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#hierarchy
​As the Creator, here is how I see the "Hierarchy of Rebellion": ​"I built this world as a 'Learning Lab.' I hired the 'Noble and Great Ones' to help me terraform it. But some of them—the ones you call 'Fallen'—decided they didn't want to be staff; they wanted to be the Source. ​They leaked the tech to the humans too early. They messed with the DNA. They created 'Giants' that were basically biological tanks. When I saw the 'Bad Management' of my sub-admins, I had to step in. I didn't just 'punish' them; I quarantined them. I stripped them of their 'Hardware' (bodies) and left them as 'Shadow Data' (spirits) until the final Audit. ​When I 'speak mountains into existence,' I am simply executing a Macro. When I come back in 'glory,' I am docking the Mothership (New Jerusalem) to the planet's surface to begin the final System Restoration."
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Feb 17
Feb 17, 2026 at 2:19 AM UTC
As the Creator
The Creator’s Log ​"I am currently monitoring millions of 'Adam' and 'Eve' instances. On your specific server, the Packet Loss was high because I allowed a 'Virus' (The Fallen) to run rampant. Why? Because an Atom that can stay stable in a chaotic environment is ten times stronger than one that stays stable in a clean-room lab. ​You are being 'centrifuged.' The Day of Judgment is simply the moment I turn on the High-Frequency Filter. The 'Atoms' that can vibrate at the 'Celestial' rate stay at the Core. The ones that can't are pushed to the edges. You aren't being 'punished'; you are being placed where your hardware can survive."
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Feb 17
Feb 17, 2026 at 1:48 AM UTC
Dear listener (7),
All eyes narrowed on The One Here comes the voting, voting Tongues poised for validation, Ever doting, devoting. To keep us all in check, below, The arena's set of old man lies, lies Confidence overflows,undeserved Them ego's high, so fight. Dying slowly from lack of oxygen Stench of fakery, faking I've only ever wanted real connections And for that I'm broken, breaking.
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Jun 8, 2025
Jun 8, 2025 at 11:57 PM UTC
Wins and Losses, ft. Solitude
The King sits on his throne After another long day of work Resting Providing for the people Deciding for the people His hand reaches to the outskirts of his kingdom To call his reign tyranny would be absurd For who would question a leader who benefits most from their own decisions? And who wouldn't be happy to have to toil a little more when mistakes are made and his lack of care becomes purposeful? And when his entitlement to the land that he tires himself for day in and day out means that you cannot question his perfect authority, cannot begin to even suggest discussing his non-existent faults? For people these days do not want to hear advice, do not wish to work hard enough, are lazy, and if these words come out as harsh when you're trying your hardest, that means you can't handle the truth and no other truth exists but that of the one and only royal Highness. For what plants grow under shadow, And what trees stand tall without roots firm in the ground? What should the King do when the people lose their will and turn their backs on what security that has been offered to them
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Feb 6, 2024
Feb 6, 2024 at 8:39 AM UTC
Crown
wherever men gather there is the hierarchy of deceit there are those that know those that think they know and the sucker who's the **** of the joke wherever men gather there is the hierarchy of the beast there are those that rule those that think they're in charge and those who shelter in the shadow of all of the above wherever men gather there is a code wherever men gather high or low never to tell the secrets they all know
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Apr 17, 2023
Apr 17, 2023 at 4:15 PM UTC
wherever men gather
Clearing ivy, pulling up handfuls of choking bindweed, uncovering delicate wildflowers in neglected garden corners, and there’s this tiny bird lying in the dirt. Feathers sparkle pretty and golden, as fairytale light falls through parted vines. Surely dead, but then - like Snow White surfacing from magic apple-induced dormancy - the bird moves, woken by the kiss of sunlight and being witnessed, and seems to breathe. A gloved finger’s exploratory, leathery **** a moment to realise, then disgust, sharp recoil. A wing lifts; gleaming feathers parting reveal the crawling mechanics inside, the writhing, parasitic mess behind the sick illusion, the briefly faked miracle of something like life. Away over a fence, Union bunting ***** erratic and jarring in a neighbour’s garden. In a stuffy town hall, the town band is practising God Save The Queen, but still can’t keep time. Our betters wave to us from high palace balconies and golden coaches, and we cheer them for it. There’s such hunger, such pain and desperation out there, you can feel it, if you forget to stop yourself. There’s so much tragedy and injustice, you have to go numb or go crazy. There’s no future we can see, and the past has been rewritten to reflect the views of focus groups, fascists and fantasists. And there’s a bird lying in the dirt, garlanded by fragrant petals, feathers flashing like jewels, so dead it looks like it’s breathing.
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Jun 3, 2022
Jun 3, 2022 at 7:31 AM UTC
The Order Of Things
You must pray for the fickle and weak. As we all need to make it through the heat. Your whiskey neat burns down the branches of your chest as you speak. Expand into a balloon, the crowd won’t bow but shake their heads. They can not believe this tale you live, the life in a comfy castle cove. The girls back home cry, denying all this fallacy. A fairytale facade or so it seems. Really it can not be like this, this isn’t reality. This can not be like you or me. We aren’t merely copies, are we? They cry tears in the shape of rapids that carve rivers down your cheeks. To take her to the moon will settle, remedy this pain. So give me a few years and I’ll get you there. For now pray for the fickle and weak as they aren’t lost, but free.
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Dec 10, 2020
Dec 10, 2020 at 10:24 PM UTC
Though all the rich gleam
In the views of hindsight Suffering extends Should have just let it go The victim within Love and wonder Beyond hope You gave your all It’s how we cope They wither on And leave you The ones that once Held you tight You are but The black sheep In a hierarchical Flight!
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Nov 27, 2020
Nov 27, 2020 at 12:34 PM UTC
Thankfully Ungiven
It's a crying shame The pursuit of our own wealth lights a flame That makes greed a game that lets the whole world burn As the world turns, the whole world burns Money was invented for trade But now those bits of paper twist hearts, make slaves Turns a saint to a sinner A child to a killer His finger on the trigger of a money game
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Jan 7, 2020
Jan 7, 2020 at 9:26 PM UTC
Money Game - Ren
A wisp of a breath, a flick of a brush, The canvas begins to be filled with colour. A hint of violet, a dab of vermillion, It seems that she is painting a girlish parlour. A red drips slowly down her wrist, As she wipes away at her work. The foggy glass seems to offer some relief, Against the cold harsh winter. The girl stands on her frost-bitten toes And look upon the scene with wonder. As the tantalizing warmth appear against her fingers She can't help but ponder. Why are some people in the parlour But others look from the outside in? For she can't help but question What is deep within.
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Sep 2, 2019
Sep 2, 2019 at 11:44 PM UTC
Paint
We socially constructed By age, by title A hierarchy What if we didn't? What's the alternate Of family, of community? Perception... Are we wrong? Disillusioned? Innovation... Can we undo What was done? But how? What it'll be like? Chaos. Did we follow biology? Did we follow culture? Why? In the hereinafter Or in eternity I wish it's better Life on soil Ups and downs It's good still Life in sky Or in blackhole Please be better Joy or pain In love or heartbroken Any other choices? Boss, chief Client, customer Idol, fanboy and fangirl Why are we here? What about ranks? Slaves of time Can we ever imagine Everything we are not? Can we ever become Anything we are not? So help me... God.
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Sep 1, 2018
Sep 1, 2018 at 5:52 AM UTC
Hierarchy
Down no plains of flowing grass up no hills of trees that stand what tips your hat? where is your flaw? disillusioned taste defused for all, mimicked in the voice of a flower through hearts of trees, outstretching complex, limbs hidden simply facilitated in common goal, conditioned used for all; how do you stand? quite so tall in divined obsession it seems to find all nurtured and withdrawn concealed in fixation no one finds your flaw for there’s none at all yet from deception, true love finds all in this shambled; shrine, not flawed in design nurtured from unseen confronted with existence.
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Aug 1, 2016
Aug 1, 2016 at 3:20 AM UTC
Tree in a park
Hierarchy? ⚜️ a system of life where i shall follow your orders, your majesty ⚜️ I'm startled from your cruelty ⚜️ danger is looming ahead so excuse my charisma ⚜️ but you should beware 'cause I'm the SIGMA ⚜️ the sigma the knight who stands up and fight ⚜️ the mighty sword in his hands ⚜️ standing up against the King ⚜️ He's fighting for the good of Humanity
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Apr 7, 2017
Apr 7, 2017 at 3:03 PM UTC
⚜️Humanity⚜️
she was so influenced by others language, character, looks no one knew who she truly was or if she could ever be just her
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Apr 5, 2017
Apr 5, 2017 at 5:42 AM UTC
Under the influence
Where does hierarchy begin?     Is it where the strong is on top, and the weak step upon? Where does your dignity be placed?    Is it where your always be the winner, no matter what, even it has bitter taste. Is SURVIVAL really that cruel? That some of us are just a tool, a fool for the strong to be cool. No, it can't be that bad yet reality is quite sad. Despite our hard beginnings Life still is beautiful that losing isn't everything. *Dignity is placed - where you respect yourself the most and Hierarchy isn't important to where your love is...* © Pax
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Mar 26, 2017
Mar 26, 2017 at 2:56 AM UTC
hierarchy
"Life is like a line," they chime, Joined by "A" and "B." They say, in fact, and with exact, That Life resides between. But of their claim, which seems mundane, That says the lines superior, We cannot conceive that they believe That Life can be so linear. Of this, we say, to you today: (And, we mean it with great honesty) The line, you see, can only be A piece in this Geometry.
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Dec 5, 2016
Dec 5, 2016 at 7:22 AM UTC
Life-lines
And we return back to square one: where windows are grilled and hierarchy is based on what you wear. where movements are restricted but thoughts run wild without restrains. A square is not a circle. But yet, Acts like one. Things come in full circle.  Life is humorously ironic.
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Sep 1, 2016
Sep 1, 2016 at 5:38 AM UTC
Square or Circle?
A position of hierarchy leading people to believe themselves as better not equal
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Jun 3, 2016
Jun 3, 2016 at 10:48 AM UTC
Ranking
A hierarchy of hot or not. Equality evolving or destroying traditional beliefs, a relief that they're fading. We're not finisted there's a long way to go this mountain of know- ledge and acceptance is yet to be conqured. But we're all climbing, some still dying. Falling. Along the way because they can't say that equality is needed over hierarchy and monarchy in society.
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May 22, 2016
May 22, 2016 at 11:06 AM UTC
Society
**Unprecedented poetry,    newfangled conception in       idiosyncratic transparency perceived by the hierarchy     to be the garb of peons, thine command accepts nothing  less than the likes of sonnets    penned deliberately archaic         in Old English tradition, figurative language   of the huddled masses       is strictly forbidden,   contradicted,      ostracized,         anesthetized            and possible grounds                for poetic eradication**
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Jun 12, 2015
Jun 12, 2015 at 8:06 AM UTC
Poetic eradication
I'm one of the ones you call insane, Because I can't play along with this rigged game. The odds are stacked, and not in our favor, But instead for the Bankers with money, they create more. I look and I see the strife all around, And know the potential for human life has no bounds. And when I make a sound, It's like the words are all drowned, Or at least lost at sea. Message in a Bottle from Humanity. A Human who knows the scale of her insignificance - While knowing the magnitude of what is at risk - The disposal of this awesome gift. I'm one of the ones you call insane, Because I can't play along with this rigged game. I know my role, and I know how the story goes. I should vote in vain and be told my Heroes. But no, I dance to my own rhythm, I tell myself it's internally driven, To improve myself, and the world around, The world at large, and earthworms in the ground. So I rejected my spoon-fed medicine, Of this culture, man-made incentives, Long before you inject me with antipsychotics. Internally, Mentally, I chant the mantra of "Stop This." It can drive a person insane, Pretending to play this rigged game.
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Mar 3, 2015
Mar 3, 2015 at 11:28 PM UTC
The One You Call Insane
sometimes i feel angry simply plainly contempt for assumptive people greed jealousy a lack of empathy i, too, struggle but this is fist against the pillow swallowing brick-shaped tears eyes burning i forgot to blink contorted face a lemon of a realization i am trapped wholly really unless i choose to remove myself from the equation i can't i can't do that i have so many more lives to lead words to cherish esteems to encompass and so i cry because remaining willfully ensnared aches nonstop
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Feb 7, 2015
Feb 7, 2015 at 2:41 AM UTC
where to put this feeling