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ogdiddynash
ogdiddynash
M she inquires why I write so many poems, easy comes reply: / It gives me a fantastic living, it makes and gives, each poem, / a calculation, a reconciliation of who I am... / a miner of the wealth in my daddy’s veins
*And whatever happened To Tuesday and so slow*? Van Morrison’67 ~~~ in the young days and nights of a youthful summer, Van’s Brown EyedGirl played endless on the transistor radio the dry heat was endless just as well, and the slow was just the way the time was counted, when it was counted, which wasn’t too often was 17 years of age with no cares, worries did not exist, ‘cept when I dreamed and conspired inside how I was gonna get that blue eyed blonde devil temptress to kiss me before the new school year commenced at the quarry where we all went swimming, the music asking questions, that nobody knew how to answer, whatever happened to Tuesday, and so slow, so slow, we never knew what the name of the day was, no reason to check the farm implements & hardware store calendar, or to X off any day special, for there was no such thing No, never got to kiss her, left the so slow, me and a buddy. took a rebuilt junker and set out for Cali, where the girls, where the beautiful girls, just surfed and smiled, and the nighttime beach parties went on till the when the last person left so quiet not sure how, ended up, in Seattle & Oregon, where met I my brown eyed girl whose car was over heating, steaming on a coastal highway, on a Tuesday, and it was no longer slow, it was treasured fast and a whirlwind blast, and that was 2025 - 1968, so 57 eons, nowadays, know what the name of every day is, where I’ll be and for how long, but truth be told, in my happy moments if you asked, could not tell the day, the time, when the brown eyed girl and I smile into each other’s eyes, and so slow is the sweetness of our lives,
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Dec 20, 2025
Dec 20, 2025 at 11:42 AM UTC
Summer ‘67: And whatever happened To Tuesday and so slow?
*And whatever happened To Tuesday and so slow*? Van Morrison’67 ~~~ in the young days and nights of a youthful summer, Van’s Brown EyedGirl played endless on the transistor radio the dry heat was endless just as well, and the slow was just the way the time was counted, when it was counted, which wasn’t too often was 17 years of age with no cares, worries did not exist, ‘cept when I dreamed and conspired inside how I was gonna get that blue eyed blonde devil temptress to kiss me before the new school year commenced at the quarry where we all went swimming, the music asking questions, that nobody knew how to answer, whatever happened to Tuesday, and so slow, so slow, we never knew what the name of the day was, no reason to check the farm implements & hardware store calendar, or to X off any day special, for there was no such thing No, never got to kiss her, left the so slow, me and a buddy. took a rebuilt junker and set out for Cali, where the girls, where the beautiful girls, just surfed and smiled, and the nighttime beach parties went on till the when the last person left so quiet not sure how, ended up, in Seattle & Oregon, where met I my brown eyed girl whose car was over heating, steaming on a coastal highway, on a Tuesday, and it was no longer slow, it was treasured fast and a whirlwind blast, and that was 2025 - 1968, so 57 eons, nowadays, know what the name of every day is, where I’ll be and for how long, but truth be told, in my happy moments if you asked, could not tell the day, the time, when the brown eyed girl and I smile into each other’s eyes, and so slow is the sweetness of our lives,
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and still I have to stop and think, is it forwards, backwards, and do they know about Daylight Savings TIme, saving who from what, I jokingly ask myself, to give my sweet angst, a a better coloration, though these days, constant comets pass over us daily but he is savvy smart, and yes, extraordinarily **** and  knows my routines (he thinks), better than me, so when I drive  to  run in Santa Monica, alternating days, he texts in simultaneous harmony a minute after my too early alarm has me stumbling into semi-Cali- quake-fulness we are years apart, not so many that it's remarkable, just big enough gap, to make life problematical; his  career launched, serious guy,, me well, i'm a perpetual student, when not modeling, and my mom, GBH,  and my over pestering, now single parent, demonstrate her mathematical abilities by telling me how closehow close  is 30 is when one subtracts  my "aging pores," & how little sleep she gets because she in in her EST zone but when he calls, he calls at irregular times, "to better gauge my mood," how he, my day surveils, so he can adjust to my chemical imbalance, an area of his expertise; and its sweet, and it works, and too often, I ramble while listens, for his day is ending, and mine is far from fulfillment he is European, full of genteel words and english language quips, especially since he believes he can still sway with his sophisticated endearments;  but what he doesn't know in the late afternoon, his bedtime, while  he is conducting a sweet nothing roundup of   adoration, my hand slips between my legs, and my envisioning of his lean, broad body being in my interior so tight, for I have crossed my crushing legs behind his back pushing him inside, it nearly makes  breathing impossible HE LOVES MY SOfT TONES, at this hour, my distracted noises, til he says you sound so tired, I'll let you go; and I willingly, comp-licitly, give him my heated best love notes, and teary gasps, when I mumble see you soon, thinking in my dreams, for I know his schedule, and exactly when I'll be landing and exactly how long it will be, till we, are within each other, without any interference, of lairs and sun flaring interruptions, from time and space, those scientific laws of this tiring annus horribilis
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Aug 13, 2025
Aug 13, 2025 at 12:39 PM UTC
(Explicit) my bf lives/works time zones away/double digit hours
and still I have to stop and think, is it forwards, backwards, and do they know about Daylight Savings TIme, saving who from what, I jokingly ask myself, to give my sweet angst, a a better coloration, though these days, constant comets pass over us daily but he is savvy smart, and yes, extraordinarily **** and  knows my routines (he thinks), better than me, so when I drive  to  run in Santa Monica, alternating days, he texts in simultaneous harmony a minute after my too early alarm has me stumbling into semi-Cali- quake-fulness we are years apart, not so many that it's remarkable, just big enough gap, to make life problematical; his  career launched, serious guy,, me well, i'm a perpetual student, when not modeling, and my mom, GBH,  and my over pestering, now single parent, demonstrate her mathematical abilities by telling me how closehow close  is 30 is when one subtracts  my "aging pores," & how little sleep she gets because she in in her EST zone but when he calls, he calls at irregular times, "to better gauge my mood," how he, my day surveils, so he can adjust to my chemical imbalance, an area of his expertise; and its sweet, and it works, and too often, I ramble while listens, for his day is ending, and mine is far from fulfillment he is European, full of genteel words and english language quips, especially since he believes he can still sway with his sophisticated endearments;  but what he doesn't know in the late afternoon, his bedtime, while  he is conducting a sweet nothing roundup of   adoration, my hand slips between my legs, and my envisioning of his lean, broad body being in my interior so tight, for I have crossed my crushing legs behind his back pushing him inside, it nearly makes  breathing impossible HE LOVES MY SOfT TONES, at this hour, my distracted noises, til he says you sound so tired, I'll let you go; and I willingly, comp-licitly, give him my heated best love notes, and teary gasps, when I mumble see you soon, thinking in my dreams, for I know his schedule, and exactly when I'll be landing and exactly how long it will be, till we, are within each other, without any interference, of lairs and sun flaring interruptions, from time and space, those scientific laws of this tiring annus horribilis
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“you should watch for what’s good and say so, watch for what’s bad and say that, and be afraid of neither observation. If you lose your temper, lose it; if you find yourself unexpectedly moved, admit it. Keep your tools, compass and gyroscope, clean, dry and level.” Peggy Noonan, columnist, author <•> good Christmas Eve advice getting harder to find, wheat from chaff, and all that, what’s sensible, what’s defensible, and what actually feels A~ok! as in perhaps, it actually could be, pause to think, correct? and:or:heck, even right so if you read the above , take it from a couple of senior geezers, you just got a holiday freebie! yeah, yeah, keep your powder dry, just ain’t the same, sorry… we talking tools and fools here, them that keep you on a course of your owned free choice, with an assist, to  know your position & to never to lose your balance when everybody is instantly telling you what to think, take that long pause, use your tools, to pick the problem up, Rubik’s cube it, twist and shout, when the solution emerges ‘tis the season for preaching and overreaching, but use this quietime pause, look internal, and keep your instinct and inside tools oiled, and mind open, clarified wish you then, clear eyes, open ears & love; wisdom, that’s up to you, but, you’re a billionaire for sure, use the grey cells you were given thoughtfully & well, and keep on looking for ‘what’s a good way,’ which is always an everlasting work                              nat lipstadt
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Dec 26, 2024
Dec 26, 2024 at 9:23 AM UTC
December 24 thoughts: “Keep your tools, compass and gyroscope, clean, dry and level.”
“you should watch for what’s good and say so, watch for what’s bad and say that, and be afraid of neither observation. If you lose your temper, lose it; if you find yourself unexpectedly moved, admit it. Keep your tools, compass and gyroscope, clean, dry and level.” Peggy Noonan, columnist, author <•> good Christmas Eve advice getting harder to find, wheat from chaff, and all that, what’s sensible, what’s defensible, and what actually feels A~ok! as in perhaps, it actually could be, pause to think, correct? and:or:heck, even right so if you read the above , take it from a couple of senior geezers, you just got a holiday freebie! yeah, yeah, keep your powder dry, just ain’t the same, sorry… we talking tools and fools here, them that keep you on a course of your owned free choice, with an assist, to  know your position & to never to lose your balance when everybody is instantly telling you what to think, take that long pause, use your tools, to pick the problem up, Rubik’s cube it, twist and shout, when the solution emerges ‘tis the season for preaching and overreaching, but use this quietime pause, look internal, and keep your instinct and inside tools oiled, and mind open, clarified wish you then, clear eyes, open ears & love; wisdom, that’s up to you, but, you’re a billionaire for sure, use the grey cells you were given thoughtfully & well, and keep on looking for ‘what’s a good way,’ which is always an everlasting work                              nat lipstadt
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~for Marissa Fanelli< *living with a woman who loves her some vampires, is difficult for  endless is the sweet sorrow, of never having known the thrill of someone biting her neck for a transformative transfusional exchange of body fluids, makes her sigh periodically as she applies her makeup Dutiful man, you do something about it! I sweep in when damsel is vulnerably unsuspecting, sweeping her blond tress from her neck, applying combinatory kisses and nibbles, she shivers delightedly, b u t inevitably indubitably emits a gasping sigh of great and delicious length, signaling she must finish her makeup applications lest she be forced to begin all over again and her deep regret that her-nice jewish lover is,* still no zombie p.s. and when she makes a sign of the cross using both pointer fingers, to shoo me away I retort “Boy oh boy lady, have you got the wrong zombie”
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Dec 26, 2024
Dec 26, 2024 at 9:11 AM UTC
Still no vampire!
deaf eyes, blind ears, pens down! two of my English Teachers, from high school and college from way way back when, i requested, critiqued my poems, cause they could, ex-teachers...et al They said: Your emails are too short, your poems are too long, we recommend that your quit this, do what we say: pens down! Your poems are travelogues to places in your mind, we’ve got no interest in visiting, Egypt and Exile, cemeteries in a privy, time to get a new travel agency!!! Your imagery, ars obscura to us, everyone but you, despite too many copious notes, which proves our point, you need to smile more and write less. Just because you’ve got creases, lines all across your face, doesn’t mean any wisdom came with them, nor did you listen in our classes, we suggest, resolutely, give it a rest. all the best, & do not ask again
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Dec 26, 2024
Dec 26, 2024 at 9:07 AM UTC
Ex-teachers: deaf eyes, blind ears, pens down!
WHY are you reading and writing poetry today? why not? **** straight & just be the cause that's right, even writing just keep it short/\ sweet (self mocking Ha) there are actual family members who might require a shocking paddling to the heart when conducting their year end review as for us the shock, the awe, of so many fine new poens opening is a sufficient charger to the parts that need restarting when we wake up, no matter our diversification our diversions and divisions, reading new words ancient in the Reforming, are dividends and that keep on after the electrolytes, caffeine & other stimulies stimulants that keep us going a golden charging, Plenty good enough Ps and I delight in many new ones discovering my prose, welcoming them like my newborn children all my own, and raising them and the new-for all-new combinations to see their Forthcoming with/\ by bringing them to your attention, and that is my Jewish own creche, my own scene of all of god’s chosen poets nativities and did not plan to go in & on but nothing stirs the sparks, like thinking that every minute a birth is celebrated and I am blessed to be among the witnesses nml
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Dec 26, 2024
Dec 26, 2024 at 9:03 AM UTC
Why today? **** straight & just be-the-cause
~for you, girl~ words have definitions; shades; moods, even within the contextual moment, the coloration sometimes is discolored, one person frantic is another’s normal passing fancy insanity quiet overwrought silliness frantic is a continuum’s conundrum and oft the hubbub coverhup lends a veneer of urgency importance when knowledge acquisition is iron irony, best when well chewed, quietly considered and consumed with the perspective of addition and subtraction what we know is more than yesterday, and less than what we will one day own, for the only purity of learning is that’s final refining is never ending the artifice of deadlines, gradation vis-a-vis all the rest, is not a distinction  worthy of distinguishing your human value is beyond compare exactly! the greatest of valued adders to the world body of understanding put the race of ego to one side, and so should we all, not be ****** in by the imposition of qualifiers you are quality, and that is the only qualification you will ever acquire and require and in my naïveté I reflect looking back and give you here the free use thereof, of its worth, you will determine but in summary judgement: always keep thinking ridicule is ridiculous but best when applied by oneself to oneself with a *** did I really think:say that?” and laugh out loud at our human foibles, especially our own, with a wry smile, admitting some of things we conjure up in all seriousness are are the funniest things we’ve ever heard
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Dec 6, 2024
Dec 6, 2024 at 9:58 AM UTC
The Frantic Life
~for you, girl~ words have definitions; shades; moods, even within the contextual moment, the coloration sometimes is discolored, one person frantic is another’s normal passing fancy insanity quiet overwrought silliness frantic is a continuum’s conundrum and oft the hubbub coverhup lends a veneer of urgency importance when knowledge acquisition is iron irony, best when well chewed, quietly considered and consumed with the perspective of addition and subtraction what we know is more than yesterday, and less than what we will one day own, for the only purity of learning is that’s final refining is never ending the artifice of deadlines, gradation vis-a-vis all the rest, is not a distinction  worthy of distinguishing your human value is beyond compare exactly! the greatest of valued adders to the world body of understanding put the race of ego to one side, and so should we all, not be ****** in by the imposition of qualifiers you are quality, and that is the only qualification you will ever acquire and require and in my naïveté I reflect looking back and give you here the free use thereof, of its worth, you will determine but in summary judgement: always keep thinking ridicule is ridiculous but best when applied by oneself to oneself with a *** did I really think:say that?” and laugh out loud at our human foibles, especially our own, with a wry smile, admitting some of things we conjure up in all seriousness are are the funniest things we’ve ever heard
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do not address you with frequency but here, where I am disguised in a public facing place, it is easy relief that recent reversals, have occurred, contusions upon my self, body, mind, scattered have combined to cause an erosion of soul of course this matters little to you, but nonetheless will inform anyone’s eyes who happenstance falls upon this page, and I am gripped by paralysis. life-by-me- threatened, and I’m ashamed of myself, but offer no forgiveness nevertheless what I value has not changed, but my core is wilting, eroded by the confluence of circumstances, aging of time, and no one to ask for guidance, or support genuine, I’m soft froze exterior, interiors rocky ice ask you do nothing. but someday - when?circumstance will circle back, perchance to this literate plea, that asks for nothing, posting gone unnoticed, on a bulletin board I reserve the next three lines to unsatisfactorily not explain, just to inform, erosions of pieces of me, now gone in these two lines, a fine of fine will have to be paid, in a currency of cell’s dying quietly and here, I, Ogdiddy, cease, in every way possible
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Dec 6, 2024
Dec 6, 2024 at 8:27 AM UTC
the erosive effect of soul contusions
Short Term Memory Loser <> the joke on you, with foolish hobgoblins hobbled, them youse~peeps whom to themselves think “oh, I’ll never forget this precise precious momentary fragment” haha ha on you! more fragging(1) of our minds into piecemeal shards claiming, boasting, that it will live forever within this rented storage unit, leased & renewed analy, upkeep-no-needed haha ha on me, the ironic ticking pricking of my brain, when least expected, in my kitchen sinking awaning, days, the poem potions potentials, fly to mind with the fast and furious, with missile accuracy entering, gleaming, but explode before I can script the scribble, and the notional dissipates into ****** ashy, left with a title, no body, a perma-headless *** mulish poet hapless, sap~less, sticky stuck with no idea what my intended writ was to be it, and I consign that.title to death by draft, never to be credited created or crafted, cause that’s how bad my short term memory has devolved or more dimply put, slam, bam, thank you man, the whole blows up faster than one can utter our American anthem, *** IS WRONG with the Dallas Cowgirls?
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Nov 21, 2024
Nov 21, 2024 at 7:40 AM UTC
(Unpoemed) Short Term Memory Loser
today, walked the river arcade, by the river~side. same, where, & when, a decade earlier and a laugh ago,   we performed a daily differential calculus of the distance to that line, a watermark, where my accidental drowning would be insurance covered don’t recall, if back then, poetry writin’ was a good   a daily companion, or-even a mere passing acquaintance but went to all-in-all-alone-freedom, found riches, yet still pressed in rags of remorse, mourning surely, until & still a woman, or three, rated me a good looking edible, even if only didn't always dress in black, head to toes, like an extra cool new yorker, or an attendee at my own fun~ereal since those days, gallons millions, zillions of brackish seawater has flowed out to sea as far as England, Philippines, New Zealand, whichever be connected to the rain water of Adirondack mountains flowing past East 57th Street, my salty tears replenished, but time changed the causation, from oy to joy in simp terms that rhymes…with me and yours water woman water woman water makes the heart capable of weeping tears of joy, oh! happy drowning how do you cross from woman to water, that, now I walk on a water bridge of loving hard, steel & liquidity of concrete, smooth roughness became the path to loving living
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Nov 21, 2024
Nov 21, 2024 at 7:37 AM UTC
simple rhymes by the waterside