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Hey there little Brother You've left is once again, I know that this was not by choice but God needed you there, I know that you hurting, the same way we all do but you have to know this Louboy, you've won the race and now you get to see God's face, please don't be so disheartened, your mom's and dad's are okay, you were truly special that's why God couldn't wait, for you to come back home and take up your rightful place, today we are mourning but we also celebrate the beautiful memories that we got to make, no no don't cry, dry your eyes and celebrate your life is now eternal we still have to wait. So please little brother, please prepare our place for we pray to meet you once again face to face.
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Jul 11, 2024
Jul 11, 2024 at 12:50 AM UTC
Hey there little Brother
She lived through a lot. A poetic soul Who's magic entertained generations of Suspense and Joy her writing brought. After many years of continuing through devastations and personal trials.. Until her end..she never quit. He writing moves me, still... Unique of many styles.
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Jun 24, 2019
Jun 24, 2019 at 10:42 AM UTC
The Poetic Legend
If I had last words they would be… Well… I mean… I see in those streams of invectives I see especially people who drink, eat, sleep, who make all human functions Which are quite rather ****** And I shall say that they’re heavy It never stopped being heavy I noticed I’ve read so many verses and particularly verses from the 17th century Verses, so-called courteous verses I found 3 or 4 good ones in thousands of them There’s little lightness in man He’s heavy... isn’t he And nowadays he’s extraordinary in heaviness Since automobiles, alcohol, ambition, politics make him heavy Even heavier It’s mostly like that, he’s extremely heavy Maybe one day shall we see a mind rebellion against the weight But it isn’t for tomorrow For now... we’re heavy So I’d say indeed If I had to die I’d say Man is heavy That’s all Oh! They were mean but... Because they were heavy They were heavy They were heavy… jealous of a certain lightness Jealous... jealous like a woman who wears a clothing burlap instead of another who wears lace Like someone who owns a workhorse instead of a thoroughbred Jealous... Jealous of being heavy... that’s all Crippled... They weigh... they're crippled Heaviness makes them ******* Therefore we can beware of them They’re ready to do anything Oh sure They’re ready to do anything And to activate heaviness They drink, aren’t they So when they drink, they turn into sledgehammers It’s frightening, isn’t it Sledgehammers without control Yes, they’re especially like this They activate... increase their weight Instead of making themselves lighter Oh! They’re not in Ariel’s side They’re more like Caliban More and more
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Apr 18, 2018
Apr 18, 2018 at 1:49 AM UTC
Louis-Ferdinand Céline interview
If I had last words they would be… Well… I mean… I see in those streams of invectives I see especially people who drink, eat, sleep, who make all human functions Which are quite rather ****** And I shall say that they’re heavy It never stopped being heavy I noticed I’ve read so many verses and particularly verses from the 17th century Verses, so-called courteous verses I found 3 or 4 good ones in thousands of them There’s little lightness in man He’s heavy... isn’t he And nowadays he’s extraordinary in heaviness Since automobiles, alcohol, ambition, politics make him heavy Even heavier It’s mostly like that, he’s extremely heavy Maybe one day shall we see a mind rebellion against the weight But it isn’t for tomorrow For now... we’re heavy So I’d say indeed If I had to die I’d say Man is heavy That’s all Oh! They were mean but... Because they were heavy They were heavy They were heavy… jealous of a certain lightness Jealous... jealous like a woman who wears a clothing burlap instead of another who wears lace Like someone who owns a workhorse instead of a thoroughbred Jealous... Jealous of being heavy... that’s all Crippled... They weigh... they're crippled Heaviness makes them ******* Therefore we can beware of them They’re ready to do anything Oh sure They’re ready to do anything And to activate heaviness They drink, aren’t they So when they drink, they turn into sledgehammers It’s frightening, isn’t it Sledgehammers without control Yes, they’re especially like this They activate... increase their weight Instead of making themselves lighter Oh! They’re not in Ariel’s side They’re more like Caliban More and more
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Louis Brown Jan 2011 The Old Magnolia Tree Beneath the old magnolia tree I used to hold you close to me And there I carved upon that tree That I loved you and you loved me Beneath the white magnolia blooms You cast a spell with your perfume I believed those wooden words were true Ingrained in hearts of me and you But time wears out what boys engrave Nothing's left of the love you gave Except that old magnolia scar.... I wish our love had come so far Yeah, I wish those words were still on track Cause every spring I dream me back To tender lips and sweet perfume Beneath the white magnolia blooms But time wears out what boys engrave Nothing's left of the love you gave Except that old magnolia tree Reminding me.....reminding me...... Copyright Louis Brown ------ This was a poem I wrote to honor Mr Brown whom I sadly never got to know but was a brilliant poet on HP! Miss his verse... Ode To Mr. Louis Brown We wish we knew you Mr Brown
 The lights glow dim in Poetry Town
 We stand beside Magnolia trees
 And pray your soul is fancy free

 I read your verse with teary eyes
 And hope that I can be as wise
 You were a gentle soul of song
 The joy you brought is just as strong 

 I'm glad your verse you did not brave Upon Magnolias to engrave
 Your words of wit are safe with me
 For Poetry Town is your tree! 

 Unlike that old Magnolia tree
 Poetry Town is full of spree
 She was a fool to lose your crown 
But we'll always love you Mr. Brown!
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Sep 4, 2017
Sep 4, 2017 at 9:49 AM UTC
Redux?
Louis Brown Jan 2011 The Old Magnolia Tree Beneath the old magnolia tree I used to hold you close to me And there I carved upon that tree That I loved you and you loved me Beneath the white magnolia blooms You cast a spell with your perfume I believed those wooden words were true Ingrained in hearts of me and you But time wears out what boys engrave Nothing's left of the love you gave Except that old magnolia scar.... I wish our love had come so far Yeah, I wish those words were still on track Cause every spring I dream me back To tender lips and sweet perfume Beneath the white magnolia blooms But time wears out what boys engrave Nothing's left of the love you gave Except that old magnolia tree Reminding me.....reminding me...... Copyright Louis Brown ------ This was a poem I wrote to honor Mr Brown whom I sadly never got to know but was a brilliant poet on HP! Miss his verse... Ode To Mr. Louis Brown We wish we knew you Mr Brown
 The lights glow dim in Poetry Town
 We stand beside Magnolia trees
 And pray your soul is fancy free

 I read your verse with teary eyes
 And hope that I can be as wise
 You were a gentle soul of song
 The joy you brought is just as strong 

 I'm glad your verse you did not brave Upon Magnolias to engrave
 Your words of wit are safe with me
 For Poetry Town is your tree! 

 Unlike that old Magnolia tree
 Poetry Town is full of spree
 She was a fool to lose your crown 
But we'll always love you Mr. Brown!
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Ok, so you want to meet the love of your life, or at least a sophisticated N.S.A. relationship. Here’s how to do it. Guys leave the pick-up lines at home, many girls are smarter than you’d like to believe. Besides, a poorly-executed pick-up line will only show how your wit is mediocre. And you don’t want that. You want her to believe that you’re funny. Make a girl laugh and you’re in; not in her pants, unless she’s vulnerable, or easy, and do you really want that kind of person? If you’re going to use jokes, and you really desire to prove to your potential soulmate/hookup that you are indeed the next-coming of Louis C.K. then tell her a funny anecdote, involving your younger siblings, or older relatives. Those stories will go over well because they suggest that you do have a heart and a conscience, because you adore your family. But maybe it’s better to not do that. Because sometimes it’s better to keep your mouth shut. Trust me, the more you say, the more chances you have to mess things up. Plus you’ll look all cool and mysterious because you’re listening intently to her. Save the cocky-douche routine; you’re better than that. Point is, don’t try so hard. You don’t have to appear super awesome to her. You will probably never see her again if you act like you’re somebody that you’re not. And look, girls love to talk. So let them talk. Unless they’re mutes. Then, you should probably say something. If neither of you two talk, there’s definitely no chemistry, so just say thanks for the company, and leave the bar. Another thing; don’t gaze into her eyes too much. Of course, making eye contact is an indicator of confidence, but doing it too much is an indicator of creeper status. This is real life; not a bad romantic comedy, she will bolt from the bar to the dance floor and into the arms of that ******* who wears an Ed Hardy Tee. It’s okay to be goofy, but not too goofy; only the guys who get laugh with, get the number. And please be yourself. Unless, you’re a lunatic. Then try to emulate a normal person. Lastly, have fun because everybody only lives once. Except for Jesus, but he probably didn’t have a tough time getting girls, when he could turn water into wine. Another thing; don’t whine if she doesn’t like you. Not every girl is going to like you. Deal with it. Read a self-help book. Lose the beer belly. Or gain the beer belly, because some girls dig that. But most importantly, be honest with yourself. Did you really want to be romantically involved with her, thinking that it was love at first sight when you looked into her eyes, which were so big and so round? Or were you looking at things that were also so big and so round? If you don’t know, then reevaluate what you’re doing. It will work out in the end. Hopefully
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Oct 22, 2016
Oct 22, 2016 at 2:49 PM UTC
Doing the Most
Ok, so you want to meet the love of your life, or at least a sophisticated N.S.A. relationship. Here’s how to do it. Guys leave the pick-up lines at home, many girls are smarter than you’d like to believe. Besides, a poorly-executed pick-up line will only show how your wit is mediocre. And you don’t want that. You want her to believe that you’re funny. Make a girl laugh and you’re in; not in her pants, unless she’s vulnerable, or easy, and do you really want that kind of person? If you’re going to use jokes, and you really desire to prove to your potential soulmate/hookup that you are indeed the next-coming of Louis C.K. then tell her a funny anecdote, involving your younger siblings, or older relatives. Those stories will go over well because they suggest that you do have a heart and a conscience, because you adore your family. But maybe it’s better to not do that. Because sometimes it’s better to keep your mouth shut. Trust me, the more you say, the more chances you have to mess things up. Plus you’ll look all cool and mysterious because you’re listening intently to her. Save the cocky-douche routine; you’re better than that. Point is, don’t try so hard. You don’t have to appear super awesome to her. You will probably never see her again if you act like you’re somebody that you’re not. And look, girls love to talk. So let them talk. Unless they’re mutes. Then, you should probably say something. If neither of you two talk, there’s definitely no chemistry, so just say thanks for the company, and leave the bar. Another thing; don’t gaze into her eyes too much. Of course, making eye contact is an indicator of confidence, but doing it too much is an indicator of creeper status. This is real life; not a bad romantic comedy, she will bolt from the bar to the dance floor and into the arms of that ******* who wears an Ed Hardy Tee. It’s okay to be goofy, but not too goofy; only the guys who get laugh with, get the number. And please be yourself. Unless, you’re a lunatic. Then try to emulate a normal person. Lastly, have fun because everybody only lives once. Except for Jesus, but he probably didn’t have a tough time getting girls, when he could turn water into wine. Another thing; don’t whine if she doesn’t like you. Not every girl is going to like you. Deal with it. Read a self-help book. Lose the beer belly. Or gain the beer belly, because some girls dig that. But most importantly, be honest with yourself. Did you really want to be romantically involved with her, thinking that it was love at first sight when you looked into her eyes, which were so big and so round? Or were you looking at things that were also so big and so round? If you don’t know, then reevaluate what you’re doing. It will work out in the end. Hopefully
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We wish we knew you Mr Brown The lights glow dim in Poets Town We stand beside Magnolia trees And pray your soul is fancy free I read your verse with teary eyes And hope that I can be as wise You were a gentle soul of song The joy you brought is just as strong I'm glad your verse you did not brave Upon Magnolias to engrave Your words of wit are safe with me For Poets Town is your tree! Unlike the old Magnolia tree Poets Town is full of spree She was a fool to lose your crown But we'll always love you Mr. Brown!
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Jan 16, 2016
Jan 16, 2016 at 5:48 AM UTC
Ode to Mr. Louis Brown
But I'm open, you're closed Where I follow, you'll go I worry I won't see your face Light up again Even the best fall down sometimes Even the wrong words seem to rhyme Out of the doubt that fills my mind I somehow find, you and I collide I'm quiet, you know You make a first impression I've found I'm scared to know I'm always on your mind Even the best fall down sometimes Even the stars refuse to shine Out of the back you fall in time I somehow find, you and I collide
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Sep 28, 2015
Sep 28, 2015 at 10:43 AM UTC
collide / howie day
dancing in private, alone on the waves some things we can only to each other say these howling winds can hardly break, hurricanes will melt like sand around us, we are strong the ship to my compass, the voice to my song the heart to my arrow, the love to my pain the rope to my anchor, the bird to my cage I won't forget you're the only place I've ever belonged and, darling, with you I'll stay forever long.
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Sep 28, 2015
Sep 28, 2015 at 8:37 AM UTC
9.28.13
We’re hiding in the dark. Trying hard to survive this. Waiting to see the light. I can feel us breaking. He’s close to the edge. I’m constantly worrying about him. Wondering what will break him. Will it be the fans? Will it be the paparazzi? Will it be the lying? Will it be the hiding? I despise having to hide. I want to be free. I want to love him. But they say I can’t. They say that it’s wrong. They say it’ll ruin everything. They make us hide instead. Lying to our loved ones. Lying to our loyal fans. We give them hints daily. The tattoo’s should be enough. The compass guiding the ship. The arrow through the heart. The rope holding my anchor. The “Oops” to my “Hi” The bird to my cage. But apparently it’s not enough. They still don’t see us. Our shared stares on stage. The wanted and needed touches. The playful banter that disappeared. Ones who believe gets blamed. The tweets should be enough. “I miss you too sweetcheeks” “I’ll meet you poolside pumpkin” “And don’t forget my armbands” “Always in my heart @Harry_Styles.” “Yours sincerely Louis.” Not enough. I wonder what it’ll take. Trying hard to be ourselves. It’s hard when we’re watched. It’s hard following their orders. Our dreams have faded. The flashes have dulled them. They’re still there but barely.’ He looks up at me. Eyes are kept wide open. “Please don’t let me go .” “I’m tired of feeling alone.” “I’m tired of sleeping alone.” My arms are wide open. I’ll hold him close tonight We make promises for forever. We remember the easy times. When we loved not hid. We laugh at old movies. We slept closer than ever. He sleeps while I think. I’ll make us okay again. The day will come soon. Where we can love openly. When we won’t hide away. When they’ll finally realize. We’ll always love each other. No matter what they do. But until that day comes. I’ll bring him the stars. I’ll watch him from afar. Trying to make them understand. Because I know we’re fireproof. And I know we can survive. Because he makes me strong. And he’s all I need.
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May 8, 2015
May 8, 2015 at 1:16 PM UTC
The Thoughts in his Head
We’re hiding in the dark. Trying hard to survive this. Waiting to see the light. I can feel us breaking. He’s close to the edge. I’m constantly worrying about him. Wondering what will break him. Will it be the fans? Will it be the paparazzi? Will it be the lying? Will it be the hiding? I despise having to hide. I want to be free. I want to love him. But they say I can’t. They say that it’s wrong. They say it’ll ruin everything. They make us hide instead. Lying to our loved ones. Lying to our loyal fans. We give them hints daily. The tattoo’s should be enough. The compass guiding the ship. The arrow through the heart. The rope holding my anchor. The “Oops” to my “Hi” The bird to my cage. But apparently it’s not enough. They still don’t see us. Our shared stares on stage. The wanted and needed touches. The playful banter that disappeared. Ones who believe gets blamed. The tweets should be enough. “I miss you too sweetcheeks” “I’ll meet you poolside pumpkin” “And don’t forget my armbands” “Always in my heart @Harry_Styles.” “Yours sincerely Louis.” Not enough. I wonder what it’ll take. Trying hard to be ourselves. It’s hard when we’re watched. It’s hard following their orders. Our dreams have faded. The flashes have dulled them. They’re still there but barely.’ He looks up at me. Eyes are kept wide open. “Please don’t let me go .” “I’m tired of feeling alone.” “I’m tired of sleeping alone.” My arms are wide open. I’ll hold him close tonight We make promises for forever. We remember the easy times. When we loved not hid. We laugh at old movies. We slept closer than ever. He sleeps while I think. I’ll make us okay again. The day will come soon. Where we can love openly. When we won’t hide away. When they’ll finally realize. We’ll always love each other. No matter what they do. But until that day comes. I’ll bring him the stars. I’ll watch him from afar. Trying to make them understand. Because I know we’re fireproof. And I know we can survive. Because he makes me strong. And he’s all I need.
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leave it to fate to bring the two they hadn't known what to do strangers at a concert yet they couldn't collide but still, fate was there and all it took was time x-factor as single contestants made it hard for fate to work soon the two met in the bathroom the tall one had a smirk an 'accident' occurred but it was no problem oops and hi was all it took simple words, really but infatuated, their hearts shook band mates of a popular group they fought through management made it harder it wasn't a secret - everyone knew as lovers, they knew how to love yet every single day, it had to be hidden there was nothing they could do for it had been forbidden fate couldn't finish her job it was left to the two they had to fight and fight but that was how green met blue
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Apr 22, 2015
Apr 22, 2015 at 6:30 PM UTC
fate
Elegy for the Forgotten Oldsmobile July 4th and all is Hell. Outside my shuttered breath the streets bubble with flame-loined kids in designer jeans looking for people to **** or razor. A madman covered with running sores is on the street corner singing: O beautiful for spacious skies… This landscape is far too convenient to be either real or metaphor. In an alley behind a 7-11 a Black **** dressed in Harris tweed preaches fidelity to two pimply ****** whose skin is white though they aren’t quite. And crosstown in the sane precincts of Brown University where I added rage to Cliff Notes and got two degrees bearded scientists are stringing words outside the language inside the guts of atoms and I don’t know why I’ve come back to visit. O Uncle Adrian! I’m in the reservation of my mind. Chicken bones in a cardboard casket meditate upon the linoleum floor. Outside my flophouse door stewed and sinister winos snore in a tragic chorus. The snowstorm t.v. in the lobby’s their mother. Outside my window on the jumper’s ledge ice wraiths shiver and coat my last cans of Bud though this is summer I don’t know why or where the souls of Indian sinners fly. Uncle Adrian, you died last week—cirrhosis. I still have the photo of you in your Lovelock letterman’s jacket—two white girls on your arms— first team All-State halfback in ’45, ’46. But nothing is static. I am in the reservation of my mind. Embarrassed moths unravel my shorts thread by thread asserting insectival lust. I’m a naked locoweed in a city scene. What are my options? Why am I back in this city? When I sing of the American night my lungs billow Camels astride hacking appeals for cessation. My mother’s zippo inscribed: “Stewart Indian School—1941” explodes in my hand in elegy to Dresden Antietam and Wounded Knee and finally I have come to see this mad *** nation is dying. Our ancestors’ murderer is finally dying and I guess I should be happy and dance with the spirit or project my regret to my long-lost high school honey but history has carried me to a place where she has a daughter older than we were when we first shared flesh. She is the one who could not marry me because of the dark-skin ways in my blood. Love like that needs no elegy but because of the baked-prick possibility of the flame lakes of Hell I will give one last supper and sacrament to the dying beast of need disguised as love on deathrow inside my ribcage. I have not forgotten the years of midnight hunger when I could see how the past had guided me and I cried and held the pillow, muddled in the melodrama of the quite immature but anyway, Uncle Adrian… Here I am in the reservation of my mind and silence settles forever the vacancy of this cheap city room. In the wine darkness my cigarette coal tints my face with Geronimo’s rage and I’m in the dry hills with a Winchester waiting to shoot the lean, learned fools who taught me to live-think in English. Uncle Adrian… to make a long night story short, you promised to give me your Oldsmobile in 1962. How come you didn’t? I could have had some really good times in high school.
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Apr 15, 2015
Apr 15, 2015 at 4:25 AM UTC
Adrian C. Louis
Elegy for the Forgotten Oldsmobile July 4th and all is Hell. Outside my shuttered breath the streets bubble with flame-loined kids in designer jeans looking for people to **** or razor. A madman covered with running sores is on the street corner singing: O beautiful for spacious skies… This landscape is far too convenient to be either real or metaphor. In an alley behind a 7-11 a Black **** dressed in Harris tweed preaches fidelity to two pimply ****** whose skin is white though they aren’t quite. And crosstown in the sane precincts of Brown University where I added rage to Cliff Notes and got two degrees bearded scientists are stringing words outside the language inside the guts of atoms and I don’t know why I’ve come back to visit. O Uncle Adrian! I’m in the reservation of my mind. Chicken bones in a cardboard casket meditate upon the linoleum floor. Outside my flophouse door stewed and sinister winos snore in a tragic chorus. The snowstorm t.v. in the lobby’s their mother. Outside my window on the jumper’s ledge ice wraiths shiver and coat my last cans of Bud though this is summer I don’t know why or where the souls of Indian sinners fly. Uncle Adrian, you died last week—cirrhosis. I still have the photo of you in your Lovelock letterman’s jacket—two white girls on your arms— first team All-State halfback in ’45, ’46. But nothing is static. I am in the reservation of my mind. Embarrassed moths unravel my shorts thread by thread asserting insectival lust. I’m a naked locoweed in a city scene. What are my options? Why am I back in this city? When I sing of the American night my lungs billow Camels astride hacking appeals for cessation. My mother’s zippo inscribed: “Stewart Indian School—1941” explodes in my hand in elegy to Dresden Antietam and Wounded Knee and finally I have come to see this mad *** nation is dying. Our ancestors’ murderer is finally dying and I guess I should be happy and dance with the spirit or project my regret to my long-lost high school honey but history has carried me to a place where she has a daughter older than we were when we first shared flesh. She is the one who could not marry me because of the dark-skin ways in my blood. Love like that needs no elegy but because of the baked-prick possibility of the flame lakes of Hell I will give one last supper and sacrament to the dying beast of need disguised as love on deathrow inside my ribcage. I have not forgotten the years of midnight hunger when I could see how the past had guided me and I cried and held the pillow, muddled in the melodrama of the quite immature but anyway, Uncle Adrian… Here I am in the reservation of my mind and silence settles forever the vacancy of this cheap city room. In the wine darkness my cigarette coal tints my face with Geronimo’s rage and I’m in the dry hills with a Winchester waiting to shoot the lean, learned fools who taught me to live-think in English. Uncle Adrian… to make a long night story short, you promised to give me your Oldsmobile in 1962. How come you didn’t? I could have had some really good times in high school.
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Your whispers in French made me forget I don't know how to dance. And I wondered, if he could smell your raspberry bubble bath skin would Louis Armstrong sing just for you like you sang just for me in the corner where we built our blanket fort, where the lamp on the floor was the only light in the room besides the one in your eyes whenever I spun you around And I just know if I had a voice like his we would still be dancing.
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Jan 8, 2015
Jan 8, 2015 at 3:56 PM UTC
La Vie en Rose
this is the first time I've been able to write about you in a year, and hurts more with every character that I type. you used to bring me joy and happiness, and now you bring me feelings of sorrow, pain, anxiety and depression. i'm still trying to figure out how that is possible, especially coming from you. when we were still together, I used to lie awake at 4AM thinking about how much I love you, and how much it would hurt to lose you. i used to dream of owning a beautiful home on the lake with you, and every morning, I could roll over either way and see a beautiful sight. on my left; a glistening lake on my right; the love of my life now, I lie awake at 2AM wondering what went wrong and how much I miss you. quite a transition, isn't it?
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Aug 3, 2014
Aug 3, 2014 at 11:58 PM UTC
transitions aren't always for the best