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"concise" poems
It's completely finished   But I started Over again From the top to bottom But still,it seems Unappreciated Like you do to our Relationship Is totally you don't appriciate So I leaving you a space Every words that I called sentences Like us that never Contiguous This is seems to be long But you know you're always Wrong This is just my concise poem That want to remind you Remindful to you That once in your Life There's one me Who Once was used to love you Even you don't Love me back as I do
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Oct 9, 2017
Oct 9, 2017 at 8:43 AM UTC
Remindful to you
Behind this mask You can't see But its still there Even if you can't believe This black gown And a black rose in my hand This black mask And a dark place where I stand Here I call names But you can't hear Here I call for help But you can't be here *Leave me alone with cannabis In this incredible masquerade No one ever listens But I can see your skin colours fade* Everybody here thinks I'm perfect They can't look inside Everybody can't apprehend the laughter Because they want it in concise ~
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Oct 16, 2014
Oct 16, 2014 at 2:49 PM UTC
MASQUERADE ~~~
'Be Concise,' She said, So that's what I did. Does it get more concise than this?
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Oct 8, 2014
Oct 8, 2014 at 3:15 PM UTC
"Be Concise"
Sensation, intuition, feeling, and thinking, Is wrapped inside a ball, A small pink ball inside our head, That won't stop till we're dead, Analytical bedrock inside oozing theories, Elemental atoms sizzling logic, The imaginative stranger, One abstracted and eccentric, Walking with shadows, Talking and mocking, Through these theories inside us, Tilting our caps ‘til we’re shaking our heads, Pensive love in storming analysis, Sapiosexually excited, piqued interest, Unemotional and thoughtfully attuned, Absently minded, always condoned, Unconventional and impartially stringed, Weirdly wired in auxiliary functions, Misconstrued and misunderstood, An ****** intelligence bleeding paranoia, Knocking unto me, Into you, inside us all, It’s something we all yearn to be, And when you fail and prevail we laugh, Crickling crickets thinking nothing, Washing down the storm drain, With no thoughts fluidly sliding down my throat, Pop goes no questions into absolute concise words like freshly broken glass, Again shadows await, but different shadows, Blinking at me staring at you, Wondering what’s what, inside this dementia made sense of a lovely afternoon, Inside your sane, autocorrected, predetermined, twitching, little…mind. Inspired by Myers Briggs Personality Test Tyler is INTP... Logician  (Introverted INtuitive Thinking Perception) The drifter, dreamer the absent minded professor! SassyJ is INTJ... Architect  (Introverted INtuitive Thinking Judging) The starry-eyed idealist manoeuvring life as if a giant chess board! What Myer Briggs personality type are you?... See link below It would be great to know.Please comment!! http://www.16personalities.com/intp-personality
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Jan 11, 2016
Jan 11, 2016 at 10:30 AM UTC
No.1 Sapiosexual Slapping Inquisition- Collaboration with Tyler James Birabent (#one-a-week-series)
Sensation, intuition, feeling, and thinking, Is wrapped inside a ball, A small pink ball inside our head, That won't stop till we're dead, Analytical bedrock inside oozing theories, Elemental atoms sizzling logic, The imaginative stranger, One abstracted and eccentric, Walking with shadows, Talking and mocking, Through these theories inside us, Tilting our caps ‘til we’re shaking our heads, Pensive love in storming analysis, Sapiosexually excited, piqued interest, Unemotional and thoughtfully attuned, Absently minded, always condoned, Unconventional and impartially stringed, Weirdly wired in auxiliary functions, Misconstrued and misunderstood, An ****** intelligence bleeding paranoia, Knocking unto me, Into you, inside us all, It’s something we all yearn to be, And when you fail and prevail we laugh, Crickling crickets thinking nothing, Washing down the storm drain, With no thoughts fluidly sliding down my throat, Pop goes no questions into absolute concise words like freshly broken glass, Again shadows await, but different shadows, Blinking at me staring at you, Wondering what’s what, inside this dementia made sense of a lovely afternoon, Inside your sane, autocorrected, predetermined, twitching, little…mind. Inspired by Myers Briggs Personality Test Tyler is INTP... Logician  (Introverted INtuitive Thinking Perception) The drifter, dreamer the absent minded professor! SassyJ is INTJ... Architect  (Introverted INtuitive Thinking Judging) The starry-eyed idealist manoeuvring life as if a giant chess board! What Myer Briggs personality type are you?... See link below It would be great to know.Please comment!! http://www.16personalities.com/intp-personality
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She has dated boys before. Boys who beat her Boys who ***** her Boys who did nothing wrong at all But still did not feel "right." One of them made fun of her Told her she must be some kind of lesbian (As if that was an insult) If she did not want to have *** with him. She smiled something sad on the outside To deflect To forget To hide behind. She thought And what if I am? What does that make me? It's a question that wanders into the unexplored ruins Of an unkempt mind. A boy meets boy love story is next on the list. They both play football And think that means they must both be "players." Really, they're falling for each other With one swift and concise movement. Boy A cannot tell his parents As he comes from a rowdy and traditional Italian line. Boy B is getting fed up And yet waits, patiently For his one and only to express this flaring emotion A love, unexpressed. Their families, churches and culture Thinks they can change who they are. They use different, cruel tactics. Beat the gay out of him Excommunication *Force her to have *** and she will turn straight* You tell the world that they are an Abomination Atrocity Mutation And yet, I ask this. If the Bible was a Holy deity's, a God's message of eternal love As any good Christian, as I am supposed to be, would proclaim Then how can it be used to justify Acts of such hate and genocide? "I tell you, on the day of judgment people will give account for every careless word they speak" (Matthew 12:36) I hope you are prepared for your Judgment Day.
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Jan 30, 2014
Jan 30, 2014 at 7:27 PM UTC
Love, Unexpressed
She has dated boys before. Boys who beat her Boys who ***** her Boys who did nothing wrong at all But still did not feel "right." One of them made fun of her Told her she must be some kind of lesbian (As if that was an insult) If she did not want to have *** with him. She smiled something sad on the outside To deflect To forget To hide behind. She thought And what if I am? What does that make me? It's a question that wanders into the unexplored ruins Of an unkempt mind. A boy meets boy love story is next on the list. They both play football And think that means they must both be "players." Really, they're falling for each other With one swift and concise movement. Boy A cannot tell his parents As he comes from a rowdy and traditional Italian line. Boy B is getting fed up And yet waits, patiently For his one and only to express this flaring emotion A love, unexpressed. Their families, churches and culture Thinks they can change who they are. They use different, cruel tactics. Beat the gay out of him Excommunication *Force her to have *** and she will turn straight* You tell the world that they are an Abomination Atrocity Mutation And yet, I ask this. If the Bible was a Holy deity's, a God's message of eternal love As any good Christian, as I am supposed to be, would proclaim Then how can it be used to justify Acts of such hate and genocide? "I tell you, on the day of judgment people will give account for every careless word they speak" (Matthew 12:36) I hope you are prepared for your Judgment Day.
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In the dark, windy eve shines stark an orange light Crisp and warm, caressing the wood curves gently; no fight, The harsh burn breathes life to the embers, now shining bright, A veil of smoke falls gently, hazy is the night. Now traveling up the stock, whose polish: iridescent, Up to the paling, rugged cheeks whose glow: florescent. In the blue moonlight, his eyes shine pleasant, Enjoying the taste, thought, life, love; vibrant. Sitting in a weathered chair, creaking wood, rocking back to and fro, He sat still, thoughtful, as pristine as wax, as delicate as snow. Taking drags in the dark, the orange relax, a seedling starting to sow, The stem broke the soil, words forming in his mouth, questions starting to sough. He looked up from his stupor, sharp minded, clear and concise, A solution to his problem, no matter its cause, had broken the ice. Now he stood tall, elated, anxious, worried his words would suffice, Then he sat back down, rewarded, confident his ideas would entice.
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Apr 27, 2014
Apr 27, 2014 at 11:33 PM UTC
Deep Thought
My dearest Frank, I wish you joy Of Mary's safety with a Boy, Whose birth has given little pain Compared with that of Mary Jane — May he a growing Blessing prove, And well deserve his Parents' Love! — Endow'd with Art's and Nature's Good, Thy Name possessing with thy Blood, In him, in all his ways, may we Another Francis WIlliam see! — Thy infant days may he inherit, They warmth, nay insolence of spirit; — We would not with one foult dispense To weaken the resemblance. May he revive thy Nursery sin, Peeping as daringly within, His curley Locks but just descried, With 'Bet, my be not come to bide.' — Fearless of danger, braving pain, And threaten'd very oft in vain, Still may one Terror daunt his Soul, One needful engine of Controul Be found in this sublime array, A neigbouring Donkey's aweful Bray. So may his equal faults as Child, Produce Maturity as mild! His saucy words and fiery ways In early Childhood's pettish days, In Manhood, shew his Father's mind Like him, considerate and Kind; All Gentleness to those around, And anger only not to wound. Then like his Father too, he must, To his own former struggles just, Feel his Deserts with honest Glow, And all his self-improvement know. A native fault may thus give birth To the best blessing, conscious Worth. As for ourselves we're very well; As unaffected prose will tell. Cassandra's pen will paint our state, The many comforts that await Our Chawton home, how much we find Already in it, to our mind; And how convinced, that when complete It will all other Houses beat The ever have been made or mended, With rooms concise, or rooms distended. You'll find us very snug next year, Perhaps with Charles and ***** near, For now it often does delight us To fancy them just over-right us.
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My Dearest Frank, I Wish You Joy
My dearest Frank, I wish you joy Of Mary's safety with a Boy, Whose birth has given little pain Compared with that of Mary Jane — May he a growing Blessing prove, And well deserve his Parents' Love! — Endow'd with Art's and Nature's Good, Thy Name possessing with thy Blood, In him, in all his ways, may we Another Francis WIlliam see! — Thy infant days may he inherit, They warmth, nay insolence of spirit; — We would not with one foult dispense To weaken the resemblance. May he revive thy Nursery sin, Peeping as daringly within, His curley Locks but just descried, With 'Bet, my be not come to bide.' — Fearless of danger, braving pain, And threaten'd very oft in vain, Still may one Terror daunt his Soul, One needful engine of Controul Be found in this sublime array, A neigbouring Donkey's aweful Bray. So may his equal faults as Child, Produce Maturity as mild! His saucy words and fiery ways In early Childhood's pettish days, In Manhood, shew his Father's mind Like him, considerate and Kind; All Gentleness to those around, And anger only not to wound. Then like his Father too, he must, To his own former struggles just, Feel his Deserts with honest Glow, And all his self-improvement know. A native fault may thus give birth To the best blessing, conscious Worth. As for ourselves we're very well; As unaffected prose will tell. Cassandra's pen will paint our state, The many comforts that await Our Chawton home, how much we find Already in it, to our mind; And how convinced, that when complete It will all other Houses beat The ever have been made or mended, With rooms concise, or rooms distended. You'll find us very snug next year, Perhaps with Charles and ***** near, For now it often does delight us To fancy them just over-right us.
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How Sweetingly Rare to see this Advise, The Westfold Bard who shares this Ancient Art But Performed it Better to his Concise And took Definition for his Good Part I just knew you now. So what of belate As Mentored Dolphins with Water's Tie befriend I found this Artist; This Cornerstone Great And Hope your Elder's Tongue will never end You, Sir, confirmed my Efforts; This I Bow And hand you the Medal I sought to seek I am no Patron; Neither plan so now Only the Purest Abe in Honest meek. Now please Sing on, and Live to Peak Content I write my Sighs; But these Praises I meant.
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Mar 11, 2013
Mar 11, 2013 at 2:32 AM UTC
SONNET TRIBUTE: JOHN STARKS
DO I, DO I, DO I Have to listen to what everyone says, at-least to capture an idea. I've heard of tedious reviewing, but can it be raw. Can it dare to be something other than structured. Concise is one thing, but is stress another. If I were to free-flow like the rest of the world, would it be bad? You may say it's trash. But are children's books the same to a certain degree. May it be long, may it be short, may it be? Why must there be an end, when your mind certainly doesn't, or would you rather talk of death.
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Oct 28, 2014
Oct 28, 2014 at 4:16 PM UTC
Run-ons
if you have the choice *(you always have the choice in every ******* second)* to be vulnerable or to be guarded, choose vulnerability because it’s honest it’s clear, it’s concise, it’s the realest thing you’ll ever feel. lying and reminding yourself to keep lying, smiling and reminding yourself to keep smiling, crying and reminding yourself to stop crying can be such hard work and honesty, even when throat throttling blatant, even when timidly tender, even when sharply studded, or sickly injured, will always save you in the end even if it hurts like dry ice whistling on your heart, even if the person you love chooses to depart, even if the pit in your stomach is knotting, or rotting and you feel hopeless, worthless, foolish, guilty, horrid, evil, mixed up or unhealthy - honesty will always save you in the end
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Sep 19, 2012
Sep 19, 2012 at 2:22 AM UTC
honesty
the warmth from loneliness never felt so cold and cleansing the warmth from two hearts colliding never felt so caressing smiles stretch wider than the sky and i can’t help but swallow up the ones i hold dear past, present and future all in my windshield and at the tips of my hair caressing the air i breathe it’s always been preconceived the pain the consciousness and the way we bleed i’m a nomad in the desert feeling like an ostrich feather freedom just isn’t as potent as it once was and my dreams are a little more out of reach but i’m still the wanderer whose ideas are clean all the eyes that radiated love, i never forgot because you showed me some kindness in places i forgot the adventures that shook the time and the tunnels that gave us vision i handled the concise misunderstanding that led to my downfall it led me to a waterfall up north where the weather isn’t warm saturation was gone but i still felt like i was home i’m going home i haven’t been there in a while and i’m sorry please don’t worry about the nights i’ll never show i’m co-existing with the night he’s showing me the beauty that comes with walking alone i made a home inside my bones the address is tucked into the underlying of my sternum i don’t apologize for the pictures i’ve burned and the bridges that ignited along with them i live my best life when i’m desperate for a solution we’re all just warriors of the unknown traveling in a stream of nothingness trying to find out the art of everything that’s unknown there is no home for the outgrown
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Aug 20, 2018
Aug 20, 2018 at 2:54 PM UTC
home
the warmth from loneliness never felt so cold and cleansing the warmth from two hearts colliding never felt so caressing smiles stretch wider than the sky and i can’t help but swallow up the ones i hold dear past, present and future all in my windshield and at the tips of my hair caressing the air i breathe it’s always been preconceived the pain the consciousness and the way we bleed i’m a nomad in the desert feeling like an ostrich feather freedom just isn’t as potent as it once was and my dreams are a little more out of reach but i’m still the wanderer whose ideas are clean all the eyes that radiated love, i never forgot because you showed me some kindness in places i forgot the adventures that shook the time and the tunnels that gave us vision i handled the concise misunderstanding that led to my downfall it led me to a waterfall up north where the weather isn’t warm saturation was gone but i still felt like i was home i’m going home i haven’t been there in a while and i’m sorry please don’t worry about the nights i’ll never show i’m co-existing with the night he’s showing me the beauty that comes with walking alone i made a home inside my bones the address is tucked into the underlying of my sternum i don’t apologize for the pictures i’ve burned and the bridges that ignited along with them i live my best life when i’m desperate for a solution we’re all just warriors of the unknown traveling in a stream of nothingness trying to find out the art of everything that’s unknown there is no home for the outgrown
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On a pondering Morning, watching the Sun Rise, I see off in the Distance a Twirling Fog bank ! It was the calmest of Mornings, So what TWISTS the fog ? Even the sound of Footprints being Quickly made, I could hear Running across the Misty Glade . An Echo of Light seemed to follow the Pace, As well as did the turning of the Fog . What, Pray Tell, Could I be Privy too on this New Morning ? The Foot path beats seemed to be coming closer, But still Unseen because of the Clouded Steps. I CRIED OUT "Is someone there?" and again "Is someone there?" NOT a reply except the approaching sounds and sights ! As if Music to my ears, a Melody emitted from the scene, Coming closer each second. I Realized that Anticipation and Peace of Mind were Overwhelming me ! NO fear or apprehension crossed my mind, Just a lifting of my Spirits, as not but a few feet away, ALL Three were nearly to me ! The Footpath Sounds, The Twisting mist, The melody of Calling.... Then, What seemed like 7 Minutes of a Total Earth Quiet Time ! Out from the Mist Stepped a Glistening Golden, Shimmering in Velvet, Raven Haired to HER Waist..Loveliest of Women ever to be Seen ! As she began to speak, it was as if each word became forever imprinted in my Mind ! She Proclaimed in a voice so Gentle and Concise that she was Sent,, Sent, SO I might See, What a Gift from GOD Looks Like, "MY GILDED MUSE". Tears filling my eyes as Her indwelling within me BECAME COMPLETE.......
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Jan 12, 2011
Jan 12, 2011 at 3:42 AM UTC
*" The GILDED MUSE " * ( #48 )
come, come with me on this backward path of shattered mirrors and sidewalk cracks walk, walk with me and listen to the sounds of the wondering birds and things the wind found dance, dance with me at a bashment of bashful bows wild twists, sylph-like twirls, and elegant falls lay, lay with me in a passage of dreamt things. i will place my heart in your palm and try, try to breathe breathe, breathe with me can you not let me go? melt away the malarkey with silence and cure the angry thoughts with “i don’t know” speak, speak with me confabulate, but don’t ask what i feel for i’d be reticent, or worse, pre-occupied from thoughts by what’s real meet, meet with me can you find me halfway in a field of resplendence at the end of the day? run, run with me get you wild (like untamed flowers) make you leave (he’s a forest fire) fall, fall with me Wonderland doesn’t hurt if there’s two when the Queen of Hearts sees ours she won’t even conceptualize what to do sink, sink with me when i’m drifting, drowning, and there’s nothing left but promise me you’d swim to shore if it was between loss and loss of breath leave, leave with me and shall the world pull you away in my heart, I’ll keep the pieces of the promise that you would stay scream, scream with me tell the air and the dirt and the weeds what is dry, what is broken, what is hurt what you need hold on, hold on with me to memories and tales of the trees of climbing limbs and freedom in little things stay, stay with me in this bleeding, beating, of hearts don’t get too close, but don’t go too far trust, trust with me though it's complicated and whims take the garden signs and try to repaint them pray, pray with me see, the petals scattered to the breeze, are not a concise coincidence but the story of an averred belief grow, grow with me i hope that love will show us how it starts as a seed, then a bud then a vow dream, dream with me of crepuscular magic and roses in June droplets are constellations and irises the moon feel, feel with me in your embrace i seek shelter hands like daisies in my hair feet intertwined, we're ivy, but better wonder, here with me we don’t know what we’ll find but if you keep me safe, dear one, i’ll keep you wild.
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Jul 31, 2018
Jul 31, 2018 at 10:20 PM UTC
wildflowers (it’s a poem, don’t be scared)
come, come with me on this backward path of shattered mirrors and sidewalk cracks walk, walk with me and listen to the sounds of the wondering birds and things the wind found dance, dance with me at a bashment of bashful bows wild twists, sylph-like twirls, and elegant falls lay, lay with me in a passage of dreamt things. i will place my heart in your palm and try, try to breathe breathe, breathe with me can you not let me go? melt away the malarkey with silence and cure the angry thoughts with “i don’t know” speak, speak with me confabulate, but don’t ask what i feel for i’d be reticent, or worse, pre-occupied from thoughts by what’s real meet, meet with me can you find me halfway in a field of resplendence at the end of the day? run, run with me get you wild (like untamed flowers) make you leave (he’s a forest fire) fall, fall with me Wonderland doesn’t hurt if there’s two when the Queen of Hearts sees ours she won’t even conceptualize what to do sink, sink with me when i’m drifting, drowning, and there’s nothing left but promise me you’d swim to shore if it was between loss and loss of breath leave, leave with me and shall the world pull you away in my heart, I’ll keep the pieces of the promise that you would stay scream, scream with me tell the air and the dirt and the weeds what is dry, what is broken, what is hurt what you need hold on, hold on with me to memories and tales of the trees of climbing limbs and freedom in little things stay, stay with me in this bleeding, beating, of hearts don’t get too close, but don’t go too far trust, trust with me though it's complicated and whims take the garden signs and try to repaint them pray, pray with me see, the petals scattered to the breeze, are not a concise coincidence but the story of an averred belief grow, grow with me i hope that love will show us how it starts as a seed, then a bud then a vow dream, dream with me of crepuscular magic and roses in June droplets are constellations and irises the moon feel, feel with me in your embrace i seek shelter hands like daisies in my hair feet intertwined, we're ivy, but better wonder, here with me we don’t know what we’ll find but if you keep me safe, dear one, i’ll keep you wild.
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An unusual creation of mine, will it be good enough? imaginative, yet a piece of my heart. will it be good be enough? Short and concise, will it be good enough? stanza after stanza. will it be good enough? whatever it is about, will it be good enough? Deity, blue sky,love or money will it be good enough? Effortlessly,my eyes closed, buttock sat, pen wrote. Regardless, a poem it will be called My Poem- First of its kind.
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Jun 24, 2017
Jun 24, 2017 at 3:03 AM UTC
My first poem
Once Upon A Time… I was a rock Strong and proud as rock may be Nothing could be more fulfilling than to be that rock When you are looked upon as the symbol of strength Always being that strength for all time How strong it feels to be the rock Over time I was eroded in a mere pebble All that could chisel me down came like a storm Everything that gave me strength was destroyed Sometimes even the rock needs something to lean on But the sands of the foundation That which once was my own rock Drifted away Down the hill to where it lay Tumbling down In a downward spiral Bashed to pieces I became just a pebble A concise pebble was me With full conscience Of my former self I lay now next to the grass And in time we became closer Yet again time was not the friend And the storms came and washed the grass down Down the hill myself I rolled As that foundation too was gone Fate as it be I found refuge next to the grass And the sand was kind It rolled gently beneath Now I covered and gave the root of my grass Sanctuary and a place to flourish And together we gave joy to each other Here on earth Looking at the wonderment of sky
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Aug 15, 2015
Aug 15, 2015 at 11:33 PM UTC
From a Rock To A Pebble
The old man told his story, lost within his troubled youth His words quite labored, heavy... his raspy voice by now uncouth At times mixing the conversation with gin and ice, and sweet vermouth His eyes were clear however, and I saw therein... a quiet truth He talked of her at length, his thoughts concise, composed... serene At times he’d pause, efface another silent tear he’d wished unseen His dreams would countermand the years... love and youth, would reconvene She’s waiting there for him you see… The girl with eyes, of Paris green Some had said her ways unsound, disposition... introject He said she knew the rumors, and she thought them all quite innocent He told of how she’d laughed at them… of narrow minds, and intellect He found in her the love he’d sought, although his hope remained suspect He looked into her eyes, and saw the faintest touch of sorrow there Shining through the gentle mist, and the eglantine within her hair He felt somehow her pain, although she’d kept it obscure... nom de guerre And so his own mistakes were viewed, in Paris green... and sad despair Their time together thus unfurled within this anguished declamation Of years now spent in solitude, with lost and lonesome lamentation For one whose essence still bestows upon his dreams, in meditation Aspirations there arise, to leave his heart in desperation His thoughts remained unchanged, unbroken... memories demure He stood to mix another drink, then paused...perhaps his mind unsure Gathering his memories, so past and present touch... concur And then continued once again, his sad and doleful dream of her I listened there, throughout the night... I lie in sedentary pose Then as I fall asleep I see the here and now, and then... transpose I see myself in dreams with her, but why? my heart has not disclosed I'm lost within some late, late hour envisage... or so I suppose I then awake alone, to find my thoughts of her and then, no clearer The snow outside my window cannot bring her memory nearer Though I can dream of Paris green, and all those places, so familiar Tonight I'll listen once again, and tell my story.. to the mirror Dean Evans 1-06-15
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Jan 6, 2015
Jan 6, 2015 at 2:50 PM UTC
EYES OF PARIS GREEN
The old man told his story, lost within his troubled youth His words quite labored, heavy... his raspy voice by now uncouth At times mixing the conversation with gin and ice, and sweet vermouth His eyes were clear however, and I saw therein... a quiet truth He talked of her at length, his thoughts concise, composed... serene At times he’d pause, efface another silent tear he’d wished unseen His dreams would countermand the years... love and youth, would reconvene She’s waiting there for him you see… The girl with eyes, of Paris green Some had said her ways unsound, disposition... introject He said she knew the rumors, and she thought them all quite innocent He told of how she’d laughed at them… of narrow minds, and intellect He found in her the love he’d sought, although his hope remained suspect He looked into her eyes, and saw the faintest touch of sorrow there Shining through the gentle mist, and the eglantine within her hair He felt somehow her pain, although she’d kept it obscure... nom de guerre And so his own mistakes were viewed, in Paris green... and sad despair Their time together thus unfurled within this anguished declamation Of years now spent in solitude, with lost and lonesome lamentation For one whose essence still bestows upon his dreams, in meditation Aspirations there arise, to leave his heart in desperation His thoughts remained unchanged, unbroken... memories demure He stood to mix another drink, then paused...perhaps his mind unsure Gathering his memories, so past and present touch... concur And then continued once again, his sad and doleful dream of her I listened there, throughout the night... I lie in sedentary pose Then as I fall asleep I see the here and now, and then... transpose I see myself in dreams with her, but why? my heart has not disclosed I'm lost within some late, late hour envisage... or so I suppose I then awake alone, to find my thoughts of her and then, no clearer The snow outside my window cannot bring her memory nearer Though I can dream of Paris green, and all those places, so familiar Tonight I'll listen once again, and tell my story.. to the mirror Dean Evans 1-06-15
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The photo reminded her of bruised fruit. Well first and foremost:fruit. Her body, curled around itself, sheltering the fibrous crunchy pit of her, her body white and frayed looking, rounded buttock, calf gently sloping, feet modest, willowy toes toenails like shale face blurred, questionable dark spots where her eyes could have been. they closed as the shudder buckled, her mouth sagged open, lip lolling to one side, brow ancient furrowed like folds of sand nudged by a lazy tide. None of it concise, only guessing. Her knees brought up, squeezed against small crunch-able chest. Full, heavy with pulp (stringy sweet, what snags on the teeth) but what if it were to fall from an appreciable height? Filmy is the flesh. Daring the looker to look closer, see what mite be hidden there. Ripe:questionable. Sweet like nothing, pouring from the corners of a mouth: what a bite it would be. That first bite. The bruising comes in when she thinks of the brain beneath, that open, limitless figure so pale and forefront and brimming with intent, so crush-able with careless fist, so lovable with thirsty mouth. But what of the mind that put her before you, that turned her vulnerable, shameless, open for discussion? Put her before you. naked.
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Feb 2, 2010
Feb 2, 2010 at 1:01 PM UTC
Figure Study 3
Pretzel Logic always counter intuitive with a twisted sense of fate explicitly constructed how much longer will you wait the axiom of choice the scenario of doubt with random intervention how can you bring about a clear and precise result with no deviance in action probability of predictions spinning wheels with no traction the answers so concise in udder chaos results you find without collaboration such an eery creepy mind a scavenger of darkness deep down thoughts somewhat toxic no wavering in directions manipulative pretzel logic Gomer Lepoet...
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May 3, 2013
May 3, 2013 at 10:54 PM UTC
Pretzel Logic
dead bodies while alive poor Porphyria strangled by her own hair which could be no Fairy tale , jabberwocky, listens as does that famous semicolon concise; By Ezra Pound.   creepy innocence or infamous we all get to sooner. On to Popeye "Farm Implements......" title and poem supplied by Ashbury, hang  an albatross but don't shoot it Mr. Coleridge, it will hang around your neck.
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Dec 12, 2014
Dec 12, 2014 at 12:53 AM UTC
attractive opposites
What is the point in Poignancy? *Fragment, you tell me. Another one in paragraph three.* What do words matter? I have spelled love with Lilacs instead of an “L” I have drawn the curve of my “O” with the chill of a Sweeping breeze. A “V” can only appear as the violet of a sparkling sky, or I will be unable to read it, and every “E” will amount to nothing more than emptiness if the voice it has been given does not epitomize song. *Comma-splice, Replace it with a semicolon.* I am trying live freely. I want to breathe in color, to inhale an orange Savannah sky And exhale green which shows through the translucent dew of grass. *Unnecessary use of description. Limit it, Lidiah. Limit it.* My fingers itch with the ferocity of A vengeful army. They are waiting to trample pages with The lead of my pencil, the bayonet of a Revolutionary-War-era rifle. The word limit sounds like tragedy. A single word that can somehow act as a precursor, To the death of passion. Your words have put you in a box. People always say “Actions speak louder than words.” In a way that is true. But I also know it to be a tremendous piece of fiction. *Lidiah, Please watch your run-ons.* Why can our words and our actions not be the same thing? Isn’t the act of speaking, the act of raising your voice, the act of being heard, isn’t that an action? *Lidiah, how many times do I have to remind you? Clarification throughout.* Why have we decided that our words Mean nothing more than stepping stones on the road to action? When did we decide that our voices which rise like clarion calls, forever instilling our promises, are to be left on silent? Precious jewels set into rings. Poison in a water tank. *Lidiah, what you say is irrelevant if your MLA bibliography isn’t in alphabetical order.* Our words are our actions. They mean the same. Words are the distinctions of our beliefs Illustrations of our personas They are not mosquitos to be slapped away and forgotten. *Lidiah, paragraph five is too long. Stop rambling. Be concise.* Please tell me, what is the point of being concise? *Lidiah, stop rambling.* Why do we let justification equate to useless rambling? *Lidiah, you have to detach yourself from the narrative.* Feelings mean more than a couple of sentences. More than a good or a bad. A mad or a sad. Comma-splice What about ferocity? Never end with a preposition. What about passion? Replace this with a conjunctive adverb. What about the discernable strife that follows even indifference? What about that? *Lidiah, what is the point of Poignancy?* What are we without it? What does the human soul matter if we have forsaken the parts of ourselves that remind us of what a soul is for? *Lidiah, you will never be heard if you do not learn to follow the rules*.
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Mar 4, 2018
Mar 4, 2018 at 1:04 AM UTC
The Point of Poignancy
What is the point in Poignancy? *Fragment, you tell me. Another one in paragraph three.* What do words matter? I have spelled love with Lilacs instead of an “L” I have drawn the curve of my “O” with the chill of a Sweeping breeze. A “V” can only appear as the violet of a sparkling sky, or I will be unable to read it, and every “E” will amount to nothing more than emptiness if the voice it has been given does not epitomize song. *Comma-splice, Replace it with a semicolon.* I am trying live freely. I want to breathe in color, to inhale an orange Savannah sky And exhale green which shows through the translucent dew of grass. *Unnecessary use of description. Limit it, Lidiah. Limit it.* My fingers itch with the ferocity of A vengeful army. They are waiting to trample pages with The lead of my pencil, the bayonet of a Revolutionary-War-era rifle. The word limit sounds like tragedy. A single word that can somehow act as a precursor, To the death of passion. Your words have put you in a box. People always say “Actions speak louder than words.” In a way that is true. But I also know it to be a tremendous piece of fiction. *Lidiah, Please watch your run-ons.* Why can our words and our actions not be the same thing? Isn’t the act of speaking, the act of raising your voice, the act of being heard, isn’t that an action? *Lidiah, how many times do I have to remind you? Clarification throughout.* Why have we decided that our words Mean nothing more than stepping stones on the road to action? When did we decide that our voices which rise like clarion calls, forever instilling our promises, are to be left on silent? Precious jewels set into rings. Poison in a water tank. *Lidiah, what you say is irrelevant if your MLA bibliography isn’t in alphabetical order.* Our words are our actions. They mean the same. Words are the distinctions of our beliefs Illustrations of our personas They are not mosquitos to be slapped away and forgotten. *Lidiah, paragraph five is too long. Stop rambling. Be concise.* Please tell me, what is the point of being concise? *Lidiah, stop rambling.* Why do we let justification equate to useless rambling? *Lidiah, you have to detach yourself from the narrative.* Feelings mean more than a couple of sentences. More than a good or a bad. A mad or a sad. Comma-splice What about ferocity? Never end with a preposition. What about passion? Replace this with a conjunctive adverb. What about the discernable strife that follows even indifference? What about that? *Lidiah, what is the point of Poignancy?* What are we without it? What does the human soul matter if we have forsaken the parts of ourselves that remind us of what a soul is for? *Lidiah, you will never be heard if you do not learn to follow the rules*.
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two marbles blinked and stared, marveling at the wondrous visions inside her mind. the arches of her brows, so frail - so concise - furrowed like a busy caterpillar longing for metamorphosis. a shimmering wheat field of strands caressed her jawline so graciously, wild and free just like her soul; wanderlust for an eternity
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Sep 6, 2014
Sep 6, 2014 at 11:06 PM UTC
character development (1)
If you found it Buggersome that I Cry Yet keep the Tears which solicit the Rain Those were really yours; Apart which I lie Would cower the Deed which summons the Pain And Pain - this un-needed - turns the Ego sour Then from Wise Mouths state Abandon precise Normal for Commoners in Easy Hour To shut the Door by Frustration concise Then, do forget the Elder's Timeless Thought Of Partners nurture from Time's Honour brew That, you see, Instant Pimps' Deception caught And turn Gold Devotion to Sin a-new. Perhaps if She subscribes to your Profile Would you Consider; That your Truest Smile.
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Mar 14, 2013
Mar 14, 2013 at 1:14 AM UTC
SONNET TRIBUTE SUNDRY - NINETY - TOM DALEY
To be concise, and clear I trust no one. You didn't break me - You never will. You can't win a war In which I refused to fight. I fight alone In the dead of night. You can't conquer love - A love that is mine, My battles of a differerent kind. To be clear, I trust no one, I fight alone My broken heart and I
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Jan 10, 2015
Jan 10, 2015 at 4:10 PM UTC
This Fight
But then that Bronze you would Commercialise Out of those Hands which reimbursed your Win Need not be Displayed; For Humble concise The Best Blown Victory embraces your Skin Like that Gold-Dresser his Scriptures resume Though unexpected Prime Tarriff despite Saw this Next Call for Excitement subsume For the Corvocado Christ he'll incite And as for you, to Teeny-Bopps you relate And Promote your Sport as a Pop-Ear's Rage With Some at-risk, masturbed and hate The Artist's Garden stolen for corsage. There are certain Themes which need no Reform That if we do, such Gremlins we Transform.
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Mar 15, 2013
Mar 15, 2013 at 3:21 AM UTC
SONNET TRIBUTE SUNDRY - ONE HUNDRED - TOM DALEY
every time i travel to Warsaw i fall in love, i stand on the central Warsaw train-station, and there's this girl checking her mobile interet, phone, and she looks pretty... and... i really don't want to **** her like the guys **** her in ***** movies... maybe that''s shy i'm considered "effeminate".... maybe...                   i just didn't **** enough women... or maybe... i speak the tongue of the crusaders... but we sent the artillery... the beautiful women to the Arab ******             and kept the nation safe... Islam, akin to the comparison of the Bubonic Plague... Islam... virus of the mind...     i'll contest thi... i'll ******* die for this... i've been feeling weird for the past few days.... Tom Petty died....   so... why would anyone give a **** if Wayne Static does the coffer?    so... i'm supposed to care?! **** you! Jeff hanneman died... but do you see me, making a case for a ******* parade?! no? good... that's how i like it... ******* south London plonker! every single time... i fall in love with a girl at the central train-station in Warsaw... the love dies a sudden death... when i get to the.... Western train station of Warsaw...   the Ukrainians et al... the Mongols...              love's up, dead, long gone...                          i'm basically living the enterprise in re-experiencing a slow death...     feral lands...   these Polacks are like... please don't land in Warsaw.... i know... Krakow has Auschwitz as a tourist destination... but... but... you will not see the generic schematic of globalization... every time i travel to Warsaw i fall in love, and then i think of "it"... **** marriage..                no thanks, you have it covered...                                            on your way; i might not be on the winning side, but sure as **** i'm also not on the losing side either... and t think... that i could even concise my life within the confines of imitating my father...    i could have...                    but then... life... isn't exactly a chance on bet within the confines of a roulette.
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Oct 15, 2018
Oct 15, 2018 at 9:54 PM UTC
every time i travel to Warsaw i fall in love
every time i travel to Warsaw i fall in love, i stand on the central Warsaw train-station, and there's this girl checking her mobile interet, phone, and she looks pretty... and... i really don't want to **** her like the guys **** her in ***** movies... maybe that''s shy i'm considered "effeminate".... maybe...                   i just didn't **** enough women... or maybe... i speak the tongue of the crusaders... but we sent the artillery... the beautiful women to the Arab ******             and kept the nation safe... Islam, akin to the comparison of the Bubonic Plague... Islam... virus of the mind...     i'll contest thi... i'll ******* die for this... i've been feeling weird for the past few days.... Tom Petty died....   so... why would anyone give a **** if Wayne Static does the coffer?    so... i'm supposed to care?! **** you! Jeff hanneman died... but do you see me, making a case for a ******* parade?! no? good... that's how i like it... ******* south London plonker! every single time... i fall in love with a girl at the central train-station in Warsaw... the love dies a sudden death... when i get to the.... Western train station of Warsaw...   the Ukrainians et al... the Mongols...              love's up, dead, long gone...                          i'm basically living the enterprise in re-experiencing a slow death...     feral lands...   these Polacks are like... please don't land in Warsaw.... i know... Krakow has Auschwitz as a tourist destination... but... but... you will not see the generic schematic of globalization... every time i travel to Warsaw i fall in love, and then i think of "it"... **** marriage..                no thanks, you have it covered...                                            on your way; i might not be on the winning side, but sure as **** i'm also not on the losing side either... and t think... that i could even concise my life within the confines of imitating my father...    i could have...                    but then... life... isn't exactly a chance on bet within the confines of a roulette.
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