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THE GREAT COUNTRY Adebayo Samuel Ogunleye~ The GreatQuill🖋️ Silent I wished to remain, But alas, my speakfire cried aloud: “I shall speak and speak— Speak of that great country, That great country, With oceans of wisdom, Yet wandering the streets of futility. Speak of that great country, That great country Flowing with honey; Yet honey for only a few palates, While bitterness lingers Upon the lips of many. Speak of that great country, That great country That gives so generously, Yet lacks in abundance The very things it gives away. I sought to calm my speakfire, But alas, it cried again, Yearning to weep even more. ‘Speak on, speak on,’ I replied. Speak of that great country, That great country That suffered under its conquerors, And after their departure, Became captive to self-conquerors. Speak of that great country, That great country, Bearing “Giant” as its title, Yet, unfortunately fortunate, A title that scarcely fits Its present condition. Speak of that great country, That great country That gives you oromodiye, Yet in return Takes away odidi omo. Speak of that great country, That great country, Which outwardly appears Goodly bad, And inwardly seems Best at being worse. Speak of that great country, That great country, Rich in countless treasures, Yet wallowing in penury. And so my speakfire speaks Of that great country— My great country. *Oromodiye -- A chick *Odidi omo -- (A child) Human. E-mail= [email protected].
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Jun 1, 2018
Jun 1, 2018 at 7:48 AM UTC
THE GREAT COUNTRY
You don’t write the poems.... but you hold the sky they fall into. While others chase metaphors, you chase bugs.... silent, stubborn ghosts hiding between lines of code no one else reads. A glitch flickers.... and somewhere a poet thinks their voice has broken. You know better. You stay. You fix. You apologize for storms you didn’t summon. You built a place where strangers bleed safely, where words don’t ask permission before becoming wounds or wings. And still.... you answer messages, patch fractures, rewrite rules so kindness has a structure and silence has a home. Who thanks the one who keeps the door open while everyone else walks in and out carrying pieces of themselves? You are not in the poems.... but you are in every pause between them, every comment that lands gently, every voice that stays because nothing broke when it mattered. So here.... a rare thing for a builder: Not feedback. Not a bug report. Just this.... Thank you for holding a world together that was never yours alone.
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Apr 16
Apr 16, 2026 at 3:09 PM UTC
For the One Behind the Quiet Platform @eliotyork
let me just say something i really don't care what the website looks like i might have disliked this at first but it's stars and sparkles, honestly how could that be a bad thing and the people i've met here i would have never found anywhere else.
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Jan 26
Jan 26, 2026 at 10:29 PM UTC
the new website
The Hello Poetry Hub Really does feel like Home Beyond a Pen and a Friend Where Eliot York Set In Motion The Screen Time For All Of Us To Read Conceive And Dream Our Poetry Is Alive As We Give - We Thrive! Thank You... DLR & ? 27.11.2025 ☼ ♡ ƸӜƷ ❀ ♬
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Nov 26, 2025
Nov 26, 2025 at 5:17 PM UTC
Eliot York Thank You...
i come back here every day and always i don't even know why, anymore everything is black and white and kind and beautiful and okay it's become habitual, i suppose i don't want to imagine the end the finality dust settling i don't want to be here to see it i would never ask to know if hp is as important to you as it is to me i think we all know, already and definitely and infinitely. i think we already know this hurrah is not final i want to say i'm here to stay to keep on reading your glorious words and thoughts and everythings your happiness and heartbreak i want eliot york and you and you and everyone to know we'll get past this
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Nov 10, 2025
Nov 10, 2025 at 11:15 PM UTC
this hurrah, i think, is not final
Yo yo First poem about Eliot York (I have no idea if this will work) His poems so fresh make a young thot Wanna twerk Ya ya Keeping it real Ya'll noe da deal Up in here we poets be serious Nuff to **** But not our leader Eliot Or else he'd spill Ink all over our digital pads of paper WORD TO YOUR MOTHER Aye Aye Last verse of the day I'll push everyone out of my way Expect Eliot, he's the king of poe-it-tree An excellent expert Take it from me WORD OUT
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Mar 27, 2018
Mar 27, 2018 at 12:01 PM UTC
Eliot the Excellent Expert
We are the ones who feel almost everything. Squeezed like sun-warmed wine grapes, pressed like fragrant coffee beans, distilled like kilos of flowers, may these memories of our lives become good poems.
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Aug 27, 2015
Aug 27, 2015 at 8:19 PM UTC
Who We Are