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feather clouds broken by rays of light the perpetual buzz of the fireflies nature writes to me, poems of love i didn’t hear the first whisper i didn’t feel the first flicker but once i recognized, i revitalized revive me and crown me disrespected and drowning align me and define me i am burnt blue narrowing
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Mar 28
Mar 28, 2026 at 9:10 AM UTC
Burnt Blue Narrowing
to be thought 'mad' to know constant pain persecuted most days.
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Feb 26
Feb 26, 2026 at 6:23 AM UTC
grist for the mill to offer up in prayer
My blithe observation, whether I'm in the box or out, Don't twist yourself out of whack, There's nothing you lack. Case in point: You're not gettin' out alive, Just make it count, for the time being, you're gonna survive. The roundest peg, never fittin' in a square hole, Inside and outside, yet never quite appropriately positioned. Try hard, try not, try just enough or don't try at all. One foot in and the other is always out, Put it in, and shake it, but don't shake it all about. Stinky clics and cordial how-do-you-do's, Making no mistakes about it. A circle of trust is one thing, But the other is the group in which you don't belong, Lessons learned, so don't try so hard, But just keep on singin' your own song. Fortune and fame have their own misalignments to declare. Misinformation, deception and compromise, They too, will all someday meet their own demise. Running the straight and narrow, whatever it is you're called to do, Make no mistake about it, Just remember - to thine own self, be true.
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Jan 12
Jan 12, 2026 at 5:48 PM UTC
My Life's Observations
Opportunities are knocking, but hurdles are approaching. Opportunities are knocking, but hurdles are approaching. Whenever you try to escape, chains of resentment grow narrow. Whenever you try to speak, chains of communication grow shorter.
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Nov 22, 2025
Nov 22, 2025 at 4:42 PM UTC
Chains of Resentment
Feeling forced to Live through An impossible scenario I'm someone who Finds it hard to Find anything but static on the radio All this blue Is nothing new 42 seasons of the same show A tandem dive done solo The sign says shallow Margin for error narrow But ***** it, here I go 'Look out below' ©2024
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Nov 21, 2024
Nov 21, 2024 at 9:17 PM UTC
~•§•~ Where's the Choice? ~•§•~
among the skyscrapers my mind wander how narrow my sight was to only surmise what one might feel realizing there are more to conquer so i take a step back revisiting another possible tracks i could take
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Mar 22, 2022
Mar 22, 2022 at 3:20 AM UTC
one step backward
"From the depths of the mirror, a corpse gazed back at me. The look in his eyes, as they stared into mine, has never left me." Closing the book I looked at the cover, Night by Elie Wiesel. Averting my eyes from the book to my teacher, she stares at the class in profound silence, then she says, "There's something very similar happening in America today." I was shocked, I couldn't believe it took me until middle school to hear about this. My ears perked up in morbid curiosity as the other students nodded making me feel like a ******* "Abortion." the teacher stated with lofty arrogance as I breathed a sigh of relief encouraged by the banality of right wing indoctrination replacing revelation of more senseless slaughter. I didn't watch Fox News, I didn't know I was supposed to hate abortion and Dr. Tiller; that's where Elie Wiesel and teacher come in. Elie Wiesel wrote a book that makes people want to change the world, my teacher narrowed it down to the target in her crosshairs. Tiller died a few years later, Wiesel died several years after that. My old middle school teacher is still alive using books of the dead to demonize the living for demanding demonetizing democracy until malleable minds are mangled shifting their forming mentality into one as narrow as hers.
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Sep 30, 2020
Sep 30, 2020 at 9:18 AM UTC
Narrow
For you to see me, hills and valleys oceans and seas moon and stars days and nights water and fire heaven and earth must fall asleep And, for you to see me take a tour and pass through, the narrow of needle space Else, for you to see me, close your eyes and sleep to dream about me Safana & Bamalli 2020
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Sep 6, 2020
Sep 6, 2020 at 7:39 PM UTC
For you to see...
A reflection on birthdays, friends departing this world, and surveying ones life ~~~ this one poem is not lurking,(1) turmoiled bursting, shaking, quaking, release aching write it in droplets, my chest speak squeaks, each thought, a stanza, each moment, a bonanza of  the doled, muddled mix of tremblings on this my extravaganza, renaissance day of birth upon this earth sixty five calendars, this space, so gulf and so narrow, (2) for what profit this man for himself, others? a Judgement Day of sorts, where the man~poet is efficiently prosecutor, defender, judge and jury, as is he not, his one true peer? let his biases be betrayed, his fault lines be paraded, let his deeds be the unlawful legal coda by which he is remanded if found guilty of a ledger imbalanced, more sins than glory, only one sentence permitted, life imprisonment even the NYC weather clued in and deity cooperative, wakes me up to this advisory: Overcast. Slight chance of a rain shower. High near 65F. High near 65. what portent this oracle, a warning guide to this morass of a contradictory, crevassed man full of mea culpa poetic messes, his old is his high... or are these just winking, birthday instructions from an observer on high? this space of years, this life, so gulf and so narrow, engulfed, yet so sparse is his barrow, his first minutes of the day a lean inventory taking, for better or worse as he overcasts a full review, plus a bonus (!) a forward progress prognosis there is a fresh formed Cain mileage marker upon his brow, a check-mark scar, resultant of his self-checkup upon the tree rings of his tiring body weeping only because a mistrial is declared and no verdict returned and he rises for coffee, promising himself someday an honest resolution before... these the acts of sixty five calendars, of this, his-space, so gulf and so narrow, subjected to a now daily interrogatory: *for what profit this man, his actions, his loved words, for himself, to others, to this world?* October 1, 2015 ~~~ (1) http://hellopoetry.com/poem/1417203/there-is-a-poem-lurking/ ~~~ (2) *but I can't stop for each hour of the last 72 has witnessed a new poem in-between minute one and minute sixty five written for you, writing for life, writing of this moment,* this space so gulf and so narrow *in and between the unity of us* http://hellopoetry.com/poem/1413760/for-ernesto-l-gonzales-aka-the-dedpoet-the-in-between/ ~~~
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Oct 2, 2015
Oct 2, 2015 at 5:09 PM UTC
this space, so gulf and so narrow
A reflection on birthdays, friends departing this world, and surveying ones life ~~~ this one poem is not lurking,(1) turmoiled bursting, shaking, quaking, release aching write it in droplets, my chest speak squeaks, each thought, a stanza, each moment, a bonanza of  the doled, muddled mix of tremblings on this my extravaganza, renaissance day of birth upon this earth sixty five calendars, this space, so gulf and so narrow, (2) for what profit this man for himself, others? a Judgement Day of sorts, where the man~poet is efficiently prosecutor, defender, judge and jury, as is he not, his one true peer? let his biases be betrayed, his fault lines be paraded, let his deeds be the unlawful legal coda by which he is remanded if found guilty of a ledger imbalanced, more sins than glory, only one sentence permitted, life imprisonment even the NYC weather clued in and deity cooperative, wakes me up to this advisory: Overcast. Slight chance of a rain shower. High near 65F. High near 65. what portent this oracle, a warning guide to this morass of a contradictory, crevassed man full of mea culpa poetic messes, his old is his high... or are these just winking, birthday instructions from an observer on high? this space of years, this life, so gulf and so narrow, engulfed, yet so sparse is his barrow, his first minutes of the day a lean inventory taking, for better or worse as he overcasts a full review, plus a bonus (!) a forward progress prognosis there is a fresh formed Cain mileage marker upon his brow, a check-mark scar, resultant of his self-checkup upon the tree rings of his tiring body weeping only because a mistrial is declared and no verdict returned and he rises for coffee, promising himself someday an honest resolution before... these the acts of sixty five calendars, of this, his-space, so gulf and so narrow, subjected to a now daily interrogatory: *for what profit this man, his actions, his loved words, for himself, to others, to this world?* October 1, 2015 ~~~ (1) http://hellopoetry.com/poem/1417203/there-is-a-poem-lurking/ ~~~ (2) *but I can't stop for each hour of the last 72 has witnessed a new poem in-between minute one and minute sixty five written for you, writing for life, writing of this moment,* this space so gulf and so narrow *in and between the unity of us* http://hellopoetry.com/poem/1413760/for-ernesto-l-gonzales-aka-the-dedpoet-the-in-between/ ~~~
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why does the world which is wide becomes so narrow? why do the eyes which see a ray see only sallow? why does the fresh air which spreads happy brings sorrow? you are the born to to grow and magnify the wealth not make fewer? we push the hate at every side not prison it at outer hollow let us spread the love at every sight the world will be so major
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May 9, 2020
May 9, 2020 at 3:11 AM UTC
why?
Flowing like water Going wherever I need to go Cutting through the way No narrow path can stop me. I am the water I am a river I flow through everything That's all I know. Nothing is ever what it seems, I am the sea I am the ocean.
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Nov 17, 2019
Nov 17, 2019 at 4:41 AM UTC
The Ocean
slowly step across the narrow path - fear crawl backwards
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Apr 21, 2019
Apr 21, 2019 at 4:59 AM UTC
haiku 19/4/10b
I can see you but do you really see me? How can you know what it’s like to be? Surface impressions can be so very deceiving if the onlooker is by a narrow mind perceiving. __________________________
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Oct 20, 2018
Oct 20, 2018 at 2:41 AM UTC
Quatrain #362 - I can see you but.....
soft expectations surrendering to rage’s sweetness that’s my eyes on your words I said, oh God I’ll get to through the narrowest, silent, anguishing so that when I’m there, I’m really there
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Sep 14, 2018
Sep 14, 2018 at 8:38 PM UTC
Your Words
I go off on a power trip; sometimes I won't even notice it. Like a train on the track at full speed unaware that some people get motion sick.
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May 5, 2018
May 5, 2018 at 11:30 AM UTC
one track mind
There’re are two paths going opposite ways People travel these paths every day The first path leads to a place of tears people who take this path, reflect death like a mirror Guilt haunts them when they do wrong The memory of their sin creates a mournful song People say you can do whatever you please, they say, “Come over here, join us!” But a wise person knows down that path, people give into their lust Most people who follow this path, don’t see the dangers around them, But those who truly believe in Christ can see through the fog For they are the ones pulled out of the miry bog The second path is thin and narrow It is thinner than a golden arrow There are very few who find this path Those of the world look and laugh This is the path that leads to life It is full of danger, hardship and strife There are trials on this path, it won’t be easy But that gives no excuse, like the rabbit to be lazy What’s so great about this path is that someone cares for you when you fall Through the church, He sends out his gospel call He is all holy, powerful, and merciful He is Author of the universe, and Creator of all the people You must be born again through his holy Son Who died on the cross – the victory won!
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Jul 20, 2017
Jul 20, 2017 at 8:49 AM UTC
The Narrow and The Wide Path
I'm sorry you think me offended I'm sorry you refuse to see I'm sorry when I show you the mirror that its white fragility you see I'm sorry that I don't fit your narrative that America is the greatest to be I'm sorry that it hasn't been, not for people like me I'm sorry that you can't accept it's different But I am not sorry for who I am Nor am I sorry for what I believe Not sorry for the truth Not sorry for my protest Not sorry for the bruising words Not sorry for the wounded ego Not sorry for the things to come Not sorry that I'll never quit Just sorry for you.
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Nov 15, 2016
Nov 15, 2016 at 10:15 AM UTC
I'm Sorry
Tell me If I’m wrong, But haven’t we been here before? We reach this same fork in the road No matter where we turn, No matter the distance, No matter the time. Tell me, How many times Will I have to make this choice Between those two old foes, Light and Dark, Good and Evil, The Better Man and the Fool? Tell me, How many times Will I have to make the decision To take the harder road, The steeper path, The journey more strewn with danger, The straight and the narrow? And tell me, If I dare ask, How many times Will I fail?
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Oct 27, 2016
Oct 27, 2016 at 5:49 PM UTC
The Better Man
Black crows, smothered jackdaws, obsessing on religion- ******* on ancient ideas, drowning in gloomy words. God made the world to be lived in not to escape from-
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Oct 14, 2016
Oct 14, 2016 at 12:57 AM UTC
BLACK CROWS
Sulfurous smell Please seal your lips Not a word you shall tell Nobody would heed your tip Narrow mindedness, Selective thinking Has caused you blindness Do us a favor - please stop speaking
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Sep 26, 2016
Sep 26, 2016 at 3:15 PM UTC
Please Stop Speaking
Walk the narrow road Total blind with time Wicked trees tickle the spine With air as still as the night We encounter careless souls of the mindful dead Placed there by each of us Head torn and mind ****** We go there each day Walk the narrow road No looking back to see you Not a second is spent feeling or pushing back the heart I wonder why it's gone But all too soon Eyes crossed with double vision Venture past the door
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Jan 25, 2016
Jan 25, 2016 at 12:05 PM UTC
Narrow Road