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when i was young i knew love..... then  i lost it left it on  southbound train thinking it, he would relent, from the stubborn position he, it had talked himself, itself into, but that did not happen... i tried to find love, i waited for his return i asked for it at the lost and found window but nothing came of that perhaps, i should not have been so adamant, so stubborn in my views... perhaps, we both should of tried to understand the meaning of love... instead of insisting that love was a bargaining chip with which we would have the upperhand... i lost a friend.... one with whom, i went through the machinations of making love....without understanding the creation of relationship....is more than the pressing of skin... left them on a south bound train.. my youthful arrogance.... and demands bound them to the seat... i never knew love... i  did not understand... i now stand often, on the platform of the station....and wonder....
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Nov 28, 2014
Nov 28, 2014 at 3:29 AM UTC
southbound...
when i was young i knew love..... then  i lost it left it on  southbound train thinking it, he would relent, from the stubborn position he, it had talked himself, itself into, but that did not happen... i tried to find love, i waited for his return i asked for it at the lost and found window but nothing came of that perhaps, i should not have been so adamant, so stubborn in my views... perhaps, we both should of tried to understand the meaning of love... instead of insisting that love was a bargaining chip with which we would have the upperhand... i lost a friend.... one with whom, i went through the machinations of making love....without understanding the creation of relationship....is more than the pressing of skin... left them on a south bound train.. my youthful arrogance.... and demands bound them to the seat... i never knew love... i  did not understand... i now stand often, on the platform of the station....and wonder....
writing exercise....
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Nov 28, 2014
Nov 28, 2014 at 3:29 AM UTC
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