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Dusk’s last breath puff up the curtains in a flash of the post traumatic kind. A crocheted-cliché, peach-purple duvet drape the mountains in war paint; redwood generals’ shadows on attention, disorderly pine infantrymen struggle against the wind, some broken, most wounded, shattered limbs on display. The war hero sighs into the bowels of an instant noodles cup; dumplings shiver ((uncooked liver)) when he whistle-whispers untold stories of courage, guts served on blood-soaked battlegrounds; no-one listens, save spiders with hairy legs that hang on his every word.
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Feb 15, 2011
Feb 15, 2011 at 9:47 PM UTC
Instant Noodles at Dusk
Dusk’s last breath puff up the curtains in a flash of the post traumatic kind. A crocheted-cliché, peach-purple duvet drape the mountains in war paint; redwood generals’ shadows on attention, disorderly pine infantrymen struggle against the wind, some broken, most wounded, shattered limbs on display. The war hero sighs into the bowels of an instant noodles cup; dumplings shiver ((uncooked liver)) when he whistle-whispers untold stories of courage, guts served on blood-soaked battlegrounds; no-one listens, save spiders with hairy legs that hang on his every word.
ramonez-ramirez
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South African
Feb 15, 2011
Feb 15, 2011 at 9:47 PM UTC
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