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#aestheticism
for what ought to conceal my fair judgement but silence or deception if suppressed, so does your possibility of betterment, if twisted to your favor, my intention proves me no different, and if it be revealed, my honesty is called for vain criticism, and i am but ill-mannered.
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Jul 25, 2020
Jul 25, 2020 at 9:20 PM UTC
dense & humane
If the time ever comes, And I’m forced to choose between duty and passion; Between playing in the realms of reality And pretending in the realms of treason; Between love and personal ambition. And I’m forced to lose my sense of compassion. And I’m forced to give up Everything I stand for; everything I work for; Every belief, only to relieve Myself from the pain and lies I indulge in. And I’m forced to choose to engage in beauty For the sake of the pretentious, Not for the sake of beauty, not for her glory. And I’m forced to stop Searching for the beauty and meaning within. And I’m forced to marvel at the death of art, Even in the slightest fraction of a second. Now will I? Will I even lie? Will I even care about the truth I bare? How careless I was? How untruthful I was? The truth was just a lie, amid writing, now I realize, Negligently paralyze myself with thoughts of rigor. Another delusion in the forest of lies. With vigor The term “I”, so arrogantly I use Just like the term "I", the confusion, I deliberately caused myself with the conclusion: O love! O beauty! O passion! Oh, for everything I give up, Oh, for everything I do, As long as I don’t give myself up, All I ever do, Is long for purity of success. Just like the dreams, Oh, the dreams I confess.
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Dec 27, 2017
Dec 27, 2017 at 11:31 AM UTC
Lost in the meaning
You write good Your words flow Beautifully across The crisp white page I read good Appreciating every beat The aesthetic order In which you placed the words You expect much Placing a sense of yourself Between the lines Of the poetry you write I feel much Reading your soul Feeling your emotions Forgetting my own for a minute
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Nov 14, 2015
Nov 14, 2015 at 8:41 PM UTC
You write good