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can I handle the season of older, took my~love, and took it down, till the hymnodist laughed, do not forget, she shrieked, old and gold are symmetrically synchronized, synced, not sink! what you want to think, is always, never what you true believe, as long as you breathe, a miner for hearts of love you are, start in the capillaries, onto the arteries, and deep into the pumping machine, which calls out in indignation, you human, are mine, and as long as you mine, for the cup that-is-not-illusory, always and eternal, l think not, for you have already tasted love's holy water, leaving you, leaving you with an undying thirst, for more, the gold apogee on our elliptical trajectory, where the she~sharing-oxygen once displaced in a race to be supplanted, but that must be won, when/where  the golden aura supplants the necessities, and the liquid gold will replace, re-p-aces your almost now used up blood, endlessly re~circulating, subject to the  the critical cortical critique of insufficient, no más, for never enough, gold and love, like sync and swim together  in time, in rhyme, how could you not know this absolute is a scientific fact?
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Oct 1, 2025
Oct 1, 2025 at 7:32 AM UTC
still a miner, after all these years
Old Jim "I'm grateful for the company ....sit down and I'll make tea" "It's not often people visit but, with the cat, us two make three" He's hiding somewhere here He's always there abouts I just have to watch the doorway I don't want him to get out We listen to the radio Can't afford to have TV It's really not a loss though Since I now can barely see Time it takes it toll on you A little more each day I wish there was a little pill out there That helped keep time at bay" "There's the kettle, whistling" I'll be back with our fresh brew The cat won't drink it with me So I'm only making two I looked around the little room All the drapes were closed up tight It was sunny out and midday But inside, it looked like night There was one light in the corner More for guests than Uncle Jim HIs life was based on order This room just wasn't him "Here's the brew my boy" he said "As he came back and sat with me I watched him...two steps forward One left, then forward three" He put the cups down gently Didn't spill a single drop He'd memorized his pathway He knew exactly where to stop "I've got biscuits, if you'd like" "Some Hob Nobs from back home" "I break them out for company "They're too good for me alone" I said that I would get them and I exited my chair He said they're up on top But I'd never reach them there" He came and got a grab stick He poked and grabbed them from the shelf He said "This things a lifesend" "I'd never get them by myself" We sat and talked for hours Talked of sports and music too He said that with his failing eyesight There's really not much he could do "It's saved me money someways" "And cost more in others though" "But now that I'm not driving" "I no longer shovel snow" Jim, worked hard for forty years He was a foreman in the mine He'd been working round the coal for years In fact since he was nine He used to run small errands From the office to the men He lied about his age though Jim told them he was ten He'd retired back five years ago When it got hard to breathe "It was all I ever knew boy" "I didn't want to leave" Tons and Tons of coal dust Must have filtered through his lungs He was dying slowly daily, It started showing on his tongue Small spots appeared which spread real quick He started treatment right away He knew the doctor would relieve him Of his job, reduce his pay "you know boy, there's a tale they tell" "of birds down in the mine" "when the birds fall off the perch stone dead "Then we men have little time" "We have to get out quickly "For the bird has shown our fate "But think a bit, the gas got him... "So for us ...it was too late" "We didn't really watch the bird "We listened for his song "For when his voice was laboured" We knew it wasn't long" "Dead birds...they meant dead miners" At this my body jolted "It;s like shutting up the old barn door" "Even though the horse has bolted" I finished up and said to Jim I had to catch my bus Jim said, "ok young man, be on your way" " Now, it's just the two of us" "You'll be back soon, I hope" he said I said , "I sure will try" "I like our little visits" As he sat there and he sighed "Just me and Tilly now" he said As he saw me to the door Stay safe my boy and oh.... He said "There's one thing more "when you get on home...please phone me" "It will make this old heart sing" "Just phone me up and when you do... "Let it go for just three rings" I said I would, "but why three rings" I asked, not four or five "Three rings" he said's our signal "In the mine....that you're alive" I left and headed homeward But first I'd stop of at the mall Then I went home right directly And I then gave Old Jim his call.
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Jul 26, 2015
Jul 26, 2015 at 11:13 AM UTC
Old Jim (reposted after deletion)
Old Jim "I'm grateful for the company ....sit down and I'll make tea" "It's not often people visit but, with the cat, us two make three" He's hiding somewhere here He's always there abouts I just have to watch the doorway I don't want him to get out We listen to the radio Can't afford to have TV It's really not a loss though Since I now can barely see Time it takes it toll on you A little more each day I wish there was a little pill out there That helped keep time at bay" "There's the kettle, whistling" I'll be back with our fresh brew The cat won't drink it with me So I'm only making two I looked around the little room All the drapes were closed up tight It was sunny out and midday But inside, it looked like night There was one light in the corner More for guests than Uncle Jim HIs life was based on order This room just wasn't him "Here's the brew my boy" he said "As he came back and sat with me I watched him...two steps forward One left, then forward three" He put the cups down gently Didn't spill a single drop He'd memorized his pathway He knew exactly where to stop "I've got biscuits, if you'd like" "Some Hob Nobs from back home" "I break them out for company "They're too good for me alone" I said that I would get them and I exited my chair He said they're up on top But I'd never reach them there" He came and got a grab stick He poked and grabbed them from the shelf He said "This things a lifesend" "I'd never get them by myself" We sat and talked for hours Talked of sports and music too He said that with his failing eyesight There's really not much he could do "It's saved me money someways" "And cost more in others though" "But now that I'm not driving" "I no longer shovel snow" Jim, worked hard for forty years He was a foreman in the mine He'd been working round the coal for years In fact since he was nine He used to run small errands From the office to the men He lied about his age though Jim told them he was ten He'd retired back five years ago When it got hard to breathe "It was all I ever knew boy" "I didn't want to leave" Tons and Tons of coal dust Must have filtered through his lungs He was dying slowly daily, It started showing on his tongue Small spots appeared which spread real quick He started treatment right away He knew the doctor would relieve him Of his job, reduce his pay "you know boy, there's a tale they tell" "of birds down in the mine" "when the birds fall off the perch stone dead "Then we men have little time" "We have to get out quickly "For the bird has shown our fate "But think a bit, the gas got him... "So for us ...it was too late" "We didn't really watch the bird "We listened for his song "For when his voice was laboured" We knew it wasn't long" "Dead birds...they meant dead miners" At this my body jolted "It;s like shutting up the old barn door" "Even though the horse has bolted" I finished up and said to Jim I had to catch my bus Jim said, "ok young man, be on your way" " Now, it's just the two of us" "You'll be back soon, I hope" he said I said , "I sure will try" "I like our little visits" As he sat there and he sighed "Just me and Tilly now" he said As he saw me to the door Stay safe my boy and oh.... He said "There's one thing more "when you get on home...please phone me" "It will make this old heart sing" "Just phone me up and when you do... "Let it go for just three rings" I said I would, "but why three rings" I asked, not four or five "Three rings" he said's our signal "In the mine....that you're alive" I left and headed homeward But first I'd stop of at the mall Then I went home right directly And I then gave Old Jim his call.
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The Miner, Absolom (a haibun) green hill where sheep graze white bones and coal, buried, held seasons all the same My grandfather worked in the mines from age thirteen to seventy. His life was closed in by mountains, the green one at the back, the dark looming one at the front and the pit head along the valley., winding the men in and out of the shaft, day after day, dawn until dusk when they came home singing boots ring on the road deep valley voices echo backyard starlit smoke . They worked on their bellies or crouched, often in water for days, water that undermines rock. Shaft collapses where frequent. Life was cheap. He came home covered in coal dust to his wife and two sons, sons he was determined to keep out of the mines. Yet he loved that coal - coal that he always polished with care before lighting a fire, brushing dust off black diamond surfaces. water breaks through rock with wood and straining shoulders man becomes the beam He saved twenty lives that day, men he had known from boyhood. When his lungs were affected they laid him off, no pay, no pension, no life. He bought an insurance book with the money he had and every day he trudged over the mountains and valleys gathering pennies that would help to secure some livelihood to the widows who lost their men in the mines. He never told his wife that when a family couldn't pay he put the pennies in for them rather than leave them unprotected. winter, summer, fall the mountain hangs over all tired to the backbone When the mines were nationalised my grandfather went straight back to the coal face despite his age. He wasn't going to miss those days of glory. Safety was suddenly the watchword and changes were made very fast. Hot showers were installed at the pit head and the miners came home clean at last. men stripped to the skin hot water, steam, baptised brothers singing hymns
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Jun 13, 2014
Jun 13, 2014 at 9:25 PM UTC
The Miner, Absolom
The Miner, Absolom (a haibun) green hill where sheep graze white bones and coal, buried, held seasons all the same My grandfather worked in the mines from age thirteen to seventy. His life was closed in by mountains, the green one at the back, the dark looming one at the front and the pit head along the valley., winding the men in and out of the shaft, day after day, dawn until dusk when they came home singing boots ring on the road deep valley voices echo backyard starlit smoke . They worked on their bellies or crouched, often in water for days, water that undermines rock. Shaft collapses where frequent. Life was cheap. He came home covered in coal dust to his wife and two sons, sons he was determined to keep out of the mines. Yet he loved that coal - coal that he always polished with care before lighting a fire, brushing dust off black diamond surfaces. water breaks through rock with wood and straining shoulders man becomes the beam He saved twenty lives that day, men he had known from boyhood. When his lungs were affected they laid him off, no pay, no pension, no life. He bought an insurance book with the money he had and every day he trudged over the mountains and valleys gathering pennies that would help to secure some livelihood to the widows who lost their men in the mines. He never told his wife that when a family couldn't pay he put the pennies in for them rather than leave them unprotected. winter, summer, fall the mountain hangs over all tired to the backbone When the mines were nationalised my grandfather went straight back to the coal face despite his age. He wasn't going to miss those days of glory. Safety was suddenly the watchword and changes were made very fast. Hot showers were installed at the pit head and the miners came home clean at last. men stripped to the skin hot water, steam, baptised brothers singing hymns
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