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They say a cat waits in a box, alive and dead until someone dares to look. I know that cat. I’ve worn its skin, breathed both life and ending in the same trembling second. Every truth I open kills another illusion. Every lie I keep lets another ghost breathe. The box isn’t in the lab — it’s in the chest. It hums behind the ribs, a purr, a bomb, a prayer. We all sit there, half dream, half dust, waiting for the moment we finally look, and become whatever survives the sight. —Vazago
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Oct 23, 2025
Oct 23, 2025 at 8:23 AM UTC
The Cat, the Box, and Me
Photosynthetic void—walls bereft of chroma, No photon cascade, no serotonin spectra. A chamber of entropy, Where mitosis mourns in monochrome. Chrono-displacement: We arrived at 8:20, But spacetime dilated— A tachyon chase beneath scalpel orbit. Dual patient states—pre-op/post-op— Entangled in Schrödinger’s queue, Their vitals suspended In probabilistic purgatory. The medic? A quantum migrant. From outpost to outpost, Clinic to cloud, A baryon of ambition, unbound by Hippocratic gravity. Washroom: A microbial biome of neglect. Fee: A kilojoule transaction for placebo empathy. This isn’t care. It’s thermodynamic collapse In a coat of sterilized prestige. He holds the scalpel, Yet forgets: The heart is not a ledger. And time is not his to hoard.
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Sep 30, 2025
Sep 30, 2025 at 10:06 AM UTC
“Clinical Drift: Phase Shift in White”
night wears a skin of cold velvet stippled with pores through which illumination prickles as the intergalactic whiskers of Schrodinger's cat catching the scent of gravity
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Sep 15, 2020
Sep 15, 2020 at 10:33 AM UTC
Ephemeris
It’s Hard Not To Be Optimistic: An Updated Sonnet to Science by Michael R. Burch “DNA has cured deadly diseases and allowed labs to create animals with fantastic new features.” ― U.S. News & World Report It’s hard not to be optimistic when things are so wondrously futuristic: when DNA, our new Louie Pasteur, can effect an autonomous, miraculous cure, while labs churn out fluorescent monkeys who, with infinite typewriters, might soon outdo USN&WR’s flunkeys. It’s hard not to be optimistic when the world is so delightfully pluralistic: when Schrödinger’s cat is both dead and alive, and Hawking says time can run backwards. We thrive, befuddled drones, on someone else’s regurgitated nectar, while our cheers drown out poet-alarmists who might Hector the Achilles heel of pure science (common sense) and reporters who tap out supersillyous nonsense. NOTE: I am a fan of both real science and science fiction, and I like to think I can tell the difference, at least between the two extremes. I feel confident that Schrödinger didn’t think the cat in his famous experiment was both dead and alive. Rather, he was pointing out that we can’t know until we open the box, scratchings and smell aside. While traveling backwards in time is great for science fiction, it seems extremely doubtful as a practical application. And as for DNA curing deadly diseases ... well, it must have created them, so perhaps don’t give it too much credit! Submitted to U.S. News & World Report Dear Editor, While I’m usually a fan of your magazine, as a writer I must take to task the Frankensteinian logic of the excerpt I cited, and I challenge you to publish my “letter” as proof that poets do have a function in the third millennium, even if it is only to suggest that paid writers should not create such outlandish, freakish horrors of the English language. Somewhat irked, but still a fan, Michael R. Burch Keywords/Tags: science, fiction, quantum, physics, Hawking, Schrodinger, cat, DNA, infinite, monkeys, typewriters, Shakespeare, lab, animals, new, features
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May 8, 2020
May 8, 2020 at 4:11 PM UTC
My updated Sonnet to Science
It’s Hard Not To Be Optimistic: An Updated Sonnet to Science by Michael R. Burch “DNA has cured deadly diseases and allowed labs to create animals with fantastic new features.” ― U.S. News & World Report It’s hard not to be optimistic when things are so wondrously futuristic: when DNA, our new Louie Pasteur, can effect an autonomous, miraculous cure, while labs churn out fluorescent monkeys who, with infinite typewriters, might soon outdo USN&WR’s flunkeys. It’s hard not to be optimistic when the world is so delightfully pluralistic: when Schrödinger’s cat is both dead and alive, and Hawking says time can run backwards. We thrive, befuddled drones, on someone else’s regurgitated nectar, while our cheers drown out poet-alarmists who might Hector the Achilles heel of pure science (common sense) and reporters who tap out supersillyous nonsense. NOTE: I am a fan of both real science and science fiction, and I like to think I can tell the difference, at least between the two extremes. I feel confident that Schrödinger didn’t think the cat in his famous experiment was both dead and alive. Rather, he was pointing out that we can’t know until we open the box, scratchings and smell aside. While traveling backwards in time is great for science fiction, it seems extremely doubtful as a practical application. And as for DNA curing deadly diseases ... well, it must have created them, so perhaps don’t give it too much credit! Submitted to U.S. News & World Report Dear Editor, While I’m usually a fan of your magazine, as a writer I must take to task the Frankensteinian logic of the excerpt I cited, and I challenge you to publish my “letter” as proof that poets do have a function in the third millennium, even if it is only to suggest that paid writers should not create such outlandish, freakish horrors of the English language. Somewhat irked, but still a fan, Michael R. Burch Keywords/Tags: science, fiction, quantum, physics, Hawking, Schrodinger, cat, DNA, infinite, monkeys, typewriters, Shakespeare, lab, animals, new, features
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and in the in-between of my heartbeats the empty space where no blood is pumped ...might be a split second, might be a second and a half, or three quarters... we are both dead and alive we are both conscious and lifeless schrodinger's thump thump thump and blank blank blank and alive, dead, alive, dead, alive ... and at any blink of your eye that little spot where your heart rests from all the work it does could be still forever and you never know when your poor, over-worked little heart will give up the will to keep beating because you can't pump blood steadily without break but you can surely halt and be totally grounded the energy trickles away like a dripping tap one day it stops dripping
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Feb 13, 2017
Feb 13, 2017 at 2:29 AM UTC
pulse
Not alive, and not dead, within an unopened box don't remember being fed, not sure if there's a lock I think that I'm breathing, but I can't really tell no coughing and no sneezing, no discernible scent or smell Existence a concept not defined in reality not knowing any answers, or in the darkness see please, please, please open up the top so all my doubts and fears, will ultimately stop
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Dec 22, 2016
Dec 22, 2016 at 12:51 PM UTC
Schrodinger's Cat thoughts (Or "All-states" not the insurance people) :D