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#replaced
I was the first pancake soft and wrong poured too soon not held for long. Three months in they tried again a quieter hope a newer plan. Not hate not loss, not something cruel, just something shaped like I was fuel. A first attempt a test a try before they let the next one lie. Then she arrived, my sister small, and I am glad she’s here at all. I wouldn’t trade her, wouldn’t undo she’s real she’s loved she’s something true. But truth still hurts in quiet ways, it lingers on in older days. Like batter left too long to set, a shape I can’t stop feeling yet. So I am glad she came to be, but still it sits inside of me the first one poured the first to break, the first pancake that they didn’t take.
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Apr 4
Apr 4, 2026 at 4:05 PM UTC
The first pancake
we used to count when we played badminton 50 being our highest we don't count anymore don't talk too much anymore either the girl who told me to **** myself plays with you now I see you counting, laughing, playing I bet you got higher then 50 didn't you? shes probably better then me anyways isn't she?
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Feb 3
Feb 3, 2026 at 4:10 PM UTC
badminton
I'm soaked. Drenched. Water logged. There's wrinkly fingers and prunely toes- from a wishing well's water spilling in my head. The waterway pulls me down. The drain - body blocked, as a river meets my ocean. I'm water logged. Drenched. Soaked. Nothing but water. Bones of Voss bottles, blood from Icelandic glaciers, spring sourced liquid death.
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Apr 6, 2025
Apr 6, 2025 at 3:06 AM UTC
The Shower
Would my last breath Bring you more relief Than grief? With the sod replaced And me underneath, Would you feel like your life Was returned by it's thief? Would your heart Match your belief? ...please respond... ©2024
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Oct 1, 2024
Oct 1, 2024 at 3:07 PM UTC
~•§•~ Bequeathed ~•§•~
What's the matter with me lately? I've a feeling I'm no good no more Should I have a system check Possibly get the upgrade three point four? Problem is my hardware is outdated Not sure what support I can expect The new software won't install We're incompatible I suspect. Time comes and you begin to think This has truly lost its fun Now I must watch you from the corner here How you carry on with a new honey bun.
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Aug 29, 2021
Aug 29, 2021 at 6:48 AM UTC
Upgrade 3.4
someimes i get jealous. what's there not to be jealous about? she's perfect. she replaced me. and now, im just a background character.
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Dec 9, 2020
Dec 9, 2020 at 1:56 PM UTC
replacement.
We have been apart a week My memory has been all but erased Six years we lasted together Am I so easily replaced? It's like a punch to the stomach Thought of your hands intertwined Tried my best to be there for you In return leave me behind Part of me in denial Can't believe this is real A state of frozen shock Attempting to grasp how you feel I wish the choice was mutual Willing emotions to change If only I could place your heart in my chest Give you mine in exchange You make it look simple For you moving on isn't hard I am the only half affected You clearly are not broken or scarred How could I mean that little to you? All that we've been through together Promised we would start a family You would stay forever Now vows belong to a different girl Robbed from my unsuspecting hands As your misery decreases My sorrow simultaneously expands It hurts to breathe in Hurts to think And hurts to open my eyes Not a second passes without the ache Cannot tell sunset from sunrise The days blur into one Earth keeps spinning around Whole world is shattering No one hears the sound I bear suffering alone Barely speak your name Because if I say the words out loud Can't escape what we became I try to distract from the emptiness Hide in my room and get high Remembering all the warm moments Over and over asking why Why was I not enough for you? Why wouldn't you let me in? Why does she get to have you for her own? Questions make head spin When I finally fall asleep At peace for a little while In dreams I'm in your arms again Morning interrupts my smile Waking is the very worst part Faced with overwhelming void Absence of your touch is crushing Obstacle I cannot avoid I hope eventually I will get stronger Start mending wounds in soul Until that day arrives I'll shuffle feet forward In vain ignore the gaping hole
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Nov 9, 2020
Nov 9, 2020 at 2:23 PM UTC
Replaced
We have been apart a week My memory has been all but erased Six years we lasted together Am I so easily replaced? It's like a punch to the stomach Thought of your hands intertwined Tried my best to be there for you In return leave me behind Part of me in denial Can't believe this is real A state of frozen shock Attempting to grasp how you feel I wish the choice was mutual Willing emotions to change If only I could place your heart in my chest Give you mine in exchange You make it look simple For you moving on isn't hard I am the only half affected You clearly are not broken or scarred How could I mean that little to you? All that we've been through together Promised we would start a family You would stay forever Now vows belong to a different girl Robbed from my unsuspecting hands As your misery decreases My sorrow simultaneously expands It hurts to breathe in Hurts to think And hurts to open my eyes Not a second passes without the ache Cannot tell sunset from sunrise The days blur into one Earth keeps spinning around Whole world is shattering No one hears the sound I bear suffering alone Barely speak your name Because if I say the words out loud Can't escape what we became I try to distract from the emptiness Hide in my room and get high Remembering all the warm moments Over and over asking why Why was I not enough for you? Why wouldn't you let me in? Why does she get to have you for her own? Questions make head spin When I finally fall asleep At peace for a little while In dreams I'm in your arms again Morning interrupts my smile Waking is the very worst part Faced with overwhelming void Absence of your touch is crushing Obstacle I cannot avoid I hope eventually I will get stronger Start mending wounds in soul Until that day arrives I'll shuffle feet forward In vain ignore the gaping hole
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Nov 5, 2020
Nov 5, 2020 at 11:08 PM UTC
Coded Memory
Maybe she's a better fit Maybe you can handle it Because maybe her dreams aren't quite as big Maybe she's a better fit Maybe you won't hold against Me how easy it is to fall for friends Maybe she's a better fit Maybe this is for the best And she'll teach you things that I couldn't Maybe she's a better fit Maybe I needed this To see her in my place so I could love again Maybe she's a better fit Maybe you and I weren't it But I'll always believe that we were worth the risk
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Aug 25, 2020
Aug 25, 2020 at 10:45 AM UTC
A Better Fit
the silence hurts more than the words
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Mar 23, 2020
Mar 23, 2020 at 8:26 AM UTC
f*cking answer my text
It's dark in the room With only little light coming from The lamp at the corner of the room Alone with my thoughts Wishing I wasn't feeling unknown pain Oh how I let my mind wonder With words like... Oh how I wish I didn't Wear this mask as if everything is okay When you the person I thought would never Break my heart I thought friendship was forever between us But I was wrong I was replaced Who knew caring so much for someone was Wrong Who knew trying to keep the one you love safe Could lead them to hating you In the Night I remember our late night calls Of laughter on the most random things People would admire how great friends we Were It's all apart of life I grew up and found my love But I still wanted my love and having you as my Best friend But things happen for the best You found your love And replaced me When I tried managing you and my love I couldn't help to not want to protect you You were my sister You were my shoulder to cry on But I guess when you found someone Our daily hang outs became none Our daily chats about our lives became About me trying to protect you Or you saying things that I knew were not like you Or arguing about our boyfriends As I tried to defend mine Since you didn't know much about mine You were the keeper to my secrets To my deepest thoughts But turns out You were just like everybody else Wanting to advantage of my innocence With my generosity And be okay with being the "hidden plan" When you were with somebody else You said you understood what I was going through When you have never experienced distance From the one you love I wanted to save you Protect you But I guess I couldn't You broke me I shall move on with my life Deal with the things you spread around that are not true Deal with the things I only shared with you To be spread to the whole world I hope you know You made me stronger You also made me trust no one You may wish bad upon me But I only wish good for you This is no hate for you But only love I hope you have a bright future I hope you pursue any dreams you may have But I will no longer be here I know you don't care I have been replaced
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Mar 16, 2020
Mar 16, 2020 at 2:34 AM UTC
I Have Been Replaced
It's dark in the room With only little light coming from The lamp at the corner of the room Alone with my thoughts Wishing I wasn't feeling unknown pain Oh how I let my mind wonder With words like... Oh how I wish I didn't Wear this mask as if everything is okay When you the person I thought would never Break my heart I thought friendship was forever between us But I was wrong I was replaced Who knew caring so much for someone was Wrong Who knew trying to keep the one you love safe Could lead them to hating you In the Night I remember our late night calls Of laughter on the most random things People would admire how great friends we Were It's all apart of life I grew up and found my love But I still wanted my love and having you as my Best friend But things happen for the best You found your love And replaced me When I tried managing you and my love I couldn't help to not want to protect you You were my sister You were my shoulder to cry on But I guess when you found someone Our daily hang outs became none Our daily chats about our lives became About me trying to protect you Or you saying things that I knew were not like you Or arguing about our boyfriends As I tried to defend mine Since you didn't know much about mine You were the keeper to my secrets To my deepest thoughts But turns out You were just like everybody else Wanting to advantage of my innocence With my generosity And be okay with being the "hidden plan" When you were with somebody else You said you understood what I was going through When you have never experienced distance From the one you love I wanted to save you Protect you But I guess I couldn't You broke me I shall move on with my life Deal with the things you spread around that are not true Deal with the things I only shared with you To be spread to the whole world I hope you know You made me stronger You also made me trust no one You may wish bad upon me But I only wish good for you This is no hate for you But only love I hope you have a bright future I hope you pursue any dreams you may have But I will no longer be here I know you don't care I have been replaced
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and then life changed, fast as the flick of a wrist all that was, suddenly wasn’t and i suddenly didn’t e x i s t.
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Jan 4, 2020
Jan 4, 2020 at 10:31 AM UTC
back again
Dealing with being replaced It's a different beast It's not that your less then or that your not as good It's simply means your value is to costly So they found a cheaper one It's just as painful and frustrating No warning no heads up So yes it's difficult Your left with now what Your left with nothing Your trust issues resurface Your belief in what you invested your time is .. it's gone just like that So here , I am now trying to deal with this beast © Jennifer L DeLong 12/08/19
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Dec 8, 2019
Dec 8, 2019 at 10:10 PM UTC
A different beast
Find a new wardrobe Hide my old face Take time out of my schedule To find my new place Maybe I’m still full of life Full of hope and out of time I’ll make me, Take me, Fake me better And I’ll do it all for you
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Nov 17, 2019
Nov 17, 2019 at 3:06 PM UTC
Change My Clothes
Sorry I replaced you But it feels like revenge Remember a few years ago You ignored me time and time again? Now you have a girlfriend And you replaced me, too Remember a few years ago You said you liked me, too? Our relationship went nowhere No feelings were there You weren't there for me But I tried so hard for you I wish that we can get along Put it all behind us now But your feelings of jealousy prevent it And I hate it Can we just be friends again?
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Nov 17, 2019
Nov 17, 2019 at 5:19 PM UTC
Replace
I wish you knew that the thought of being replaced makes me shake There are so many others who you'd be way more interested in It's okay, you can go... I'll be here, working through the heartache. please don't go, i need you. i'll do anything...
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Sep 12, 2019
Sep 12, 2019 at 2:33 AM UTC
Replace Me
So I've been replaced. It's just a fact, can't be erased. Maybe if I close my eyes. They could all go away. She is pretty. She is nice. She looks lovely. She is kind. Now he likes her, when he used to like me. It is over before it could begin. I lost my friends. I've been replaced. That's fine. I didn't need them anyway. I can't get new ones. The school year has been established already. I have no where to sit cause she took my seat. I've been replaced yet again. She is a willing adversary But I don't think I will fight her. I said I wanted to be alone. Now they left me. Now they're gone. Cause they like Azure better. He wants Azure. He used to want me. They like Azure. They used to like me. She took my place. I've been replaced. It shouldn't bother me. They were my friends, and now their hers. I was his crush and he was mine. Now he likes her. I still like him. I've been replaced. -3nwlry
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Aug 16, 2019
Aug 16, 2019 at 9:42 PM UTC
Replaced
i stare at these pages as if the words are going to be enough to bring you back, as if the blood spilled will be all you need to see that i'm right here. yet once again, all i'm left with is ink stained hands and a fracture in my chest.
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Jul 12, 2019
Jul 12, 2019 at 8:58 AM UTC
ink stains
You said your life would be lonelier without me. So tell me, Are you lonely now? Or have you replaced me with someone else
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Jul 1, 2019
Jul 1, 2019 at 4:05 PM UTC
Are you lonely?
My emotions rule my mind my brain lives between my legs Blind devotion is my sight if you'll stay with me in bed My arms are winter's embrace I always have them wrapped The chills keep you in grace while my fingers keep you rapt My mouth, a serpent den sparking silver charm galore My tongue twists round itself tied in efforts to adore My worship signals ships of war through seas of violent storms A fairweather fleet, full and by with you as the port of call A simple harmonic motion with the force to drown an ocean One simple price to pay to be the captain for a day
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May 6, 2019
May 6, 2019 at 1:16 PM UTC
Uncharted