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potions made under new moons drink my thoughts at noon sit with sadness in the blue lagoon purify myself with a joint or two ****** the volleyball and scream a few spike it, set it, pray for a breakthrough bike to work, work to bike fight the urge to be petty and spite spike it, fight it, today is a breakthrough peace is a breath away death is commonplace deep breaths today stress is commonplace
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Sep 1, 2023
Sep 1, 2023 at 9:37 AM UTC
Commonplace
Maybe it's all the avarice The commonplace detachment, Of trodden-life, taken as a game. It is what it is, The way things go, A billion different ways To say the same thing.
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Jun 18, 2023
Jun 18, 2023 at 1:54 PM UTC
Smidgen
In this Ordinary Swoon by Michael R. Burch In this ordinary swoon as I pass from life to death, I feel no heat from the cold, pale moon; I feel no sympathy for breath. Who I am and why I came, I do not know; nor does it matter. The end of every man’s the same and every god’s as mad as a hatter. I do not fear the letting go; I only fear the clinging on to hope when there’s no hope, although I lift my face to the blazing sun and feel the greater intensity of the wilder inferno within me. Keywords/Tags: swoon, life, death, ordinary, commonplace, usual, average, mediocre, inferno, intensity, passion, cool, cold, pale, moon, blazing, sun
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Mar 30, 2020
Mar 30, 2020 at 3:30 AM UTC
In this Ordinary Swoon
Ordinary Love by Michael R. Burch Indescribable—our love—and still we say with eyes averted, turning out the light, “I love you,” in the ordinary way and tug the coverlet where once we lay, all suntanned limbs entangled, shivering, white ... indescribably in love. Or so we say. Your hair’s blonde thicket’s thinned and tangle-gray; you turn your back; you murmur to the night, “I love you,” in the ordinary way. Beneath the sheets our hands and feet would stray ... to warm ourselves. We do not touch, despite a love so indescribable. We say we’re older now, that “love” has had its day. But that which love once countenanced, delight, still makes you indescribable. I say, “I love you,” in the ordinary way. Published by The Lyric, Romantics Quarterly, Mandrake Poetry Review, Carnelian, Poem Kingdom, Net Poetry and Art Competition, Famous Poets and Poems, FreeXpression, PW Review, Poetic Voices, Poetry Renewal, Poetry Life & Times; also winner of the 2001 Algernon Charles Swinburne Poetry Award Keywords/Tags: Villanelle, ordinary, commonplace, everyday, love, bed, sheets, warmth, comfort, delight, limbs, night, light, white, hair, back, hands, feet, romance, passion, desire, longing, *** intimacy
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Mar 16, 2020
Mar 16, 2020 at 5:39 AM UTC
Ordinary Love
<> The Instigation: Edmund  Black, commenting on “weary weighted,” I agree with Kim; This is poetry at its best :)“ <•> *both of you shush! there is no “better” in poetry mine yours theirs, alive or not, just gasps tears and blood whimsical smiles and isles cuts and burns of pained revelations, hidden in fog, that words try to delete away, through the shrouded mists of human tissues, unconstrained by the bounded shape of the human cell, our first, our own self-imposed jail tissue, too, baby soft, or, purple beating majestic bruised blotches by those weaklings whose kindness never fully developed;   or old man mine whose skin cells erodes, so poems and light weary weighted, lightly flake off for your “betterment” mostly tho for worse good humans all await, in patientce lightly hidden, residents of dark sunspots in the glaring existence exposer of the unlit lighthouse whose time will come they get it how we get there unimportant get there GET THERE get there that is the poetic mission critical no path best or style preferred- no compare just, but, any path that lifts and elevates, to the commonplace* the common place *where all costarred, universal, where common is the temple mount of highest praise, holy smoke rising, a place that that discloses and closes, is scribed/described honestly as a connective, which is the simplest successive call my poems, blessedly common! that an honorable, so gladly accepted and so much more meaning-full than merely best or better* for that, I’d gladly weep, for no praise ever been bettered 8/2/18 406pm on the jitney to my isle
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Aug 2, 2018
Aug 2, 2018 at 4:15 PM UTC
the common place... (for Kim Johanna Baker & Edmund Black)
<> The Instigation: Edmund  Black, commenting on “weary weighted,” I agree with Kim; This is poetry at its best :)“ <•> *both of you shush! there is no “better” in poetry mine yours theirs, alive or not, just gasps tears and blood whimsical smiles and isles cuts and burns of pained revelations, hidden in fog, that words try to delete away, through the shrouded mists of human tissues, unconstrained by the bounded shape of the human cell, our first, our own self-imposed jail tissue, too, baby soft, or, purple beating majestic bruised blotches by those weaklings whose kindness never fully developed;   or old man mine whose skin cells erodes, so poems and light weary weighted, lightly flake off for your “betterment” mostly tho for worse good humans all await, in patientce lightly hidden, residents of dark sunspots in the glaring existence exposer of the unlit lighthouse whose time will come they get it how we get there unimportant get there GET THERE get there that is the poetic mission critical no path best or style preferred- no compare just, but, any path that lifts and elevates, to the commonplace* the common place *where all costarred, universal, where common is the temple mount of highest praise, holy smoke rising, a place that that discloses and closes, is scribed/described honestly as a connective, which is the simplest successive call my poems, blessedly common! that an honorable, so gladly accepted and so much more meaning-full than merely best or better* for that, I’d gladly weep, for no praise ever been bettered 8/2/18 406pm on the jitney to my isle
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I listened for an error but could not find Anything to tell me that you'd erred. The human voices were left behind Among the dead, the long interred. I wondered at the worry of a bard, Whose penchant for making mosaics Of dead and living shards, Might wax a bit prosaic. But 'tis nothing too commonplace for me! I live in such a new land. And look back where my roots might be, Standing on a sunlit strand And strain my eyes for thee. And my ancestors who, distant, pass, Clouded with poetry and pride. The latter mean nothing, not even my last, Grandparents who came here and tried. Shoemakers, firemen and their wives, Learned to dwell in a sprawling place. But huddled like old Celts, converted, shrived, As Saxon fires round them paced. But all of that ended or so we thought, One April day on a Lexington span, Declared was freedom and dearly bought, And a ****** new history began. August 7, 2012
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Jul 31, 2018
Jul 31, 2018 at 1:54 PM UTC
Commonplace (Musings of an American on English History)
blood is spilled as credits run twelve new shadows lose the Sun cellphones off the popcorn hot severed souls now haunt this spot let's change theaters I know this scene they break they turn they **** I mean... how many times has this been done? the dark night rises the scene is run ...again
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Mar 26, 2018
Mar 26, 2018 at 6:54 PM UTC
dark night
Complicated things Now seem commonplace somehow When innocence fades.
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Apr 15, 2014
Apr 15, 2014 at 1:57 PM UTC
Commonplace