Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
#unwitting
We can get accustomed to being too familiar with the familiar paths in life under the mesmerizing mood of moonlight starlight or streetlight and wind-up taking unwitting detours off these familiar paths in the light of day and lose our way.
0
Jul 15, 2025
Jul 15, 2025 at 9:54 AM UTC
Too Familiar With The Familiar
I was strolling down the aisle We were shopping there in style With my daughter sitting smiling in the cart, I was stretching out my hand For the Martinelli's brand When the apple of my eye gave me a start. With the bottle in my grasp I saw, coming toward us fast, A high heeled damsel, scarfed and towing her caddie And she smirked as I, condemned, Stood up to comprehend The reason, as my child said "Whisky Daddy?" There was nothing I could say, To make it seem another way, To vanquish the conviction so compelling It was the color you could tell And the shape she knew so well, The question that my daughter asked was telling. Neil Stewart McLeod
0
May 10, 2017
May 10, 2017 at 12:40 PM UTC
Busted