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My mother tells me she is impressed that I always seem to land on my feet, but I don't have the heart to tell her that I never fell I came out hold her on my shoulders and as I aged I added each member of my family and then still others that I either drug up and forced to stand upon the pile just to say that someone chose me or people that snuck up on me preyed on me waited until I was about to regain my balance just to jump atop the pile of the "I need you to"s and sink my squat so low that my feet are firmly planed shoulder width apart, knee joins fully collapsed, pushing the floor away with pure balance and the fear of the fall. I have not landed at all.
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Dec 9, 2025
Dec 9, 2025 at 9:25 PM UTC
Hold me
I went to bed early I got eight hours of sleep But I still don't understand why I don't mean to people, what people mean to me I sacrifice anything for the ones I hold close They don't care what I lose, and I'm not often chose I know they don't ask me to but I like to show that I care, I can't help feeling unloved when I'm down and nobody's there I've thrown away people, and money, and time just to make sure my people are perfectly fine But if I speak my mind when I've been insulted then I'm disrespectful and need to **** off then
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Jun 6, 2025
Jun 6, 2025 at 7:32 AM UTC
8 Hours on Empty
I want Younger me To see me Succeed in our dream. That is what my answer should be, But instead its I have to make my father proud Of me. I want to hear those words slip from his mouth That he is proud. I strive with everything I do in life, From the pen that I write To steps I take. Everyday, My goal is to hear him say He is proud. That is all I want in the end. All my hard work My grades My life Down to the outfits, I want it from his lips, His mouth to speak, I AM PROUD.
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Oct 7, 2024
Oct 7, 2024 at 11:36 PM UTC
Future Me's Success-
I am the oldest daughter, I just wish i could be better at it. Even though i have reasons for my actions, Still alone with my guilt i sit. I feel responsibilities, That are not meant for me. And when things are out of my control, There's no way i can let it be. I was raised a soldier, Who felt like i needed to lead an army. So now when it seems like i failed, I hide it away but feel it sharply. Sometimes i feel more like a parent, Than my real parents are. Even though i need being a child the most, And everyday i'm fighting a mental war. I am the monster, I am trying to protect them from. I hate the way i destroy, When it's a healer i want to become. Even though it's safe, I still look out for the danger that may be. Just to see, That the only danger there really is, Is me. -anoeska
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Sep 24, 2024
Sep 24, 2024 at 6:31 AM UTC
Oldest Daughter