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I chose you for captain though you were off course I saw you a hero, a knight on a horse I dreamt of you sailing when I saw you’d no boat I spoke of your valour, put you on a high note I believed you were convinced though I knew you had doubt I willed you a listener while hearing you shout I put you up high even though you were low I smiled and I laughed to cover your sorrow I wished with all hope while you crawled and you groped I submitted to faith while on logic you coped I watched in helplessness as you slowly slid away I heard my words echo when there was nothing more to say
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Feb 20, 2011
Feb 20, 2011 at 1:07 PM UTC
LOSING YOU
I chose you for captain though you were off course I saw you a hero, a knight on a horse I dreamt of you sailing when I saw you’d no boat I spoke of your valour, put you on a high note I believed you were convinced though I knew you had doubt I willed you a listener while hearing you shout I put you up high even though you were low I smiled and I laughed to cover your sorrow I wished with all hope while you crawled and you groped I submitted to faith while on logic you coped I watched in helplessness as you slowly slid away I heard my words echo when there was nothing more to say
sharleen-boaden
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South African
Feb 20, 2011
Feb 20, 2011 at 1:07 PM UTC
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