profane       The wine is flowing smiles glowing and soon release will bear fruit as the dance is danced without inhibition and all pretenses start to uproot And so it is in poetry… All those masks are thrown down the words just                         trip                               from beyond our lips making magic from adjectives and nouns Now, our words drip upon the paper revealing the secrets divine our souls are coaxed out from the layers melting your sparkling poets' hearts into mine
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You swell some strain on me, You, middle kingdom! Eradicating small detachments, Of both sailors and marines. They were ranked on islets and reefs, With an integer of nine – There in the island next to me, I’m sure, you know who Spratly is. Always wanting such detachment To be eradicated by your own; Now stationed On a World War II era landing ship. Your toy-ships came near me, With 9-kilometer of the LST. “It’s there illegally,” How adamant that be! I’ve tipped you off already, Surely will I stand firm! Then, you’ve countered me on! – Opting for the ******** of more skyscrapers; Those that are on stilts; Now nearby two Reefs & a Bank? – Nearby my darling Palawan Island! “There is no room at all,” For the negotiation on some point, You’ve declared. Oh, here’s my friend, U.S. Left us with course of action to try; Everyone calm down, Be less provocative. For often, he flies over; Probing some stuffs. You are the biggest offender, my friend; In this dispute, you show no sign of slowing; Or backing, down. But hey, I won’t give up! (9/9/13)
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May 27, 2014
May 27, 2014 at 10:03 PM UTC
Islet of Dispute
I am shylock, In the attic barely used, Barren exuberant floorboards creak in exhalation, Of your footsteps. There you find me, In the dust; A wooden trunk with brass fixings, Didn't I tell you I held a million treasures? You breathe in the sunlight,   From the round attic window, Preening itself in your vision basked in gold. I am shylock, You moved a gilded hand, Guided by a unknown force of union with the lock, The air is silent around you, The room is intrepid in its wanton stranger, Who dares to enter this chamber of dust. I am shylock, You take my fingertips from the cup of a hand I had placed gently on your cheek, The night before I had told you, Of this room, You gently take my fingers and place it on the lock. I am shylock, There is a gentle click, That soon awashes the abated room, That sways into a tsunami of grandeur, Of history, emotion, silence and tears, And it consumes the dust, The acrid air and essence of my fears settle on your eyes and the homely mouth. I am shylock, You know how I came about, Now, You know how this room became accustomed to the dust, And the floorboards, the dust, And the window, the dark, You are breathing me, The trunk is open and waiting, And at the bottom, A ragdoll awaits your palm, Your strength, your gentleness and patience, This is my shy, This is my lock, And you entered the room and consumed me. Burst through the door, cut down the labyrinth, and found me. Picking me up, You, Became me, attended me, held me, with grace sensitive to my touch,   with the intention of a protector to my defence, And the brazen warrior to my battle. Now I am entered and countered. Protected and put together, Unbound and in your arms; Now I am open and free. My ragdoll, your love, and me. Together, unlocked, together I and you become, we.
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Sep 11, 2013
Sep 11, 2013 at 6:51 PM UTC
The ragdoll in the attic
I am shylock, In the attic barely used, Barren exuberant floorboards creak in exhalation, Of your footsteps. There you find me, In the dust; A wooden trunk with brass fixings, Didn't I tell you I held a million treasures? You breathe in the sunlight,   From the round attic window, Preening itself in your vision basked in gold. I am shylock, You moved a gilded hand, Guided by a unknown force of union with the lock, The air is silent around you, The room is intrepid in its wanton stranger, Who dares to enter this chamber of dust. I am shylock, You take my fingertips from the cup of a hand I had placed gently on your cheek, The night before I had told you, Of this room, You gently take my fingers and place it on the lock. I am shylock, There is a gentle click, That soon awashes the abated room, That sways into a tsunami of grandeur, Of history, emotion, silence and tears, And it consumes the dust, The acrid air and essence of my fears settle on your eyes and the homely mouth. I am shylock, You know how I came about, Now, You know how this room became accustomed to the dust, And the floorboards, the dust, And the window, the dark, You are breathing me, The trunk is open and waiting, And at the bottom, A ragdoll awaits your palm, Your strength, your gentleness and patience, This is my shy, This is my lock, And you entered the room and consumed me. Burst through the door, cut down the labyrinth, and found me. Picking me up, You, Became me, attended me, held me, with grace sensitive to my touch,   with the intention of a protector to my defence, And the brazen warrior to my battle. Now I am entered and countered. Protected and put together, Unbound and in your arms; Now I am open and free. My ragdoll, your love, and me. Together, unlocked, together I and you become, we.
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i wander around your territory, keeping my imprints on your skin. a sigh of relief and a moan of satisfaction take you where nowhere you've been. flicker of my tongue, the tremble in your voice move closer, closer as skin. the smell of your innocence lingers in my senses, the taste of your fear excites me. the look in your eyes turmoil in your stare, the awe in your face humbles my existence. i a mere mortal in your sight, a sight of the past. the past is just a few seconds away. an eternity will unfold, walk my path, uncloak my victim stand in all your glory. your presence hungers my foul reason for living. my tongue on your skin, i taste you you feed me. your eyes provokes my inner peace. what do you see? is it life? or is it death? a swift movement, a tragic death awaits. my doppelganger sees how you live your life, while i cant wait how to end it. the beauty in my voice captivates you. leading you towards your befall. you yourself prepared my feast with your false judgment. i was never your reason to live but you were mine. you cling to my robe the way you cling to your life. too late mademoiselle i had your tombstone made an hour ago. i undress you, and taste your love juice one more time. ecstasy flows down your veins, you moan in gratitude i brought you wrath in return. you cried in a bite-forced. i smelled life, i tasted life but not yours alone. intriguing i say, so i sink both fangs deeper. another blood of total innocence indeed and it tasted just like mine. you saw the horror on my face. you smiled. you ***** you let out a soft dying laugh. delirium hits like a speeding car crashing. i have killed my own you deceived me. you knew my planned deception all along and countered on your own. you ***** old hag! you let yourself get killed so i could **** him. a creature of my own, floating inside your womb.
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Jul 4, 2013
Jul 4, 2013 at 6:17 AM UTC
Lestat's Deception
i wander around your territory, keeping my imprints on your skin. a sigh of relief and a moan of satisfaction take you where nowhere you've been. flicker of my tongue, the tremble in your voice move closer, closer as skin. the smell of your innocence lingers in my senses, the taste of your fear excites me. the look in your eyes turmoil in your stare, the awe in your face humbles my existence. i a mere mortal in your sight, a sight of the past. the past is just a few seconds away. an eternity will unfold, walk my path, uncloak my victim stand in all your glory. your presence hungers my foul reason for living. my tongue on your skin, i taste you you feed me. your eyes provokes my inner peace. what do you see? is it life? or is it death? a swift movement, a tragic death awaits. my doppelganger sees how you live your life, while i cant wait how to end it. the beauty in my voice captivates you. leading you towards your befall. you yourself prepared my feast with your false judgment. i was never your reason to live but you were mine. you cling to my robe the way you cling to your life. too late mademoiselle i had your tombstone made an hour ago. i undress you, and taste your love juice one more time. ecstasy flows down your veins, you moan in gratitude i brought you wrath in return. you cried in a bite-forced. i smelled life, i tasted life but not yours alone. intriguing i say, so i sink both fangs deeper. another blood of total innocence indeed and it tasted just like mine. you saw the horror on my face. you smiled. you ***** you let out a soft dying laugh. delirium hits like a speeding car crashing. i have killed my own you deceived me. you knew my planned deception all along and countered on your own. you ***** old hag! you let yourself get killed so i could **** him. a creature of my own, floating inside your womb.
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To my dear son, Boaz in distant Idaho, Saturday nite, the whole of New Zealand waited in apprehension for the All Blacks rugy team to play the resurgent Wallabys @ Fortress Eden Park. The previous week at Suncorp Stadium in Sydney, in driving rain, the All Blacks muddled through a painfull draw with the Wallabys, 12 points each with no tries. The Wallabys had fancied their chances and had wanted an emphatic win on home soil. Both teams took that score as a loss and the gauntlet was thrown for the second match….. A brilliant evening, clear and fine , 50,000 people crushed in to Eden Park and you could feel the apprehension, the rest of the country sat in front of their TV willing the team on. The Haka was given a brutal rendition, you could feel the determination, the passion emanating….the Ozzies glared their defiance back…it was all on! 10 minutes into a titanic struggle with the score three all Captain Ritchie McCaw had a brain fade and was yellow carded off for ten minutes by the French referee. The crowd roared…then murmured their worry  like you’ve never heard before. The Ozzies mustered a huge scrum which the All Blacks countered with one man down…. The counter ****** pushed the Australian scrum back 15 ft. Every man in New Zealand was on his feet roaring, you could feel the spirit of nationalism soaring….the moment was a watershed. The All Blacks counterattacked showing a brilliance in attack and defence we have not seen for years… and from that moment on the game was won. Final score 51:20 The Bledisloe Cup was ours. As the match finished the TV camera panned across the solidly black clad crowd…. I have never, ever in my life, seen so many, simultaneous, sets of white teeth grinning! The trip home to Australia would have been… a very subdued affair. Thought I should share this marvellous moment with you Boaz. Luv Dad.
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Aug 24, 2014
Aug 24, 2014 at 4:28 PM UTC
To my dear son, Boaz in distant Idaho,
To my dear son, Boaz in distant Idaho, Saturday nite, the whole of New Zealand waited in apprehension for the All Blacks rugy team to play the resurgent Wallabys @ Fortress Eden Park. The previous week at Suncorp Stadium in Sydney, in driving rain, the All Blacks muddled through a painfull draw with the Wallabys, 12 points each with no tries. The Wallabys had fancied their chances and had wanted an emphatic win on home soil. Both teams took that score as a loss and the gauntlet was thrown for the second match….. A brilliant evening, clear and fine , 50,000 people crushed in to Eden Park and you could feel the apprehension, the rest of the country sat in front of their TV willing the team on. The Haka was given a brutal rendition, you could feel the determination, the passion emanating….the Ozzies glared their defiance back…it was all on! 10 minutes into a titanic struggle with the score three all Captain Ritchie McCaw had a brain fade and was yellow carded off for ten minutes by the French referee. The crowd roared…then murmured their worry  like you’ve never heard before. The Ozzies mustered a huge scrum which the All Blacks countered with one man down…. The counter ****** pushed the Australian scrum back 15 ft. Every man in New Zealand was on his feet roaring, you could feel the spirit of nationalism soaring….the moment was a watershed. The All Blacks counterattacked showing a brilliance in attack and defence we have not seen for years… and from that moment on the game was won. Final score 51:20 The Bledisloe Cup was ours. As the match finished the TV camera panned across the solidly black clad crowd…. I have never, ever in my life, seen so many, simultaneous, sets of white teeth grinning! The trip home to Australia would have been… a very subdued affair. Thought I should share this marvellous moment with you Boaz. Luv Dad.
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Poseidon reared his unkempt head Above the waves today An ocean monster dripped in dread Chest to chest with the bay “Today, or any day at all!” The shore-side heard his plea Salt shucked shoulders tall as islands small “No being shall ever challenge me!” One gull omitted a thoughtful word Which sounded much like “Rak!” One offended brow raised at what he heard Poseidon countered with a slap Five foul fingers touched the sky And fell upon the sea A wave as great as mountains high Sighed upon the beaches knee With a drunken beat of lazy wing The gull escaped his perch Finding another on which to cling Without a moment’s search Fists clenched around the shallows Poseidon was enraged With urchin riddled lips pursed he bellowed And blew the beach away Up went beachgoers along the coast Into the sandy storm Sun chapped mums beginning to roast Castling children, One man named Norm Gull glided softly on the wind Providing a flap or two And to the defeated Poseidon's chagrin Let out a cantankerous coo In one last fit of aqueous rage Posiedon surfaced to land And in a briny blind rampage Grabbed the gull with swole hands Gull in hand Poseidon yelled “What dare you mean sly poultry? My kingdom is unparalleled, All pilgrims seek my choultry” But the oily gull slipped through his grip And flew quite far away And as he watched it dive and dip He came to see the bay Debris was strewn across the sand His subjects were in ruin Disaster spread across the land And it was all his doin’ A desperate shade turned Poseidon As he returned to the great deep “What use am I as a mighty king If protection I cannot keep?” That is how a seagull won Against The God of Sea Who forgot about his job, just one, To keep the big blue world carefree
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Dec 26, 2020
Dec 26, 2020 at 9:17 PM UTC
Poseidon and The Gull
Poseidon reared his unkempt head Above the waves today An ocean monster dripped in dread Chest to chest with the bay “Today, or any day at all!” The shore-side heard his plea Salt shucked shoulders tall as islands small “No being shall ever challenge me!” One gull omitted a thoughtful word Which sounded much like “Rak!” One offended brow raised at what he heard Poseidon countered with a slap Five foul fingers touched the sky And fell upon the sea A wave as great as mountains high Sighed upon the beaches knee With a drunken beat of lazy wing The gull escaped his perch Finding another on which to cling Without a moment’s search Fists clenched around the shallows Poseidon was enraged With urchin riddled lips pursed he bellowed And blew the beach away Up went beachgoers along the coast Into the sandy storm Sun chapped mums beginning to roast Castling children, One man named Norm Gull glided softly on the wind Providing a flap or two And to the defeated Poseidon's chagrin Let out a cantankerous coo In one last fit of aqueous rage Posiedon surfaced to land And in a briny blind rampage Grabbed the gull with swole hands Gull in hand Poseidon yelled “What dare you mean sly poultry? My kingdom is unparalleled, All pilgrims seek my choultry” But the oily gull slipped through his grip And flew quite far away And as he watched it dive and dip He came to see the bay Debris was strewn across the sand His subjects were in ruin Disaster spread across the land And it was all his doin’ A desperate shade turned Poseidon As he returned to the great deep “What use am I as a mighty king If protection I cannot keep?” That is how a seagull won Against The God of Sea Who forgot about his job, just one, To keep the big blue world carefree
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Deem ennui, the most stinking gift humankind is left with; every stroke she countered, loudly snored, when ***** was hit.
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Jun 7, 2012
Jun 7, 2012 at 10:56 AM UTC
Ennui hits the G- spot ******
Gene and Jenny Taylor Had long been man and wife But a heinous disagreement Took a hold upon their life For each bemoaned their tackle It was Gene who started first He justified why dangly bits Were easily the worst “They tangle in your underwear And twist themselves about If I sit down in football shorts They try to wriggle out They chafe on nearly everything They’re difficult to dry And when it’s hot an humid out They’re welded to your thigh” Jenny swiftly countered him “Well ***** are surely worst For shaving is laborious And not all lips are pursed The periods are painful With a week of aggravation And we use three times the toilet roll And cause deforestation “ But Gene had more to muster “Well the ***** is a ******* And hiding an ******** Is a skill each man has mastered They lead us into jeopardy They always take the **** And first thing in the morning They’ve a tendency to miss” So Jenny said “Vaginas Are a curse between the thighs And lady bits look monstrous To anyone with eyes They’re prone to thrush and fondling And embryo gestation ***** are only any good For use in aviation” Gene and Jenny caught their breath The stalemate was called For genitals, the lips and ***** Or **** and hairy ***** Are vital to our species More useful than they seem And you’ll see a marked improvement When they’re working as a team
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May 15, 2014
May 15, 2014 at 7:14 AM UTC
Knobs and ***** A Comparative Study
i do a really good imitation of a woodpecker with my hand clenched into a fist, knocking on my forehead, as if knocking on the forehead of others - i admit, i'm searching for an echo of the rat-tat-tat thumping drill for the cure of headaches. when i inherit what i might inherit i'll book a ticket to switzerland's auschwitz, but drinking a bottle of whiskey and a few beers each day... i'm praying to the gods: gods! a heart attack! gods! a second haemorrhage! gods! a heart attack! darwinism taught me insignificance... so i countered... well... an insignificant theory and practice... like nietzsche said about the darwinists: 'imagine speaking for the entire human race!' well, english journalists already do... and i'm like hey hey hooray for iraq! get blown up by a bomb i'd like my limbs back, or at least the idea of having them once... shiny happy people holding hands! **** old age and grandchildren, there's no accomplishment in that... fake teeth like no teeth at all... apple goo pulp and then porridge... what a great reward! ooh! ah! i'm all geared up for that fear of death... no... i'm scared of being 100 years old; i wouldn't be, had i been born a Galapagos turtle.
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Apr 2, 2016
Apr 2, 2016 at 10:34 PM UTC
every ****** in you should understand (woodpecker)
Can violence be countered Only by violence? To be equals, we must riot To be just, we must fight Why every government every state Furthers the hate mandate Even To show love we must **** Or the enemies will We say we want justice and peace Why, why then this malice? Where does our heart lie As we slaughter and die?
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 6:42 AM UTC
Violence with Violence
In school, ****** was as bad as ***** It had been raining, I had been heart broken The night was cold, it was almost Fall My birthday was in the Fall, soon I'd be seventeen I'd be seventeen, and still a ****** I may have broke it off, but she's the one who ended it I may have been dumb, but she was unfaithful Thus I ran, and dove into her arms I knew she was older, she knew I was younger She was lonely, looking for fun I was lost, looking for a new rush My face was red, I had been drinking Her lips were red, she had been hunting I found a corner to hide, but she smelled blood Her eyes drilled into mine, she licked her lips and breathed fire My legs started to shake, my lips started to quiver She came like a viper, she slithered toward me Hypnotized by her hips, my mouth watered at her ******* She sat on my lap, and looked me up and down "You looked lonely," she said, "I think you're cute." Boy was I, lonely that is, she took my beer and took a sip Her perfume smelled like fruit, her breath smelled like candy The warmth from her legs met mine, and my cheeks turned the color of her lips My heart was dancing, her eyes were twinkling She took me prisoner, and dragged me upstairs She slammed the door and sealed my fate Her smile was devious, her smell so sweet Her hands on my belt, her tongue on my teeth She kidnapped me beneath the sheets, she made me her prisoner of war And I waved the red flag, I was ready for war I wanted war, I wanted you I wanted her, I wanted it, I wanted the badge She dug her nails in my skin, I dug my teeth into hers Our clothes took themselves off, her thong was black lace She devoured me, I penetrated her We danced, we kissed, we wrestled and sang ... And then it was over It was over in twenty minutes This veil of innocence that we chastised That we mock and rush to throw away Is so easily thrown away But those twenty minutes were amazing, although I probably wasn't She knew it was my first time, she called me out "You're a ****** she said, "Don't tell me you're not." Embarrassed I countered, "I'm also not eighteen." She gasped in horror, and stormed out of the room In her speed to grab her clothes, she'd forgotten to tell me her name And to this day, I still don't know it.
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Aug 22, 2017
Aug 22, 2017 at 8:13 PM UTC
Bedroom Confessions Chapter One: First Time For Everything
In school, ****** was as bad as ***** It had been raining, I had been heart broken The night was cold, it was almost Fall My birthday was in the Fall, soon I'd be seventeen I'd be seventeen, and still a ****** I may have broke it off, but she's the one who ended it I may have been dumb, but she was unfaithful Thus I ran, and dove into her arms I knew she was older, she knew I was younger She was lonely, looking for fun I was lost, looking for a new rush My face was red, I had been drinking Her lips were red, she had been hunting I found a corner to hide, but she smelled blood Her eyes drilled into mine, she licked her lips and breathed fire My legs started to shake, my lips started to quiver She came like a viper, she slithered toward me Hypnotized by her hips, my mouth watered at her ******* She sat on my lap, and looked me up and down "You looked lonely," she said, "I think you're cute." Boy was I, lonely that is, she took my beer and took a sip Her perfume smelled like fruit, her breath smelled like candy The warmth from her legs met mine, and my cheeks turned the color of her lips My heart was dancing, her eyes were twinkling She took me prisoner, and dragged me upstairs She slammed the door and sealed my fate Her smile was devious, her smell so sweet Her hands on my belt, her tongue on my teeth She kidnapped me beneath the sheets, she made me her prisoner of war And I waved the red flag, I was ready for war I wanted war, I wanted you I wanted her, I wanted it, I wanted the badge She dug her nails in my skin, I dug my teeth into hers Our clothes took themselves off, her thong was black lace She devoured me, I penetrated her We danced, we kissed, we wrestled and sang ... And then it was over It was over in twenty minutes This veil of innocence that we chastised That we mock and rush to throw away Is so easily thrown away But those twenty minutes were amazing, although I probably wasn't She knew it was my first time, she called me out "You're a ****** she said, "Don't tell me you're not." Embarrassed I countered, "I'm also not eighteen." She gasped in horror, and stormed out of the room In her speed to grab her clothes, she'd forgotten to tell me her name And to this day, I still don't know it.
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Allowing a wall Before their rational Thinking stand, Inured to their heinous deed Of every brand, From head to toe Involved in corruption grand, Also while fellow citizens Gasp for air, Not giving an ounce of care, Barefacedly they dare Unjust war to declare! "Valorous,wiping you out We shall make the land bare!" "Chained, cruel and corrupt Honest - thieves and cut-throats Us,to court you took To punish us by the book Such a move by hook or crook We shall abort Haven't it dawned on you the import? --the select few From the palace to port As autocracy is our wont, And zone of comfort If stripped of this right For us it will not be all right! Though finger countered, We hail from an ethnic group, Marked brave And which we could mobilize, As our selfishness and brutality It seems oblivious to realize. Though during our hay days Its plight we failed to mollify Massaging its ego The call for unjust war We shall amplify Unrepentant , We should Wage a fight. Though some of us Are on the run, As blood is thicker than water, With the credulous That fight for us Emerge victorious we can. To reinstate Rule of the gun On which The international Community Has put a ban. But "To flee pang-of-conscience How fast be the pace? No need  it is no where in place"
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Nov 26, 2018
Nov 26, 2018 at 3:40 AM UTC
Unrepentant we shall wage unjust fight
The Time For Humanity To Mature Has Not & Would Never Come. Read on - be intrigued. Now that I believe for a long time after I attained the age of 22 years on 23rd December, 2012. Many of the spiritual literature pieces are just contradictory to themselves, why would HE let the occurence of any trouble then and hold only the other end of a jittery life helping us cross to the other end safe & fine? If you would excuse this question saying "HE can never be questioned and HE alone is the destructor & the creator," then it's just a desperate excuse which you hold to considering theism as flawless & unquestionable, me & any similar people as psychos, or perhaps losers. I don't discourage theism nor do I encourage anybody to share similar thoughts as mine, but I myself don't encourage idling over the concept of the special spiritual unseen power. I agree that some phenomena like love, kindness, greed, lust & hatred can't ever just be scientifically explained in total completeness by just citing some natural laws of nature or physics. But then again why do we often indispensably need that imaginary hand above our heads for protection or more than often have to spend money in praise of the imaginary hand above our heads? Any mention about theists' escapist nature would be countered by their many statements of the following kind: o Us theists, we don't escape problems, we just gather courage when we have identified a problem in our lives by remembering the imaginary hand above our heads sheltering us from all troubles and then tackle the problem with enough strength. o Theism does neither lack anything divinity nor does it lack even anything evil, both of them are manmade concepts, the world was created as a perfect place for the existence of human race. o Instead of just leaving us all alone in this troublesome world, He has sent few of His men and we can blindly follow them to resolve our own specific troubles with solutions ideated around age-old books written by great men and we don't need anybody to question our faith wherever it is.
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Feb 19, 2013
Feb 19, 2013 at 2:17 PM UTC
A Spiritual Article: Has Humanity Not Matured Yet?
The Time For Humanity To Mature Has Not & Would Never Come. Read on - be intrigued. Now that I believe for a long time after I attained the age of 22 years on 23rd December, 2012. Many of the spiritual literature pieces are just contradictory to themselves, why would HE let the occurence of any trouble then and hold only the other end of a jittery life helping us cross to the other end safe & fine? If you would excuse this question saying "HE can never be questioned and HE alone is the destructor & the creator," then it's just a desperate excuse which you hold to considering theism as flawless & unquestionable, me & any similar people as psychos, or perhaps losers. I don't discourage theism nor do I encourage anybody to share similar thoughts as mine, but I myself don't encourage idling over the concept of the special spiritual unseen power. I agree that some phenomena like love, kindness, greed, lust & hatred can't ever just be scientifically explained in total completeness by just citing some natural laws of nature or physics. But then again why do we often indispensably need that imaginary hand above our heads for protection or more than often have to spend money in praise of the imaginary hand above our heads? Any mention about theists' escapist nature would be countered by their many statements of the following kind: o Us theists, we don't escape problems, we just gather courage when we have identified a problem in our lives by remembering the imaginary hand above our heads sheltering us from all troubles and then tackle the problem with enough strength. o Theism does neither lack anything divinity nor does it lack even anything evil, both of them are manmade concepts, the world was created as a perfect place for the existence of human race. o Instead of just leaving us all alone in this troublesome world, He has sent few of His men and we can blindly follow them to resolve our own specific troubles with solutions ideated around age-old books written by great men and we don't need anybody to question our faith wherever it is.
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There will come a day, probably a Tuesday, you'll be hoeing and yanking yellow weeds by the handful, the sun in the center of the sky; Or you'll be climbing through your lover's window while her husband unlocks the front door, thinking to yourself, "Jesus, we didn't even do anything today. Just gave her her insulin shot," and your heart no longer pumps so much as begs, begs for silence, but that's funny, isn't it? because there isn't any sound, only the perceived dissonance of a scattered mind; But maybe, if you're lucky, it'll be at night, the two of you in bed, and she'll timidly ask if you're hungry, and you'll say what you always say to that question: yes, yes I am, and she'll ask if you want a sandwich, and you'll say, "I'll get it." "You're too sweet." "It's not a problem." After spreading the mustard, there'll be a pain in your chest, mild at first, just at first, but by the time you get halfway down the hall you'll drop the plate of sandwiches on the floor and ***** in the toilet, and you'll probably know then what's happening; But what did you ever do to earn that kind of quiet, relatively quiet, ending? You've got a few things in mind, but you've got a few more bad that negate any kudos any kind of god would award, so let's be honest. That's what you want, right? Death will wake you up, probably around 6 because you've never been a morning person, and when you wake it won't be from a feeling, like a physiological manifestation, no, no that'd give you time to remember Mom in the hospital when she called you by the wrong name. No, Death will come in the form of a headache, and if your wife was there she'd already be up, and she'd say something like: "Poor baby," and get the Tylenol out of the cabinet to the left of the sink for you, but she's not there, is she? No, she's living with her sister right now while you "figure yourself out" and your kids, two boys and a girl, all grown with families of their own, think you've been selfish, but what was the word you countered with? "Necessary." Yes, it's necessary, you'll think as you pop three pills in and run your mouth under the facet, and you'll collapse, pills rolling across the floor, stopping under the cabinets where no one will ever find them. Your vision will burn white; it won't fade to black like you thought, and your head, Jesus, your head sounds like tools in a dryer, but you know there is no sound, and this is it, this is honestly it, you alone on the floor in nothing but your grey boxer shorts, the ones riddled with holes that your wife told you to throw out, and a fragmented halo of Tylenol around you. Your wife. Your wife. Your wife. Your wife. You'll say her name, you'll say "Eve," and your mouth will close itself, and your fist will unclench itself, and you know what? That'll be it, to borrow a phrase. Nobody will find you for three days, and even then, when they do, they'll wish they never had.
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Mar 20, 2014
Mar 20, 2014 at 12:38 PM UTC
Probably a Tuesday
There will come a day, probably a Tuesday, you'll be hoeing and yanking yellow weeds by the handful, the sun in the center of the sky; Or you'll be climbing through your lover's window while her husband unlocks the front door, thinking to yourself, "Jesus, we didn't even do anything today. Just gave her her insulin shot," and your heart no longer pumps so much as begs, begs for silence, but that's funny, isn't it? because there isn't any sound, only the perceived dissonance of a scattered mind; But maybe, if you're lucky, it'll be at night, the two of you in bed, and she'll timidly ask if you're hungry, and you'll say what you always say to that question: yes, yes I am, and she'll ask if you want a sandwich, and you'll say, "I'll get it." "You're too sweet." "It's not a problem." After spreading the mustard, there'll be a pain in your chest, mild at first, just at first, but by the time you get halfway down the hall you'll drop the plate of sandwiches on the floor and ***** in the toilet, and you'll probably know then what's happening; But what did you ever do to earn that kind of quiet, relatively quiet, ending? You've got a few things in mind, but you've got a few more bad that negate any kudos any kind of god would award, so let's be honest. That's what you want, right? Death will wake you up, probably around 6 because you've never been a morning person, and when you wake it won't be from a feeling, like a physiological manifestation, no, no that'd give you time to remember Mom in the hospital when she called you by the wrong name. No, Death will come in the form of a headache, and if your wife was there she'd already be up, and she'd say something like: "Poor baby," and get the Tylenol out of the cabinet to the left of the sink for you, but she's not there, is she? No, she's living with her sister right now while you "figure yourself out" and your kids, two boys and a girl, all grown with families of their own, think you've been selfish, but what was the word you countered with? "Necessary." Yes, it's necessary, you'll think as you pop three pills in and run your mouth under the facet, and you'll collapse, pills rolling across the floor, stopping under the cabinets where no one will ever find them. Your vision will burn white; it won't fade to black like you thought, and your head, Jesus, your head sounds like tools in a dryer, but you know there is no sound, and this is it, this is honestly it, you alone on the floor in nothing but your grey boxer shorts, the ones riddled with holes that your wife told you to throw out, and a fragmented halo of Tylenol around you. Your wife. Your wife. Your wife. Your wife. You'll say her name, you'll say "Eve," and your mouth will close itself, and your fist will unclench itself, and you know what? That'll be it, to borrow a phrase. Nobody will find you for three days, and even then, when they do, they'll wish they never had.
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Inward apathy is not to be confused with sociopathic credence. It's a blade held to the throat of the man that wields it. Never would the cold steel touch the person who thinks of suicide as cowardice, but believes bravery to be disillusionment in the form of medication, or speaking up and out offering solutions to problems that they do not know the variables that come along with it. How many teeth make up a smile? How many lines form a frown? If lines are infinite, what does that tell you about an expression that is countered by obligatory inquisitive ambivalence. Shoulders are for tears. Spines are for intrepidness. Skin is layered; tough and thick no matter benevolent or malevolent, a person's love is misconstrued as skin deep, albeit it is formed between synapses. It's a spark, a fire, the intuition to never say goodbye and ignore accountability.
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Jul 5, 2016
Jul 5, 2016 at 3:24 PM UTC
The Elephant Left the Room
only because northern ireland was originally liverpool. yeah... i’m an anglo-slav, he’s an afro-saxon and that guy is a fairy with clover petals for wings - watch him fluster and flatter cheeks turning green into pink! well, nothing really educational in essex, just a barge of the usual escapees from middle class opinions, esp. escaping opinions as if onion tears of the integrating migrants who flawed the first rule: your father purposively forgot your mother’s tongue (but your mother kept it for the earth and her hope for you to till it), you’re ******** with a body and no soul: the irish fairy countered interrupting me - i kept my gaelic in speaking english drunk, **** you! that’s a trinity that i see. and i saw it, spoken across new england and washington state (hey, price up the ***** liquor of thieving a sympathy, i wasn’t going to be nice writing poetry, still me, the remnant of the masculine root liking rugby and the diminishing psychologies of the players of the losing team - watch them applaud loss rather than sing victory prior without listening to a wwe fake warrior entry music they boggled up with dr. dre’s venture into # therearenomotivationalspeakersinthenationalanthem). i kept my masculinity watchings the sports just so i could write poetry and not womanise - now the escorts and arias i hear you claim? no... finding nemo, frozen, brave, no arias and escorts, just enough morals for enough of horn inches and cartoon coloured shoes.
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Oct 3, 2015
Oct 3, 2015 at 7:20 PM UTC
scenes in a pub
only because northern ireland was originally liverpool. yeah... i’m an anglo-slav, he’s an afro-saxon and that guy is a fairy with clover petals for wings - watch him fluster and flatter cheeks turning green into pink! well, nothing really educational in essex, just a barge of the usual escapees from middle class opinions, esp. escaping opinions as if onion tears of the integrating migrants who flawed the first rule: your father purposively forgot your mother’s tongue (but your mother kept it for the earth and her hope for you to till it), you’re ******** with a body and no soul: the irish fairy countered interrupting me - i kept my gaelic in speaking english drunk, **** you! that’s a trinity that i see. and i saw it, spoken across new england and washington state (hey, price up the ***** liquor of thieving a sympathy, i wasn’t going to be nice writing poetry, still me, the remnant of the masculine root liking rugby and the diminishing psychologies of the players of the losing team - watch them applaud loss rather than sing victory prior without listening to a wwe fake warrior entry music they boggled up with dr. dre’s venture into # therearenomotivationalspeakersinthenationalanthem). i kept my masculinity watchings the sports just so i could write poetry and not womanise - now the escorts and arias i hear you claim? no... finding nemo, frozen, brave, no arias and escorts, just enough morals for enough of horn inches and cartoon coloured shoes.
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Across the horizon a long dark grew Faster than a rainstorm Out of the blue The gloom, the doom, and pale Countered the fading luminescence To the point that the dawn Was nothing but quiet reminiscence And its sad to see But beyond that darkness Rests a tragedy That is tragically tied to the suns Departure Bringing the day to an end That dawns the beginning Of... The Solitude of the Moon
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Nov 4, 2016
Nov 4, 2016 at 9:33 PM UTC
The Solitude of the Moon
Young men in France would clamber to that call, To drink their fill of bottles filled with wine; They lined them up and shot them on the wall. Sat huddled in small cafes in the fall, When news of war came creeping down the vine, Young men in France would clamber to that call. Their basic training taught them how to sprawl, As target dummies waited in a line; They lined them up and shot them on the wall. They marched to battle, lean and fit and tall, And when the whistles blew to give the sign, Young men in France would clamber to that call. In no-mans-land, their charge became a crawl, And in the mud they cursed the German swine; They lined them up and shot them on the wall. The Germans countered, swiftly taking all The captured and the wounded to a mine; Young men in France would clamber to that call: They lined them up and shot them on the wall.
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Apr 2, 2015
Apr 2, 2015 at 6:02 PM UTC
On The Wall
“i hate sweets” you’d once said being offered a cake and having none of it for you did not like the taste i wondered why that was and came to the conclusion that perhaps the reason was because you had known the taste of sweetness for too long the people around you they looked at you talked to you and they were too sweet tooth-achingly so and maybe that was why you loved me because i was far from sweet i was sour slightly painful i've been told i'm unpleasant (not by you, of course) an acquired taste, you'd said "not unpleasant," were the words you whispered smile crooked eyes mellow relaxed "just a bit different" i wondered if you loved me because i was "me" or because i was "sour" because i wasn't "sweet" so i covered myself in candy, asked you what you think "my dear," you smiled "i wouldn't care how 'sweet' you are for i would still love you" "but you hate sweets" i countered, and you laughed at me "i also hate the sour taste of lemons," you said "and you're the most sour person on this earth"
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Mar 6, 2018
Mar 6, 2018 at 10:35 AM UTC
you hate sweets/good thing i was sour
# You once asked me Why won't you tell me who you loved? I responded gently As if speaking to a child When you love somebody So closely and dear Its a moment in your heart Where your mind becomes clear Painted so vividly within your thoughts The ones that you love stands bright and tall *The moments we spend together They were special Nobody knows about it The more people who know The less special it becomes* I smiled to myself As I dazed off about that time To which you countered with How do you know if he felt the same? Silence filled the air As I thought for a moment *Quite frankly I dont know I have no solid proof It was unspoken between us It was a breif time of our youth* Then why is it so special? *Because I loved him No matter if those feelings Were returned or not* #
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Aug 13, 2018
Aug 13, 2018 at 5:40 AM UTC
Who do you love?
It’s a chill and rainy Saturday night in New Haven - it’s Superbowl eve! My roommates Leong, Anna and Lisa and I were playing a game of Upwards - it’s a scrabble-like word game and we’re all strangely super competitive. My phone went “dunk!” A happy ‘Water jug’ sound messages make when they're from one of my favorites. The message was from Charles. He was at the front gate with a package that came to the house where Charles and Mrs. Charles live (about 600 yards from the dorm). He passed me the package through the bars at the main gate, “Thanks,” I said, “ga-night,” and he was gone. Back in my room, I ripped the box open like Christmas morning. The word game could wait - this package was from Paris. The light beige, Jacquemus, ‘Les Ballerines mary-jane pumps’ I’d ordered (forever ago) had arrived and they fit like soft leather gloves. “Ooo! Glampse!” Lisa pronounced. “Aren’t they?” I agreed, swiveling my hooves to show them off in the full length mirror. When I rejoined the Upwards game, talk had shifted to tomorrow's Superbowl. “I read yesterday that Taylor’s on her way (to the Superbowl)!” Leong declared. “I like that she likes the NFL now,” I said. “A lot of people hate her for it,” Anna countered. “She was on camera twice, for 11 seconds total, in a 3-1/2 hour long game. If that upsets you, you’re bringing a lot of your own baggage to the plot.” I updogged. Leong wants to order vegan “wings” for the SuperBowl. “What, exactly, are those?” I asked, apprehensively. “You’re the girl who talked me into trying buffalo-frog-legs in Paris - ney?” Leong enquired, sarcastically. “Yeah,” I admitted, guiltily, “but they were delicious,” I said in self defense. I’m picking the Chiefs 30-20 over the niners.
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Feb 10, 2024
Feb 10, 2024 at 11:48 PM UTC
superbowl
It’s a chill and rainy Saturday night in New Haven - it’s Superbowl eve! My roommates Leong, Anna and Lisa and I were playing a game of Upwards - it’s a scrabble-like word game and we’re all strangely super competitive. My phone went “dunk!” A happy ‘Water jug’ sound messages make when they're from one of my favorites. The message was from Charles. He was at the front gate with a package that came to the house where Charles and Mrs. Charles live (about 600 yards from the dorm). He passed me the package through the bars at the main gate, “Thanks,” I said, “ga-night,” and he was gone. Back in my room, I ripped the box open like Christmas morning. The word game could wait - this package was from Paris. The light beige, Jacquemus, ‘Les Ballerines mary-jane pumps’ I’d ordered (forever ago) had arrived and they fit like soft leather gloves. “Ooo! Glampse!” Lisa pronounced. “Aren’t they?” I agreed, swiveling my hooves to show them off in the full length mirror. When I rejoined the Upwards game, talk had shifted to tomorrow's Superbowl. “I read yesterday that Taylor’s on her way (to the Superbowl)!” Leong declared. “I like that she likes the NFL now,” I said. “A lot of people hate her for it,” Anna countered. “She was on camera twice, for 11 seconds total, in a 3-1/2 hour long game. If that upsets you, you’re bringing a lot of your own baggage to the plot.” I updogged. Leong wants to order vegan “wings” for the SuperBowl. “What, exactly, are those?” I asked, apprehensively. “You’re the girl who talked me into trying buffalo-frog-legs in Paris - ney?” Leong enquired, sarcastically. “Yeah,” I admitted, guiltily, “but they were delicious,” I said in self defense. I’m picking the Chiefs 30-20 over the niners.
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I want to hold your arms Warm and breathe life into them They are so strong and easy to let myself go in I want to grant your back the grace to stand up tall and feel no pain in planting your feet in the ground I want to kiss your hands As you do mine You don’t understand the life you put back into them when you do. I want to warm your heart Enough so that I can be the person you calm yourself for I want to be your calm Your crazy Your beautiful I want to be stable, insatiable ground for you I want to reflect nature for you, Something beautiful that outshines anything man made. I want to reflect the consistency of the moon The illumination of the sun The sweetness in planting feet to soil Body in ocean I want to be what beaches are to northerners, to you I want to be who you kiss Sunday morning Who you want to come home to Friday night I want to be your whiskey I want to be a part of why you feel blessed I want you… to be able to see me in my true essence And I want you to know what your compliment, Your genuine appreciation and respect means to me. I want to do what hearts do, with you I want to do what bodies come together for, with you. I want to appreciate every muscle, every vein From top to bottom and push you into ecstasies of pure bliss As we will fall into exhaustion Only to wake and create a scene all over again . I want to be here, someday with you I want to watch you leave out for work And know that this is the home you will always come back to I want to create different ways to mimic hearts with you I want to blaze the trail to greatness with you I will celebrate you I do celebrate you I see “we” in your eyes And I feel the distance we put behind us when you hug me. You match my need to keep moving I want to bind “unlimited”, to your success And passion to everything you do. I want us to be wonders in our separation And a force not to be countered in our together I want to believe in “forever’s” with you. I’d love… for the first time with you I promise I would… I’d bind myself to moving forward with you Next to you And forever do things just to catch the sun you have caught between your teeth And the glimmer of the moon you have sprinkled in your deep chocolate eyes I’d like to be bold enough to tell you what I could be For you With you Behind you Next to you But, I am a flourish of nerves wrapped up in a facade of confidence Trying to mimic the sea Peaking back to see if you have caught a glimpse of my beautiful. -Indigo Morrison
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Apr 19, 2014
Apr 19, 2014 at 10:13 PM UTC
A Disarming, Golden Coming Together of Calm & Chaos...
I want to hold your arms Warm and breathe life into them They are so strong and easy to let myself go in I want to grant your back the grace to stand up tall and feel no pain in planting your feet in the ground I want to kiss your hands As you do mine You don’t understand the life you put back into them when you do. I want to warm your heart Enough so that I can be the person you calm yourself for I want to be your calm Your crazy Your beautiful I want to be stable, insatiable ground for you I want to reflect nature for you, Something beautiful that outshines anything man made. I want to reflect the consistency of the moon The illumination of the sun The sweetness in planting feet to soil Body in ocean I want to be what beaches are to northerners, to you I want to be who you kiss Sunday morning Who you want to come home to Friday night I want to be your whiskey I want to be a part of why you feel blessed I want you… to be able to see me in my true essence And I want you to know what your compliment, Your genuine appreciation and respect means to me. I want to do what hearts do, with you I want to do what bodies come together for, with you. I want to appreciate every muscle, every vein From top to bottom and push you into ecstasies of pure bliss As we will fall into exhaustion Only to wake and create a scene all over again . I want to be here, someday with you I want to watch you leave out for work And know that this is the home you will always come back to I want to create different ways to mimic hearts with you I want to blaze the trail to greatness with you I will celebrate you I do celebrate you I see “we” in your eyes And I feel the distance we put behind us when you hug me. You match my need to keep moving I want to bind “unlimited”, to your success And passion to everything you do. I want us to be wonders in our separation And a force not to be countered in our together I want to believe in “forever’s” with you. I’d love… for the first time with you I promise I would… I’d bind myself to moving forward with you Next to you And forever do things just to catch the sun you have caught between your teeth And the glimmer of the moon you have sprinkled in your deep chocolate eyes I’d like to be bold enough to tell you what I could be For you With you Behind you Next to you But, I am a flourish of nerves wrapped up in a facade of confidence Trying to mimic the sea Peaking back to see if you have caught a glimpse of my beautiful. -Indigo Morrison
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Leong's watching TikTok on her laptop (as always) and she asks Lisa (a NYC girl) “Are you familiar with the the “downtown girl” aesthetic?” Lisa’s dismissive, “Yeah, it just looks like Urban Outfitters grunge to me.” Leong explains, “It includes headphones and it’s supposed to be a Lower Manhattan style.” “Yeah,” Lisa snorts, “Because Greenwich Village and the Lower East Side are SO cohesive.” Lisa considers herself an Uptown girl (like the song) even though 59th Street, where she lives, is the border between Uptown and Midtown Manhattan. I’m learning that these distinctions are culturally key to New Yorkers. “And,” Lisa adds, “why would someone wear, and lug around, giant, clunky headphones when you can use AirPods??” “Amen sister.” I proclaim and even Leong nods in agreement. “Later, Sunny, Leong and I are on a study break, eating salads and talking about who we hope Yale invites to the next “Spring Fling” concert. We aren’t being realistic; we’re covering who we wish would come. I’d named Charlie Puth, “Kat-Tun!” Leong squealed (A Japanese boy band - apparently Chinese girls LOVE their boybands) and Sunny countered with Ed Sheeran. “I don’t like Ed Sheeran,” I mumbled, making a yuck-face. “Why no Ed?” Sunny gasps with shock (She’s a big Ed fangirl). “I don’t know,” I shrugged, “he’s a star by all measurable metrics,” I admit, “but,” I fade out. “You want my theory on Ed hate?” Sunny offered, “He’s beyond talented vocally - whoever your favorite artist is, Ed’s probably not that far behind. He’s a stellar song writer and he’s making hit after hit; do you want my theory?” “Too basic, too popular?” I guess. “No, he’s not appealing to the gaze,” Sunny states. “The gays?” Leong questions, stepping back into the conversation. “No,” Sunny corrects, “the gaze - G-A-Z-E, he doesn’t try to look pretty all the time.” “Ha!” I snort, “Gaze, I thought you meant gays too,” as Leong and I chuckle together. “No,” Sunny laughs, “nothing like THAT. Ed’s just not trying to be a heartthrob, he knows that’s not his core strong point - and that’s why he’s discounted.” “Like lesbians don’t comb their hair or wear makeup and wear pajamas to class” Leong observes, “they don’t want to attract the male gaze?” “No, we’re not imbued by the male gaze.” Sunny states, “Ed just wants to lowkey.”
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Dec 14, 2022
Dec 14, 2022 at 10:51 AM UTC
gazes
Leong's watching TikTok on her laptop (as always) and she asks Lisa (a NYC girl) “Are you familiar with the the “downtown girl” aesthetic?” Lisa’s dismissive, “Yeah, it just looks like Urban Outfitters grunge to me.” Leong explains, “It includes headphones and it’s supposed to be a Lower Manhattan style.” “Yeah,” Lisa snorts, “Because Greenwich Village and the Lower East Side are SO cohesive.” Lisa considers herself an Uptown girl (like the song) even though 59th Street, where she lives, is the border between Uptown and Midtown Manhattan. I’m learning that these distinctions are culturally key to New Yorkers. “And,” Lisa adds, “why would someone wear, and lug around, giant, clunky headphones when you can use AirPods??” “Amen sister.” I proclaim and even Leong nods in agreement. “Later, Sunny, Leong and I are on a study break, eating salads and talking about who we hope Yale invites to the next “Spring Fling” concert. We aren’t being realistic; we’re covering who we wish would come. I’d named Charlie Puth, “Kat-Tun!” Leong squealed (A Japanese boy band - apparently Chinese girls LOVE their boybands) and Sunny countered with Ed Sheeran. “I don’t like Ed Sheeran,” I mumbled, making a yuck-face. “Why no Ed?” Sunny gasps with shock (She’s a big Ed fangirl). “I don’t know,” I shrugged, “he’s a star by all measurable metrics,” I admit, “but,” I fade out. “You want my theory on Ed hate?” Sunny offered, “He’s beyond talented vocally - whoever your favorite artist is, Ed’s probably not that far behind. He’s a stellar song writer and he’s making hit after hit; do you want my theory?” “Too basic, too popular?” I guess. “No, he’s not appealing to the gaze,” Sunny states. “The gays?” Leong questions, stepping back into the conversation. “No,” Sunny corrects, “the gaze - G-A-Z-E, he doesn’t try to look pretty all the time.” “Ha!” I snort, “Gaze, I thought you meant gays too,” as Leong and I chuckle together. “No,” Sunny laughs, “nothing like THAT. Ed’s just not trying to be a heartthrob, he knows that’s not his core strong point - and that’s why he’s discounted.” “Like lesbians don’t comb their hair or wear makeup and wear pajamas to class” Leong observes, “they don’t want to attract the male gaze?” “No, we’re not imbued by the male gaze.” Sunny states, “Ed just wants to lowkey.”
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