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**Oliver Sacks passed away today, August 30, 2015 He asked the best questions and never stopped seeking ever better answers. Perhaps now, richer, he has them, but this world is surely a poorer place indeed.** by N. Lipstadt ~~~ ”And now, weak, short of breath, my once-firm muscles melted away by cancer, I find my thoughts, increasingly, not on the supernatural or spiritual, but on what is meant by living a good and worthwhile life — achieving a sense of peace within oneself. I find my thoughts drifting to the Sabbath, the day of rest, the seventh day of the week, and perhaps the seventh day of one’s life as well, when one can feel that one’s work is done, and one may, in good conscience, rest." Oliver Sacks I hope you read the entire essay at the URL below. ~~~ humble humble, mine own own muse~jester self-mocking, calling me out, giving oneself the middle finger, who you? indeed, you, the greater fool, utilizing, thriving on self-contemptuous thoughts, you are no Oliver Sacks, what are you doing messing with his essaying? go back to being a standardized human, spilling the detritus of thine mortal coil, that employs you as a full time slave, a scab-working seven day affair, is that not sufficient? you, in your sixth decaying-decades-day, forsook the ancient Sabbath long ago, keeping it for ****** rest, cheaply tired from the liturgy of straitjacketing of do's and dont's of excruciating detail, that put only distance tween you and your essential spiritual oils Sacks invades directly my eye's clouded storage, now, two brains cross-wired, histories, his story, my story, all too familiar, almost indecently similar here I am, nearer my god than thee, on this Sabbath day of my ancestors, (a hand-me-down gift to the world's conceptual heritage sites) working hard, as an everyday day laborer, looking for work on street corners, busy busy searching my conscience, angel wrestling, sacked by questions - ***when is one’s work done, and when, when may one, in good conscience, rest?*** this poetry writing, is it not work too? work, a violation of the Sabbath commandment,^ even if it is of no great matter, for by now, this lifelong dialogue internal this contradictory poetic dialectic which has yet to justify the emotive words final or finished, is a seven days of the week affair, undeserving of a day of rest ~~~ as I essay out this Sabbath working poem, in a place of beauteous, natural calm, it's so easy to agree with the passing schooners, all whispering, via genteel southern breezes, later, not sooner, no need to decide, let it ride, answers will come, perhaps, all on their own, perhaps, all on that day when you're within hailing distance, in a flailing, failing-voice-recognition way, of the shores of the Isle of Surcease the answers will come contemporaneously, when you have leave to exorcise from your calendar, Siri's spouting, inexorable, pop-up perpetual reminder that today's first thing on your to do list is: **"live a life of good and worthwhile"** for then, you will have all the answers for the Oliver questions that need perpetual asking Finis ~~~ ^ "Remember the Sabbath day, to keep it holy. Six days you shall labor, and do all your work, but the seventh day is a Sabbath to the LORD your God. On it you shall not do any work, you, or your son, or your daughter, your male servant, or your female servant, or your livestock, or the sojourner who is within your gates." ~~~ http://www.nytimes.com/2015/08/16/opinion/sunday/oliver-sacks-sabbath.html ~~~ Aug. 15, 2015 Shelter Island
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Aug 30, 2015
Aug 30, 2015 at 9:15 AM UTC
In Memoriam: Oliver Sacks "the seventh day of ones life"
**Oliver Sacks passed away today, August 30, 2015 He asked the best questions and never stopped seeking ever better answers. Perhaps now, richer, he has them, but this world is surely a poorer place indeed.** by N. Lipstadt ~~~ ”And now, weak, short of breath, my once-firm muscles melted away by cancer, I find my thoughts, increasingly, not on the supernatural or spiritual, but on what is meant by living a good and worthwhile life — achieving a sense of peace within oneself. I find my thoughts drifting to the Sabbath, the day of rest, the seventh day of the week, and perhaps the seventh day of one’s life as well, when one can feel that one’s work is done, and one may, in good conscience, rest." Oliver Sacks I hope you read the entire essay at the URL below. ~~~ humble humble, mine own own muse~jester self-mocking, calling me out, giving oneself the middle finger, who you? indeed, you, the greater fool, utilizing, thriving on self-contemptuous thoughts, you are no Oliver Sacks, what are you doing messing with his essaying? go back to being a standardized human, spilling the detritus of thine mortal coil, that employs you as a full time slave, a scab-working seven day affair, is that not sufficient? you, in your sixth decaying-decades-day, forsook the ancient Sabbath long ago, keeping it for ****** rest, cheaply tired from the liturgy of straitjacketing of do's and dont's of excruciating detail, that put only distance tween you and your essential spiritual oils Sacks invades directly my eye's clouded storage, now, two brains cross-wired, histories, his story, my story, all too familiar, almost indecently similar here I am, nearer my god than thee, on this Sabbath day of my ancestors, (a hand-me-down gift to the world's conceptual heritage sites) working hard, as an everyday day laborer, looking for work on street corners, busy busy searching my conscience, angel wrestling, sacked by questions - ***when is one’s work done, and when, when may one, in good conscience, rest?*** this poetry writing, is it not work too? work, a violation of the Sabbath commandment,^ even if it is of no great matter, for by now, this lifelong dialogue internal this contradictory poetic dialectic which has yet to justify the emotive words final or finished, is a seven days of the week affair, undeserving of a day of rest ~~~ as I essay out this Sabbath working poem, in a place of beauteous, natural calm, it's so easy to agree with the passing schooners, all whispering, via genteel southern breezes, later, not sooner, no need to decide, let it ride, answers will come, perhaps, all on their own, perhaps, all on that day when you're within hailing distance, in a flailing, failing-voice-recognition way, of the shores of the Isle of Surcease the answers will come contemporaneously, when you have leave to exorcise from your calendar, Siri's spouting, inexorable, pop-up perpetual reminder that today's first thing on your to do list is: **"live a life of good and worthwhile"** for then, you will have all the answers for the Oliver questions that need perpetual asking Finis ~~~ ^ "Remember the Sabbath day, to keep it holy. Six days you shall labor, and do all your work, but the seventh day is a Sabbath to the LORD your God. On it you shall not do any work, you, or your son, or your daughter, your male servant, or your female servant, or your livestock, or the sojourner who is within your gates." ~~~ http://www.nytimes.com/2015/08/16/opinion/sunday/oliver-sacks-sabbath.html ~~~ Aug. 15, 2015 Shelter Island
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the world casts a sad, gloomy shadow in its own sweet and deep slumber
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Jul 17, 2014
Jul 17, 2014 at 9:58 PM UTC
Another Poem (Haiku) From 7th Grade
acknowledged the violets in the window box are pungent sitting on this old wooden floor ankle over ankle eyes closed grounded connected intertwined with consciousness i press my tongue to the back of my mouth create a vibration nung nung nung the amethyst vacillation it pulses from the root of my skullcap i am united with everything around me
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Jun 2, 2017
Jun 2, 2017 at 10:35 AM UTC
sahasrana
this year has been a cavalcade of everything I've done but at the end of every day you've always been my sun the light I rise to even when my body barely moves the aromatic summertime that permeates my room your seventh ring is forming now, we'll see it this July the two and three two thousand ten turned water into wine I drink without a second thought from hands that may be small for they surrender whole in heart, your everything, your all
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May 4, 2017
May 4, 2017 at 4:29 PM UTC
come your seventh jewel in eye
On the Sabbath God Sabbath The command to rest a shadow A cessation of earthly works Today, as Everyday, is Sabbath A return to Eden: Adam restored For the Sabbath was made for Adam And the Son of Adam the Gardener Sabbath is the work in Eden So we too on Sabbath, Sabbath
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Dec 5, 2025
Dec 5, 2025 at 1:42 AM UTC
Sabbath