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#heavymetal
this music pleases me it has the riffs heavy bass and thundering drums a singer whose voice sounds like gravel and ice but it doesn't excite me there is plenty but not enough there is emotion but stunted there is noise but too controlled I want them to hear them play like no one is listening
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Jun 22, 2025
Jun 22, 2025 at 6:07 AM UTC
heavy metal
it's not about the melody it's all about the energy if your ears aren't ringing the decibels aren't delivering you have to play it LOUD to reach the individual in the crowd this is more than just music it is a life choice to fit in belong to a family a brotherhood only each other understand
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Aug 7, 2021
Aug 7, 2021 at 3:39 PM UTC
heavy metal
<music> <en-nan nin nin en-nan et dan> It's the Bra-Hi STOMP,              COME ON, COME ON, COME ON! <music> It's the Bra-Hi STOMP, <music> ...a pen, a floor, A CAGE,              It's the Bra-Hi STOMP, <music> ON THE FLOOR, down you go-oo,             It's the Bra-Hi STOMP, It's the Bra-Hi STOMP, Caught in, caught in, caught-up again,             It's the Bra-Hi STOMP, It's the Bra-Hi STOMP! COME ON, COME, COME ON!            It's the Bra-Hi STOMP, ON THE FLOOR, down you go-oo,             It's the Bra-Hi STOMP, <musical break> . . It's the Bra-Hi STOMP,              COME ON, COME ON, COME ON! It's the Bra-Hi STOMP! <fade out>
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Apr 30, 2017
Apr 30, 2017 at 10:03 AM UTC
Mosh Pit
Working 9 to 5 The constant rumble of the fans above my head, That cool me down, so I don't feel too tired. The crashing bangs, of heavy metal things, As the machines continue to work, To produce metal sheets. The thunderous press machine, Thumps another piece of metal, As the production line keeps moving, Full of different people. Each of them standing, in their own specific spot; Capable of breaking the chain, If one of them is gone. So just hang your metal onto the track; The thing that made me quit before, but I came back. And now here I am, stronger and wiser, Better than before; Now they've offered me the job full time. But I know, I can do better than this, For I wish to be a poet, an author and a lyricist. I just keep looking at the clock, Waiting for another minute to pass. Damn! I'm sure it's stopped; I've surely been here longer than that. No; it's just because, I'm not using my head And thinking to make time pass quicker And not just waiting for it to be 10. At last! It's here, we all give a silent cheer, Or a sigh of relief, that the day is done. At last, now we can all go home. (C)2013 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
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May 3, 2018
May 3, 2018 at 4:52 AM UTC
Working 9 to 5
Are we the cattle of an entire nation? What have we got to lose? Except for those already lost You can be docile or violent, just don’t lie in silence! Rise up! Here begins a new age, end discrimination! Innocence is dead, the wrong men end up in the jail cell This place is nice, but life is going to hell They’re ****** ‘cause the former majority is now a minority Hypocritical foundations, this land’ll never unite What happened to Civil Rights? They only gave us what was left. You pigs - You must be bored just to send so many to the morgue I can’t stand to watch the news, this society isn’t one to put kids through And it’ll only get worse Time never changes, history repeats No more running (RISE UP!) This is the culling! The culling! Never will I be your ***** The culling! (x2) The United States lives an ****** Cold War! (Let’s Rock) We are the Antiheros, the Public Enemy Now join me friends, let’s unveil the clarity Who am I to you? When you look what do you see? All you see are the colors of sin The American Dream is broken, you breed loathing Who can, Who will - Make America Great Again? I can’t be led by a Puppeteer of Dollar Strings You wanna make the world free? (HUH?) But the only thing costless, is the loss of me Drop it! If she needs and investigation (She’s out!) That’s the end of an asinine conversation Rise Up! It’s far too late I am the spirit of those who live with a target One wrong factor can end an actor The leaders are gone, the show is over It’s the end of the road, but the start of - The Culling! A Constitution Diluted by Disillusion The Culling! A Jail For A Nationalistic Conspiracist! Time puses back, but it doesn’t make it better The War is getting colder and the water’s getting redder Every Rose has it’s thorns We are the Bulls with dulled horns - Branded! We’re the ones you reprimanded! I! Feel I was born in the wrong time I’ll go forward and see if they opened their eyes Or I’ll go back! So I could ****** Revolutionize! We all see, the ocean is vast But like the truth and time, It Never Lasts! Post-Traumatic Society Destruction The Bliss of Disorder continues to function All of the ways you hold us down Leads to a point we take your crown Everytime you hold us back Pushed in a corner, poised to attack One last push against - The Culling! We can’t hideaway any longer The Culling (x3) Your ignorance makes us stronger The Culling!
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Apr 29, 2016
Apr 29, 2016 at 12:21 AM UTC
The Culling
Are we the cattle of an entire nation? What have we got to lose? Except for those already lost You can be docile or violent, just don’t lie in silence! Rise up! Here begins a new age, end discrimination! Innocence is dead, the wrong men end up in the jail cell This place is nice, but life is going to hell They’re ****** ‘cause the former majority is now a minority Hypocritical foundations, this land’ll never unite What happened to Civil Rights? They only gave us what was left. You pigs - You must be bored just to send so many to the morgue I can’t stand to watch the news, this society isn’t one to put kids through And it’ll only get worse Time never changes, history repeats No more running (RISE UP!) This is the culling! The culling! Never will I be your ***** The culling! (x2) The United States lives an ****** Cold War! (Let’s Rock) We are the Antiheros, the Public Enemy Now join me friends, let’s unveil the clarity Who am I to you? When you look what do you see? All you see are the colors of sin The American Dream is broken, you breed loathing Who can, Who will - Make America Great Again? I can’t be led by a Puppeteer of Dollar Strings You wanna make the world free? (HUH?) But the only thing costless, is the loss of me Drop it! If she needs and investigation (She’s out!) That’s the end of an asinine conversation Rise Up! It’s far too late I am the spirit of those who live with a target One wrong factor can end an actor The leaders are gone, the show is over It’s the end of the road, but the start of - The Culling! A Constitution Diluted by Disillusion The Culling! A Jail For A Nationalistic Conspiracist! Time puses back, but it doesn’t make it better The War is getting colder and the water’s getting redder Every Rose has it’s thorns We are the Bulls with dulled horns - Branded! We’re the ones you reprimanded! I! Feel I was born in the wrong time I’ll go forward and see if they opened their eyes Or I’ll go back! So I could ****** Revolutionize! We all see, the ocean is vast But like the truth and time, It Never Lasts! Post-Traumatic Society Destruction The Bliss of Disorder continues to function All of the ways you hold us down Leads to a point we take your crown Everytime you hold us back Pushed in a corner, poised to attack One last push against - The Culling! We can’t hideaway any longer The Culling (x3) Your ignorance makes us stronger The Culling!
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I Put my Coin into the Slot And watch the Plastic horses Galloping away. Now my ears sing And I lead straight lines to circles, Into symbols for the eye inside the glass ball, Its blinking is its calling. I carry it, Cables dripping from my sleeves Stumbling out of And from The oceans favour, Back to my own arms. Feeding back the seagulls to the breeze. The thunder feeds my compass To a sun lost in a forest. Thrown into boxes with carpeted walls; I find myself playing Heavy metal.
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Jun 26, 2015
Jun 26, 2015 at 6:27 PM UTC
Plastic Horses
I remember the first time I laid my eyes upon your dark, golden-highlighted ringlets siting haphazardly on your nimble head. They were positioned above your flat, south Asian face, as if some wayward artist took his paintbrush and, in a fit of creative chaos, splattered and sputtered paint across a blank and endless canvas. Your hair represented the kind of sweet, quiet entropy that people needed in their lives. The great offense the artist had committed by being so reckless with such a delicate subject could be forgiven, however, because he surely acted as such simply because he had previously exhausted himself whilst meticulously creating your enrapturing eyes. Round cerulean orbs, speckled with bits of yellows and greens with a péridot ring centered around a pitch black pupil that represented the contents of your dispassionate heart. This is not an accurate description of the man who holds my unrequited love, however. You have achieved this sort of romantic, majestic rendition of beauty through the bias of my foolish heart and through my patronage of the arts. A typical person would do much better to portray you as nothing more than a hellish brute who is in desperate need of a haircut and a perhaps a larger assortment of clothing rather than torn, raggedy jeans and hand-me-down heavy metal t-shirts.
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Apr 20, 2014
Apr 20, 2014 at 2:50 AM UTC
An Artist's Rendition