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Ariel sits across opposite from myself looking plump and balding we're talking of Tolstoy (Ariel's favourite novelist) he creates the largest fictional canvases Ariel informs me his large eyes focusing on his class of real ale now and then looking at a table quite near us where young girls talk and laugh their laughter echoing in the warm evening summer air I prefer Marcel Proust I tell him watching how his eyes scan the young girls less manly Ariel says to me don't like Proust no substance just gossip from parties he went to you know he was a queer yes I know wrote in bed yes I know he gazes at the girls taking in their laughter their bodies their brightness all his thoughts of Tolstoy put aside I sip beer wondering what Tolstoy would say here seeing this this canvas intellect dissolved in human lust words silent write again another War and Peace in English now I trust.
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Dec 3, 2014
Dec 3, 2014 at 3:44 AM UTC
ARIEL & I.
Ariel sits across opposite from myself looking plump and balding we're talking of Tolstoy (Ariel's favourite novelist) he creates the largest fictional canvases Ariel informs me his large eyes focusing on his class of real ale now and then looking at a table quite near us where young girls talk and laugh their laughter echoing in the warm evening summer air I prefer Marcel Proust I tell him watching how his eyes scan the young girls less manly Ariel says to me don't like Proust no substance just gossip from parties he went to you know he was a queer yes I know wrote in bed yes I know he gazes at the girls taking in their laughter their bodies their brightness all his thoughts of Tolstoy put aside I sip beer wondering what Tolstoy would say here seeing this this canvas intellect dissolved in human lust words silent write again another War and Peace in English now I trust.
ON TALK WITH A FRIEND.
terry-collett
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Dec 3, 2014
Dec 3, 2014 at 3:44 AM UTC
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