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I wish I could be like... A tiger blazing through the jungle or a wolf in a pack howling at the moon or a duck hawk diving for the **** Instead I am like... The orphaned elephant soon to be killed by a lion or a wildebeest crushed in a stampede or a sheep, baaing pathetically, before being sheared.
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Dec 6, 2014
Dec 6, 2014 at 11:12 PM UTC
I wish I could
I wish I could be like... A tiger blazing through the jungle or a wolf in a pack howling at the moon or a duck hawk diving for the **** Instead I am like... The orphaned elephant soon to be killed by a lion or a wildebeest crushed in a stampede or a sheep, baaing pathetically, before being sheared.
my first poem is crap I know. Constructive criticism please
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Dec 6, 2014
Dec 6, 2014 at 11:12 PM UTC
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