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#rebuke
Am I really that weak? A simple rebuke crumbles my world! What answers should I seek? Either way something will be destroyed! My eyes are red. My nose is wet. My throat is itchy. My mind is away.
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Apr 3, 2023
Apr 3, 2023 at 12:41 PM UTC
"Emotionally Weak"
You're first a miner and collector, then a thinker and rejector. Show the beauty with the words, Not the beauty of the words. Put the truth on golden platter, speak with power, it does matter.
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Aug 18, 2019
Aug 18, 2019 at 11:53 PM UTC
A Rebuke to Poets
Flopping, flipping, Flattering lips Are the company Of fools Or worse: A bitter enemy, Who conceals a heart So cruel But words of truth - Even bold rebukes -   Do accompany The wise They are a friend, And will find favor in, The men of Righteous eyes .
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Aug 4, 2019
Aug 4, 2019 at 11:48 AM UTC
Rebuke Flattery
It can sting, but at the right time, nothing encourages growth more than a proper rebuke, from a true friend, with proper intentions.
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Apr 5, 2018
Apr 5, 2018 at 2:46 PM UTC
Critique
Over the passage of time Things got slowly better. I began to hold my head up; Rejected that lavendar letter; The big “F I had to wear. It originally meant ‘fairy’. Later it meant ****** but They still called me ‘Mary”. They called me ***** And hurtful words like “shim” When they referred to me; They said “her” and not “him”. It was so widespread that The jokes were ever-present. Life for a guy like I was then Was seldom rewarding or pleasant. There was no place back then For those who were different. The kindest word for the media Could only be 'diffident'. The world could only see us As clowns and comic relief But socially we rated somewhere Below baby ****** and a thief. So. we started marching And coming out to our friends. Later we would come out at work But the discrimination did not end. I was told not to put the picture Of my lover on my office desk. And I had to agree or else I would Put my meager salary at risk. When lovers were sick in hospital We were not allowed to decide How they would be treated at all Our access to them was denied. Family members, even haters Were allowed to make the choices And we were brushed to one side As if they couldn't hear our voices. Meanwhile co-workers ranted If we used words like “my husband”. We were treated the same as if We were some ditzy cousin They kept in the attic or a home For the terminally strange and sick. No matter when we stood up We got the ***** end of the stick. Today things are a bit better, But, we have seen the pendulum swing. Strange fake Christians get control And reason stops meaning anything. Jesus, who preached love and peace Is used as a seemingly holy excuse And, still today, many decent people Never see through this awful ruse.
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Aug 1, 2017
Aug 1, 2017 at 5:14 PM UTC
THE LAVENDER LETTER
Over the passage of time Things got slowly better. I began to hold my head up; Rejected that lavendar letter; The big “F I had to wear. It originally meant ‘fairy’. Later it meant ****** but They still called me ‘Mary”. They called me ***** And hurtful words like “shim” When they referred to me; They said “her” and not “him”. It was so widespread that The jokes were ever-present. Life for a guy like I was then Was seldom rewarding or pleasant. There was no place back then For those who were different. The kindest word for the media Could only be 'diffident'. The world could only see us As clowns and comic relief But socially we rated somewhere Below baby ****** and a thief. So. we started marching And coming out to our friends. Later we would come out at work But the discrimination did not end. I was told not to put the picture Of my lover on my office desk. And I had to agree or else I would Put my meager salary at risk. When lovers were sick in hospital We were not allowed to decide How they would be treated at all Our access to them was denied. Family members, even haters Were allowed to make the choices And we were brushed to one side As if they couldn't hear our voices. Meanwhile co-workers ranted If we used words like “my husband”. We were treated the same as if We were some ditzy cousin They kept in the attic or a home For the terminally strange and sick. No matter when we stood up We got the ***** end of the stick. Today things are a bit better, But, we have seen the pendulum swing. Strange fake Christians get control And reason stops meaning anything. Jesus, who preached love and peace Is used as a seemingly holy excuse And, still today, many decent people Never see through this awful ruse.
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I am growing a flower 'Twas rooted in good soil I nurtured and watered my flower It grew strong and bold in color. Then a day came when foreign seed found its place and tainted thy soil As nutrients became scarce I poured more water so the soil became soft as I fought the foreign seed I wept. My flower has rejected the nutrients from my water. I fought till every foreign plant had been removed and rebuked their roots I nurtured and watered my flower It grew stronger and more bold in color I have a new flower in full bloom.
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Sep 29, 2016
Sep 29, 2016 at 5:56 AM UTC
Flower