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My name is Thomas de Charney 16 years old but rarely play Father a humble Templar Knight Pedigree noble bloodline might Was born special is all I know For God’s direction to and fro Shield from danger ab ovo Reason revealed from His glow Broadsword and lance, reading abound Practice and fight til victors crowned Warrior and Monk seen as one One and Only Begotten Son Father taught me the skill to fight Learn skill to read on parchment write Knight Templar to be, but then what ? Fate left to God with no rebut Then one day Father came to me Young Parsifal son you will be Sequestrated as directed Pushed to excel unaffected Templar Knight who carries his sword Doing God’s work for no reward Beget with specific design Some day made known I do consign _______________________________________ Father, it’s time we practice, yes—deke the wield of your sword and parry your blows, and push myself until all the sweat has left my body. For I am a young Parsifal soon to become a Templar Knight.
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Dec 11, 2014
Dec 11, 2014 at 11:07 AM UTC
The Young Parsifal [from the Templar Knight series]
My name is Thomas de Charney 16 years old but rarely play Father a humble Templar Knight Pedigree noble bloodline might Was born special is all I know For God’s direction to and fro Shield from danger ab ovo Reason revealed from His glow Broadsword and lance, reading abound Practice and fight til victors crowned Warrior and Monk seen as one One and Only Begotten Son Father taught me the skill to fight Learn skill to read on parchment write Knight Templar to be, but then what ? Fate left to God with no rebut Then one day Father came to me Young Parsifal son you will be Sequestrated as directed Pushed to excel unaffected Templar Knight who carries his sword Doing God’s work for no reward Beget with specific design Some day made known I do consign _______________________________________ Father, it’s time we practice, yes—deke the wield of your sword and parry your blows, and push myself until all the sweat has left my body. For I am a young Parsifal soon to become a Templar Knight.
This series eventually parallels The Time Machine series, where I have released the first poem to that series.    This poem needs to be worked on and converted to Iambic Tetrameter.   Many of the lines are already there  e.g.  "some DAY made KNOWN i DO con-SIGN" but, I still like it as it, so I'll eventually get there.   This is a story of a young boy who becomes a famous Templar Knight, but along the way, many supernatural events shine though, as does a girl named Dagung.
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Dec 11, 2014
Dec 11, 2014 at 11:07 AM UTC
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