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#offense
Here I am, thinking again Trying to figure out how to win The best offense is a good defense Hold that thought, love will knock you off the fence What looks good now may not last Everything that happens is in the past No turning back, no wishing for change Just trying to understand why life is so strange Hold on to your heart, get a tight grip Love is the blisters that come from a whip Leaving a mark for all lovers to see Only bleeding for you and me C.E. Uptain 4/27/26
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May 1
May 1, 2026 at 4:43 PM UTC
For all Lovers to See
Thanks for saying “no offense” before insulting me - that really cleared things up.
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Aug 8, 2021
Aug 8, 2021 at 11:02 AM UTC
uh-huh
your gun it is ignorance. arogans it's your name. contempt inside your veins. you look at me from upside down. i read a scorn inside your lips. the jeer was freezing on your eyes. you thought i'm fool? but i am not.
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Nov 22, 2019
Nov 22, 2019 at 8:01 AM UTC
Untitled
I'm a reader, of words, lines, and prose just goin where-ever, that flows Taking a minute or two, composing reply other times in fits, sputters, and throes Comments left, here, there and when just a dribble and smudge, of my pen My meanings not always that clear just words from me, now, and then
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Dec 15, 2017
Dec 15, 2017 at 8:59 AM UTC
Galvanized Exhilaration
no speak evil see no evil evil no hear world lies dumb blind deaf incapacitated
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Jun 10, 2017
Jun 10, 2017 at 4:26 AM UTC
No Offense
Blessed is the man who does not take offense I'm speaking in the present tense There is no sitting on the fence This poem will now take me hence... An offense will make us stumble Forget the bluster and the bumble Our defense will surely crumble In all things we must be humble When we see another's error Are we really all the fairer? Look Within it will be clearer Are we looking in a mirror? When we see reflection's bust Do we see lines? Perhaps some crust? Being honest is a must! What have we done **that WE can't trust?** True of the bird as well the bee We are all one cloth you see! Self-assessment makes you free! This is true humility. SoulSurvivor (C) 7/23/2016
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Jul 23, 2016
Jul 23, 2016 at 12:51 AM UTC
Upon Taking Offense
When the spit leaves his mouth like acid, Speckles my face with scars and tears, Insults are last place in my minds marathon. The self depreciation is a serrated knife, Plucking at the strings in my chest. And with each snap, I am closer to collapsing.
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Jan 6, 2016
Jan 6, 2016 at 11:00 AM UTC
Offense
When I dusted off the counter today I found something that was lost before Jesus was there by the sink, sitting down right next to the toaster he looked at me and asked for a coaster he and the cherubs were drinking diet soda, and watching the ants eat my sugar I asked him three questions and hear what they are why are you sitting by the toaster? why in the hell would you want my coaster? and didn't I ask you to leave last summer? Jesus said he wanted to live in my heart first the counter then my heart what's next Jehova, my first born child? yes actually he said, before he snorted and growled I really do want your first born child would you like a brochure for heaven? its pretty wild there, and the bread's all unleavened No thanks No thanks
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Dec 10, 2015
Dec 10, 2015 at 4:59 AM UTC
Jeebus
*"Pride masked the true condition of the heart. It keeps you from dealing truth. It distorts your vision. You never change when everything is fine. Pride hardens your heart and dims the eyes of understanding. It keeps you from the change of heart - repentance - that will set you free."* - John Bevere
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Nov 19, 2015
Nov 19, 2015 at 6:16 AM UTC
Pride
How did it feel at the end ?.. were your legs as heavy as your heart as you took your last journey, upwards .. all the way to the top. What led you to this place?. so broken, so defeated.. I can only imagine how wounded you must have felt, knowing your demise was considered entertainment to the crowd below. Goading you to jump, baying shamelessly for your blood. Updating social media status' .. phones pointed upwards so they could capture your misery and share it with the world. That must be a very lonely place to be .. . Did they not comprehend that you were someone's child, perhaps someone's Father. Their lack of compassion could only have added to your brokenness, your feeling of being alone, misunderstood, unloved. They left you no options, encouraging you to die like that, when you so obviously needed a kind voice, a kind heart to show you the way down to safety. Did they enjoy the show ..as you came falling from the sky, did the crowd fall silent as you hit the ground ... LIFELESS .. Do they even comprehend how greatly they have sinned? May I apologise on behalf of humanity, or share your grief for the lack of. I hope you have gained the peace, you so desired and didn't get whilst here on earth. (for the guy who commited suicide, jumping from a multi storey this weekend, spurred on by the crowd below) (msrigs 17/03/2016)
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Mar 18, 2015
Mar 18, 2015 at 9:47 PM UTC
"FORGIVE THEM FATHER FOR THEY KNOW NOT WHAT THEY DO"
Excuse-me, Was that offensive to you? I was just pointing out Something obvious. Oh dear, If it were clear I am sorry to disappoint It was so smart I missed your point.
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Jan 12, 2015
Jan 12, 2015 at 7:42 AM UTC
The smart *** theory
You speak of things you know not of You lecture things you're incapable of You accuse of things you know not true You deny the things you know to be true They're absurd, really, the things you say The things that only you would say It's unfair, really, the way you act Demanding the things of the stuff you lacked The way you wish that you could be You will not find inside of me Just turn around and view yourself I promise I don't need your help Just focus on the life you own And learn that my life is my own
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Apr 4, 2014
Apr 4, 2014 at 6:53 AM UTC
My Life, Your Obsession