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I replay the uproarious sound of your kidneys at 4 AM; you tucked in a comfortable quilted bed, and the curve of your glistening elbow resembling the crescent moon that my eyes averted from because they fixated on you instead.
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Dec 16, 2014
Dec 16, 2014 at 8:01 AM UTC
Me; Hidden in Your Backyard
I replay the uproarious sound of your kidneys at 4 AM; you tucked in a comfortable quilted bed, and the curve of your glistening elbow resembling the crescent moon that my eyes averted from because they fixated on you instead.
For Deshy <3 (Actually, I was watching a YouTube video on how to compliment people, and the number one advice was to "not appreciate the sound of their kidneys, because you may creep them out." Naturally, I did just that in a Facebook conversation.)
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Dec 16, 2014
Dec 16, 2014 at 8:01 AM UTC
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