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Keeping your hands in your pockets won't keep you warm in the cold air of a winter night raging against the warmth of a fire and a place to rest your head acceptance and satisfaction cracking your lips The key in a puddle carved like a knife shattering the icy calm of the little pool reflecting the thunder clouds above your head looming like scissors over a barely blooming rosebud Calamity and discord seems to be your comfort or are those lies I see glaring in your obtrusive eyes silence is the last thing you could ever hear unless it's the cries of a helpless child sighing into the night Hope never abandoned you I watched as you burned the unscented candles the wax waning and the smoke dissapating in contempt your fingers dancing in the last dip of flame I watched you disappear into the coming season observing the ground as you tread leaving a dull key in that evaporated puddle the wax molded to your hand and a burn on your palm
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Feb 20, 2011
Feb 20, 2011 at 11:50 AM UTC
the repetition of distrust
Keeping your hands in your pockets won't keep you warm in the cold air of a winter night raging against the warmth of a fire and a place to rest your head acceptance and satisfaction cracking your lips The key in a puddle carved like a knife shattering the icy calm of the little pool reflecting the thunder clouds above your head looming like scissors over a barely blooming rosebud Calamity and discord seems to be your comfort or are those lies I see glaring in your obtrusive eyes silence is the last thing you could ever hear unless it's the cries of a helpless child sighing into the night Hope never abandoned you I watched as you burned the unscented candles the wax waning and the smoke dissapating in contempt your fingers dancing in the last dip of flame I watched you disappear into the coming season observing the ground as you tread leaving a dull key in that evaporated puddle the wax molded to your hand and a burn on your palm
not quite finished I think
lauren-ashley
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Feb 20, 2011
Feb 20, 2011 at 11:50 AM UTC
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