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#precipitation
built my hope like a sandcastle the truth creeps like a wave turn me into a landslide sacrifice my delusional brain built my love like a raft sail to the nearest place thought that i would find you floating in a wave despair and desperation lack of precipitation a fool is a under statement solitude is debilitating
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Jan 5
Jan 5, 2026 at 6:38 AM UTC
Landslide
~ when love precipitates, selfishness evaporates ~ © 2020 by Mark Toney. All rights reserved.
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Mar 22, 2020
Mar 22, 2020 at 10:52 PM UTC
Gentle Rain
They were always up there, when Moments of cognitive reflection started, Gathering they went from white to grey. They would start to think, rumbling As Liquid thought meet with ice Particles of deliberation. Then thoughts would strike from their Being to the solid below, it would be the Beginning of words as gravity took hold. Precipitation fell, first thoughtful drizzle, Then as words spoken, each raindrop Was voiced on the terrain below. They uttered for what seemed like a Deluge, their words flowed down Streams and rivers to the waiting sea. Words spent, that flowed no longer, not Talked but evaporating skywards to the Waiting white, to be spoken once more.
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 7:38 AM UTC
We Talked Precipitation