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#seventeen
Everyone says I’m lucky. Seventeen. Whole life ahead of me like a hallway with too many doors. My grades are fine. My parents aren’t yelling. I’ve got friends, plans for Friday, a phone that lights up when I check it. Nothing’s wrong enough to complain about. That’s what I tell myself when my chest feels tight for no reason in the middle of math class. I laugh loud in the cafeteria. I post like I’m supposed to. I know all the right answers except why I feel empty when I’m not supposed to. Adults say this is the best time. No real problems yet. But every night my thoughts get heavy, like they’re trying to grow up faster than me. I feel guilty for feeling bad. Like I’m wasting something important. Like happiness is a class I’m skipping on purpose. I don’t want anything terrible to happen. I don’t want attention. I just want to understand why being okay feels so exhausting. Everything’s good. That’s the problem. Because if this is fine, why do I still feel like I’m failing at being seventeen?
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Jan 8
Jan 8, 2026 at 1:06 PM UTC
Failing At Being Seventeen
Think about your future, she said I'm seventeen right now In five years I'll be twenty-two My life in five years Imagine your life in five years If you continue down this route She told me it's not a matter of 'if' It's a matter of 'when' When it catches up to me But it won't catch up I'm seventeen right now Living my life as I want it to be
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May 16, 2025
May 16, 2025 at 6:03 PM UTC
Life in Five Years
understand the pain you hide,   The way you keep it locked inside.   You push away, afraid to fall,   But still, I love you through it all.   Your heart may doubt, your mind may race,   But in your eyes, I see a trace.   A love that’s real, a love that’s true,   And I will stand right here with you.   Though you retreat, I’ll never leave,   In every storm, in every grieve.   I see the scars, I feel your fight,   But I’ll keep loving through the night.   So don’t be scared, don’t push me away,   I’ll love you more with each new day.   I understand, but know this too—   My heart will always wait for you.
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Nov 19, 2024
Nov 19, 2024 at 9:52 PM UTC
I Understand But I Love U
seventeen back then meeting you is not what  I yenned late nights and fights we spent sweetest dreams i've been
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Aug 15, 2024
Aug 15, 2024 at 7:30 AM UTC
sweet seventeen
Kindest boy with a library that reached the ceiling and the same personality as my best friend, they would talk about movies in the middle of the street at three a.m. Everyone wanted us to end up together but it would never work out in the end. Moody boy with dark circles that rimmed his eyes, always wanted to talk about romance. He looked at me with the softest eyes but couldn't hold a conversation to saves his life. I don't know why but I always think about him when I'm feeling bright and blue. - dates at seventeen.
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Jul 29, 2020
Jul 29, 2020 at 5:14 PM UTC
dates at seventeen.
Breathe in. Breathe out. Thump. Thump. Thump. The blood fills our hearts and rushes through every crevice of our bodies. One. Two. Three. We breathe in unison as our hearts travel And our thoughts diverge into particles, bright as the stars, but strong as my heart. My cold and bruised cheek makes love with your warm and red cotton shirt. Eyes closed, I take a leap of faith. Failed me before, I cross my fingers and jump. I fall into your arms and dissolve into you. Engulfed by the stench of your sweat, the warmth of the skin baptized me. Swish. Our skin mingles like newlyweds. Honeysuckle. Honeydew. You’re sweet. I miss you. The sun tattoos the red you give me, a reminder of a week on Calypso’s island. Emerald and pearlite. Eyes that enchant. Your freckles make Bermuda’s triangle a perfect landing point. So safe but so unknown. Mary Magdalene No wonder I fall, you are gravity. Bring me down to earth. Away from the Burning sun. Apollo rapes Artemis. As he prophets my fate. Poetry. I ignore the stars and their cries, as together here and now, I am infinite. Soaring like a bird on ecstasy. I believe. A crusade brings me to faith. Love.
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Jul 28, 2020
Jul 28, 2020 at 6:10 PM UTC
July
Even during quarantine Sometimes hanging out with friends On the one day of the year That celebrates YOU Can be the world
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Jul 9, 2020
Jul 9, 2020 at 12:57 PM UTC
Birthdays
are you seventeen yet? have the berries and the shells stained impossibly your youthful heart permanent, have you matured and learned to end sentences in question marks? surely certainty and alack, its absence, haunts all your waking poems, wonder does your mother know what you’ve purloined, stored in you from her withins? so young, so much love oil spilling, do you wonder about the depth of the field you are drilling, extracting - is the soft supple supply, so, close to the surface, endless? life so far is but a draft. take copious notes for the best is yet and I await patiently the novella of your adventures!
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Jan 25, 2015
Jan 25, 2015 at 10:07 AM UTC
my life is just a draft for now (are you seventeen yet?)
ice fire and the cryogene. clear water with most love. sprouting the finest being. The god of love.earth.
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Mar 7, 2020
Mar 7, 2020 at 8:10 PM UTC
The Sagittarian
The clock ticking cuts through my soul You are only seventeen Am I really too old?
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Feb 27, 2020
Feb 27, 2020 at 3:26 PM UTC
Ticking
Seventeen back then ***** and late nights we spent Partying like it's the end Memories I'd never imagined With you whom I'd never yenned But then a day came A vivid memory in Love lane When you left me like a sane Leaving me in pain Crying my heart out in vain And again I regain all the strength Back in the game Same name but on aflame Now all I can say Is that Thank you my seventeen
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Feb 8, 2020
Feb 8, 2020 at 9:41 AM UTC
seventeen
The world comes to me again with my sunlit room. A bird is nestled on the branch outside my window. My troubled-kitten sleep. The ceiling. The pictures in the cracks. My emptiness outside of school. Yes, divine is this space for holy are the tears I’ve shed in it. -
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Jan 29, 2020
Jan 29, 2020 at 3:23 PM UTC
Room, Seventeen
The world comes to me again with my sunlit room. A bird is nestled on the branch outside my window. My troubled-kitten sleep. The ceiling. The pictures in the cracks. My emptiness outside of school. Yes, divine is this space, for holy are the tears I’ve shed in it.
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Jan 13, 2020
Jan 13, 2020 at 8:01 PM UTC
Room, Seventeen
you will thrive in your own cocoon— legless arthropod wriggling out of its leaved shell, crunching on the stem of a marigold’s shrivel. you crawl up the leaves like they’re the steps of a winding staircase, circling and circling to one day step out of your cocoon. you are your own skin— a wing ripped in figure eights of formative tearing. at the bottom of a wind-leaned green tower, you are torn down as if starting all over again, away from the pace of a hundred other caterpillar’d creatures. you are not quite a monarch butterfly, not yet the zebra-patterned black and white, but you bloom in the form of a familiar marigold, a daisy’d curve— thriving as a flower, swaying and alive. you must visit the filial leaves and trace their veins gently. soon you will thrive in your own cocoon; as those plant’d seeds will soon leave legless arthropods wriggling— for how would a caterpillar’s cocoon wither without your leaves crinkling beneath it?
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Dec 3, 2019
Dec 3, 2019 at 8:59 PM UTC
caterpillars
the strangeness of seventeen sets in as the seasons start to shift i am stuck in the surreal stage of dwindling childhood and attempted adulthood contradicting feelings being meshed into one disconcertingly dysfunctional body i feel i am incapable of fully indulging in either my youth or my approaching adulthood i feel i am incapable of being anything at all the naïveté of nine has faded with the wood of my windowsill and i am no longer so sure of myself pressures of eighteen loom in my future along with deafening doubts of both my emotional and literal abilities to provide for myself every morning i wake up in twisted bedsheets and wonder whether teenage me is who i always hoped she’d be, or if something went wrong along the winding road of change and growth and weak attempts to be better so much i wish to do, so many ghosts of the past i wish to crush haunted by the gloom i let in at such a young age, it never truly leaves me i wish i could stop the clock from it’s monotonous tick-tick-ticking and i wish i could stop the sun from disappearing beyond the foggy horizon (i have so much to learn before night falls)
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Nov 16, 2019
Nov 16, 2019 at 8:51 PM UTC
on being seventeen
As I sit here on the bitter edge of seventeen I daydream about the time the grass were green I hate the way your love makes me act like a fein Do you even think of me.
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Jul 21, 2019
Jul 21, 2019 at 8:58 PM UTC
Seventeen
When I was 17 I wanted to be just like it.   A girl of the heedless, of a twisted wind And lashing overstory. Bold in choice eyes burning gallant When I stood not alone On screaming nights In crowded habitation Writing my future’s Threatening tumult Apart from regularity Prerogative, accompanying grail Withered leaves of change. Left with nothing more, But to turn them over.
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Apr 2, 2019
Apr 2, 2019 at 12:23 AM UTC
Intrepid
When I was seventeen I held onto the destiny, But now see i’m eighteen And where I’ve been. All the mountains, Seemed Nearby hills But look I just tumbled down, From the very top All bruised and broken. There’s this wide ocean to dive But they don’t know I drowned. Oh I was just seventeen! doing everything I didn’t mean. But see it’s late... for Yesterday I turned eighteen They say, it is summer that the sun shines the brightest but they don’t know It burned too. it all seemed so small, just like a hole in the gigantic boat, I overlooked for I had just turned seventeen And forgot that someday I’ll be eighteen. It was all just a fancy, a teenage melody, sweet to taste but poison to my body. The carefree vibrant soul nourished my seventeen and nothing was left for the soon to be eighteen. Oh what I have been, just while jumping to the eighteen. A jump takes you upwards but mine was directed only downwards. Down Down down with him they all shouted. Shouts their faces didn’t shout but ones only my backs could hear. Ohh seventeen!! Ooh eighteen!! Wish I had a different Ending to my teen.
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Mar 29, 2019
Mar 29, 2019 at 6:02 AM UTC
seventeen-eighteen
In all honesty, Seventeen syllables just Can’t show all my love.
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Dec 29, 2018
Dec 29, 2018 at 1:26 PM UTC
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