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the man you thought you wanted is on the ground and nearly dead with thoughts of empty promises still racing through his head his time was running down in numbers to a timely end crawling over to the gutter he'd sing the name of long lost friends the echo would rain reality on the dreamland he was in set fire to the statue of you he erected in passionate sin you asked me here to let me bleed and writhe upon the floor I've since forgotten all those petty things I loved before you implore me to substitute the cold air in the room that now lies empty of memory & it is now set in with gloom you need somewhere to stow away your sickness and grace you want to feel like the muse, flower petals on your face a work of art that must be exposed in some dangerous place to juxtapose all of those whom love will not embrace I know too well the doom and gloom conspiring with the moon I feel fate now frowning and the feeling start to loom & I'll never understand the way you manage to twist that knife I'll bleed to death with a sense of warmth deep somewhere inside I'll relieve that breath of relief from the torment in my mind I'll be the awful thing your soul needs at this point in time
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Nov 26, 2014
Nov 26, 2014 at 6:58 PM UTC
never been a ladies man
the man you thought you wanted is on the ground and nearly dead with thoughts of empty promises still racing through his head his time was running down in numbers to a timely end crawling over to the gutter he'd sing the name of long lost friends the echo would rain reality on the dreamland he was in set fire to the statue of you he erected in passionate sin you asked me here to let me bleed and writhe upon the floor I've since forgotten all those petty things I loved before you implore me to substitute the cold air in the room that now lies empty of memory & it is now set in with gloom you need somewhere to stow away your sickness and grace you want to feel like the muse, flower petals on your face a work of art that must be exposed in some dangerous place to juxtapose all of those whom love will not embrace I know too well the doom and gloom conspiring with the moon I feel fate now frowning and the feeling start to loom & I'll never understand the way you manage to twist that knife I'll bleed to death with a sense of warmth deep somewhere inside I'll relieve that breath of relief from the torment in my mind I'll be the awful thing your soul needs at this point in time
thank you, Uncle Lenny (Leonard Cohen)
ej-aghassi
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Nov 26, 2014
Nov 26, 2014 at 6:58 PM UTC
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