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the apartment rearranges itself while I make coffee mugs migrate like small countries with fragile borders I find a receipt folded into the shape of a promise and it smells faintly of winter there is a moth on the lampshade with a passport and a stubborn itinerary my tongue keeps rehearsing sentences that never learn to land a thermostat argues with the sun and both of them are wrong about comfort I press my ear to the radiator to hear what heat remembers a stray sock has become a monument to decisions I postponed I count the minutes between breaths as if they were loose coins the hallway light blinks Morse code for impatience I imagine a ledger where small betrayals are tallied in pencil the pencil keeps breaking and I keep sharpening the same regret a neighbor's laugh ricochets like a coin down a stairwell and I follow it out of habit my reflection in the kettle looks like someone who has been practicing being careful there is a bruise on my calendar where a day used to be I try to staple time back together and the stapler refuses to cooperate a playlist plays songs that have never been written, only remembered I fold my hands into the shape of a question and they refuse to be polite the window holds a map of rain that never quite decides to arrive I tuck a thought into my pocket and it grows impatient the city hums under its breath a machine learning how to forgive I misplace the word that would make this honest and find instead a crooked compass it points toward a grocery store and a childhood memory I did not order I practice saying small truths until they stop sounding like rehearsals the lamp blinks once like an apology and then keeps working I set down a cup and the table remembers the weight of other hands there is a quiet negotiation between my ribs and the idea of moving on I do not promise anything grand only that I will keep noticing the way light learns to be patient and that tonight I will let the moth keep its passport and the receipts keep their winter
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Jan 24
Jan 24, 2026 at 11:17 AM UTC
my tongue
the apartment rearranges itself while I make coffee mugs migrate like small countries with fragile borders I find a receipt folded into the shape of a promise and it smells faintly of winter there is a moth on the lampshade with a passport and a stubborn itinerary my tongue keeps rehearsing sentences that never learn to land a thermostat argues with the sun and both of them are wrong about comfort I press my ear to the radiator to hear what heat remembers a stray sock has become a monument to decisions I postponed I count the minutes between breaths as if they were loose coins the hallway light blinks Morse code for impatience I imagine a ledger where small betrayals are tallied in pencil the pencil keeps breaking and I keep sharpening the same regret a neighbor's laugh ricochets like a coin down a stairwell and I follow it out of habit my reflection in the kettle looks like someone who has been practicing being careful there is a bruise on my calendar where a day used to be I try to staple time back together and the stapler refuses to cooperate a playlist plays songs that have never been written, only remembered I fold my hands into the shape of a question and they refuse to be polite the window holds a map of rain that never quite decides to arrive I tuck a thought into my pocket and it grows impatient the city hums under its breath a machine learning how to forgive I misplace the word that would make this honest and find instead a crooked compass it points toward a grocery store and a childhood memory I did not order I practice saying small truths until they stop sounding like rehearsals the lamp blinks once like an apology and then keeps working I set down a cup and the table remembers the weight of other hands there is a quiet negotiation between my ribs and the idea of moving on I do not promise anything grand only that I will keep noticing the way light learns to be patient and that tonight I will let the moth keep its passport and the receipts keep their winter
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perfume samples at the airport lukewarm bite-size samples at Costco the first chapter of an ebook. a whiff, a taste, a peek. do you want more? will you commit to buying the full product? or will you keep searching? chasing? craving? it seems to be inexplicably conditional - for some, you’ll stop dead in your tracks, knowing to stock up. for many, you’ll move on, forgetting you ever halted to try it. but maybe you’ll remember how it felt, deep-down it resonated with you, and it’ll affect your other future decisions. what makes us fall in love? what makes us tether, souls tied, minds aligned, keep choosing to fall with each other?
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Jul 14, 2024
Jul 14, 2024 at 5:41 AM UTC
Hinge
When I utter commit, I mean to dedicate First to Him, that gave my full birthright And two to myself, the reason to create, My commitment is my responsibility I choose to commit, perhaps you may not admit I want to melt my fears, thyself to acquit Realize my valour, to knit again my grit My commitment is my responsibility I commit to trust my inner instinct, Lest I stumble and be called extinct I will teach me to always be prinked My commitment is my responsibility I commit my business to what is real Perhaps people will get dull Maybe I will find my answers in the baffle And get busy making my now life blissful For my commitment is my responsibility
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Apr 3, 2021
Apr 3, 2021 at 2:44 PM UTC
Commit Yourself
it seems Prez Grinch, has a job to commit it's that time of year, we have to admit turkey pardoning is indeed a big thing Prez Grinch just loves it as he thinks he's a king the turkey is chosen and brought to the garden it struts and it clucks and Prez says ”Your Pardoned”... Brian Hill - 2020 # 322
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Nov 24, 2020
Nov 24, 2020 at 10:37 AM UTC
Your Pardoned...
Smiles and laughters, tears of joy Companion, friendship, negatives destroy Growth and challenges, positives rejoice Memories and moments, time flies, enjoy Taken for granted, un-noticed, un-seen Always complaining, the best is not seen Thankful, complete, un-heard off, extinct? Open your eyes and use ur instinct Live the now, its happening its legit Remove the blinders, be happy, commit
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Oct 30, 2020
Oct 30, 2020 at 4:48 AM UTC
Happy & didnt know it
Christmas is over New year has begun Not sure I'm ready for another one Done all the things I resolved not to do The lights blazing down Time just flew The world looks newer than before Burning bright with colors galore Feel it turn as I go through my day Long years behind Short ones on the way Lighting life with the glow from ahead Steps have went the wrong way instead Branch is just too high to reach Consumed in never-ending breach The flame marks the proper route Spells cast make it hard to get out When my foot bravely goes to tread Suddenly cells are made of lead My fire drags me the opposite direction Everglow remains in the darkest section Memories of long ago linger in my head Love I lost Can't let go of Remains in words unsaid When asked my resolution I always respond "Stop saying yes to things I am of rather not fond" Of course I never commit and fail within a week I try nonetheless though my attempt is too weak
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Jun 16, 2020
Jun 16, 2020 at 11:14 AM UTC
Resolutions
We're afraid to live. We're afraid to die. We're afraid to try. We're afraid of what happens if we don't try. We're afraid to love. We're afraid to commit. We're afraid people think we're full of **** We're afraid of the truth. We're afraid to lie. We're afraid people will think we're weak if they see us cry. We're afraid to feel. We're afraid of fear. But knowledge is power. So now that you know what you fear, what are you going to do about it right now? Right here?
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Apr 14, 2019
Apr 14, 2019 at 9:21 PM UTC
We're afraid
_i'm committed to you and only you. no one else matters._
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Oct 10, 2019
Oct 10, 2019 at 1:15 PM UTC
♡ little love notes to you #317
We don’t put a label on it Because we don’t want to fit And commit. We keep it fun and chill; Nothing serious No consequences No future Nothing romantic Trying to keep it platonic. Doesn’t it sound ironic? Because I am frantic About you, boy. Trying to be ice cold Pretending we are something, when we’re nothing. I am losing my mind. You play these games Trying to make me insecure About all these other girls. So I play along Because it’s love, Maybe not long lasting But real. But we’re just spiraling No end; not infinite I guess I can not pretend For I don’t want to be this type of girl. I want to us to burn; Our hearts to yearn Our souls to learn. I want attachment, Security and stability. I want it to be long lasting And not a temporary fling
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Jul 24, 2019
Jul 24, 2019 at 10:27 AM UTC
Temporary Fling
Commitment. Who says it’s going to be easy? It’s not, and never be easy. When you commit to someone, that means the world is not about you anymore. You’re no longer the main character. There will be him. When you commit to someone, you don’t wake up to scroll Instagram, you will have someone to be updated. When you commit to someone, you will arrange your schedules, there will be no time for you to be selfish for yourself, you will share what you have with him. When you commit to someone, you will try hard to connect with him, and that means you need to adjust things, and maybe you lose yourself in it. When you commit to someone, you will not jog by yourself, maybe he will accompany you or busy in your kitchen, making you a breakfast. When you commit to someone, you will feel love, but you need to return the same amount of love to him, or even bigger. And that hurts. That’s not an easy job.
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May 29, 2019
May 29, 2019 at 1:33 PM UTC
Easy Job
How I feel right now doesn’t matter. ‘Cause I’ll say I’m ok. Yet still I’m wondering why do you love me? It feels... I feel so out of place. I know you’re looking for answers lovie But I don’t know what to say to you. I’m holding, dearly, my bad emotions. Last night in the shore we killed that scene. Whatever I was feeling it. Now my alarm clock wakes from the dream And reality’s back, I gotta deal with it. All of these strangers became new friends. New stories wrote with old pens. Same picture seen with a new lens. But that was only for the weekend. Drunk nights get remembered more than sober ones. I just can’t remember how the night begun. Order up, I don’t know from where these drinks came, But I know that I remember those strippers by their real names. Jody? Maxine? It’s all the same, they were pawns in my fantasy. Damn….did I say that? I’m just lost and I’m tryna find my way back. But instead I found my way into your bed Now I’m thinking about everything you whispered in my head like “I been searching for you my whole life.” “I think I wanna be your wife.” And none of that even computes. I can’t imagine me settling down, laying the roots. I gotta slip out of here before You wake up and read the note I left on your drawer. ‘Cause I know you’ll be full of questions And I’ll have to be real and give you my confession That I know you’re looking for answers lovie But I don’t know what to say to you. I’m holding, dearly, my bad emotions.
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Oct 23, 2018
Oct 23, 2018 at 6:30 PM UTC
Bad Emotions
How I feel right now doesn’t matter. ‘Cause I’ll say I’m ok. Yet still I’m wondering why do you love me? It feels... I feel so out of place. I know you’re looking for answers lovie But I don’t know what to say to you. I’m holding, dearly, my bad emotions. Last night in the shore we killed that scene. Whatever I was feeling it. Now my alarm clock wakes from the dream And reality’s back, I gotta deal with it. All of these strangers became new friends. New stories wrote with old pens. Same picture seen with a new lens. But that was only for the weekend. Drunk nights get remembered more than sober ones. I just can’t remember how the night begun. Order up, I don’t know from where these drinks came, But I know that I remember those strippers by their real names. Jody? Maxine? It’s all the same, they were pawns in my fantasy. Damn….did I say that? I’m just lost and I’m tryna find my way back. But instead I found my way into your bed Now I’m thinking about everything you whispered in my head like “I been searching for you my whole life.” “I think I wanna be your wife.” And none of that even computes. I can’t imagine me settling down, laying the roots. I gotta slip out of here before You wake up and read the note I left on your drawer. ‘Cause I know you’ll be full of questions And I’ll have to be real and give you my confession That I know you’re looking for answers lovie But I don’t know what to say to you. I’m holding, dearly, my bad emotions.
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You are my forbidden fruit - the sweetest sin I repeatedly commit. And I have no plans to stop - because the heart that loves will never go adrift.
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Sep 4, 2018
Sep 4, 2018 at 9:25 PM UTC
Forbidden Fruit
Never good... They're all heavy dreamers, spewing out promises like its a fvckin rap verse and when it's time to pull through, excuses are their favourite hooks.. Struggling artists never wake up, they stay stuck and damage you with a glue gun in the process, hard part is you always think that you're in love and you always go back, it's like abuse.
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Jun 2, 2018
Jun 2, 2018 at 4:19 PM UTC
Struggling Artists
was it worth it? to feel something? just for ten ******* minutes, to feel something? i can't look at you, Conchúr, you repulse me. every crocodile tear and shark-fucking-smile, with your smug little laugh, and your meaningless words - you weave them together, constructing vast fantasies and empty promises - how many people have you trapped, in your wide and selfish net? oh! but you've always been so good with words. and may that be the death of you, because you deserve hell for your sins: one eternity is not black enough for creatures like you. lies, lust, pain - that's your bread and butter. you never were good at much else, but ****** you are good at hurting those around you, the ones who care. she was right to get rid of you, especially when she did, because look how far you've come! when was it... only last night you tried again, didn't you? you thought no one was looking, but they all have eyes, and someone will find out. they'll see your scars (remember to keep it below the belt next time, buddy, okay?), or they'll see the blood (god, how it gushed after all that dancing - i thought you were a goner), or they'll find your pathetic little poems, gathering dust on some forgotten corner of the internet, where your heart is too bare, and its blackness is plain to see. what then? will it be worth it then? to express something? just to try and put your life in words, to express something? "oh look at you, you poor thing, you've been so hard done by..." ******** this is your fault, and you deserve every last ounce of hurt.
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Mar 14, 2018
Mar 14, 2018 at 10:14 PM UTC
why
was it worth it? to feel something? just for ten ******* minutes, to feel something? i can't look at you, Conchúr, you repulse me. every crocodile tear and shark-fucking-smile, with your smug little laugh, and your meaningless words - you weave them together, constructing vast fantasies and empty promises - how many people have you trapped, in your wide and selfish net? oh! but you've always been so good with words. and may that be the death of you, because you deserve hell for your sins: one eternity is not black enough for creatures like you. lies, lust, pain - that's your bread and butter. you never were good at much else, but ****** you are good at hurting those around you, the ones who care. she was right to get rid of you, especially when she did, because look how far you've come! when was it... only last night you tried again, didn't you? you thought no one was looking, but they all have eyes, and someone will find out. they'll see your scars (remember to keep it below the belt next time, buddy, okay?), or they'll see the blood (god, how it gushed after all that dancing - i thought you were a goner), or they'll find your pathetic little poems, gathering dust on some forgotten corner of the internet, where your heart is too bare, and its blackness is plain to see. what then? will it be worth it then? to express something? just to try and put your life in words, to express something? "oh look at you, you poor thing, you've been so hard done by..." ******** this is your fault, and you deserve every last ounce of hurt.
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Let me be a little kinder Let me be a little blinder To the faults of those about me Let me praise a little more Let me be when I am weary Just a bit more cheery Let me serve a little better Those that I am striving for. Let me be a little braver When temptation bids me waver Let me strive a little harder To be a little smarter To ensure others of commitment Let me be a little meeker With the other who is weaker Thinking more of others feelings Than all my own dealings To be the Foundation that one can rest on.
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Feb 24, 2018
Feb 24, 2018 at 10:40 AM UTC
♉Let Me Be ♑
what to do when you committed yourself to someone who won’t commit themselves to you? they never loved you the way you loved them maybe they don’t even deserve the way you loved them saying that makes your heart hurt though, how to look right at the face of the one who crushed your heart and not want the entire world for them how to stop wishing they’d be okay that they would be happy again how to stop wishing for the past when they giggled and smiled and said “it’s because of you” how to forget the tone in their voice when they said “i love you too” How if you figure it out write it down on a paper and send it to me too words i need to know more than i need her to be true
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Dec 29, 2017
Dec 29, 2017 at 2:13 AM UTC
can you tell me how?
Here it is my letter for you; I promise to be caring... I promise to be loyal... I promise to be honest... I promise to be considerate... I promise to guide you... I promise to hairs your heart... I promise to laugh at you... And I promise to tell you everything... But I can't sign this for you... It can't be official... The things that have been done Make me not able to commit I can't promise I'll tell you everything I would only see you fall if I did So this letter has to remain... unsigned.
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Nov 11, 2017
Nov 11, 2017 at 12:02 AM UTC
The unsigned letter
I'll give her all the room she needs and not pressure or complain let her flowers bloom each day she won't have to tell me why or otherwise, explain I'll give up greater distance to sooth and protect, her smile all her feminine and sultry ways no reason, does she have to give as she maintains, her **** style Distance only made of space near or far, a matter of degrees wandering in periphery, upon the edge I'll keep myself in silent check no questions, petitions, and/or pleas I'll not forget my promise I'll hold tight, the words I've said until my days are come and gone I'll be ever bound and confined past the day, that I, am dead
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Oct 24, 2017
Oct 24, 2017 at 3:05 PM UTC
Commited Silence
i wanted to learn your thoughts. like an astrologer studying the stars. seeking answers in the mystic. the unknown. to observe in pure adoration. i wanted to tattoo my name across your skin. a mark with a meaning. and memory. but you are tattoo shy. and you do not believe in the power of the universe. you do not commit. and so, i left. full of too many unanswered prayers. wishes gone un-granted. i left. maybe you were not supposed to be my next adventure.
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Apr 17, 2017
Apr 17, 2017 at 2:28 PM UTC
L.S.
People don't really remember, all the words just the bits and pieces Ya can't really memorize a book with all it's bends, and creases Snippets, fragments, and shards in memory committed Awakened by a chance listened word and mentally, admitted Who really keeps every line of every story ever read but, bring it to front each time a certain word, is said Keys for the locks ones that, may trigger dreams like a skull with ticking clocks and what, that really means
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Mar 20, 2017
Mar 20, 2017 at 1:58 PM UTC
My memory, ain't that great
You **** lady I'm sweating And feeling butterflies Inside those thighs The things that I feel Ain't inside these guys I seek to earn They learn to buy So in that moment I can look you in the eye Know what I know Let these things by
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Nov 26, 2016
Nov 26, 2016 at 2:57 AM UTC
Hey You
Committed isn't for everyone, is commitment for you? Because you might just be my forever; Under your spell, I'm hyptonized, but hyptonized never meant blind.
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Sep 10, 2016
Sep 10, 2016 at 11:49 PM UTC
My Forever