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I’ve spent the last couple of weeks in Paris settling in. My every appliance, gadget and charger have been bricked by the weird, French electricity, which bobs when it should weave or something - but you still can’t stick a fork in the sockets. I’ve also been meandering the right bank* arrondissements for fashions. Students at Université Paris Cité, in the everyday, dress more chicly and elegantly than Yalies or nerdy Harvard ‘barneys.’ I’ve noticed a lot of Asian, selfie-taking tourists in Paris. They come in like waves of invaders as the river-cruises dock. Now, anyone that’s known me for some time, will tell you that my friends and I’ve been taking selfies for decades. Just not in the middle of the street or with total strangers trying to relax on crisp, cool, early summer morning, while sipping an espresso hangover cure. Was COVID deadly? Well, it certainly killed off the last etiquettes that separated us from the animals. I’m not anti-tourist - nope -  I just moved back here myself - but these smiling, terribly polite, middle-aged people, think nothing of stopping someone abruptly in the street to ask directions, in a foreign language - as if they’re at Tokyo-Disneyland where the locals are cast members simulating real life. Would you expect anyone on a busy, work-a-day Manhattan street to happily stop and converse? Not a chance. Women would recoil like snakes and the men would dodge like O.J Simpson or shoulder you to the ground. Still, they call Parisians rude. I am becoming more serpentine and evasive as I shop, as-if I were a spy in occupied territory. Charles and I form a one-man phalanx, with me following in his wake, like a dolphin trailing along a great ship. They may need to put up signage, like, “Look (at the locals) but don’t touch,” but in what language? Let’s wax free-versely… freever-ishly? *It’s a pleasure to walk the banks of the dark, reflective Saine again. and watch the warm, evenings for the first cool stirrings of fall. Once you’ve visited Paris, it stays with you. Nothing’s simple here, not the moonlight, the serene european atmosphere or the better-than-you sense of right and wrong. I’m young in a very old city. I like dessert crawls, and “rock’n’roll clubs.” Hemingway wrote, that ‘‘You receive in return what you bring to Paris.’* That’s probably not an exact quote. but I think that’s where they got “What happens in Vegas.” . . Songs for this: Come to Me by Koop Leena by Caravan Palace Right Now by The Creatures
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Aug 15, 2025
Aug 15, 2025 at 10:11 PM UTC
fashion hunting
I’ve spent the last couple of weeks in Paris settling in. My every appliance, gadget and charger have been bricked by the weird, French electricity, which bobs when it should weave or something - but you still can’t stick a fork in the sockets. I’ve also been meandering the right bank* arrondissements for fashions. Students at Université Paris Cité, in the everyday, dress more chicly and elegantly than Yalies or nerdy Harvard ‘barneys.’ I’ve noticed a lot of Asian, selfie-taking tourists in Paris. They come in like waves of invaders as the river-cruises dock. Now, anyone that’s known me for some time, will tell you that my friends and I’ve been taking selfies for decades. Just not in the middle of the street or with total strangers trying to relax on crisp, cool, early summer morning, while sipping an espresso hangover cure. Was COVID deadly? Well, it certainly killed off the last etiquettes that separated us from the animals. I’m not anti-tourist - nope -  I just moved back here myself - but these smiling, terribly polite, middle-aged people, think nothing of stopping someone abruptly in the street to ask directions, in a foreign language - as if they’re at Tokyo-Disneyland where the locals are cast members simulating real life. Would you expect anyone on a busy, work-a-day Manhattan street to happily stop and converse? Not a chance. Women would recoil like snakes and the men would dodge like O.J Simpson or shoulder you to the ground. Still, they call Parisians rude. I am becoming more serpentine and evasive as I shop, as-if I were a spy in occupied territory. Charles and I form a one-man phalanx, with me following in his wake, like a dolphin trailing along a great ship. They may need to put up signage, like, “Look (at the locals) but don’t touch,” but in what language? Let’s wax free-versely… freever-ishly? *It’s a pleasure to walk the banks of the dark, reflective Saine again. and watch the warm, evenings for the first cool stirrings of fall. Once you’ve visited Paris, it stays with you. Nothing’s simple here, not the moonlight, the serene european atmosphere or the better-than-you sense of right and wrong. I’m young in a very old city. I like dessert crawls, and “rock’n’roll clubs.” Hemingway wrote, that ‘‘You receive in return what you bring to Paris.’* That’s probably not an exact quote. but I think that’s where they got “What happens in Vegas.” . . Songs for this: Come to Me by Koop Leena by Caravan Palace Right Now by The Creatures
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Peter (my bf) and I were in Paris, about three weeks ago (I was on Spring break, he was on vacation from work). ‘Headstart for Happiness,’ by ‘the Style Council,’ was playing low somewhere. “This is the kind of starry winter night that guy from the Netherlands used to paint,” I observed. “If you were writing about it,” he asked, “how would you describe it?” “Imagine a deep, still blue, hosting a field of luminescent light scatter, and a bashful moon, low in the sky, as if it were hiding in the trees.” I guessed. “It’ll moonset soon,” he said “within the hour.” he added. “I never think of moonsets.” I said, looking at the sky like it was new. “The moon follows the line of the ecliptic,” he said, as if that meant something, “more or less,” he qualified. “To think I grew up under an undifferentiated sky,” I marveled. When I’m with him, I can relax, I don’t have to be-on, he’s smart enough. Of course, I’d come in handy if he went into cardiac arrest or started choking on something. We were sitting side by side, outside ‘Le Café du Marché,’ a bistro near the Eiffel Tower. Our waiter,  Léo, had just refilled our coffee. It was 9:30 PM and we’d been at this table for about two hours. We’d reduced the tarte-tatin to a few crumbs forty minutes ago, but Léo knows me and although they're thirty tourists in line for tables, he won’t rush us. Like puppets dance, we often mimic lines - I don’t know why. “I was stalking you,” I confided, running a finger along his long-sleeve shirt-cuff. “I was stalking you,” He said. Our eyes were fixed on each other. “No, seriously,” I said, moving in much closer, to be serious. “No, seriously,” He deadpanned back. “Then I caught you,” I went on, and I was very close now, our lips maybe two inches apart. “No, I caught you,” he said, smiling as I got very close. “It was ****** Jujitsu,” he softly bragged. “Wax on, wax off,” I said before I stole a quick kiss. Peter was shocked, a scooch, by French teens. If French teens have a crush, especially in Paris, it’s a ‘drop what you’re doing,’ snog-fest - between classes in the hall, on-the-metro, in a coffee shop or grocery store they go-all-in, because love must be stormy, urgent, tinchy. Here’s a secret. Peter says, “You **** my face, like no one ever has.” It must be the French in me. Ha! Of course, I learned all I know about love from Taylor Swift. Let’s see, first, I must be willing to let down my guard - because love can happen at any time. Love, at its best, is overwhelming, mistake prone, meaningful and powerful - but I can’t assume it’ll last, because my lover may have ulterior motives. I could be hurt or changed by the experience - but I’ll have the memories. Eventually though, I’ll heal enough to try again - with a new set of expectations. Maybe I’ll even write a song or a poem about it.
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Apr 13, 2024
Apr 13, 2024 at 1:49 PM UTC
bistro
Peter (my bf) and I were in Paris, about three weeks ago (I was on Spring break, he was on vacation from work). ‘Headstart for Happiness,’ by ‘the Style Council,’ was playing low somewhere. “This is the kind of starry winter night that guy from the Netherlands used to paint,” I observed. “If you were writing about it,” he asked, “how would you describe it?” “Imagine a deep, still blue, hosting a field of luminescent light scatter, and a bashful moon, low in the sky, as if it were hiding in the trees.” I guessed. “It’ll moonset soon,” he said “within the hour.” he added. “I never think of moonsets.” I said, looking at the sky like it was new. “The moon follows the line of the ecliptic,” he said, as if that meant something, “more or less,” he qualified. “To think I grew up under an undifferentiated sky,” I marveled. When I’m with him, I can relax, I don’t have to be-on, he’s smart enough. Of course, I’d come in handy if he went into cardiac arrest or started choking on something. We were sitting side by side, outside ‘Le Café du Marché,’ a bistro near the Eiffel Tower. Our waiter,  Léo, had just refilled our coffee. It was 9:30 PM and we’d been at this table for about two hours. We’d reduced the tarte-tatin to a few crumbs forty minutes ago, but Léo knows me and although they're thirty tourists in line for tables, he won’t rush us. Like puppets dance, we often mimic lines - I don’t know why. “I was stalking you,” I confided, running a finger along his long-sleeve shirt-cuff. “I was stalking you,” He said. Our eyes were fixed on each other. “No, seriously,” I said, moving in much closer, to be serious. “No, seriously,” He deadpanned back. “Then I caught you,” I went on, and I was very close now, our lips maybe two inches apart. “No, I caught you,” he said, smiling as I got very close. “It was ****** Jujitsu,” he softly bragged. “Wax on, wax off,” I said before I stole a quick kiss. Peter was shocked, a scooch, by French teens. If French teens have a crush, especially in Paris, it’s a ‘drop what you’re doing,’ snog-fest - between classes in the hall, on-the-metro, in a coffee shop or grocery store they go-all-in, because love must be stormy, urgent, tinchy. Here’s a secret. Peter says, “You **** my face, like no one ever has.” It must be the French in me. Ha! Of course, I learned all I know about love from Taylor Swift. Let’s see, first, I must be willing to let down my guard - because love can happen at any time. Love, at its best, is overwhelming, mistake prone, meaningful and powerful - but I can’t assume it’ll last, because my lover may have ulterior motives. I could be hurt or changed by the experience - but I’ll have the memories. Eventually though, I’ll heal enough to try again - with a new set of expectations. Maybe I’ll even write a song or a poem about it.
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When they came down from their disk With their blinding lights And their alloy ramps It quickly became obvious Unexpectedly, in our hubris, That they wished only to Gas up, Take some pictures of squirrels And stretch their limbs Before setting out toward a finer frontier.
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Aug 31, 2021
Aug 31, 2021 at 10:24 PM UTC
Some Light Travelling
He walks the end of the pier, alone No home to go to, A ghost in ragged clothes Passing among the crowds, Unseen and unheard But he always feeds the gulls, Their noisy raucous squabbling Over a few scraps of bread, Reminds him of how unhappy All these tourists really are, Pretending to enjoy their holiday Kidding themselves they are free.
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Sep 17, 2019
Sep 17, 2019 at 6:37 PM UTC
Feeding The Gulls
off the view a tree stands in mute amazement watching beside him another group of tourists devour the scenery with flashy teeth
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Jun 18, 2017
Jun 18, 2017 at 3:21 PM UTC
Scene
Daily walks would lead me down The tourist laden streets Where people from all walks of life Would congregate and meet Buskers, singers, ne'er do wells Would work throughout the throngs But in back of Giannis restaurant Sat an old man sharing songs He didn't sing so much as talk His voice was hoarse with age But a milk box and an orange crate Were his table, chair and stage His instrument, an old guitar Scarred, battle worn and black His guitar strap was as old as he An old potato sack He sat and played to nobody He just let the words be there His audience could be a hundred deep Sometimes it could be air His music was his lifes blood It was everything he had So he shared it with the people And the people....they were glad The tourists, stayed away though They were more attracted by the flair Of the buskers and the jugglers Not this man who wasn't there He never left to join the crowd And to sell his songs to those Who really wanted nothing more Than to hear some manufactured prose The people who he played to Were just others from the street They worked the bars and restaurants And at night they'd find a seat In front of this old bluesman Sitting by his orange box Playing his guitar by candle light Taking in his songs and talks He sang songs from the heart, I guess About those who'd he'd met He'd sing about a dozen songs That would constitue a set Then he'd open up his silver flask And ******* two gulps down "This here's just my medicine" "My past lives just to drown" He sang of Truck Stop Beauty Queens And of Walks out in the park He sang of people living life Not just hiding in the dark He sang of things so real you'd see Their pictures in your mind He'd sing of places and of things That others would not find But tourists, they just stayed away Near the buskers blowing fire While yards away this old man sat Just like an old town cryer His audience would leave a bit of change for their free show He never asked for anything For this was his row to *** At two though when the street shut down He closed his show down too But he always had an extra song A special one for you His music came from in his heart He shared it without fear For once it left his throat it was A sound that was so dear The tourists went to hotels Once the buskers all went home But he just moved his crate and box He slept out here alone He sang his songs of characters Who helped make us his life His words were sometimes gentle While others cut you like a knife His world was just that orange crate And his music helped unfurl The melodies in this mans mind It helped him share his world He knew some things and people that Would take rather than give He sang about the street people Because among them he did live His home was just a cardboard box Behind Giannis bar And if you want to see a real good show You don't have to go far It's just a little beaten path Away from tourist fare Where this little, old, shy Bluesman sings to hundreds or the air..
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May 4, 2012
May 4, 2012 at 12:13 PM UTC
The Street #6...Bluesman
Daily walks would lead me down The tourist laden streets Where people from all walks of life Would congregate and meet Buskers, singers, ne'er do wells Would work throughout the throngs But in back of Giannis restaurant Sat an old man sharing songs He didn't sing so much as talk His voice was hoarse with age But a milk box and an orange crate Were his table, chair and stage His instrument, an old guitar Scarred, battle worn and black His guitar strap was as old as he An old potato sack He sat and played to nobody He just let the words be there His audience could be a hundred deep Sometimes it could be air His music was his lifes blood It was everything he had So he shared it with the people And the people....they were glad The tourists, stayed away though They were more attracted by the flair Of the buskers and the jugglers Not this man who wasn't there He never left to join the crowd And to sell his songs to those Who really wanted nothing more Than to hear some manufactured prose The people who he played to Were just others from the street They worked the bars and restaurants And at night they'd find a seat In front of this old bluesman Sitting by his orange box Playing his guitar by candle light Taking in his songs and talks He sang songs from the heart, I guess About those who'd he'd met He'd sing about a dozen songs That would constitue a set Then he'd open up his silver flask And ******* two gulps down "This here's just my medicine" "My past lives just to drown" He sang of Truck Stop Beauty Queens And of Walks out in the park He sang of people living life Not just hiding in the dark He sang of things so real you'd see Their pictures in your mind He'd sing of places and of things That others would not find But tourists, they just stayed away Near the buskers blowing fire While yards away this old man sat Just like an old town cryer His audience would leave a bit of change for their free show He never asked for anything For this was his row to *** At two though when the street shut down He closed his show down too But he always had an extra song A special one for you His music came from in his heart He shared it without fear For once it left his throat it was A sound that was so dear The tourists went to hotels Once the buskers all went home But he just moved his crate and box He slept out here alone He sang his songs of characters Who helped make us his life His words were sometimes gentle While others cut you like a knife His world was just that orange crate And his music helped unfurl The melodies in this mans mind It helped him share his world He knew some things and people that Would take rather than give He sang about the street people Because among them he did live His home was just a cardboard box Behind Giannis bar And if you want to see a real good show You don't have to go far It's just a little beaten path Away from tourist fare Where this little, old, shy Bluesman sings to hundreds or the air..
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I do not believe I could ever love anyone enough to make them my home. My home will always be red dirt and oak trees under the best sunsets in the entire sky with potato patches and country dirt roads, fumbling through sticky tourists on steamy days and letting the salt water feed my skin on the beach I spent all my summers at. My home will always be raspberry cordial and late nights in lovers lane with Canada days in crowded parks and childhood pictures with cannons, my home will always be drunken sidewalks and midnight Chinese, dancing in my drive way and smoking on my back porch. I could never make home in a person enough to follow them away from the place I love...
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Dec 4, 2015
Dec 4, 2015 at 7:12 PM UTC
Home//Part I
Covent Garden. Midnight. Revellers and tourists combined. The market is heaving. Last trains are leaving. An eclectic mix to broaden the mind. Covent Garden. 2am. The place is pretty quiet. Pubs have closed. Clubs.... God knows. The tourists have frozen their riot. Covent Garden. 4am. A drunkard stumbles by. Flood lit shops. A rickshaw stops. The backdrop against a reddish sky. Covent Garden. 6am. Blokes lurk down Langley street. The glint of a blade. A blur in the shade. Lava tip of cigarette falls to a strangers feet. Covent Garden. 8am. Commuters emerge from underground stations. Workers prepare. Visitors beware. Pick pockets attracted like gravitation.
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Jul 10, 2015
Jul 10, 2015 at 2:30 PM UTC
Covent Garden by night.
Thank you, tourists For pausing. For capturing Every moment. Your cameras draped, Quivering below your necks Your necks rosy with sun. Sunscreen scents Swarm the air But the air bursts Diverse Dialects, Dogmas, and Dreams. Thank you From a resident, A student, A visitor, A wanderer. Thank you For immobilizing Glorious minutes For impeding time Just for a moment. For acknowledging- So that those who neglect to notice, Once again realize their riches. Thank you For your quiet grins As you regard The world. Thank you, travelers.
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Apr 16, 2015
Apr 16, 2015 at 6:08 AM UTC
Ode to Tourists
Rolling on by east west way I could almost see behind me, As I almost did yesterday. In my right corner eye I saw the sun shine setting and on my left the ocean was swaying and swelling. Rolling on by east west way. The sand searchers toy store was full and flowing more and more. Yet while staring at it straight ahead I only saw a light changing to red. Rolling on by east west way. So I glanced a moment to the setting sun and to my right was the only direction I could see the light. But the sand searchers toy store was blocking the rays and it only beckoned me to play. Rolling on by east west way. If only I could've rolled on by east west way as the sun was rising over the ocean's sway. Then perhaps I would see and stay in the right light. Not rolling on by east west way.
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Oct 3, 2011
Oct 3, 2011 at 7:43 PM UTC
East West Way, Rodanthe