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walking on shards of glass whenever we interact i am unnatural, nervous usually feel so authentic and perfect you mix my energy like a bartender misrepresent my ability like my father leading me to walk on shards of glass sweeting the darker moments in the past it is easier like that it is easier to unpack
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Jun 9, 2023
Jun 9, 2023 at 8:47 AM UTC
Walking on Shards of Glass
Lawrence Hall [email protected]   https://hellopoetry.com/lawrence-hall/ poeticdrivel.blogspot.com                        Book Reviewers: Stop Unpacking! You unpack the words, you unpack the lines You unpack the themes, you unpack the scenes You unpack the hints, you unpack the signs You unpack the beats, you unpack the means You unpack the forms, you unpack the rhymes You unpack the plot, you unpack the verse You unpack the memes, you unpack the times You unpack everything and make it worse! With some exasperation I ask of you - Just what does all this unpacking DO?
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Mar 29, 2022
Mar 29, 2022 at 10:19 PM UTC
Book Reviewers: Stop Unpacking!
We decide to climb moments by packing our bags. And a city decides to climb moments by unpacking those emotions.
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Sep 25, 2019
Sep 25, 2019 at 1:07 PM UTC
Journey of city
It’s not about fitting it all into the car; it’s about fitting the pieces together against the agrestic trunk space. It’s the way we hungrily wait to spit up our influence It’s the patient extraction of a cat cornered conver sation that is easier to  shove  under the innate rug that is this chaotic l i f e
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Mar 2, 2018
Mar 2, 2018 at 9:59 PM UTC
Unpacking
A screaming exclamation, "This is who I am," I'm a protesting invasion, proudly failing your ruthless exam. Don't you wish I could shrink? Don't you wish you could make me cry? My hands stain the pages in ink as I wish you'd say eternal goodbye. I'll never be your ego's snack, I'll paint a frown on your jaw as I'll be dressed defiantly in black from head to toe, Mon cherie, don't unpack unless in your grave below.
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Oct 2, 2016
Oct 2, 2016 at 6:30 AM UTC
Black Soul, Colourful Mouth
Check off      all these belongings from a list that I wrote in thick blue marker on a cardboard strip I ripped                          There's a book I lost at 26                     with dog-eared pages fading gold                     16 pens, 45 cents                     a dented tin of birthday cards                     unnumbered rolls of mints Sit back      on the carpet in the heat take another sip and press on to the bottom. To the green.                     There's a look you had at 28                     with bow shaped mouth and arching eyes                     15 hours, many road trips                     your crooked tooth would slant your grin                     Never saw me fall right in.                     And today I pace apartment floors                     or sit amidst a box flap hall                     halted breath, an iron hour                     clad in sweat, still packed away                     in taped up, cardboard yesterday                     There's a photograph, from 2010                     atop the slippers that you gave.                     Raging smiles, orange lights at night.                     The River Walk in wintertime.                     And it's my favourite pic. But the 21st was moving day and all I've got are pickled dreams, an empty house and waiting boxes, "Tear my guts out," so they say.                     No fight quite like a duct taped box.                     No companion like your face.                     No shrink quite like an empty bottle.                     No wake-up call like moving day.
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Sep 13, 2014
Sep 13, 2014 at 3:50 PM UTC
Un-Moving Day
Check off      all these belongings from a list that I wrote in thick blue marker on a cardboard strip I ripped                          There's a book I lost at 26                     with dog-eared pages fading gold                     16 pens, 45 cents                     a dented tin of birthday cards                     unnumbered rolls of mints Sit back      on the carpet in the heat take another sip and press on to the bottom. To the green.                     There's a look you had at 28                     with bow shaped mouth and arching eyes                     15 hours, many road trips                     your crooked tooth would slant your grin                     Never saw me fall right in.                     And today I pace apartment floors                     or sit amidst a box flap hall                     halted breath, an iron hour                     clad in sweat, still packed away                     in taped up, cardboard yesterday                     There's a photograph, from 2010                     atop the slippers that you gave.                     Raging smiles, orange lights at night.                     The River Walk in wintertime.                     And it's my favourite pic. But the 21st was moving day and all I've got are pickled dreams, an empty house and waiting boxes, "Tear my guts out," so they say.                     No fight quite like a duct taped box.                     No companion like your face.                     No shrink quite like an empty bottle.                     No wake-up call like moving day.
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