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Some of my thoughts feel like an arranged marriage— yeah, I never really signed up for that. But that’s the signature of it, where they only love to leave their mark. Where gospel gets mixed with gossip— Matthew, Luke, John, and Mark, not in the right order, so much like the words in my thoughts. And not everyone takes a word of advice well, when the language sounds foreign to their ears. I talk to myself in tongues of fear, translating silence into sermons no one hears. Doomed to hope— a hopeful romantic still searching for a stranger’s thirst to share in; two dry hearts, small talk and static. How intimate, how sensuous, the touch of mastering fingers with no questions left unanswered— or maybe no answers left to questions. Being that direct: an arrow for a heart, a bow pulled taut by friction. It takes pressure to apply the brakes, but lately, it’s the breaks that pull me apart. The peril of possession is the thrill of it, divided by whatever title we’re giving it— _situationship, relationship, companionship_— each one feels like a subscription that’s bound to expire. And marriage in my head is split in two, Like every vow I never quite meant. Perhaps this was never a poem on love— just a confession from a man whose thoughts and feelings still have commitment issues.
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Oct 17, 2025
Oct 17, 2025 at 2:29 AM UTC
Commitment Issues
my heart soars in the clouds but i fear it is icarus and it’s beating will cease before it melts and falls to the ground for it only soared because of her and any flight my heart had before ended in a crash never before has my heart hit the clouds maybe the tops of trees but any fall leaves marks and a fall for her would end in death
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Apr 30, 2024
Apr 30, 2024 at 5:18 AM UTC
she gives me wings
I am passion, fire and willpower personified. The tongue inside my mouth try to swallow words that don’t agree with my brain. It fails. They are calmness, earth, and control personified. Able to trust their brain and heart, they know when to take shelter. When the fire gets too hot. They thought they had me figured out. That they were my opposite and the perfect element to balance me out without smothering me like water or adding fuel like air. I always found a way to escape
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Jun 9, 2021
Jun 9, 2021 at 12:04 AM UTC
Commitment issues
Quit the "if only"s Say that you want me Baby we ain't got the time No more excuses Baby let's choose us It could be the time of our lives I'd rather regret you than regret my alibi
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May 6, 2020
May 6, 2020 at 1:31 PM UTC
Alibi
I fear living for someone centring someone in my universe I fear not not wanting to be alone constant noise in my silence I fear wasting my time on someone putting my life on hold for them to leave I fear a lifetime of small talk being a product of their routines and races I fear not finding belonging not being in control I fear the prison of my mind never finding the person I don't fear with I fear not being special in the insignificance never being not afraid to be vulnerable I fear only existing
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Nov 10, 2018
Nov 10, 2018 at 4:44 PM UTC
I fear
look the thing is i'm not a sociopath i don't hate you i'm not angry no i'm not a lesbian or asexual or something i just can't commit my parents never taught me what a healthy relationship should look like because they don't know and so i've only ever been wronged and i need you to understand that i like you i think you're cute and the way your hair perfectly complements your face is beautiful and oh my goodness your laugh is like a tune i could play for hours and not get annoyed or tired but i know that because i'm hurt i might hurt you by not loving you the way i should and not committing to you like you deserve
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Dec 3, 2017
Dec 3, 2017 at 7:37 PM UTC
commitment issues
You're the smartest person I know Also the dumbest, because you keep making stupid decisions and take stupid actions The biggest one being falling in love with me This inevitably makes you not only dumb, but an idiot Since I'm a selfish person, I can't help but take advantage So with every passionate kiss we share, I'll take a little more of your soul till one day you'll end up a dried out shell on some unknown beach. Simply because I wanted a little more than you should ever give. You're also an idiot for not realizing what you do to me. What having your love does to me. I’m obsessed and I’m no longer functioning properly because all I want to do is be with you. Want to feel your caress on my hands, your timid kisses. I want everything So I’ll give you my all. Give you all of me. Afraid of one day leaving you for a new adventure, leaving you only with false hope As soon as the wind blows and the leaves turn I- I got to go You made me realize: All I do is leave people Beautiful, sweet people that don’t deserve to be left And I never want to leave you, but I’m not sure if I can help it. It’s not like a fairytale where you as the knight comes and rescues the damsel in distress. I’m neither a distressed damsel nor a fair lady who needs to be saved and crowned princess, and will never be. I destroyed my tower and ran away all on my own. When you  found me in the forest of the ****** I needed love, and I needed hope. You gave that to me. I hope I can return it.
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Jan 21, 2017
Jan 21, 2017 at 12:44 PM UTC
Outlet #2
You're the smartest person I know Also the dumbest, because you keep making stupid decisions and take stupid actions The biggest one being falling in love with me This inevitably makes you not only dumb, but an idiot Since I'm a selfish person, I can't help but take advantage So with every passionate kiss we share, I'll take a little more of your soul till one day you'll end up a dried out shell on some unknown beach. Simply because I wanted a little more than you should ever give. You're also an idiot for not realizing what you do to me. What having your love does to me. I’m obsessed and I’m no longer functioning properly because all I want to do is be with you. Want to feel your caress on my hands, your timid kisses. I want everything So I’ll give you my all. Give you all of me. Afraid of one day leaving you for a new adventure, leaving you only with false hope As soon as the wind blows and the leaves turn I- I got to go You made me realize: All I do is leave people Beautiful, sweet people that don’t deserve to be left And I never want to leave you, but I’m not sure if I can help it. It’s not like a fairytale where you as the knight comes and rescues the damsel in distress. I’m neither a distressed damsel nor a fair lady who needs to be saved and crowned princess, and will never be. I destroyed my tower and ran away all on my own. When you  found me in the forest of the ****** I needed love, and I needed hope. You gave that to me. I hope I can return it.
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On one hand, You're seeping in To the most delicate And untouched parts of my soul, On the other, My organs inside Are like dry rough bark Anyone who comes near Is sent away with scratches on their heart, I want to feel my whole insides become wet, capable of unconditional love, But I fear myself. Many men have tried to roll like sweet honey into my heart Once my drunkeness has worn off Or the initial thrill has dimmed I scrape them off like a bug from my shoe. When you look at me it is different, When you look, I can feel you seeing inside my soul in a way I can't hide, Still I try. I have no abandonment issues, Or low self esteem, I am just truly and simply a bird When I see a cage I become concerned.
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Mar 11, 2016
Mar 11, 2016 at 11:19 AM UTC
Bird
i let my lips get chapped on purpose so i wont be tempted to kiss you on our date tonight i let my hands get dry and cracked so i will have no problem in keeping them folded on my lap i took some heavy blows to the knees so if i dont want to walk very far with you there will be no rational reason to be angry at me and i would show and tell you all of these things to drive you away but i know that you dont care youre the first boy thats ever been in love with my mind (beautiful, right?) and im not scared to the point that i would be willing to self-destruct (i am a little bit more logical than that, i value my thoughts more than that they're the only thing i have power over, anyway) youre the first one that has ever encouraged me to do what i love (and maybe i love you for that)
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Sep 4, 2014
Sep 4, 2014 at 12:25 PM UTC
Commitment Issues
Don't try to hold my hand (because I'm a jellyfish) Love is like lightning, Beautiful from a distance, But just wait till you're struck by it Don't try to hold my hand (because I'm a jellyfish)
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Sep 3, 2014
Sep 3, 2014 at 3:57 AM UTC
Feelings on Electricity