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hannah-vogt
hannah-vogt
And at the end of the day When the shades have been drawn When the lights have been dimmed When the doors are closed, When the bed is ready for you to crawl in When a single candle burns on your nightstand At the end of the day, When you have shut the world out When you have fallen to your knees When you are all alone When you are naked When you are shivering before your God When your tears fall so fast And your voice rattles and is unrecognizable Like an old car engine about to die I hope, I pray That with an empty breath, a squeak, a sigh You say, after all you have seen, felt, and heard You are still good.
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Nov 23, 2015
Nov 23, 2015 at 12:07 AM UTC
Dear friend,
You write good Your words flow Beautifully across The crisp white page I read good Appreciating every beat The aesthetic order In which you placed the words You expect much Placing a sense of yourself Between the lines Of the poetry you write I feel much Reading your soul Feeling your emotions Forgetting my own for a minute
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Nov 14, 2015
Nov 14, 2015 at 8:41 PM UTC
You write good
Serenity lurks at the grave With a pale face And silver eyes She breathes slowly She walks with assurance Confident of the outcome Aware that though darkness lies ahead At least she knows it is there Serenity will not be caught off guard By any disturbance She understands then She knows now She accepts later She sometimes sings a song Or dances a simple dance Passers by ignore the activity Too busy to notice her If you want to find Serenity It would not be difficult She waits for all At the grave of Worry
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Nov 8, 2015
Nov 8, 2015 at 9:38 PM UTC
Serenity