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Eighty years young Speaking in tounge Your body fought Head full of bizarre thought Arms and legs restrained How are you not frightened Are they violent, Yah? We tried, everything, for the shake of your revival I can't bear to see you like this I wish you are dismiss Heavily sedated & exhausted To tired to wrestled & agitated Lord please take his pain away
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Apr 9, 2022
Apr 9, 2022 at 7:40 AM UTC
ICU delirium
It’s strangely busy around the deathbeds, as well it’s my last nightshift of the year. I try to make no noise, can you hear me? Push my hand, if you can, move a limb. Your breath is so slow, please keep going, monitors flash in time with the ventilator. I’ll control the pupils, I know it’s blinding. No one goes with their sparkling old eyes, we are usually fading before we are dying.
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Dec 17, 2021
Dec 17, 2021 at 2:22 AM UTC
White dwarf gazing
- what do you say to someone you love from such a distance ? a stroke could be measured by how far it is from the first floor to the intensive care unit or from the steering wheel to the door **** of the hospital entrance or from your drive way to the spot where you have to pay for parking or from the handset of your telephone to his ear— exhausted, you can only whisper into it— "i love you Daddy" and hope this time he can feel your breath... s jones Nov 2021 .
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Nov 27, 2021
Nov 27, 2021 at 5:29 AM UTC
long distance backstroke
No real connections and no restraints… I watch you breathing and feeling faint. I hold your hand and ask you to fight. I will tell you, your attitude can save your life. I know you’re alone, please know I am here. I see you starving for oxygen, I feel your fear. Please listen to the doctor trying to prescribe, their knowledge and experience can save your life. Please try my darling, you’re just too young. Starving for oxygen can leave you high strung. Don’t you understand the BiPAP can save your life? Or should we start the process and notify your wife? Sweetheart, I get that this is hard! You can’t breathe deeply, your lungs are scarred. I know that I will always ask for too much. We need to get you out of bed and sit you up. But, let me tell you the other route. If you give up, unfortunately, we have our doubts. We might end up having to intubate… And leave those strong wrists in soft restraints. This is something we as nurses know, Unfortunately, once intubated your prognosis is low. Most Covid patients never wean off of the vent, So say goodbye to your family and friends. I’ll hold your hand no matter what you decide, I’ll hold the phone to your ear listening to your families last goodbyes… We will all cry and all of our hearts will break, You’ll just just be another statistic the media will define as “fake.” … please know I’ll always remember you by heart,  I’ll remember your story from end to start, I’ll never forget what you’ve been through, because that’s what we as nurses do.
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Aug 23, 2021
Aug 23, 2021 at 4:25 PM UTC
Alone 😷
No real connections and no restraints… I watch you breathing and feeling faint. I hold your hand and ask you to fight. I will tell you, your attitude can save your life. I know you’re alone, please know I am here. I see you starving for oxygen, I feel your fear. Please listen to the doctor trying to prescribe, their knowledge and experience can save your life. Please try my darling, you’re just too young. Starving for oxygen can leave you high strung. Don’t you understand the BiPAP can save your life? Or should we start the process and notify your wife? Sweetheart, I get that this is hard! You can’t breathe deeply, your lungs are scarred. I know that I will always ask for too much. We need to get you out of bed and sit you up. But, let me tell you the other route. If you give up, unfortunately, we have our doubts. We might end up having to intubate… And leave those strong wrists in soft restraints. This is something we as nurses know, Unfortunately, once intubated your prognosis is low. Most Covid patients never wean off of the vent, So say goodbye to your family and friends. I’ll hold your hand no matter what you decide, I’ll hold the phone to your ear listening to your families last goodbyes… We will all cry and all of our hearts will break, You’ll just just be another statistic the media will define as “fake.” … please know I’ll always remember you by heart,  I’ll remember your story from end to start, I’ll never forget what you’ve been through, because that’s what we as nurses do.
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Everything is black I don’t know where I am Everything is unknown this couldn’t have been the plan my body is shaking they rush to my side my heart is racing theyre afraid I might die Levels of consciousness vary I verbalize many of sounds My limbs are impossible to carry In my head I am no where to be found My eyes were open And my mouth too I took too many pills I didn’t think things through Somewhere in my mind I’m hoping I don’t die And my body took the controls and said, “We have to stay alive“
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Apr 28, 2020
Apr 28, 2020 at 4:18 PM UTC
Where am I?
There’s pieces missing of my life I know I should have thought twice Taking the pills and mentally preparing my will But knew it wasn’t right I drove to help So glad I did If I had waited I would be dead
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Feb 4, 2020
Feb 4, 2020 at 11:24 AM UTC
Broken
I don’t remember much of the time Where I was in the hospital about to die Awake for 36 hours But what is time? When you’re not coherent Everyone’s afraid you will die Memories come in fragments I don’t know why I try to remember It makes me cry I feel like I have lost that time I want to know what it felt like to almost die
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Jan 31, 2020
Jan 31, 2020 at 10:58 AM UTC
Remember
Ambulance ride Why did I do this? I’m scared I will die Losing coherence Seizures arise I don’t remember Days of that time They’re scared I won’t make it My family cries
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Dec 6, 2019
Dec 6, 2019 at 9:36 AM UTC
icu pt. 1
PleAse don’t pretend Lie to a child that somehow we are friends Even if I try to extend Your moving back into the future And we won’t ever be kin If that’s a game you’d like to play Take your misery I’m not afraid to walk away I didn’t make the simple mans mistake I saw a virtue in the struggle of the wait So when I don’t care to even glance in your eyes Don’t act as if it’s some ill willed surprise You had a chance just as I And just as in that sense we are alike I too can choose to exile your kind. So this is me saying with clarity You’ve exhausted all of my charity.
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Jan 8, 2019
Jan 8, 2019 at 2:45 AM UTC
Troubles
Plz. Don’t forget To breathe
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May 24, 2018
May 24, 2018 at 11:35 AM UTC
ICU Care
Beep ..beep…beep Ceiling closed by Foot rested above my head Arms cuffed, multiple Punctures Half vein, half wire Half Survive, half dead Attachment with Machines Beep.. beep.. beep Screen displays, I still survive Hope of Humanity from Machines Health status, undergone Inertia Sometime, time wins the race Sometime, time follows my pace Accelerated Life, Arrhythmia of thought The last Stop
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Feb 19, 2018
Feb 19, 2018 at 10:06 AM UTC
ICU Life
Know that I asked for physical pain, Right when I was the most happy, Invincible I seemed to myself, Poor me- I got it what I asked for, Into the hospital ICU I joined forces. Ya I'm cursed with a long, long life, Onto an evil world I'm slammed, Until I met her I knew not love. Could I walk on water to satisfy her, How convenient for her to imagine, Exhausted, my love isn't even a bit, Aches my heart so metaphorically, Tiniest shards of my soul just cry.
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Apr 16, 2017
Apr 16, 2017 at 12:47 PM UTC
Greed
I got the call while I was at work. Your mom found you lying in the floor, You're still unconscious in the hospital, I got here, doing the speed limit and a lot more. They wouldn't let me see you, ICU is for family, You're one of my best friends; they finally relented. I finally see you and I honestly can't believe The sight with which I'm presented. I hold your hand and your hand is so cold, Not like the lively girl I used to know, I can't say the words I want to say, But they all boil down to, "Please don't go."
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Jan 7, 2016
Jan 7, 2016 at 9:37 PM UTC
Please Don't Go
dead dying uncles in icu rooms unstable little weak men old dried up not dried out you ask i tell, nothing to see here but ashes time rots everything so what tell me is the point of pitiful, joyless struggles all our own small motives laid bare so crass and primal the animals we are mucking about ******* in the mud
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Aug 24, 2014
Aug 24, 2014 at 12:07 AM UTC
Infarction