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#faults
The mirror waits where it always waits, polite, patient, ready for blame. My eyes trace faults like constellations— every scar a star I drew myself. I catalog the crooked lines and shelve my worth upon a shelf.
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Mar 16
Mar 16, 2026 at 9:43 PM UTC
Mirror
its not the speck in your eye its the dust storm in mine too dark to want to see itself so I pick on the minute -the smallest chance I might gain an empty advantage
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Jan 15
Jan 15, 2026 at 9:41 AM UTC
speck of dust
I know what I am. I am a familiar to my faults. I line them up each morning and sound them off at the top of my lungs. I hold them in my arms and rock them back to sleep every night. They cling to me as scars linger on the skin. They burst out during the most inopportune moments; breaking through silence like water through rust.
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Mar 16, 2024
Mar 16, 2024 at 7:50 AM UTC
12-aug-2017
i admit my faults reluctantly and whisper forgiveness to mind
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Sep 2, 2021
Sep 2, 2021 at 10:15 PM UTC
haiku 21/9/2b
The cracks form on the surface as I stomp my weight in anger. You push back screaming for the silence to engulf you. And I knew I did not deserve you I always knew. Your skin now lined with obsidian fissures. I try to seal you in gold but even I know. The best thing I can give you all I can do is leave. -Kore
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Mar 8, 2021
Mar 8, 2021 at 12:21 PM UTC
Faults
I have several toxic habits - I know - because I read this article on the web. It’s a miracle I’m not an axe murderer, based on what the experts said. I use “should” biased judgements - when things go amiss. I think about the future, when settling down to rest. I obsess on defining the “best part” in each of my experiences. I often think in poetic terms  - which has driven wise men delirious. I have nova bursts of interest - which escalate into crushes. I keep a mental list of incidents which, if left unmanaged, lead to grudges. The flaws go on and on - God, I simply am a mess. I need to face my many flaws so that they might be addressed. Do you think anyone is ever perfect? Is it like playing whack-a-mole? So that no one ever ends up perfect - they simply end up old?
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Dec 23, 2020
Dec 23, 2020 at 5:55 AM UTC
blind spots
You’re talking too yourself Causing a lot of the same mistakes The problems you’re faced with Stare at your soul All the way from the eyes Straight down too your heart Shooting right back up to the mind Embracing it all with whatever soul your will has left to look at with Constantly reading your own book Correlating corrections with so many errors Concentrating on the void of the infinite mirror The faults The beauties Loving it all Till all of it Falls Don’t look in the mirror Getting lost in a world That’s really never been there Talk to your soul Tell it, you love it Don’t look in the mirror Searching for fear
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Aug 5, 2020
Aug 5, 2020 at 11:12 PM UTC
Don’t Look in the Mirror
You have a pure heart So tender and so soft Always putting others first Before thinking about yourself I admire that heart of yours Always able to be nice No matter who they are Or what they’ve done But I’ve grown to dislike it as well Because you loved too much You were nice to the wrong people The ones who didn’t deserve it But that heart of yours is too strong There’s nothing anyone could do about You let no one stop you From doing what you think is best So if you think you messed up Or think you did something wrong There isn’t really much to say You did nothing wrong but believe And if people weren’t capable of seeing that Then they were either blind Or too dumb to realize How much your love is worth In my eyes you are perfect, strong with your big heart You are my entire world But if you don’t want to listen and would like to know where you went wrong I will tell you this: The only flaw you’ve ever had Is your excessive kindness The only fault you’ve ever had Is loving too much
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Jul 25, 2020
Jul 25, 2020 at 11:18 PM UTC
Loving Too Much
my grievous faults ————————- ~for SJR1000~ the sun is out after a week of island fog, (different from regular citified fogginess) days seasoned with rapacious, hard hitting all-night-long-rains, steady winds of fifteen miles per hour, made “outside”unattractive, yet, even now, sun inside with me, writing you listening to Tupelo Honey, sets me awondering, have you figured out how people work, uncovered the source of human misery, so we can get that vaccine asap, for something a 1000 times more deadly than coronavirus? my grievous faults, many, well catalogued, but one of the chiefest is a side effect of a virulent ego that cuts off vision, thoughtfulness, letting good people slip away, and when called out, I’m aggrieved, my faults, they wicked, embarrassing so I’m asking, you, myself, anybody else, eavesdropping, if this is true, for me, for you, you got the experience, if *”It don't make no difference Escaping one last time It's easier to believe in this sweet madness Oh, this glorious sadness That brings me to my knees”*^ write me, enlighten me, and if the answers are still a fugitive escaping, no matter, just way it is, no pressure other than the sixteen tons of mining life’s coal dust vicissitudes, its mysterious way of tilting the scales, then escaping, side venting, through poetry
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May 30, 2020
May 30, 2020 at 11:59 AM UTC
my grievous faults
What is the most dangerous, between hate and love? They both makes us blind, Faults, one makes us ignore, the other makes us find
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May 15, 2020
May 15, 2020 at 11:18 AM UTC
love or hate
I am a girl, since in my soul I know no better, of curious notions: I take storms in teacups I collect them, and channel them into whirlpools When my soul can no longer take the ups And downs, when I no longer possess the tools To build a façade, or can no longer hold them I accumulate the dust from molehills And make them into volcanoes, from which stem And flow the plumes of fumes and spills Of my lava anger. And if my spirit intellect were stronger, I would not bottle my emotions.
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May 7, 2020
May 7, 2020 at 2:46 PM UTC
My chief fault
Did I Provide the cause With all my flaws To take ownership For these faults
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Jan 19, 2020
Jan 19, 2020 at 2:30 PM UTC
Is it mine
I act like I can You know about all my faults Do not care I can't
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Jan 8, 2020
Jan 8, 2020 at 9:55 AM UTC
Can/Can't (Haiku)
As the chilled breeze wisps across my covered face I think about the life I've led and wonder I wonder if somewhere along the path I wronged anyone Anyone that crossed that path Anyone that bid me hello or goodbye Anyone that could have or should have made a difference Not at all sure why this particular moment and this particular wispy wind has brought such thoughts to my senses All I know is that thinking so deeply gives birth to the heightened awareness of my faults and weaknesses What to do What to do Brian Hill - 2019 # 244
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Sep 28, 2019
Sep 28, 2019 at 10:19 AM UTC
Wispy Wind...
When I excuse my faults I lose the opportunity to improve myself. When I accept my faults and evaluate my self I can then improve my self towards the wisdom and virtue I need to achieve optimal joy and happiness.
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Jul 31, 2019
Jul 31, 2019 at 9:58 PM UTC
Excusing My Faults?
People Are particularly Narrow-minded Prideful Impatient. I cannot say I am not the same things At times. If everyone was judged Good or bad By the amount of faults we had We would all Be thought to be terrible. So If one must judge Don’t judge how many faults Every person has many But instead Please judge if they try To be better or not. You may read this And think I don’t have that many faults! You are wrong Because if you’re reading this You’re probably not Jesus or God. You don’t have to be defensive anyway Because a type of person Is not accurately judged By the amount of faults But instead The amount of redeeming qualities.
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Jul 5, 2019
Jul 5, 2019 at 4:41 PM UTC
Faults
Bee-ing rejected The path to love is a long and winding road And the road is in 3D when you fly through the air. You can bee left behind so many times, That you think that it will never go right, Until you make it there. There are so many ups with love, But without love you are only ever let down. Humble was no different, he wanted to bee loved like everybody else, But sometimes it doesn’t matter how many times you try, You always end up at the end of the night going home by yourself. Humble was a trier, he would ask out every bee that he liked, But try as he might and as much as he would have liked, It seemed nobody would ever love him And he was alone most of the time. He had been rejected so many times that he decided to make a list. The first one said this; the second one that And this is the story of Humble B. Bumble and his love-life… Ain’t it sad? You’re always crying, boohoo. You’re too happy; I am nothing like you. You are just like me, because I like nothing about me. We don’t think the same; you’re not fun, you’re a pain. You are annoying me, buzz away little bee; You have my sympathy, but you will never bee with me. You’re too quiet, you talk too much. You’re too weak, you’re not tough. You’re too slow to make a move; You’re too fast with your response to bee telling the truth. Your clothes are bad; your hair is bad. You’re far too sad to bee a bad boy. You’re just having a laugh, you’re never serious; You must bee delirious. You’ve not cool, don’t bee a fool. You’re too nice; you’re not nice enough. You’re too far below me, you are not heading up. You’re not ambitious, nor smart, You’re never victorious and you are no work of art. You can’t sing or dance; you wear the wrong kind of pants, no bling. You live with your ‘rents, but you don’t pay rent. You have no honey, I like honeys. You ain’t funny; you are far beneath me. You’re not pretty, you’re too silly. You have no style, you are not unique And you don’t have a perfect smile, ugly bee. You think you are great, you’re always late, I don’t like your face; we’re just mates. I like him, you will never win. You are such a loser; who is gonna choose ya? So many times Humble searched for love And when it was good it was really good! But when it was sad, it was real love, I guess; We will never know… Do you think Humble will ever bee truly loved?... (C)2017 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
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Jul 5, 2019
Jul 5, 2019 at 5:14 AM UTC
16. Bee-ing rejected
Bee-ing rejected The path to love is a long and winding road And the road is in 3D when you fly through the air. You can bee left behind so many times, That you think that it will never go right, Until you make it there. There are so many ups with love, But without love you are only ever let down. Humble was no different, he wanted to bee loved like everybody else, But sometimes it doesn’t matter how many times you try, You always end up at the end of the night going home by yourself. Humble was a trier, he would ask out every bee that he liked, But try as he might and as much as he would have liked, It seemed nobody would ever love him And he was alone most of the time. He had been rejected so many times that he decided to make a list. The first one said this; the second one that And this is the story of Humble B. Bumble and his love-life… Ain’t it sad? You’re always crying, boohoo. You’re too happy; I am nothing like you. You are just like me, because I like nothing about me. We don’t think the same; you’re not fun, you’re a pain. You are annoying me, buzz away little bee; You have my sympathy, but you will never bee with me. You’re too quiet, you talk too much. You’re too weak, you’re not tough. You’re too slow to make a move; You’re too fast with your response to bee telling the truth. Your clothes are bad; your hair is bad. You’re far too sad to bee a bad boy. You’re just having a laugh, you’re never serious; You must bee delirious. You’ve not cool, don’t bee a fool. You’re too nice; you’re not nice enough. You’re too far below me, you are not heading up. You’re not ambitious, nor smart, You’re never victorious and you are no work of art. You can’t sing or dance; you wear the wrong kind of pants, no bling. You live with your ‘rents, but you don’t pay rent. You have no honey, I like honeys. You ain’t funny; you are far beneath me. You’re not pretty, you’re too silly. You have no style, you are not unique And you don’t have a perfect smile, ugly bee. You think you are great, you’re always late, I don’t like your face; we’re just mates. I like him, you will never win. You are such a loser; who is gonna choose ya? So many times Humble searched for love And when it was good it was really good! But when it was sad, it was real love, I guess; We will never know… Do you think Humble will ever bee truly loved?... (C)2017 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
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I think the moulds were broken with humanity, for if we were perfect there wouldn't be so many faults in the mould. But we learnt to smooth over the cracks and realise that we aren't perfect but together we can mould a better future together.
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May 25, 2019
May 25, 2019 at 4:25 PM UTC
The Moulds Were Broken
The life that I live Time is not infinite; life is only finite. Please do never waste my time, for I only have this one life. The day are not all numbered, we have only just begun to love. This love you people speak of…will it ever be enough? I can repeat the mistakes and I can make a change, But I chose to do neither; I must find my way, To become a better human being. I have never been like you with your liar’s true feelings. In the pit of my stomach I know there is really nothing wrong, But still I go on passionately apathetic to all the faults you own. I am not saying I deserve this or regret hearing what you want; I am simply stating that I hate you for leaving me all alone. My water is so full of salt, drinking leaves me crazy. This glass is no longer drinkable, for it tastes of forgotten ladies. I am forever dying from your thirst, Without the realization that love is my curse. Forever searching inside illusions; My ghostly hands look real to me. I am lost in a place of complete confusion; I am lost in your reality. Negative is my positive; I carry lightning with my thunder. Behind sunglasses I hide behind eye-lids, This cursed spell I am under. (C)2019 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
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May 23, 2019
May 23, 2019 at 7:15 AM UTC
This life that I live