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Did Narcissus see me When looking at the lake? Did he fall in love With my reflection in the water? And when the lake spoke to him Did he hear my voice? Or was Narcissus too focused On my beautiful eyes? I am certain it was me. Who else could it be? It is me he couldn't bear to live without When he let the water take him. It is me who grew right beside that lake Hearing his cries for eternity. Who's there?
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May 16
May 16, 2026 at 9:19 AM UTC
Who's there?
Narcissist or a momma's boy Washed up dreams like you had no choice Frat house friends who don't make no noise Drinking iced coffee while you keep avoidin' Avoiding, avoiding your mood in the morning Oh yeah, I'm annoyed, 'cause you said I'm important You said I was filling your void out of boredom I said that I would, oh, I gave you a warning that I can't be your iced-coffee dream girl, dream girl I can't be your call-me-to-feel girl, feel girl
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Apr 9
Apr 9, 2026 at 6:32 PM UTC
narcissus-lilyisthatyou
Once I loved in the span of sand-like seconds, grains of time slipping out of my clutching fingers, into the yawning abyss of hazy memory. And every now and again, a faint Echo sounds out from down there, and Narcissus wakes, quakes, and drowns out her scream, with the dying light of my dreams. 'Me.' 'It's all me now.' he smiles, as he sits in a deceptive shallow, oblivious to the scars on his back. Oh, I know, reflection - I know. But once, I loved. Once.
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Feb 13
Feb 13, 2026 at 11:17 PM UTC
Once I loved
I am black with love neither boy nor nightingale intact as a flower I yearn without desire. I arose amid violets at the day’s first light, sang a song forgotten in the unchanging night. I said to myself: “Narcissus!” and a spirit with my face darkened the grass with the glow of his curls. by Pier Paolo Pasolini
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May 18, 2022
May 18, 2022 at 10:57 AM UTC
Narcissus Dancing
Crippled inaction is the fear I'll fail at asking her out when the moment comes up or the fear that it will all work out but it won't feel like enough Same story for doing my laundry Same story for writing songs and getting them out Narcissist that knows he could be Emperor if he gave it his all But knees buckle at the thought of those peons and what they're saying 'bout me in their decrees These bouts, these bouts, these bouts Let's run to Nothingness don't get off the couch Let's run to mundane business Everyday I scrub these floors and someday I'll see us in them ___________________________________ arm around shoulder the sparkle in your eye reflected back at me, me, me You're the sing-song voice of my other Even though I heard you say no words I just finished the story I started the first time we caught eyes, eyes, eyes They feel like grapes and your spaghetti hair sure feels like brains so can I ask you something? Cause I don't know you enough to say I'm not a fan but life's too short so can we shatter some distance? Like, "Hey I'm not too partial on pasta and sauce but I sure would like to chat and canoodle on the couch." Lazy eyes find the forest in your perfect ones No more mistaken for trees, trees, trees We're all firmly in this world
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Nov 2, 2021
Nov 2, 2021 at 7:57 PM UTC
I Read All The Wrong Things This Summer
I burn beautifully in the fires of vanity. Got lost in my own reflection on the frozen food doors— there I was, lined up with the rest of the products on ice: three fifty-nine for four egg rolls, six twenty-nine for frozen bread dough, six ninety-nine for wild blueberries. Superimposed, my long mug trying its best to blend in. My forehead says I’m three ninety-nine, but my solar plexus clearly marks me at five fifty-nine. However, my **** is, apparently, on clearance, reduced by thirty percent, and going for a buck nineteen. At the end of the aisle, an old lady eyes my biscuits, rattling her coin purse like she’s about to roll a Yahtzee. I flick my gaze back to the glass and my own ghostly image. What did I come here for again?
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May 22, 2021
May 22, 2021 at 12:18 PM UTC
Narcissus on ice
O fair Helena descending- How could you not look at me? You were once Narcissus in the meadow; Kissing the soil- Blooming with lavenders- Basking in the afternoon sun- Where did all your sunshine go? Your blurry reflection- of somberness; heavy eyes; calloused hands; disheveled hair; timid air- Dismayed the goddess in you. Faded golden lyre; Withered Pierian roses; Crushed altar of flame; Mortal madness! Ascend back to the divines- Depart from this mortal coil; Be the Narcissus in the meadow.
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Oct 29, 2020
Oct 29, 2020 at 11:35 PM UTC
Mirror of Dismay
* *She who give what's due Broken echos reach her ears Pool entraps his gaze* *
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Jul 1, 2020
Jul 1, 2020 at 4:07 AM UTC
Nemesis
a bucket full of withered roses two repeated sentences — both still lingered in the room Echo repeating: he loves me he loves me not she was not heard another unrequited love in the midst of a stillness
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Nov 3, 2019
Nov 3, 2019 at 2:49 PM UTC
Narcissus was not the only one
I sometimes think of a girl who wished to die at sea The sea, I see, which saw her drift away so lifelessly. Not long ago we had been doomed to die a death in bed But now the ocean waves careen above our heads instead She stole my heart, I stole a car, and then just like that we’re gone We escaped from the hospital, our days spent there were done. She would not last without her meds and I was getting sick So to the coast was where to go, and we had to get there quick. Along the ride, she said to me, in the year two thousand five, “Looking at all the scenery, it kind of makes you feel alive” At the beach, we both looked on and made no qualms with death For there are no prayers to be said if you are out of breath She smiled at me and I at her, and then it was time to go She swam out with a happy face, that is all I know
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Nov 4, 2018
Nov 4, 2018 at 12:36 PM UTC
Narcissus
When you're immortal all beauty is left to wilt except your own reflection, you can't help but to fall in love with yourself.
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Sep 7, 2018
Sep 7, 2018 at 9:58 AM UTC
Narcissus Wasn't Immortal
Mothers warmth peered over the precipice Her halo radiating with life Projecting her color over the lush meadow Engulfing everything in sight How angelic, even the flora cry An ocean blanket of blue and white On the hillside your scapose body resides Weighed down by blissful dew Tipping over to one side. Admiring that stream lazily flowing by. Admiring that stream, what is identified? Admiring that stream lazily flowing by. Perfection staring, a gaze that seized Cornas locked eternally A beauty never before seen Afraid to break sight, fear of ambrosia running away Forever you stare Forever you stare Forever you stare Never to look away Left starving Left withering Left to decay Left as an echo Never to chase Left as an echo Never to embrace Left as an echo Your coupe de grace
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Jun 7, 2018
Jun 7, 2018 at 10:56 AM UTC
Narcissism
Looking across my window I caught a glimpse of summer in the winter, With you , gold is all that glitters Pressing my face against the walls of my chamber, I could smell your cologne even from a dozen meters As I make for the silhouette fading like  river. Holding your waist, looking at ur face Your hair forms a waterfall down your shoulders, Your lips laced with the nectar of the morning glory, Feeling the  firm tenderness of your breast, You face lights up , its the first of December, Your body heals , you are an amber Again I rise , a phoenix from the dying embers, Slowly letting myself fall into your aquifer Making the nights a now and forever As we reap the fruits of our passion. Kazer....2018 Tm-Narcissus.... Tm-beast.... Tm-god.
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May 13, 2018
May 13, 2018 at 2:56 PM UTC
PASSION FRUITS
I know a girl, everyone does. All she wants is fun. She won't be having cereal today, she'll have everything under the sun. She don't read the paper. She don't watch no news. Why would she care about someone elses troubles if they will never buy her shoes? She don't need no man. She don't need no gun. So many rides to take her there, she don't walk, much less run. She's got no time to cry. She's won't listen to the Blues. Nothing in the world matters to her, unless it's something she can use. She has lots of friends. She'll dance with them all night. But she cares not that they ain't real, cuz she's forever high as a kite. She don't care about no art, unless it's something she can wear. The thing she loves to look at most is in the mirror there. She's just loves making trouble. She's always causing a stir. But she don't bother about anything in the world, cuz it revolves around her. It's almost sad to watch her live her life, always seeking to ring her own bell. A living, breathing, girl on a mission to fill a vacant, soulless shell. She stares down into her pond, from her big ivory tower. She'll never be happy and even less so, as a helpless little flower.
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Apr 3, 2018
Apr 3, 2018 at 7:00 AM UTC
The Little Sister of Narcissus
What I see, I do not love Imperfections thrive with limitless combinations How can one view their reflection and fall in love? It is my eyes that I see first And I wonder what he’s thinking Like the Sacred Heart of Jesus painting in my grandmother’s bedroom I turn my head left and right And his eyes follow me but this one is in judgment I find imperfections in his face too *** for tat I know that I won’t share the same fate as Narcissus I can turn away because I know his deficiencies and failures So, he reminds me everyday In that other world In reverse My twin reflection
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Mar 11, 2018
Mar 11, 2018 at 7:16 AM UTC
My Twin Reflection
The water is clear Unlike my mind. It's murky, foggy, and as my hand touches the surface, It ripples. Breaking the perfection And I sigh as my face reflected back to me How I wish I could be lovely Like the setting sun Or the endless oceans And I feel my face plunge Forward into the water. Struggling to breath underwater The liquid fills my nostrils And I've drowned Like Narcissus But out of self loathing Rather than unconditional self-admiration
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Aug 31, 2017
Aug 31, 2017 at 7:37 PM UTC
Inversed Narcissus
Don't say it Oh, don't say it Saying it changes everything It's in your hands The royal flush of my blush skin You've got the cards to tear all I am from within May your lust consume from March to June year after year Before it's much too late for your sick guilt to disappear All that's said in bed, young nymph lessons, life's not dead Echo out those ancient stories in my head Just how I won't say it first Narcissus can't find the words Lips so soft and silent Actions not unspoken
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Jul 18, 2017
Jul 18, 2017 at 11:29 AM UTC
Silent Looks
You are made of ivory and gold Your lips could rewrite history From but a brief touch You have rewritten me Yet you remain unchanged Porcelain, china, marble or gold You are timeless beauty Never to know the ages ruin Or the terror of slowly growing old Your hands will not wither Nor your eyes and dreams fade You will remain as you did On the day you were truly made Nigh on twenty you were made Not born, but made, to you And since then, to the world you have not changed Though inside I do not know if this is true None can penetrate your façade Your mask of beauty and charm You will not relinquish your weapon of a silver tongue As though you fear the whole world means you harm You do not know how easy you pass With wit and boyish charm Against all obstacles you need only smile And all your enemies are disarmed
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Jul 13, 2017
Jul 13, 2017 at 1:26 PM UTC
Made and unchanged
Initially he thought to bring sight to the Blind Desiring OsIris or Evoke E(see)kiel But he looked in a mirror and couldn't see his self His mirror betrayed him transparent, anti-Narcissus he was Now he feels he has too much V i s i o N his (soughts) self(s) go in one (thoughts) eye and (oughts) out the other he, So Self-Aware, scares his mirror wHEre Who (did) you see then Do now becoming tomorrow . . . ?
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Jun 29, 2017
Jun 29, 2017 at 9:42 PM UTC
Drea(lity)M