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deaf eyes, blind ears, pens down! two of my English Teachers, from high school and college from way way back when, i requested, critiqued my poems, cause they could, ex-teachers...et al They said: Your emails are too short, your poems are too long, we recommend that your quit this, do what we say: pens down! Your poems are travelogues to places in your mind, we’ve got no interest in visiting, Egypt and Exile, cemeteries in a privy, time to get a new travel agency!!! Your imagery, ars obscura to us, everyone but you, despite too many copious notes, which proves our point, you need to smile more and write less. Just because you’ve got creases, lines all across your face, doesn’t mean any wisdom came with them, nor did you listen in our classes, we suggest, resolutely, give it a rest. all the best, & do not ask again
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Dec 26, 2024
Dec 26, 2024 at 9:07 AM UTC
Ex-teachers: deaf eyes, blind ears, pens down!
THERE WIL BE BAGELS! <> New York style, very large, with burnished, glazed-ed crust, almost meaty, a meal nearly self~ sufficient, with grapes of creamed cheese, Scottish salmon, a repast that states, that the week begins well, that thus nourished, we are stronger, fortified to face the onslaughts of life moderne, our enslavement to the endless news recycled cycle that flourishes and face whips us with shades of disaster in mirrors that will never cease to query us if this is truly: our appearance our best selves our self~doubts, refuse scars of prior battles my cafe porcelain mug of 19 oz. washes away my unshaven grimaced grime of mine mind, and I sally forth renewed, meaty, slightly burnished, with a glazed protective patina  of a hardy New Yorker who chews, spits out the chaff of noises that serve  only to efface my native rights to optimism
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May 12, 2024
May 12, 2024 at 9:29 AM UTC
THERE WILL BE BAGELS!
no, not a political divide crossed. no, not switching fandom to the hated other crosstown team, with the clownish bobble head thing. once a meat eater, a meat eater for life. stolidly, boringly straight, waaay too late to switch that side. the switch referred to herein is more profound, straining boundaries of a decades long term relationship. I desire  to switch sides of the bed we sleep on, after decades of habit, that transferred with us when we traveled, moved etc. To each Our Side was the Natural Order of Things, a higher law, immutable, constitutional and ranked higher than the Ten Commandments. over time, my side sank beneath the excess weight of growing old with bad lifestyle habits…a bad back, an aging frame, core muscles that seem to have been decored, made a new firmer bed a necessity, when we called 1-800-Mattress, we two social security retirees, were shocked, shocked! at the hole in our budgets such an expenditure required.  We would be forced to survive on bread (brioche) and water (Pelligrino) for weeks, our only condimentable affordable would be margarine, a pseudo butter made in chemical factories. so, she refused. I sank into deep despair, for who could deny her finger pointing “J’accuse” where responsibility for this truly lay (lie?). marriage counselors demanded exorbitant premium prepayments, Medicare said ha ha, and United Health Care was united in their ***** opposable middle finger but eloquent “Mais Non!” As I write this, Climate Comservationists have confirmed my sinking side is now receding at a rate of 4 cm/year. The implicit implication was at the Great Melt Flood of 2050 that was coming to sink us, I would not be quietly floating down the Hudson River out to a South Pacific isle, but would join Jason Bourne in the green crystal clear waters of the nearby East River, but unlike Jason, I can’t hold my breath for twenty minutes, ergo and ipso facto, I am doom-ed. So I have started a GoFundMe to obtain a new airy mattress  capable of variable soft/hard differential setting on each side, with an inflatable air pumping gizmo just for the end of days. Thanking you in advance and be assured lol your contributions will remain not anonymous. Yours, Extra, Sincerely, Ogdiddynash (Ogdiddynatsch)
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Feb 17, 2024
Feb 17, 2024 at 9:19 AM UTC
switching sides (by Ogdiddynash (natsch)
no, not a political divide crossed. no, not switching fandom to the hated other crosstown team, with the clownish bobble head thing. once a meat eater, a meat eater for life. stolidly, boringly straight, waaay too late to switch that side. the switch referred to herein is more profound, straining boundaries of a decades long term relationship. I desire  to switch sides of the bed we sleep on, after decades of habit, that transferred with us when we traveled, moved etc. To each Our Side was the Natural Order of Things, a higher law, immutable, constitutional and ranked higher than the Ten Commandments. over time, my side sank beneath the excess weight of growing old with bad lifestyle habits…a bad back, an aging frame, core muscles that seem to have been decored, made a new firmer bed a necessity, when we called 1-800-Mattress, we two social security retirees, were shocked, shocked! at the hole in our budgets such an expenditure required.  We would be forced to survive on bread (brioche) and water (Pelligrino) for weeks, our only condimentable affordable would be margarine, a pseudo butter made in chemical factories. so, she refused. I sank into deep despair, for who could deny her finger pointing “J’accuse” where responsibility for this truly lay (lie?). marriage counselors demanded exorbitant premium prepayments, Medicare said ha ha, and United Health Care was united in their ***** opposable middle finger but eloquent “Mais Non!” As I write this, Climate Comservationists have confirmed my sinking side is now receding at a rate of 4 cm/year. The implicit implication was at the Great Melt Flood of 2050 that was coming to sink us, I would not be quietly floating down the Hudson River out to a South Pacific isle, but would join Jason Bourne in the green crystal clear waters of the nearby East River, but unlike Jason, I can’t hold my breath for twenty minutes, ergo and ipso facto, I am doom-ed. So I have started a GoFundMe to obtain a new airy mattress  capable of variable soft/hard differential setting on each side, with an inflatable air pumping gizmo just for the end of days. Thanking you in advance and be assured lol your contributions will remain not anonymous. Yours, Extra, Sincerely, Ogdiddynash (Ogdiddynatsch)
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exactly how white do I want to be? came to terms with my whiteness some(many)times ago, yet, the dentist mixes in, an offer to refresh my yellowed pearlys who’ve served admirably long, so sure footed, long in the tooth…so to speak surprisingly, this puts me off guard, uncharacteristically unprepared, exactly how white do I want them to be? mmm… the scale is as follows (intermediary levels are complicated) 1. Taylor Swift Bright 10. Cowardly Lion Old Yeller and shades in between, I’ve grown accustomed to to my smile, which is closest to the Lion’s accreted usage and wear and tear, and decide to stay as is, to keep my body in a state of synchronicity Doctor puzzled, “why do I smile?” Why Doktor! you’ve commissioned a poem, and now know why your License Plate declare you as Dentist so boldly, You have the power to end racial strife, uniform the populace with bright headlights, and clearly should be allowed to proceed posthaste to any and all life threatening emergencies but my preference is to display many decades of failure, irregular brushes, periodic flosses, my natural color, my god-given grace, and who am I OR ANYONE ELSE be empowered to disturb the natural order of human perfectionism schematics, for to every season, every human being, is a color unique!
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Feb 7, 2024
Feb 7, 2024 at 10:35 AM UTC
exactly how white do I want to be?
con-none-drum-roll please why do “people” wear really short , really tight, skirts, then spend the rest of the day tugging, tugging repeatedly, on an invisible schedule, to con us into lowering the temperature in them overheated classrooms? ogdiddy
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Jul 26, 2023
Jul 26, 2023 at 12:34 PM UTC
con-no-one-drum-roll please
i am a slow dawner, sometimes it takes a moment or a day or even a daze, till I realize that an insult flung my way though it didn’t latch on immediately as her ears are in perpetuity plugged with apple earbuds, it is always a surprise when she acknowledges me in real-time and when it is a subtle insect sized insult, it oft goes steathily around me like a lion in jungle, stalking its less than observant prey, wing aweem away, right past me! so when in a momentary open ear status, I inform how nice it is to hear our actual conversation, she adroitly respondez-moi (en anglais) with the title of this poem…
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Jul 21, 2023
Jul 21, 2023 at 10:44 AM UTC
“at least that’s one of us”
deaf eyes, blind ears, pens down! two of my English Teachers, from high school and college from way way back when, i requested, critiqued my poems, cause they could, ex-teachers... They said: Your emails are too short, your poems are too long, we recommend that your quit this, do what we say: pens down! Your poems are travelogues to places in your mind, we’ve got no interest in visiting, Egypt and Exile, cemeteries in a privy, time to get a new travel agency. Your imagery, ars obscura to us, everyone but you, despite too many copious notes, which proves our point, you need smile more and write less. Just because you’ve got creases, lines all across your face, doesn’t mean any wisdom came with them, nor did you listen in our classes, we suggest, resolutely, give it a rest.
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Jul 29, 2020
Jul 29, 2020 at 10:08 AM UTC
Ex-teachers: deaf eyes, blind ears, pens down!
she inquires why I write so many poems, easy comes reply: It gives me a fantastic living, it makes and gives, each poem, a calculation, a reconciliation of who I am...a miner of the mineral wealth in my veins
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Jul 26, 2020
Jul 26, 2020 at 3:59 PM UTC
she inquires why I write so many poems
woman asks a why-oh-why while-I’m-driving-interrogatory, seeing that tears are rolling down old poet’s face as we transverse these United States, on I-80, Heading to San Francisco, over the George Washington Bridge, commencing in Teaneck, New Jersey, 2,906 miles, not including getting lost. Are you sad for any reason particular? Are we lost already? weeping for my country, for with every mile, see amity and wisdom disappearing, out the open window, both by wind taken, both forsaken, our route is clear, but I see what I most fear, we are not lost, but my country, our poor country is, everywhere good people, desperately seeking mercy now!
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Jun 25, 2020
Jun 25, 2020 at 4:27 PM UTC
Why my eyes are tearing
ahem! phasers on full, having violated someone’s human rights, prepared to be eliminated. on trial for a continuance to keep on breathing, gave a summation speech: *an untitled poem is a diamond with a single imperfection, casting shadow doubt on the flawlessness of a huge finger rock* *it’s an angel without a halo, it’s a cat without any claws, it’s a ice cream sundae sans cherry, it’s a rudderless ship, no captain, it’s rock ‘n roll without **** Jagger, country with no Bonnie or Jolene, female songwriters with no Adele* *it’s a woman you’ve met on a train, falling in love, instantly, whimsically, she says I love you too! but there’s no profit in it, no chance of success, leaves without leaving her name* *it’s a poem without a directive, a legendary, imperfect perfection without a signpost pointer, it’s the only loving worth having, that when lost, unforgiving, the thousandth cut, so when she asks, “forgive me?” your silence chokes, you cannot reply* *incapable of completion, you’re un-entitled, you’re untitled, a blank, whited-out, nameless as well* forevermore
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Jun 10, 2020
Jun 10, 2020 at 6:35 PM UTC
An Untitled Poem is Like a Woman,^ Forevermore
you write of dismembered leaves, pains too sweet, using incontrovertible idiocies like quiet rain, droplets shining like sunlight, edible goodbye cheerios, tastes that burn eyelids colored in blood stained mustard yellow, the gladness of sadness, reversible rivers flowing heavenwards, really? dechambered hearts, ventricular mysteries, brains wearing wooly sport jacket helmets and others, more weirder too, wonderfully inexplicable, other jimmy olsonian beauties, non-lexical non-commonsensical ecumenical hysterical chemical verbal reactionaries, and then you wonder why, PEOPLE ******* HATE POETRY?
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Jun 13, 2020
Jun 13, 2020 at 9:46 AM UTC
you write of dismembered leaves
The P Propensity this benighted dishwasher, is familiar with the P Propensity Theorem, seeing as he (think grizzled, unshaven guy in the back of the restaurant cleaning plates) invented it the need to solve for the need to P, while undertaking prep for the great dishwashing, is mathematically soluble: N, the number of ***** dishes D%, the variable percentage of how *****            (necessitating pre-scrubbing, or not,) M, the meal, breakfast lunch or supper,   (a modifier of N) Ba2, bladder age squared) formula: if P = N(D%) {M_}     b  [where M1 is breakfast, M2 is lunch etc.] is >1, then better get an adult diaper
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Jan 1, 2024
Jan 1, 2024 at 8:51 AM UTC
The P Propensity (The Propensity to P
ah pasta! the quality of good writing is always strained, unlike mercy, always salted and drained, the experience combinatory of all your five senses, together in concert, lusting for each rivulet of spaghetti strands stands, indivisible, under god. calorically sinning individually, defying forking unification, each recalling the where, the what, or the when, but not ah, the how! matters this know-now, the how, this how came calling, fork+ spoon, the resurrection of inspiration, the genetic sequence of past mis-steppes the how of life oft grows spoiled, fuzzy first, because a human assembled it a long ago, the how, but time took it upon itself, to deconstruct so the tomato sauce bolognese inspirational stains exist to remind us how to remain perfect forever poetica est enim propter cibum poetry is what you eat
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Jul 30, 2023
Jul 30, 2023 at 8:56 PM UTC
poetry is what you eat
we re-plant hydrangeas annually, which our ravenous tick carrying, **** deer, munch contentedly, under our window, when we are sleeping. In the last ten years, today, I saw my first solitary flowering accidental. as I’m in poem mode, it occurs to me that the first line is incorrect; for the sake of brevity, it should read: we retentives, we re-plant hydrangeas analy
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Aug 4, 2024
Aug 4, 2024 at 3:04 AM UTC
we re-plant hydrangeas annually
I am the dishwasher man. a responsible handyman needs good tools, given pots and pans to scrub with burnt black stains, not of mine making, even more infuriating, of twenty ++ years of prior Duration. (definitely deserving of a capital D) went to the supermarket seeking vision, guidance and a variety of choices, for a product specific, not Made in China, lest we purposely allow ourselves to be poisoned, so purchased a Scotch-Brite *** scrubbing brush of hecho mexicano origin Now I stare at the Amazon screen, undecided how many replacement brush heads I should acquire, the cheapest unit price is for a box of 1000, which no smart store of intelligent repute would ever carry, (cause you would never come back) and which if I actually use up, an even steven 1000, it means  I’ll be scrubbing pots from on high. but my awe for genius wisdom is further esteemed, as they say of it, Amazon, makes you buy mostly what you don’t need, very cheaply or “each according to his own stupidity.”
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Jan 1, 2024
Jan 1, 2024 at 8:52 AM UTC
I am the dishwasher man. (each according to their stupidity)
every painting in the house is modestly crooked due to the twinning effects of vibrations and moon-full spoonfuls of gravity. causing the tensile strength of the wires to pensile (1) slowly surrender to point downwards. It occurs, perhaps it’s me that’s crooked, but that’s just plainly in depth insanity, like writing a thousand poems in one 14 day long sitting., now that’s croissant curvey crazy nah, not me, not totally nuts yet, after all these years, though not for crooked trying.
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Jul 23, 2023
Jul 23, 2023 at 10:45 AM UTC
every painting in the house is crooked
if my true name you uncovered, and called me out by same, without spasm-ing, first middle and the lost at-last you, like me would wonder what the heck my parentals were imbibing at such a joyous occasion, my cursed naming ceremony but thanks to them, I’ll be buried with a full head of fair thicker hair; that’s why parents say: **** good thing you kids don’t get to pick your parents names!”
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Jun 24, 2020
Jun 24, 2020 at 12:21 PM UTC
if my true name you uncovered
man cave versus she-sheds. A man I know, finished his basement, a skilled builder, he built it himself and installed the masculine items prerequisite, recliner and pool table, refridgerated mugs etcetera. When asked how he was enjoying his privy isle he replied, it’s ok, but haven’t been down there much lately, seeing as the pool table is used primarily for folding laundry, and the recliner reserved for her unmentionables. he has shed his man-cave secondarily to she that rules, Cardi-be-Cleopatra, she rules, the empire, now it’s her she-shed, he openly cried real manly tears to me, fellow member of hu-man-unkind. one more, just another finished man, a home & cave-less bro…
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Jul 24, 2023
Jul 24, 2023 at 7:27 AM UTC
man cave versus she-sheds
many women do yoga. many men do *** women prefer, ah, never mind, you know how that ends! No? If we draw a Venn diagram, one circle, yoga, the other, *** in the middle,   overlapping sector, is the Venn Zen Intersextion
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Jun 24, 2020
Jun 24, 2020 at 12:39 PM UTC
yoga and *** circles (for mathematicians)
asked what I desire for breakfast, replied, scones and crumpets from the good ole U. of K. with a cups of celebratory Jamaican coffee  (tee-hee) she did not even bother to snort in an elegant derisory manner, just walked away, just turned on her high heeled sneakers, (a very worthy sight), “prithee, grilled cheese sandwiches, it is then,” quoting the Bard alright. No need to ask me which cheese, she experientially knowledgeable in my hard milk acculturation, one will be home grown ameddican, real cheese, not Kraft “cheese food” the other swiss, unless smoked mozzarella is in the larder, (who has a larder anymore?) as I am in matters of cheese, I’m a transgender, formerly bisexual, but still a questionable, open minded, but globalist willing to entreat any country that values cheese above war
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Aug 13, 2023
Aug 13, 2023 at 9:43 AM UTC
What I desired for breakfast
when the kids were young, invested in fancy luggage, cause we needed vacations to get away from them. These luggages, had them roll to the number combination numbers locks which was where technology was back in the nineteen eighties, when I was a young husband and father, using the year of their birth as a four digit code of course, I programmed them both incorrectly, and they, those kids, now adults maybe, who can’t remember anything good I’ve ever done for them, but remind every time they come to see me, which is pretty much never, about ******** up the year of their naissance, which is a fancy french word, for “kids are a pain in the ***
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Aug 4, 2024
Aug 4, 2024 at 3:06 AM UTC
when the kids were young
my father was a pretty perfect guy, beloved by most and especially children. He was a ‘gallant’ (gaaa~laant) of european extraction, who tipped his homburg and greeted everyone by name, forgetting none and who was related to whom, or their distant cousins in Kansas City, with whom he stayed when he was a traveling salesman, in 1933. My only complaint, was and remains, he never went with me to Yankee Stadium, saw the emerald green diamond miracle in the Bronx hidden, as he, small businessman, worked six days a week, and had no time for juvenile sports pastimes, otherwise, he was my All-American… Otherwise, he was perfect
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Jul 25, 2023
Jul 25, 2023 at 11:11 AM UTC
my father was a pretty perfect guy
****** Blondie, the weather idiot predicted rain and thunderstorms. planned extensively a day of inside activities, that are time sensitive. Yes, of course, the sun is shining causing my ladies to question my witticisms, cautionary tales, my type “A” personnalité, worse!   mocking my key bulge (see nose above) as a signal sign of my increasing decreasing, procreative masculinity, due to lead metallica poisoning. **** those blondes, gorgeous weather persons, never forget, look out the window! or in other words, trust Clairol but verify it’s “natural” sheening ain’t just a monkeyshining! June 2020
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Sep 21, 2023
Sep 21, 2023 at 12:27 PM UTC
**** those blondes!
there are so many types of pockets, especially for jeans. my favorite is the “ticket pocket,” that little pocket stitched inside a bigger front pocket, maybe also called a “watch” pocket, supposedly a cowboy designation for safeguarding their chained pocket watch receptacle. who ya kidding? anyway, a second naming more to my liking: seems cowboys put their train ticket where they could easily retrieve them as the conductor conducted himself properly, asking each passenger after every stop to show his ticket. so it came to be, Levi gave us pockets of variety, durable, baggy ones to carry our jewels comfortably, one for tightly ticket embracing, and further inspired that sewn on the hat of every railroad conductor, a russian motto, Trust but Verify. I myself use the ticket pocket for my keys, which in any other jeans pocket, movement causes cruel and unusual pain, but not if that huge bunch of jangling instruments of torture are tightly tucked in their own prison interior, incapable of doing hot yoga or any other stupid exercise requiring Bo jingling jangling movement Just don’t you dare ask me what the purpose of each key be, it is just a tortured secret for men in the private parts of their soul, to confess that keys carried for three houses ago, are a metallic proofs that men are indeed as dumb as women think they are... show me a rusted lock somewhere, I got an hour to try ‘em all
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Jun 26, 2020
Jun 26, 2020 at 2:37 PM UTC
so many different kinds of pockets