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Stimulated by Neva's lovely verse "Layers of Faces" Phasing from the pockmarked scowl Of urchin from  the pauper's keep, To fresh complexioned beauty As she prepares herself for sleep. Plunging to absurd Amidst a paroxysm of mirth With heaving breath and yellow teeth Atop substantial girth. A vacancy of shock Within two eyes of palest blue Who witnessed a young fledgling killed By the cat who lives with you. Dribbles from a masticating jaw begin to dry And a sudden bark of anger causes feeding birds to fly. A smile as warm as sunshine Brings the pherimones to bear And the young and the beautiful Both magnetically stare. There's a fan dance of faces Stretched across the prosaic And the layers within layers Etch it all a rich mosaic. Marshalg Victoria Park Tunnel 22 February 2011
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Feb 21, 2011
Feb 21, 2011 at 12:06 PM UTC
Layers Within Layers
Stimulated by Neva's lovely verse "Layers of Faces" Phasing from the pockmarked scowl Of urchin from  the pauper's keep, To fresh complexioned beauty As she prepares herself for sleep. Plunging to absurd Amidst a paroxysm of mirth With heaving breath and yellow teeth Atop substantial girth. A vacancy of shock Within two eyes of palest blue Who witnessed a young fledgling killed By the cat who lives with you. Dribbles from a masticating jaw begin to dry And a sudden bark of anger causes feeding birds to fly. A smile as warm as sunshine Brings the pherimones to bear And the young and the beautiful Both magnetically stare. There's a fan dance of faces Stretched across the prosaic And the layers within layers Etch it all a rich mosaic. Marshalg Victoria Park Tunnel 22 February 2011
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Feb 21, 2011
Feb 21, 2011 at 12:06 PM UTC
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