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Thu used to live in Saigon. When the war ended, she had fallen in love with a boy who lived next door to her. He was her first love. He would write love poems to her. Sometimes they would hold hands. Once they shared a kiss. They were young and deeply in love. But as the war finished, they moved on from each other. The boy went to live with his family in Australia, while she moved to America. After they broke up, Thu would still think about him. He was the one who dumped her. The breakup crushed her heart. But she didn’t let it mar her dignity. Time passed, Thu moved to Virginia and she went to high school in Fairfax County. The letters started pouring in from the boy. But she had too much pride and she didn’t respond until one day. That was the day that John Lennon was murdered in cold blood. She was heartbroken like every other person in the world. Yet, she also thought of the boy and how much he loved John Lennon. Thu remembers reading the newspaper, seeing John Lennon’s face on the front page of the paper. She took a pair of scissors and cut a square around John’s face. Then she wrote a letter to the boy. And then she sealed the newspaper clipping and the letter in an envelope. Begged her mom over the phone to send the letter to the boy. Her mom was still in Saigon and somehow she made contact with the boy. And she gave the letter to him. A month later, she opened the mail and there was a letter from the boy. She read the letter, stifled a cry, and then proceeded to write. The next day she sent the letter. Thu was happy to read his words. It was as though she could hear his voice through his sentences. Like he was there next to her, looking at her, speaking to her spirit. Days passed. Weeks passed. And then after a month, she realized he wasn’t going to respond back to her letter. She couldn’t believe that he didn’t give her a response. “And that’s the end of the story,” Thu said to her son. “What do you mean that’s the end of the story? That can’t be the end!” “Well you’re the writer, right? Think of an ending.”
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May 8, 2017
May 8, 2017 at 2:41 PM UTC
Ending
Thu used to live in Saigon. When the war ended, she had fallen in love with a boy who lived next door to her. He was her first love. He would write love poems to her. Sometimes they would hold hands. Once they shared a kiss. They were young and deeply in love. But as the war finished, they moved on from each other. The boy went to live with his family in Australia, while she moved to America. After they broke up, Thu would still think about him. He was the one who dumped her. The breakup crushed her heart. But she didn’t let it mar her dignity. Time passed, Thu moved to Virginia and she went to high school in Fairfax County. The letters started pouring in from the boy. But she had too much pride and she didn’t respond until one day. That was the day that John Lennon was murdered in cold blood. She was heartbroken like every other person in the world. Yet, she also thought of the boy and how much he loved John Lennon. Thu remembers reading the newspaper, seeing John Lennon’s face on the front page of the paper. She took a pair of scissors and cut a square around John’s face. Then she wrote a letter to the boy. And then she sealed the newspaper clipping and the letter in an envelope. Begged her mom over the phone to send the letter to the boy. Her mom was still in Saigon and somehow she made contact with the boy. And she gave the letter to him. A month later, she opened the mail and there was a letter from the boy. She read the letter, stifled a cry, and then proceeded to write. The next day she sent the letter. Thu was happy to read his words. It was as though she could hear his voice through his sentences. Like he was there next to her, looking at her, speaking to her spirit. Days passed. Weeks passed. And then after a month, she realized he wasn’t going to respond back to her letter. She couldn’t believe that he didn’t give her a response. “And that’s the end of the story,” Thu said to her son. “What do you mean that’s the end of the story? That can’t be the end!” “Well you’re the writer, right? Think of an ending.”
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the air was thick and heavy the sun was heating up the sky And somewhere in the jungle more men were gonna die The streets were full of people Feral dogs were running free The haze was thick and murky The sun you couldn't see It's a Saigon Sunday Morning Ten more men were going home To  a flag tri-corner folded And a marker of white stone The men were all assembled To load them up with care It was a Saigon Sunday Morning with ten men no longer there The jungle was a minefield The trees were blocking out the light It was ***** trapped like crazy And it seemed like it was night A patrol went hunting "Charlie" But, they were found out first It only took twelve seconds And it turned out for the worst The city never noticed The 'copters flying overhead Whether bringing in supplies Or taking out the dead It was a Saigon Sunday Morning It never changed one little bit The air was always heavy And the alleys smelled like **** Back home the news delivered The families destroyed They were waiting for their loved ones A short time were deployed Ribbons tied around the Oak Tree to support those coming back On a Saigon Sunday Morning With twenty bullets in their back A transport with the bodies Drops fifty more to play the game It's a vicious, endless, circle The procedure's all the same It's a Saigon Sunday Morning Ten more men were going home To a flag tri-corner folded And a marker of white stone
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Jul 20, 2016
Jul 20, 2016 at 11:07 AM UTC
saigon sunday morning