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#vietnamwar
the tide, a never-ending olive green the advance made silently in the pitch black night, dark as the leather on their feet. wading through the water a muddy yellow tinged with blood dripping like machine gun fire opened fire in the jungle thicket the river is full of them treading panic water  to escape treading on landmines - little pots of death leaving crates, cutting arms, legs, limbs gone, lost in the panic water soldiers in the river, men in the panic water, friends in the throes of death clinging to each other, kissing olive canvas with red lips "Tell my girl I love her if I don't make it back!" holding each other while holding their breath listening, listening for the next agent to fall like rain and orange the rain on viet cong, the american hatred dropping like bombs, on ferns and palm trees losing their green on children losing their voices from all the screaming and crying their fathers tired of fighting and hanging loose like landmine limbs, in the reeds by the river, waiting for death.
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Apr 9, 2020
Apr 9, 2020 at 1:51 PM UTC
PANIC WATER
My husband sitting on the ledge of heaven or hell, watching as the shell of him drinks warm Budweiser and is deaf to our son's squeaks of playing with toy cars. Daughter draws a picture of a restored home full of colors and fake smiles that we show to our neighbors. I wish his glassy-eyed stare and hidden breakdowns would've been shot or stabbed by the Vietnamese. I'll pack our bags, go to my mother who smokes non-filtered cigarettes and blows the smoke to my tired face. ”What did I told you? I knew he wasn't strong, what a ******* mouse.” Georgia and Matthew eat melted strawberry ice cream in the disturbing silence while I try not to create psychotic thoughts. Those eyes that still see blood and broken souls - looking at a black and white movie should've been torn apart by the forks of hungry children.
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Mar 12, 2018
Mar 12, 2018 at 1:48 PM UTC
Made In Vietnam
the war tells a story, its like peeling layers of onion, each layer have its painful memory, we walk through Saigon swamp, and its cities filled with hatred, i traveled from america, hearts fill with pride, when i got through Vietnam, i felt alone, some felt all messed up, we all didn't have a clue what we doing, all we told to **** when we gather with all our weapons held high, its like the age of golden eras, where men would wear armor, then we storm the battlefield, some say this war is for our families, and others too naive say we fight for freedom of whatever cause we don't know we sprayed lots of bullet for money. we build walls to save lives, but we purge it instead saving, sometimes i think outside the wall beyond the jungle , and the ninh river, all i ever think is back home, my boy is 12 now, i miss his 12th year birthday, i was out to fight the ***** but their freedom wasn't theirs, it was ours, we didn't have a clue who we fight for. i was laid as a skinhead on us, born in bald hair with sealed uniform, that looks like we going to war, arrived in vietnam, was shocked to see all these innocent died, for freedom that we don't earn, it's theirs and its there to stay, as i grew up around the war, i learn how to l be human.
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Jul 10, 2017
Jul 10, 2017 at 10:39 AM UTC
vietnam war
In glorious swoops of courage, the birds’ talons grasp tightly to bloodied men. Fearful. Hopeful. Their silver wind of relief has finally begun to blow. Though always late, the hawks arrive just in time. Looking back, the stories speak gruesome truth: X-Ray was Hell; a no-man’s-land of loss and meaningless fire. The shed of red life, salted tears, and deep-tissue scars Has been argued to be worth the **** sweat, and northward hate for which they feel so deeply; Debated from the lips and tongues of penguins who live in an idol home of marble and comfort, A place where mice need not be afraid of man nor hawk, But should be always mindful of the snake. The question stands: What is this all for? The golden years of reminiscence have passed us by; Boys have become men, men have become droids. And these ironclad mechanisms of sacrifice have leaked, Laughed in the yellow faces of destruction, Cried in the sweet solace of dreams, Yet, they remain stoic in their duties. They are forced to rust. Forced to fall apart. Forced to learn How to replace and be replaced, How to break and how to mend, How to hang on. How to let go. In the dense forests of struggle, They play hide and seek with figures unknown: silhouettes of themselves and each other, as well as those who they are obliged to send to a boggy grave. They play this game, They lose this game, Handing life and limb for a cause which is not their own; Hardly any cause at all, But a cause manufactured to rescue that of another. Brothers departed kiss the white clouds of peace, Thanking God for the homecoming. Men enduring thank God for another night amidst their dread, So to savor every last breath. Pray for death, hope to live. Beg the question: What the Hell am I doing here, On some other man’s land, Where my nose does not belong? Innocent farmers. Or are they suckers? Or are WE suckers? Pawns. Pawns on a chessboard. Dots and arrows on paper maps. Statistics. We’re just a game played by children half an Earth away. A game where Some men are lions, some men are wolves, But all men have learned—if not by now, then soon— That “friends” equals pain. And pain is suffering. Pleading for the answers, When’s it subside? When’s it take a back seat so then we can move forward with our lives? It doesn’t. It engulfs you. It becomes your life. Your dreams. Your stories. It becomes you. Old, frail, desensitized, and stone-faced you. And at such a young age. “War is Hell, soldier.” Welcome to Vietnam.
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Sep 16, 2016
Sep 16, 2016 at 6:35 AM UTC
The Valley
In glorious swoops of courage, the birds’ talons grasp tightly to bloodied men. Fearful. Hopeful. Their silver wind of relief has finally begun to blow. Though always late, the hawks arrive just in time. Looking back, the stories speak gruesome truth: X-Ray was Hell; a no-man’s-land of loss and meaningless fire. The shed of red life, salted tears, and deep-tissue scars Has been argued to be worth the **** sweat, and northward hate for which they feel so deeply; Debated from the lips and tongues of penguins who live in an idol home of marble and comfort, A place where mice need not be afraid of man nor hawk, But should be always mindful of the snake. The question stands: What is this all for? The golden years of reminiscence have passed us by; Boys have become men, men have become droids. And these ironclad mechanisms of sacrifice have leaked, Laughed in the yellow faces of destruction, Cried in the sweet solace of dreams, Yet, they remain stoic in their duties. They are forced to rust. Forced to fall apart. Forced to learn How to replace and be replaced, How to break and how to mend, How to hang on. How to let go. In the dense forests of struggle, They play hide and seek with figures unknown: silhouettes of themselves and each other, as well as those who they are obliged to send to a boggy grave. They play this game, They lose this game, Handing life and limb for a cause which is not their own; Hardly any cause at all, But a cause manufactured to rescue that of another. Brothers departed kiss the white clouds of peace, Thanking God for the homecoming. Men enduring thank God for another night amidst their dread, So to savor every last breath. Pray for death, hope to live. Beg the question: What the Hell am I doing here, On some other man’s land, Where my nose does not belong? Innocent farmers. Or are they suckers? Or are WE suckers? Pawns. Pawns on a chessboard. Dots and arrows on paper maps. Statistics. We’re just a game played by children half an Earth away. A game where Some men are lions, some men are wolves, But all men have learned—if not by now, then soon— That “friends” equals pain. And pain is suffering. Pleading for the answers, When’s it subside? When’s it take a back seat so then we can move forward with our lives? It doesn’t. It engulfs you. It becomes your life. Your dreams. Your stories. It becomes you. Old, frail, desensitized, and stone-faced you. And at such a young age. “War is Hell, soldier.” Welcome to Vietnam.
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it became a perpetual motion a dance someone hands the card, another lights the amount of aching discolored grazed fingers was immense put your finger on the flint wheel press it down karen thought we should make a sign the scrambles of bruised fingers for a piece of cardboard my fingers throbbed as i scratched our message on the board i kept the pink flower locked in the crease of my hand and threw them in air “draft card burning here” it was 7 00 in the morning october 21 1967 i was only 17 my brother jeffrey was flying a plane over dien bien phu a friend richard was screaming in the trenches of xuan loc a lover michael treading through a swamp in mui bai **** i stepped up to The Police. The. Men. In. Suits. Stared. At. Me Blank. Faces. And. No. Expression. I picked up my Pink Daisy, and brought it up to their bayonets this is for Jeffrey, for Richard, and for Michael the men in suits stared at me in a world of chaos and confusion all I heard was Silence.
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Oct 22, 2014
Oct 22, 2014 at 2:09 PM UTC
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