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#17
The ceiling is the first thing I see. No noise, just the realization that I'm..still here? I'm 17 and I've already built a world for myself, but in this house, that doesn't matter. I'm treated like a child who doesn't know any better, Stuck under the rules that ignore the person I actually am. The sequence of expectations. Get to school, chores, make it another day. It's not the work that's hard-I can handle it-- It's just the numbing rhythm of it... It's the background noise to a life that feels like it's on repeat. I'm moving through motions in a house full of people I truly love, but I am completely, utterly alone. I know what I need to do, The GED is out there like a door I'm supposed to walk through. I tell myself today is the day I'll start, Today is the day I'll make that move that changes everything. I have the goal, I have the vision, but when its time to act, I'm frozen. The weekend hits and the silence is heavy, I should be reaching for that better life, but instead, I drown, I sink into the vivid, bright world in my head because in there, I'm actually living. Out here, I'm just a sack of meat starring at the wall, watching my own time slip away while I stay perfectly still but Hey, there's a talent... Watching my life go by, wishing things could get better, setting approachable goals, but yet, I'm nothing but an open promise. It's a specific kind of hurt-- being old enough to have goals and a past, but being forced into a role that feels too small. I'm stuck in the gap between the person I know I am and the version of me they see. It's a long, quiet ache, I am aware of the waste, and still. I do nothing.
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Apr 15
Apr 15, 2026 at 9:21 AM UTC
Drowning in silence.
The ceiling is the first thing I see. No noise, just the realization that I'm..still here? I'm 17 and I've already built a world for myself, but in this house, that doesn't matter. I'm treated like a child who doesn't know any better, Stuck under the rules that ignore the person I actually am. The sequence of expectations. Get to school, chores, make it another day. It's not the work that's hard-I can handle it-- It's just the numbing rhythm of it... It's the background noise to a life that feels like it's on repeat. I'm moving through motions in a house full of people I truly love, but I am completely, utterly alone. I know what I need to do, The GED is out there like a door I'm supposed to walk through. I tell myself today is the day I'll start, Today is the day I'll make that move that changes everything. I have the goal, I have the vision, but when its time to act, I'm frozen. The weekend hits and the silence is heavy, I should be reaching for that better life, but instead, I drown, I sink into the vivid, bright world in my head because in there, I'm actually living. Out here, I'm just a sack of meat starring at the wall, watching my own time slip away while I stay perfectly still but Hey, there's a talent... Watching my life go by, wishing things could get better, setting approachable goals, but yet, I'm nothing but an open promise. It's a specific kind of hurt-- being old enough to have goals and a past, but being forced into a role that feels too small. I'm stuck in the gap between the person I know I am and the version of me they see. It's a long, quiet ache, I am aware of the waste, and still. I do nothing.
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Our affection in question, you remain dismissive. Confidence drowns you with no words, no kissing. Clasping me. Your unspoken energy is staggering. Demanding of me, Abrading my fear, curating my thoughts back to us. A cluster of memories adrift, drafting clear thoughts. I’m unhappy, the downer, the anchor to our drifting, silent sea.
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Mar 25
Mar 25, 2026 at 2:13 PM UTC
Adrift
At 17, I remember the first moment— it didn’t shine in the sky, I didn’t feel its presence. Was it a sweet curse? I woke up with a pen in my hand and a wild need to write. A first word? A fragment of nonsense, dressed in lies. Years passed. The girl I was has grown. She’s no longer 17, no longer holding an unknown pen. Because now, at 24— with over 300 poems, I have this feeling: I am not just a poet. I am me.
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Dec 20, 2025
Dec 20, 2025 at 6:41 PM UTC
At 17.
I hope today you can truly celebrate yourself I'm so proud of how far you've come And even though I don't agree With a lot of your actions I'm still happy that you've been able To make yourself happier We might not be together anymore But I'll always have this fondness for you So happy birthday to my first love I hope everything plays out the way you want it to
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Oct 2, 2021
Oct 2, 2021 at 3:00 AM UTC
Happy Birthday
When I was 2 years old. I did not know true pain, I did not know true fear. My life was full of rainbows. When I was 2 years old- My innocence was my beauty. Years went by; I was now 8 years old. I knew pain, I knew fear The rainbows in my life no longer there. The rainbows replaced with storms; Storms of violence, of pain and fear. My perseverance was my beauty. 6 more years pass, I was 14. Full of pain. Full of fear. I was scared of life. My beauty was gone. Now 3 years later... I still know pain, I still know fear. But things have changed. The rainbows look down on me once again. The pain - still there, but less prominent. The fear, following me - but no longer dominant. So, now at 17. I live, I understand and I love. When I was 2 years old my beauty was my- Innocence. When I was 8 years old my beauty was my- Perseverance. When I was 14 years old my beauty was gone. My beauty no longer missing. It is no longer hidden. My beauty has arisen. My beauty, now... At 17 years old. My beauty now is; My 17 years of pain, My 17 years of fear, My 17 years of experiences, My beauty is me. I am my beauty.
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Nov 13, 2020
Nov 13, 2020 at 1:02 AM UTC
When I Was...
Monsoon's panoply,                        a dimpled day's smile;                                   windstrewn        ­      ­                                                gulmohars,                     ­          a blushing brocade,                      'plop'-ing droplets,                            a lilting cadence;                                                 ­       ­      nostalgia                              pervading through                         the silver-scented              ­            puddles of a         paperboat's elation;         July evenings                                                          and                                                trinkets of                          yesterday... .
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Jul 21, 2020
Jul 21, 2020 at 10:15 AM UTC
Hoppípolla
When I met her I knew she was a sleepless night in the making. She lays on a bed fit for mortals, but the moon places a halo on her head as she sleeps. I curse my eyes, as acidic darkness clings to her skin and eats at my ability to see her at peace. Seventeen years of life and I still have yet to realize: that being a sucker for insomniacs is not good for me.
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Jul 18, 2020
Jul 18, 2020 at 9:24 AM UTC
Insomniacs.
The clock ticks ticks ticks Pounds on the inside Of my skull - Need an aspirin
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Jun 19, 2020
Jun 19, 2020 at 3:31 PM UTC
on approaching 5 o'clock
Oh today today is my birthday! there will be no balloons no poppers or cake just some time with those I love something nobody can take it's almost 6:00 AM soon I'll get my alert telling me that I should have a nice day and maybe this time I'll listen
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Mar 16, 2020
Mar 16, 2020 at 9:01 AM UTC
birthday
nobody knows what they want not when they're 17 and not even when they're 40 people look for their best option whatever is going to fill the void in their heart at that moment whether it be a job a sport a hobby or a person some people don't always choose correctly in the moment it's hard to know what you want to decide what's best that's why so many people choose wrong because nobody knows what they want not until it's right in front of them
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Oct 29, 2019
Oct 29, 2019 at 9:57 PM UTC
nobody knows what they want
She’s a Poem He’s an Invisible Ink She’s a Love Ballad He’s a Vocal Less Echo She’s a Soothing Lullaby He’s a Muted Lyric She's a Warm Breeze He's a Whimpered Wind She’s a Wished Rain He’s a Thirst in Desert She’s a Flying Dream He’s a Falling Demon She’s Nourishing on Pages He's Dissolving into Ink As if, Final Chapter of His Book in a Making? She May Breathe Forever in His Silent Echoes...
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Apr 15, 2018
Apr 15, 2018 at 11:32 AM UTC
As if; She's...!
Seventeen Is the age you are You have my love No matter how far You are my friend And that will never end Our love doesn’t snap It only bends You’re talented and beautiful And you’re just so cool This poem has to end For I am at school.
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Mar 21, 2019
Mar 21, 2019 at 5:11 PM UTC
Seventeen: a poem for my sister's birthday.
Baby, I've always been writing. But you made me a poet.
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Mar 30, 2019
Mar 30, 2019 at 10:19 AM UTC
Note 17: I call myself a poet.
People say don't think with your heart. Well I don't, I think with my brain. I have learned to isolate and manipulate. To feel everything and to feel completely nothing. It didn't take long to realize I was stuck in a deep deep hole. I can't allow myself to love, even if I wanted to. There is a huge wall I cant tear down. One guy... can ruin your whole future. My love life is gone without a trace. My screams cannot be heard. I can feel myself being numb. I can feel the emptiness in my heart. But I am not necessarily upset. I am glad I wont let another male figure hurt me. Cheers to my demons. Adios to my once innocent soul.
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Feb 22, 2019
Feb 22, 2019 at 10:11 PM UTC
Glue Is Stronger Than Tape
people say I'm lucky to be seventeen. because back then they were all young and lean. people say at the ripe age of seventeen. well they felt like they had everything. all was good. because things just should. but do you remember being seventeen? it feels like a movie scene. we laugh, we cry. sometimes we just want to die. we want room to breathe. but everybody wants to make us seethe. it gets really tough. so we try to act rough. oh seventeen. stop acting mature, stop being so keen. seventeen.
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Dec 19, 2018
Dec 19, 2018 at 10:22 PM UTC
17
Your elegent voice Soft and subtle Can't be missed In this chair Looking at you In that bed Stay with me Just another minute We were 17 Chocolate for soldiers Covers for tables Flower for you Glass Coca cola Movie playing Back of my Chevy Staring at stars Sky in your eyes Going steady Meeting your parents No computers Strongest connection You're my password Watching and waiting Course of history Making our own We made plenty Kids having kids Years to decades 75 and still Laying beside me Gave a promise We were 17 You accepted Imperfect But I kept it Here's another Sitting, this chair You, that bed Not our chair Not our bed Smell of Iodoform And wilted flowers Yet still Your elegant whisper Cant be missed But I promise this You will be Never forgetting We were 17 Just another minute Ocean singing Water and sand Crashing, commanding Standing Attention Beside you, Never close enough Fly with me Back home, before The history Rations for bravery You for you Proper pop Screen dances Frozen eyes Only Star I see See the beginning Butterflies in sync Inks drying Pens and letters Melt together Moons and suns Here and there Decadence and Debauchery We did our Own thing Planting gardens Self watering In our chest Of treasure 3 quarters Of century Gave me That star Not always bright Never falling Leaves now To illuminate Another planet But I'll see it Everytime I Close my eyes Remembering We were 17
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Dec 18, 2018
Dec 18, 2018 at 8:14 AM UTC
Just another minute
Is 17 too soon? I don’t think I’m ready I look nothing like her Or what I thought.
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Nov 3, 2018
Nov 3, 2018 at 11:28 PM UTC
17
I met a boy – in the middle of the ocean, with no prenotions. Eyes soft as the waves – rocking us down our way, smooth sailing my way. I knew it wouldn’t turn into something bigger – than a summer crush, a summer fling. We were just living in the moment – living young, wild, and free. Out on the Caribbean – where the sun shines brighter than I’ve ever seen – I shared a kiss under the stars, with a stranger, only at 17. Didn't matter how many stories we told bout the lives we lived back on the shore, We were just basking in our short-lived loving – lost on the ocean, my storybook romance – I’ll forget your name, I'm sure you’ll forget mine, but I won’t forget your face or our time. No strings attached is a little too extreme… It was just innocent lovin’ on the seven seas.
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Aug 5, 2018
Aug 5, 2018 at 11:18 PM UTC
Innocent Lovin' on the Seven Seas
i blew out my candles as i aged to 17 and now i'm on my knees blowing out better things.
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Jul 26, 2018
Jul 26, 2018 at 1:00 PM UTC
the candles
Body and flesh with the age of seventeen, without being loud or angry. Never been, the warm yellow light. Spiraling out of control. Calmness collapses. Burning a hole, in what is assumed to be poured. Deep pigment, showering over loved once.   Yet no commitment. Daffodils growing in the garden. Dripping from the ankle, deep red, ropes to get strangled. Melting and mixing orange. They may not know how i’m feeling, but if they stop reality, they see me hanging from the sealing. “How young was she?”
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Apr 25, 2018
Apr 25, 2018 at 1:17 PM UTC
17
Honestly, I've exhausted "16". So much has happened. So much good, so much sorrow. I've grown so much, not in height, but in strength and confidence. Hopefully a bit wiser and definitely more thankful. Usually, I'm sad at this point, but not this year. I look back on this past year with a smile. It was the best year yet, so 17, bring it on.
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Apr 10, 2018
Apr 10, 2018 at 4:04 PM UTC
16 Going On 17